Sequels The Official "How YOU would do Spider-Man 4" thread

[Venom 1988]

yeah but speaking of clutter i have to go though everyone elses clutter of scripts and feedbacks and to follow up on who saying what about who's script is a pain in the @%& just thought it would've been easier the way it was before. i mean it's not like we would run out of pages for the board. no biggie but it would be nice for people to have their own threads for their own scripts to get their own feedbacks on it instead of mixing it up with everyone elses.

Then go to the fan fic boards and make your own thread there then.

 

[Immortalfire]

yeah but speaking of clutter i have to go though everyone elses clutter of scripts and feedbacks and to follow up on who saying what about who's script is a pain in the @%& just thought it would've been easier the way it was before. i mean it's not like we would run out of pages for the board. no biggie but it would be nice for people to have their own threads for their own scripts to get their own feedbacks on it instead of mixing it up with everyone elses.

Want to write a script? Take it to Fan Fiction.

 

[HughJackFan420]

Want to write a script? Take it to Fan Fiction.

thanks ultimate ven already put his two cents in but i appreciate the help.

 

[Spider-ManHero12]

Heres more.

Peter decides to go see Dr. Connor's wife (Martha) and son (Billy). When Martha opens the door, She is crying and Peter asks "what has happened to Dr. Connors?" She then tells Him that Dr. Connors has been missing for 2 days. Peter gets really suspicious and realizes that The Lizard is Dr. Connors. He tells Martha that her and Billy are in danger of getting hurt. Peter told them to go to a neighbors house. Peter then puts on His Spidey costume and go looking for the Lizard. Peter sarches for hours in the sewers and finds nothing. But He keeps looking and He finds a big hole in the wall in the Sewer which leads to a big room and a ledge at right when you enter through the hole in the wall. Spidey goes into the broken wall and He see's nothing but pipes and water. Then Spideys spider-sense goes off and dodges the Lizard from jumping ontop of Spidey. Spidey then says "Dr. Connors! I'm going to get you help!" The Lizard says "who is Dr.
Connors? I am the Lizard!!" The Lizard claws Spideys face and then tries to Hit him with His tail but Spidey dodges it.

They both grapple and fall off the ledge into the water. They are punching and kicking eachother under water and then the Lizard grabs spidey by the throat and tries to hold Him under water. But Spiderman grabs the Lizard and flips Him over Him. Spidey is hurt but when He looks back the Lizard is gone. Spidey gets out of the water and is struggling to stand but manages to He then goes back into the tunnel part of the sewer. But suddenly the Lizard jumps and grabs Spidey and then the Lizard throws Spidey right through the ceiling of the sewer and onto the street. The Lizard the jumps up and onto the street and kicks Spidey, knocking Him into somebodys car. The Lizard then runs up the side of a building and is leaping from building to building with people on the street watching.

Spidey crawls up the wall and follows the Lizard. Once Spidey reaches the Lizard, He goes to punch the Lizard and out of no where Kraven The Hunter kicks Spidey knocking Him off the building but Spidey shoots a web at the last second. Kraven then goes to punch the Lizard but the Lizard dodges it and tries to choke Kraven. Kraven breaks the hold and grapples the Lizard. They both fight going from building to building until suddenly Spidey swings and kicks Kraven the Hunter from behind.

Stay tuned for more of my Spider-man4.

 

[FaT_tONle]

I swear there are pages after pages of a lengthy synopsis from every damn poster out there of how they would want to do SM4 that I am probably not even going to bother reading anymore or coming up with my own.... everyone is tired of them... not a knock on anyone in particular... I mean I myself tried to write an entire screenplay for the damn film... but the fact is there are just too many summaries out there for everyone to keep track of... it really killed this forum and I think most would agree. I know there won't be anything to talk about for a while... but damn... the life has just been sucked pure from these forums with all these summaries. My only request is that any time a noobie comes on and starts another ridiculous thread... I urge the mods to leave it opened just so we can have some fun with it... that guy who started that thread about dumping the trio and replacing TMags and Dunst with Shia and Lola, as ridiculous as it was, was still pretty darn entertaining... I urge the mods to leave open and even encourage similar threads by noobie posters just for the sake amusement... the Spidey withdrawal is starting to take its toll on me...

 

[QWoods]

I would have to put the lizard in.
The second villan would be kraven to come and stop the lizard because in the news it says that spiderman can't. Kraven will won't to kill the lizard and spiderman can't let him do that.
Characters i would add is Liz Allen and Felicia Hardy. Liz could show up as maryjane's friend and Felicia could be Flash's girlfriend. Peter could bump into flash and felicia then they would all go out to dinner and become friends. Flash could take harry's place or something.

