Here's a part of what I would have done:
BACKSTORY: Richard Parker worked at Oscorp on multiple projects, one being cross-species genetics with Dr. Curt Connors. Their first major success was the genetically enhanced, radioactive spiders. However their work was for not, as they werent able to crack the decay rate algorithm that would allow them to successfully bond human DNA with animal. One of the other projects was the Anti-Venom project with Dr. Edward Brock. The Anti-Venom project was designed as a means to cure any and all diseases and poisons through nanotechnology, namely Norman Osborns disease. Theoretically it could also be used for enhancing the body in multiple ways if programmed correctly, not just health-wise. Unfortunately, Richard couldnt figure out how to make the nanotech accept the host DNA instead of attacking it like it would a disease. Until his son Peter was diagnosed with brain cancer, and then he had to find a way. Richard worked tirelessly in secret, knowing Oscorp would never allow him to use it on his own son if they found out. Then he figured it out: the decay rate algorithm could be used to bond the nanotech with the human host. So, he worked to crack it, harder than ever before. He wouldnt eat, wouldnt sleep, just work until he discovered the correct equation. And he did. He used Oscorps lab to test Anti-Venom on Peters DNA to make sure it would accept it as a host. And it did. Richard used Anti-Venom on Peter. And it worked. Peters body was accepted as a host, and within days all traces of the cancer were gone. Richard then, before turning over his research to Oscorp, made sure to have all information regarding Peters cancer destroyed, knowing that Oscorp would want to have a look at Peter if they knew the truth. But when Richard hacked into the Oscorp mainframe to erase the testing hed done on Peters blood, he came across Oscorps true agenda: Not just using Anti-Venom to cure Norman Osborn, but also to create an army of super-soldiers. Not wanting his work to be misused, he claimed that hed failed at the project, and quit. However, when Curt, whod known about Peters cancer and had kept it a secret at Richards request, came to visit and saw that Peter was perfectly healthy, he came to the conclusion that Richard had cracked the decay rate algorithm, and became angry with Richard, questioning him about why he was keeping this amazing discovery, one that could help so many people, including him, secret. Richard told him about what he found out about Oscorp. But Curt blew it off, accusing Richard of lying so he could sell his research and make more money. Curt stormed out and reported the fact to Norman that Richard had completed the anti-venom project, not believing Richards claims. But he still didnt tell them about Peter. Meanwhile, Edward Brock breaks into Richards office, hoping to find any and all info on project anti-venom in hopes of selling the research to the highest bidder. Edward knew of Peters cancer, but didnt know that Richard had successfully perfected anti-venom and used it to cure him. Later on, when Edward would see Spider-Man swinging around New York, and discover that Peter was alive, he would put two and two together. But back in the past, Richard, finding his office trashed, would quickly leave Peter with his brother and his wife, in hopes of keeping him safe, also leaving his briefcase with Ben, telling him that if anything happened to him to use what was in it, saying that hed know what to do. Prior to this Richard had been contacted by the FBI, who wanted his help in taking down Norman Osborn, so just recently Richard had said yes with the condition that their deaths are faked and they are put into protective custody so Peter could never be used against them. Little did he know that Miles Warren, a business rival of Norman Osborn, who just wanted any information he could use to destroy Oscorp, and take it from Norman, faked the entire situation. When Richard agreed to work with them, Miles Warrens fake Agents made a condition of their own, and that was that Richard give them anti-venom, as evidence, they said. Richard complied, knowing that no one would ever be able to use it without the decay rate algorithm. However, when Richard and his wife tried to escape to a plane in an airfield, the Chameleon and several of Osborns goons ambushed them. Chameleon tries to convince Richard to come with them in a more civil way, but when Richard refuses and pulls a gun on Chameleon, a shootout begins. Richard manages to get into the plane, as does Mary, but shes been fatally wounded by a gunshot, and their fuel line is leaking, so Richard, knowing that theres no way him surviving wouldnt be suspicious to Oscorp and make them try to use Peter to get him to come out of hiding, crashes the plane, with himself still in it.
