The Avengers Write a Scene for Avengers

[Gamingboy]

I looked back through this board a bit, but couldn't find anything (although if I missed it just point it out). You know the drill, write a scene or dialogue that you'd want to see in the movie.


For example, here's my idea for a good scene for near the end of the movie:

INT. STARK MANSION, NEW YORK CITY
SHIELD AGENTS, led by COULSON, are moving advanced machinery into the mansion, usually Tony Stark's home when he is traveling to the East Coast. STARK, now outside of his Iron Man gear, only watches with a mixed feeling of bemusement and aggravation. FURY stands next to him.

STARK
Can you tell me, Fury, why SHIELD is taking over MY house?

FURY
Well, Tony, after the job Loki did to the Helicarrier, you don't expect us to run the whole Avengers Initiative out of a barber shop, do you?

STARK
(Looking at Fury's bald head) Hm. Good point.

 

[Ultimatehero]

INT. HELI-CARRIER - LABS - DAY

Bruce sits across from Steve, laying on a medical gurney, rubbing his temples.

BRUCE
You have absolutely no idea how long I've waited for this.

STEVE
For a cure?

Bruce nods. He slowly injects Steve to take a sample of his blood. Steve barely winces as he discerns a look of pure bliss and hopefulness in Bruce's eyes.

BRUCE
I remember hearing stories about what happened. What you could do and it fascinated me. Here was this scrawny kid from Brooklyn and he...

Bruce SNAPS out of it, he removes the syringe.

BRUCE (CONT'D)
Well, it didn't work out that way for me. Betty, she...

Bruce goes quiet. Steve is sympathetic.

STEVE
It turned you into --

Bruce takes precautions to preserve the blood:

BRUCE
The Hulk? I'd like to think it's not me. That when it takes over, I lose control.

Bruce stops.

BRUCE (CONT'D)
But somedays I wonder if the Hulk wasn't already there. Waiting. In some form.

Steve slides his shirt on, walks over to Bruce and places his hand gently over his shoulder.

STEVE
(White lie, knows)
I'm sure it wasn't.
(Morale boosting)
You're a good man, Bruce. That's what's important. That's why you're part of the team. That's why we need you. And that's why I'm sure you'll find a cure.

Steve moves for the door.

BRUCE
Now I see why they picked you.

Steve stops, faces him.

BRUCE
(Sadly)
You have a way with people.

Steve offers a smile then leaves. Bruce opens his binder, flips to the back and digs out a photo of Betty. His last and only tie to being human.

----

NOW on a lighter note:

Avengers assemble.

STEVE
I can't get drunk.

BRUCE
I can't have sex.

TONY
I can do both of those things and many times a day on occasion.

I'm actually within a top company where execs and the VP dug my 'Mighty Max' script and are excited about potentially buying my next project. Started off here YEARS ago via Spider-Man under a different username. Basically inserting this footnote to say thanks, it was that support and comments of trying to actually write for MARVEL that set me upon Mighty Max and got me here. To others, everywhere is a beginning.

 

[Gamingboy]

STEVE
I can't get drunk.

BRUCE
I can't have sex.

TONY
I can do both of those things and many times a day on occasion.

 

[NickNitro]

^ Awesome. I hope there are those quirky smerk jokes from Hulk from Thor from Cap...and of course Tony...thats why I love Avengers EMH..I love the little jokes.

 

[D4rkShaDoWz]

This really isn't really a dialogue scene but at some point in the movie, I hope Loki some how takes control of Hulk just for the sheer awesomeness of how it would look.

 

[Pinky021]

INT. HELI-CARRIER - LABS - DAY

Bruce sits across from Steve, laying on a medical gurney, rubbing his temples.

BRUCE
You have absolutely no idea how long I've waited for this.

STEVE
For a cure?

Bruce nods. He slowly injects Steve to take a sample of his blood. Steve barely winces as he discerns a look of pure bliss and hopefulness in Bruce's eyes.

BRUCE
I remember hearing stories about what happened. What you could do and it fascinated me. Here was this scrawny kid from Brooklyn and he...

Bruce SNAPS out of it, he removes the syringe.

BRUCE (CONT'D)
Well, it didn't work out that way for me. Betty, she...

Bruce goes quiet. Steve is sympathetic.

STEVE
It turned you into --

Bruce takes precautions to preserve the blood:

BRUCE
The Hulk? I'd like to think it's not me. That when it takes over, I lose control.

Bruce stops.

BRUCE (CONT'D)
But somedays I wonder if the Hulk wasn't already there. Waiting. In some form.