Carnage needs to hold off until maybe the sixth installment. The stroy could be since the symbiote has been on earth it has changed into a red and black color. How it gets to Cassidy i don't know or have a story for.

Also save the best for last in my case i would have black cat appear in sm5. there would be little hints in sm4 of her dad being in jail and stuff then in sm5 go into the story and origin of becoming black cat
(Give me some critique/feedback)

 

[I'm Venom]

I'd go with Kraven and Lizard. The plot is simple: Dr. Connors accidentally turns himself into Lizard. Peter discovers that Lizard is his mentor. Kraven arrives in New York to hunt Lizard.

Carnage needs to hold off until Spider-Man 5. There would be hints in Spider-Man 4 of Eddie Brock being in jail, then in Spider-Man 5, the symbiote finds and rebonds with him, aiding in his escape. During the escape, the symbiote leaves behind a piece of itself, which merges with Cletus Kasady's blood, transforming him into a black and red monster. Kasady murders a guard and escapes.

 

[FaT_tONle]

Carnage needs to never come on the big screen...

 

[Venom 1988]

No more symbiotes >_<

 

[ORGANIZED CHAOS]

If Raimi's still directing the fourth one, I think there probably won't be any symbiotes considering Arad forced him to bring Venom to the story in SM3.
I think they should just stick with the lizard considering Dylan Baker's character's already been established in the last two movies. Plus I think that SM3 showed us it's always best to have one villain in each movie so that things don't get rushed and we really focus on that character.

 

[Venom 1988]

Plus I think that SM3 showed us it's always best to have one villain in each movie so that things don't get rushed and we really focus on that character.

Not really. Batman Begins showed us you can have 5 villains and still have an excellent movie. Its all in the writing and story.

 

[Spider-Fan]

If Raimi's still directing the fourth one, I think there probably won't be any symbiotes considering Arad forced him to bring Venom to the story in SM3.
I think they should just stick with the lizard considering Dylan Baker's character's already been established in the last two movies. Plus I think that SM3 showed us it's always best to have one villain in each movie so that things don't get rushed and we really focus on that character.

2 villains works, and I think the 3 in SM3 did work.

Also note the BB example above me.

 

[ORGANIZED CHAOS]

Raimi's no Nolan. He couldn't even make it work with three vilains you think he should bring five in?

 

[ORGANIZED CHAOS]

I personally think he screwed it up, we barely saw Venom and the most we saw of Sandman was his CGI-self without actually seeing THC much.

 

[Venom 1988]

Raimi's no Nolan. He couldn't even make it work with three vilains you think he should bring five in?

Did i say he should bring in 5 villains? No Im just using that movie as an example about how you can have multiple villains and still have a good movie. As long as the story flows well and doesnt feel cramped. Personally i want to see just 2 villains in the next one.

 

[spiderfan970]

Did i say he should bring in 5 villains? No Im just using that movie as an example about how you can have multiple villains and still have a good movie. As long as the story flows well and doesnt feel cramped. Personally i want to see just 2 villains in the next one.

I'm fine with one villain in the next one.

 

[ORGANIZED CHAOS]

It could potentially work out with several villains, but I think that Baker deserves to be the focus of a new movie, he's been stuck in a cameo role for two movies.

 

[Venom 1988]

And thats fine he could be the focus, but I cant see the someone like the Lizard holding up a film on his own. Plus personally, I cant see them going back to only one villain(especially after SM3).

 

[Spider-Fan]

Raimi's no Nolan. He couldn't even make it work with three vilains you think he should bring five in?

No. I think it should be two.

Also, I think the 3 villains worked in SM3, but thats my opinion.

 

[dodus]

Raimi's no Nolan.

That's for sure. He's better.

 

[ORGANIZED CHAOS]

That's for sure. He's better.

In what way?

 

[I'm Venom]

Two villains works. It could work with Kraven & Lizard, Carnage & Venom, etc. I can't see them going back to only one villain either.

 

[spiderfan970]

Okay, for Spidey four I would go back to basics. Take everything that was so appealing in all of these movies.