OUTLINE IN THE PRESENT: Cadet Max Dillon, an electrical engineer is in an accident with a special Oscorp electricity draining device while its being used in Iraq, when theyre attacked by terrorists, causing the power lines to fall onto the device, as hes working on it. This accident causes the machine to go haywire and reverse the polarity of the device, which over charges the electrical impulses in Maxs body, paralyzing him. As he lies on the ground, convulsing, we zoom into his eye, seeing the overcharged electrical impulses spell out: THE AMAZING SPIDER-MAN 2.
Montage of Spider-Man saving people and stopping criminals. He runs into a bank robbery being held by the Shocker, who says that he was wondering when Spider-Man would show up. As he does battle with Shocker, and is surprised by his sonic blasts, he gets a call from Aunt May, asking him where he is, as his high school graduation just started. He manages to defeat Shocker, and takes one of his gloves for study.
Peter makes it to the graduation, just in time. Afterwards he has a talk with Flash, where he apologizes for all the crap he put him through. When Peter asks why hes been so nice to him lately, Flash tells him that his father had a heart attack before Peters Uncle was killed, and when he thought about how awful it would be to lose his own father like that, he sympathized with Peter, and ever since then hes been trying to make his Dad proud. Flash declares that hes gonna join the army, to be the kind of man that his father can be proud of, as his father was in the army when he was younger. Peter congratulates him. Peter then tries to talk with Gwen, asking her why shes been avoiding him ever since he told her he would break his fathers promise. She doesnt respond. So he instead asks her to come by his place to check out shockers device that he took, hoping she might be able to help him with it. She agrees.
Later, in a talk with Aunt May, she expresses her concerns about how he wont have very much money for college. Peter says that with his scholarship hell be able to get everything he needs for school. She says that shes talking about spending money, for fun. Peter says that hes more worried about her, considering they dont have that much money coming in. She playfully slaps him and says that shes the adult and to let her worry about it. Hes uncertain.
Meanwhile, Dr. Ratha reports to Norman Osborn that Shocker has failed in acquiring Spider-Mans DNA. Ratha suggests that he can get the blood of Spider-Man, but Norman dismisses the idea, saying that theyll need more firepower going after Spider-Man. Ratha says he might have an idea about where to get that firepower.
Peter tries to get a job at the Daily Bugle, but cant get an interview with J. J., and Betty says that he wont be able to unless he can get some pictures of Spider-Man. So, Peter tries, awkwardly, in a montage, to take pictures of himself that look natural, wall-crawling, web-slinging, he even manages to catch one of himself stopping a crime. Peter takes the pictures to J. J. and Robbie Robertson. When they ask how Peter got these, he lies and says that he just got lucky. They are skeptical, but take them anyway. When Peter asks for a job J. J. laughs in his face and says hes gonna have to be able to give him a lot more than just pictures of Spider-Man if he wants a job. Robbie pulls him aside and convinces him to allow it, only as a freelance though, and if he wants a steady paycheck hell have to be steady in his pictures, giving him a check and sending him on his way.
Ratha visits Max Dillion, and offers him a deal: Do what they want, and Oscorp will help him be able to move like a normal person again. He agrees.
Peter, when he gets home, finds Gwen waiting for him. They study Shockers gauntlet. She says its Oscorp technology. Her and Peter almost kiss, but she pulls away. When Peter asks why shes been so distant lately, she says its because he broke her Dads promise so easily. And at first she was happy about the idea of being with him, but she realized she was betraying her fathers wish. And so was he. And she feels disgusted at herself and him for that, and she hoped he was better that. She then says shell try and find out any information she can on the tech and leaves. Afterwards, a man comes to Peters house, and tells him that he knows hes Spider-Man and that hes an old partner of his father. Peter, freaked out, slams the door in the guys face, but not before the guy shoves a box of his fathers old files on him.
That's all I have for now. Please tell me your thoughts and also what you would've done.