Steve slides his shirt on, walks over to Bruce and places his hand gently over his shoulder.

STEVE
(White lie, knows)
I'm sure it wasn't.
(Morale boosting)
You're a good man, Bruce. That's what's important. That's why you're part of the team. That's why we need you. And that's why I'm sure you'll find a cure.

Steve moves for the door.

BRUCE
Now I see why they picked you.

Steve stops, faces him.

BRUCE
(Sadly)
You have a way with people.

Steve offers a smile then leaves. Bruce opens his binder, flips to the back and digs out a photo of Betty. His last and only tie to being human.

----

NOW on a lighter note:

Avengers assemble.

STEVE
I can't get drunk.

BRUCE
I can't have sex.

TONY
I can do both of those things and many times a day on occasion.

I'm actually within a top company where execs and the VP dug my 'Mighty Max' script and are excited about potentially buying my next project. Started off here YEARS ago via Spider-Man under a different username. Basically inserting this footnote to say thanks, it was that support and comments of trying to actually write for MARVEL that set me upon Mighty Max and got me here. To others, everywhere is a beginning.

That scene will be very similar to the one in the Ultimate Avengers animated movie, where Bruce takes off blood from Steve,,, I'd like to see new scenes, not seen before,, IMO...

 

[Rain]

I'd like to see somebody call Hulk "Bruce" and see him lose his ****.

 

[Gamingboy]

TONY STARK has arrived at the Helicarrier for the first meeting of the Avengers. Late. As usual. As in, the previous scene was basically Pepper Potts yelling at him that he'll be late. He is met by COULSON, who leads him down into the carrier itself, as Stark... just doesn't shut up.

STARK
So, this helicarrier, how much of my tax dollars did this cost?

COULSON
Classified.

STARK
Any of my tech on this? Those engines look like Repulsors to me. I guess I missed my patent check.

COULSON
The engines for the Helicarrier are classified, Mr. Stark. I don't even know.

STARK
Okay, fine, where's the little boys room?

Coulson just sighs, stops, then points Stark down a hall.

Stark stops for a second, pats Coulson on the shoulder, as if to say "Thank you." He then walks down the hall.

Where he comes across a door.

He opens it.

And he enters a room that is definitely not the Little Boys Room. For there, sitting around a table, are the Earth's Mightiest Heroes.

STARK
Woah.

A beat.

STARK (cont)
Now I definitely need the little boys room.

Cut to Nick Fury facepalming.

FURY
This, Mr. Stark, is why I asked that IRON MAN be an Avenger, not you.

 

[Rain]

EXT New York Streets. It's raining. Night time.

Bruce Banner walking with an umbrella until he sees Betty bleeding profusely in an alley way. Bruce drops the umbrella and rushes over to her.

BRUCE: NO!

In Bruce's arms, Betty points to Thor. His hammer covered in Betty's blood.
Thor lets out a devious grin, and flies away. Bruce holds Betty as she dies.

BETTY: Br-Bruce.

BRUCE: NO!

From an onlooker's POV we see Bruce screaming with nobody in his arms. No blood. He looks like a lunatic.

Back to Bruce's perspective, we still see Betty's corpse in his arms. Bruce Hulks out. When he is finished he jumps away. Screaming. After that we see Loki appear out of the shadows. Smiling.

 

[JB-the-Hunter]

EXT New York Streets. It's raining. Night time.

Bruce Banner walking with an umbrella until he sees Betty bleeding profusely in an alley way. Bruce drops the umbrella and rushes over to her.

BRUCE: NO!

In Bruce's arms, Betty points to Thor. His hammer covered in Betty's blood.
Thor lets out a devious grin, and flies away. Bruce holds Betty as she dies.

BETTY: Br-Bruce.

BRUCE: NO!

From an onlooker's POV we see Bruce screaming with nobody in his arms. No blood. He looks like a lunatic.

Back to Bruce's perspective, we still see Betty's corpse in his arms. Bruce Hulks out. When he is finished he jumps away. Screaming. After that we see Loki appear out of the shadows. Smiling.

If Loki does anything like this in the movie I swear he'll be the best on-screen comic book villain of ALL TIME.

 

[crounsa810]

INT.: Helicarrier

TONY:

Listen Nick, you mind if I call you Nick? Nicky? Little Nicholas?

FURY looks with a glare

TONY:

Ok General Nicky it is then. Listen, this is a great idea and all but I just don't see how people are gonna buy that we have a group of super people who will protect them from the big bad monster creatures.