1) First of all, the whole cast and crew would be back for one more
2) The only villain is the Lizard.
3) He doesn't become a villain until like 40 minutes into the movie.
4) the movie's theme would be about rebuilding
ex. -friendships (Peter and Gwen)
-romantic relationships (Peter and MJ)
-your life all together (Curt Conners getting his family and life back)
5) Gwen deals with the loss of her father at the hands of the Lizard
6) the heart of the movie would be Aunt May, she would be a viable character in this one, and not just a small semi needless cameo preaching wisdom to the lead that spider-man should know.
7) If this really is the final Raimi movie, maybe instead of killing Gwen's father, Aunt May should die the way that she did in ASM 400.
8) Something has to be done about the void left by Harry, I think its fixed with Gwen thinking Spider-Man killed her father when it was really the Lizard.
9) MJ is not captured at the end, but instead the Lizard's wife Margret or son Billy, or both.
10) Introduce Ned Leeds to the supporting cast. (possibly)

 

[KangConquers]

I'm neither a Carnage hater, nor a Carnage lover. He hovers somewhere around #10-12 on my list of favorite Spidey villains. His story's flat, but he has some awesome abilities, so I thought to myself, "how can he possibly work in a film." and then it hit me.

Cleetus Cassidy, in his movie interpretation, would be a longtime hitman for Wilson Fisk, The Kingpin. Over the years of killing, Cassidy started to get sloppy and unprofessional. Instead of just killing the target, he'd kill their families, and he begin showing the signs of a complete mental breakdown. Kingpin used his connections to frame Cassidy as The Kingpin of crime.

That's right, Fisk would get EVERY SINGLE ILLEGAL thing he's been suspected of pinned on cassidy, resulting in multiple life sentences for Cassidy.

The Kingpin's bitter son, Richard Fisk, decides to use Cassidy's hatred of his father to his advantage. Richard decides to break Cassidy out. The cops pursue him to Empire State University, where Cassidy hides in a science lab. There he sees about a pound of goop, jumping around in a jar. He lifts the jar as the swat team breaks down the doors. The goop jumps on Cassidy and he goes through a painful transformation, and becomes Carnage.

Suddenly, all Cassidy can see is Fisk. Everyone likes like Wilson Fisk the Kingpin. No matter how many times he kills the Kingpin, there seems to be more of him...so he decides to go all out, and keep killing Fisk until he goes away.

The story would then unfold from the typical maximum carnage perspective...other elements would depend on when in the Spider-Man saga this took place, and what the Venom solo movie was like...but I think Fisk would be a good tie in with Carnage...It would allow Carnage to be crazy, without resting the plot completely on him; the truth of the plot would be Father vs. Son, The Kingpin vs. Richard Fisk.

The symbiote fanboys get a Venom/ Carnage action, the people who want to see plot get the Fisk family problems.


As for Peter, The Kingpin could have Captain Stacey offed (for being too much of a goody two shoes), and Carnage could kill Gwen, so Spidey would be stuck in this big war, with people he cares about dead...and stuck teaming with his ever lovin' pal Eddie Brock.

Like I said, I'm not a huge Carnage fan, but I always like a challenge, so I thought I'd slap this together.

This imo should be saved for AFTER the Lizard, and Kraven...but if they have to do Carnage, that's how I'd do him.

 

[ORGANIZED CHAOS]

Okay, for Spidey four I would go back to basics. Take everything that was so appealing in all of these movies.

1) First of all, the whole cast and crew would be back for one more
2) The only villain is the Lizard.
3) He doesn't become a villain until like 40 minutes into the movie.
4) the movie's theme would be about rebuilding
ex. -friendships (Peter and Gwen)
-romantic relationships (Peter and MJ)
-your life all together (Curt Conners getting his family and life back)
5) Gwen deals with the loss of her father at the hands of the Lizard
6) the heart of the movie would be Aunt May, she would be a viable character in this one, and not just a small semi needless cameo preaching wisdom to the lead that spider-man should know.
7) If this really is the final Raimi movie, maybe instead of killing Gwen's father, Aunt May should die the way that she did in ASM 400.
8) Something has to be done about the void left by Harry, I think its fixed with Gwen thinking Spider-Man killed her father when it was really the Lizard.
9) MJ is not captured at the end, but instead the Lizard's wife Margret or son Billy, or both.
10) Introduce Ned Leeds to the supporting cast. (possibly)

I think this is great and exactly how SM4 should be. Considering that SM3 had three villains, tons of CGI and cost like 300 million bucks, it should be more interesting to see a smaller, intimate human story, cos you can't get any bigger than SM3.
Also, by focusing on The Lizard, we could get some interesting subplots.
For example, let's consider he killed Gwen's father and afterwards, when he's cured he has to confront her about what he's done. It could make for some great drama, kinda like in the Bourne Supremacy when Bourne confronts a girl who's parents he'd killed. It could also mirror Peter and Aunt May's talk in SM2 when Peter confesses that he's responsible for uncle Ben's death.
I can't really see what would happen to Aunt May this time around. The only thing she does in these movies is preach, but I don't know what else she's supposed to do.