BACKSTORY: Richard Parker worked at Oscorp on multiple projects, one being cross-species genetics with Dr. Curt Connors. Their first major success was the genetically enhanced, radioactive spiders. However their work was for not, as they werent able to crack the decay rate algorithm that would allow them to successfully bond human DNA with animal. One of the other projects was the Anti-Venom project with Dr. Edward Brock. The Anti-Venom project was designed as a means to cure any and all diseases and poisons through nanotechnology, namely Norman Osborns disease. Theoretically it could also be used for enhancing the body in multiple ways if programmed correctly, not just health-wise. Unfortunately, Richard couldnt figure out how to make the nanotech accept the host DNA instead of attacking it like it would a disease. Until his son Peter was diagnosed with brain cancer, and then he had to find a way. Richard worked tirelessly in secret, knowing Oscorp would never allow him to use it on his own son if they found out. Then he figured it out: the decay rate algorithm could be used to bond the nanotech with the human host. So, he worked to crack it, harder than ever before. He wouldnt eat, wouldnt sleep, just work until he discovered the correct equation. And he did. He used Oscorps lab to test Anti-Venom on Peters DNA to make sure it would accept it as a host. And it did. Richard used Anti-Venom on Peter. And it worked. Peters body was accepted as a host, and within days all traces of the cancer were gone. Richard then, before turning over his research to Oscorp, made sure to have all information regarding Peters cancer destroyed, knowing that Oscorp would want to have a look at Peter if they knew the truth. But when Richard hacked into the Oscorp mainframe to erase the testing hed done on Peters blood, he came across Oscorps true agenda: Not just using Anti-Venom to cure Norman Osborn, but also to create an army of super-soldiers. Not wanting his work to be misused, he claimed that hed failed at the project, and quit. However, when Curt, whod known about Peters cancer and had kept it a secret at Richards request, came to visit and saw that Peter was perfectly healthy, he came to the conclusion that Richard had cracked the decay rate algorithm, and became angry with Richard, questioning him about why he was keeping this amazing discovery, one that could help so many people, including him, secret. Richard told him about what he found out about Oscorp. But Curt blew it off, accusing Richard of lying so he could sell his research and make more money. Curt stormed out and reported the fact to Norman that Richard had completed the anti-venom project, not believing Richards claims. But he still didnt tell them about Peter. Meanwhile, Edward Brock breaks into Richards office, hoping to find any and all info on project anti-venom in hopes of selling the research to the highest bidder. Edward knew of Peters cancer, but didnt know that Richard had successfully perfected anti-venom and used it to cure him. Later on, when Edward would see Spider-Man swinging around New York, and discover that Peter was alive, he would put two and two together. But back in the past, Richard, finding his office trashed, would quickly leave Peter with his brother and his wife, in hopes of keeping him safe, also leaving his briefcase with Ben, telling him that if anything happened to him to use what was in it, saying that hed know what to do. Prior to this Richard had been contacted by the FBI, who wanted his help in taking down Norman Osborn, so just recently Richard had said yes with the condition that their deaths are faked and they are put into protective custody so Peter could never be used against them. Little did he know that Miles Warren, a business rival of Norman Osborn, who just wanted any information he could use to destroy Oscorp, and take it from Norman, faked the entire situation. When Richard agreed to work with them, Miles Warrens fake Agents made a condition of their own, and that was that Richard give them anti-venom, as evidence, they said. Richard complied, knowing that no one would ever be able to use it without the decay rate algorithm. However, when Richard and his wife tried to escape to a plane in an airfield, the Chameleon and several of Osborns goons ambushed them. Chameleon tries to convince Richard to come with them in a more civil way, but when Richard refuses and pulls a gun on Chameleon, a shootout begins. Richard manages to get into the plane, as does Mary, but shes been fatally wounded by a gunshot, and their fuel line is leaking, so Richard, knowing that theres no way him surviving wouldnt be suspicious to Oscorp and make them try to use Peter to get him to come out of hiding, crashes the plane, with himself still in it.