TONY and FURY enter the SHIELD briefing room, where BANNER, ROGERS, ROMANOV, and BARTON are sitting around a table in uniform

TONY:

Oh for Chrissakes... Nicky, uh, listen have we even thought of a name for this little...band of brothers?

BLACK WIDOW coughs, a "ahem excuse me" cough

TONY:

Oh I'm sorry I guess the sneaky lying spy girl doesn't like that name. How about Knights of the glass round table? Super Friends? 4 guys and a girl?

THOR enters

THOR:

I say AVENGERS shall get the point across.

*places MJOLNIR on the table with a CLANG**

TONY:

**looks THOR up and down with a look of "WTF?"

Avengers. Uh huh. And what will we be avenging, the death of 80s hair metal?






yadda yadda yadda I suck at dialogue but this goes back and forth with some other stuff, finally ending in the "Mean swing you got there." line from the trailer

 

[Bren]

EXT New York Streets. It's raining. Night time.

Bruce Banner walking with an umbrella until he sees Betty bleeding profusely in an alley way. Bruce drops the umbrella and rushes over to her.

BRUCE: NO!

In Bruce's arms, Betty points to Thor. His hammer covered in Betty's blood.
Thor lets out a devious grin, and flies away. Bruce holds Betty as she dies.

BETTY: Br-Bruce.

BRUCE: NO!

From an onlooker's POV we see Bruce screaming with nobody in his arms. No blood. He looks like a lunatic.

Back to Bruce's perspective, we still see Betty's corpse in his arms. Bruce Hulks out. When he is finished he jumps away. Screaming. After that we see Loki appear out of the shadows. Smiling.

If Loki does anything like this in the movie I swear he'll be the best on-screen comic book villain of ALL TIME.

I'm pretty sure he won't. But I'm even more sure he SHOULD!

 

[rcazzy]

I was wondering if the topic of Thor's hammer would come up, about not being able to lift it. I'd love to see Stark take a shot at it and fail. Maybe even have Cap late in the movie (after the climactic battle maybe, while alone?) try on his own and be able to lift it, smirk and then put it back down.

I know some of you would be against this, but it could be a nice little scene which further affirms Roger's character. Or perhaps in a sequel, he loses his shield and (as Bucky did with Cap's shield in TAF) wield it for just a second to save Thor and then give it back to him.

 

[flickchick85]

I don't want to write the scene because in my head it would be all naturalistic and largely improvised, but...I want to see the Big 4 go out for drinks. Maybe Tony wants to take Steve out for a beer to show him that some things haven't changed, whatever. I just want to see a scene of the 4 of them hanging out and relaxing for a minute. Steve would be the perfect designated driver since he can't get drunk.

 

[CelticPredator]

BLACK. Nothing.

Faint noises rise as we decend. Piping, wires, and other assorted mechanical junk pass us by, as we pull down into-

INT. THE HELICARRIER- DAY

As we continue to go lower, we see various activty on board. Something is going on.

We pull lower, into another layer. When we emerge, we are now inside of a small bathroom.

The door opens. And in walks the man himself...TONY STARK.

He shuts the door, and removes his pants. He sits on the toilet, doing his business.

The shot stays on Tony. Never moving. For 3 minutes.

He grunts a few times, and finally, drops his Iron deuce. He waves his hands to waft the sticky fumes from his nasel passages.

He flushes.

WE ARE NOW IN an almost X-Ray like mode. We follow Tony's turd through the plumming, hitting various corners, and pipes, until finally-

It's in the sea. And sinking. We continue to follow the peice of **** all the way down into the depths of the ocean.

Until finally...it lands on an ICE BLOCK. As we pan down we realize the POOP has landed on TOP of CAPTAIN AMERICA!

Smash to black: THE AVENGERS

 

[UnkillableMick]

An idea for Tony Stark's first appearance in the movie...

EXT. TONY STARK'S HOUSE

Day. Black Sabbath's "War Pigs" is playing.

INT. TONY STARK'S BASEMENT

TONY STARK is on his knees, working on a flashy sports car. PEPPER POTTS appears at the door, taps in a code, and enters. She has a brown paper bag in her hands. Tony looks up as she approaches.

PEPPER
What are you working on? A new Iron Man suit?

TONY
No. Something much more attractive and streamlined.

Pepper hands Tony the bag.

PEPPER
It's donuts and coffee.

Tony smiles up at Pepper.

TONY
Wow. You're the best CEO ever.

PEPPER
I know. There's a phone call for you. Do you want to take it down here?

