ToriL90
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I've got two storyline's for Rogue's power returning. I'm not fishing for other peoples' ideas here. I mean, if you want to post your ideas, then it would be a fun read for me; but I'd like to use one of these for my script. I'm just wondering which one you guys like better, and why? Thanks so much for the help!
STORYLINE 1: Bobby breaks up with Rogue after they sleep together because he's angry with her for taking the cure and too guilty about pushing her into it. Then, he impulsively hooks up with Kitty while Rogue is out of the mansion.
While away, Rogue meets another ex-mutant named Freddie (Rogue's boyfriend in the comics from a time when she was depowered). She moves in with him, and becomes pregnant. She is thrilled that she actually has another person inside her, when she could never even sustain contact for longer than a few seconds before that. She wants to name the kid "Logan." However, just like an emotional event triggers the original manifestation of power, her powers return when she finds out she's pregnant. The first clue comes when she and Freddie kiss, and he pulls away, thinking she recklessly bit his lip (although we see that it was a very light kiss) because he didn't know about her powers. As her powers return, they cause a miscarriage. When the nurse won't let her leave the same day, she KOs the nurse, steals a pair of surgical gloves, and heads back to the X-Mansion.
STORYLINE 2: Same beginning as before: Rogue and Bobby sleep together, Bobby dumps Rogue, hooks up with Kitty. In this storyline, though, there's no Freddie and no baby.
This time, Rogue is in a bar. A guy offers to buy her a drink, but she refuses, saying she was just leaving. The guy follows her out, angry that she wouldn't accept the drink. She tells him, "Look, I wasn't thirsty, okay? Would you please stop following me?" He pulls a gun on her and pushes her into an alley. He pins her against a building and starts kissing her. He's planning to rape her. This is an "emotional event" of a different sort, but triggers her powers just the same. His eyes bug out, and he tries to pull away. She knocks the gun out of his hand as she grabs his head and prevents him from pulling away. after several seconds, she finally lets go and lets him drop to the ground. At first, she looks furious; but her expression changes to shock as the reality of her powers returning sets in.
I really like the emotionality of storyline 1, how she names the baby after Logan and how the events cause her to hold back her pain in later scenes and become an edgier character, and it's the one I've been going with for a while now; but I just came up withstoryline 2, and I like how it makes her powers re-manifest in a way that's beneficial to her, and that could also make her an edgier character. I like that storyline 2 would take fewer scenes, although I'm worried that it might throw off the rhythm of the early part of my script.
STORYLINE 1: Bobby breaks up with Rogue after they sleep together because he's angry with her for taking the cure and too guilty about pushing her into it. Then, he impulsively hooks up with Kitty while Rogue is out of the mansion.
While away, Rogue meets another ex-mutant named Freddie (Rogue's boyfriend in the comics from a time when she was depowered). She moves in with him, and becomes pregnant. She is thrilled that she actually has another person inside her, when she could never even sustain contact for longer than a few seconds before that. She wants to name the kid "Logan." However, just like an emotional event triggers the original manifestation of power, her powers return when she finds out she's pregnant. The first clue comes when she and Freddie kiss, and he pulls away, thinking she recklessly bit his lip (although we see that it was a very light kiss) because he didn't know about her powers. As her powers return, they cause a miscarriage. When the nurse won't let her leave the same day, she KOs the nurse, steals a pair of surgical gloves, and heads back to the X-Mansion.
STORYLINE 2: Same beginning as before: Rogue and Bobby sleep together, Bobby dumps Rogue, hooks up with Kitty. In this storyline, though, there's no Freddie and no baby.
This time, Rogue is in a bar. A guy offers to buy her a drink, but she refuses, saying she was just leaving. The guy follows her out, angry that she wouldn't accept the drink. She tells him, "Look, I wasn't thirsty, okay? Would you please stop following me?" He pulls a gun on her and pushes her into an alley. He pins her against a building and starts kissing her. He's planning to rape her. This is an "emotional event" of a different sort, but triggers her powers just the same. His eyes bug out, and he tries to pull away. She knocks the gun out of his hand as she grabs his head and prevents him from pulling away. after several seconds, she finally lets go and lets him drop to the ground. At first, she looks furious; but her expression changes to shock as the reality of her powers returning sets in.
I really like the emotionality of storyline 1, how she names the baby after Logan and how the events cause her to hold back her pain in later scenes and become an edgier character, and it's the one I've been going with for a while now; but I just came up withstoryline 2, and I like how it makes her powers re-manifest in a way that's beneficial to her, and that could also make her an edgier character. I like that storyline 2 would take fewer scenes, although I'm worried that it might throw off the rhythm of the early part of my script.