OUTLINE IN THE PRESENT: Cadet Max Dillon, an electrical engineer is in an accident with a special Oscorp electricity draining device while its being used in Iraq, when theyre attacked by terrorists, causing the power lines to fall onto the device, as hes working on it. This accident causes the machine to go haywire and reverse the polarity of the device, which over charges the electrical impulses in Maxs body, paralyzing him. As he lies on the ground, convulsing, we zoom into his eye, seeing the overcharged electrical impulses spell out: THE AMAZING SPIDER-MAN 2.
Montage of Spider-Man saving people and stopping criminals. He runs into a bank robbery being held by the Shocker, who says that he was wondering when Spider-Man would show up. As he does battle with Shocker, and is surprised by his sonic blasts, he gets a call from Aunt May, asking him where he is, as his high school graduation just started. He manages to defeat Shocker, and takes one of his gloves for study.
Peter makes it to the graduation, just in time. Afterwards he has a talk with Flash, where he apologizes for all the crap he put him through. When Peter asks why hes been so nice to him lately, Flash tells him that his father had a heart attack before Peters Uncle was killed, and when he thought about how awful it would be to lose his own father like that, he sympathized with Peter, and ever since then hes been trying to make his Dad proud. Flash declares that hes gonna join the army, to be the kind of man that his father can be proud of, as his father was in the army when he was younger. Peter congratulates him. Peter then tries to talk with Gwen, asking her why shes been avoiding him ever since he told her he would break his fathers promise. She doesnt respond. So he instead asks her to come by his place to check out shockers device that he took, hoping she might be able to help him with it. She agrees.
Later, in a talk with Aunt May, she expresses her concerns about how he wont have very much money for college. Peter says that with his scholarship hell be able to get everything he needs for school. She says that shes talking about spending money, for fun. Peter says that hes more worried about her, considering they dont have that much money coming in. She playfully slaps him and says that shes the adult and to let her worry about it. Hes uncertain.
Meanwhile, Dr. Ratha reports to Norman Osborn that Shocker has failed in acquiring Spider-Mans DNA. Ratha suggests that he can get the blood of Spider-Man, but Norman dismisses the idea, saying that theyll need more firepower going after Spider-Man. Ratha says he might have an idea about where to get that firepower.
Peter tries to get a job at the Daily Bugle, but cant get an interview with J. J., and Betty says that he wont be able to unless he can get some pictures of Spider-Man. So, Peter tries, awkwardly, in a montage, to take pictures of himself that look natural, wall-crawling, web-slinging, he even manages to catch one of himself stopping a crime. Peter takes the pictures to J. J. and Robbie Robertson. When they ask how Peter got these, he lies and says that he just got lucky. They are skeptical, but take them anyway. When Peter asks for a job J. J. laughs in his face and says hes gonna have to be able to give him a lot more than just pictures of Spider-Man if he wants a job. Robbie pulls him aside and convinces him to allow it, only as a freelance though, and if he wants a steady paycheck hell have to be steady in his pictures, giving him a check and sending him on his way.
Ratha visits Max Dillion, and offers him a deal: Do what they want, and Oscorp will help him be able to move like a normal person again. He agrees.
Peter, when he gets home, finds Gwen waiting for him. They study Shockers gauntlet. She says its Oscorp technology. Her and Peter almost kiss, but she pulls away. When Peter asks why shes been so distant lately, she says its because he broke her Dads promise so easily. And at first she was happy about the idea of being with him, but she realized she was betraying her fathers wish. And so was he. And she feels disgusted at herself and him for that, and she hoped he was better that. She then says shell try and find out any information she can on the tech and leaves. Afterwards, a man comes to Peters house, and tells him that he knows hes Spider-Man and that hes an old partner of his father. Peter, freaked out, slams the door in the guys face, but not before the guy shoves a box of his fathers old files on him.
That's all I have for now. Please tell me your thoughts and also what you would've done.