Tony gets to his feet, brushing his hands on his jeans.

TONY
Sure.

He wanders over to a panel and presses a button.

TONY (CONT'D)
Stark.

FURY (V.O.)
Stark? It's Nick Fury.

TONY
Fury? What do you want? More army generals I need to harass?

FURY (V.O.)
Tony, he's awake.

Tony's eyes widen.

TONY
I'll be right there.

 

[CelticPredator]

INT. HELICARRIER

Stark
Hey...Pepper...why is my coffee cold?

Pepper
Well, you took too long to get it....

Stark
**** you *****!

He throws Pepper onto a door labeled EMERGENCY HATCH. She is dazed.

Stark
THOR! GET THAT *****...OFF MY PLANE.

Thor throws his hammer, knocking Pepper and the door into outer space. We see Pepper fall through clouds.

Tony looks down, and watches with glee.

Pepper continues to fall..until she realizes she's coming VERY CLOSE to a Plane Propeller!

Before she can scream she's sucked in, and through it. Blood and organs cascade the blue skys.

Tony looks at Thor and smiles.

Stark
Gotta mean swing.


OPENING CREDITSSSS...

 

[Gamingboy]

These aren't so much written scenes so much as scenes I think would be awesome:



If the secondary villain (after Loki) is of alien origin (most likely the Skrulls), there should be a scene where somebody seems flabbergasted at the idea of Aliens. Then somebody will point out that the Norse God of Thunder, a billionaire playboy in a power suit, a 70+ year-old Super Soldier and a guy who turns into a giant green monster when he's angry are standing right there. On a flying aircraft carrier.

Agree it would be awesome if, during the final battle, Cap was able to lift Mjolnir and wield it alongside his shield a la Superman in JLA/Avengers.

Somebody asks Fury what "Avengers" are supposed to be avenging. Fury will eventually just admit it tested well with focus groups.

 

[The Impaler]

Steve Rogers standing on a cliff over looking an ocean somewhere. He looks like he has the weight of the world on his shoulders. Off screen comes a shout from a familiar voice...

Fury: "Captain Rogers!"

Steve is starlted by this and stands to attention accordingly.

Cap: "Colonel Fury"

Fury: "At ease soldier"

Rogers relaxes, then looks at to sea again, thoughtfully.

Cap: "Hell of a team you put together Colonel"

Fury smirks, "They were better with the right leader"

Steve smiles modestly, looks down and back at Fury

Fury (cont) "You know I could use someone like you Cap. Right at the front, permanently. Positions open if you want it?"

Rogers looks at Fury, his mind made up.

Cap: "im grateful for that Colonel, but i'm going to have to decline. I need to get my head sorted and adapt to these times. I feel like a fish out of water, this is'nt even my time and I just dont feel ready for that yet"

Fury stands, almost stunned by what he's heard.

Fury: "If thats honestly how you feel Steve, i'll honour that and respect it. If you change your mind then you know how to find me"

They shake hands and go their seperate ways, Cap looking over his shoulder almost rethinking his decision momentarliy.

(Its rubbish I know but a variation on this idea, where Cap decides not to join just now.)

 

[Pinky021]

Good ideas,, but how come no one has involved Black Widow and/or Hawkeye??,, or Maria Hill...

 

[Gamingboy]

Hawkeye should have a scene where he shoots a arrow, and we FOLLOW IT IN SLOW MOTION AS IT GOES THROUGH FLIGHT.

I could totally see Stark seeing Widow and going, "Well, well, Miss Rushman, we meet again."

 

[By your Command]

Just a fun line.​

CAPTAIN AMERICA​

Houses that speak, holograms, suits that fly, we didn't have those things back in my time.

HAWKEYE​

We still don't.

 

[The Impaler]

Hawkeye is measureing an arrow with a small Boxing glove on its tip against his bow. Cap walks up behind him,

CAP
A boxing glove? Is that going to be much help?

Hawkeye replies without skipping a beat

HAWKEYE
Whats the matter cap? you never read comic books?

 

[Gamingboy]

Another possible "Tony Stark is a magnificent wiseass" quotes that could work:

"Hey, I have your song on my iPod." (to Cap. Cap, of course, would say, "What's an iPod?")

This could then later be the part of a callback, as Tony tells JARVIS to play "Star Spangled Man" to accompany major ass-kicking alongside Cap.

 

[BobbyCorwin88]

The Avengers stand victorious over Loki and his Skrull army.
The credits roll and Deadpool turns off his TV and his movie begins.