BvS Write The SVB Teaser Trailer!!

I can tell you that there is a high chance it will tease like crazy!

 

Fade In:

We see the events of Man of Steel. Superman fighting Kryptonians. Superman fighting Zod. We see the crater left in down town Metropolis.

Camera pulls away and we realize the events were on a monitor. A massive computer with three computer screens. One monitor replays the events from MOS, another has a display of Superman on the screen. The final screen has the Daily Planet on it.

A shadowy figure pushes away from the computer. Bats fly over head. The figure steps towards a table and we see Bruce Wayne in costume but not with the cape and cowl on.
On the table rest the cape and cowl. He puts them on and Batman stands before us.

He leaps into a supercharged Batmobile and races out of the Batcave.

Fade to black.


Thats how I would do it

 

Excel, that got me really hyped! The only thing i'd change though would be the Batwing crashing through a skyscraper. Batman isn't the type to do those sorts of things.

 

Teaser should be short and sweet; a total of 40 seconds:

 

From "Write-A-Scene" Thread:

 

So, I know this isn't a teaser trailer but I figured what the heck, I thought i'd try my hand at an actual 2min trailer. Let me know what you guys think!

What do you guys think?

 

Really cool.

 

For the teaser I'd just like something fairly simple: Lex Luthor giving a campaign speech about how superman is a threat to the people of metropolis and the world intercut with a few shots from the film. Then the title card followed by a shot of superman and lex talking/arguing then a figure with a black cape stepping in front of the camera with his back to us (similar to the man of steel trailer when supermans boot steps into frame and his cape drapes over the frame). Cut to black.

 

This full trailer has me convinced that if done right, this movie can own! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nviH0aTqo7M

 

Fade In:

Batman beats the crap out of Superman and rides off with Lois Lane in his Batmobile.

 

Nah he just rides Lois Lane.

 

Vocal over color-faded flashbacks from MOS:

"This world's had enough problems...and this city has always been on the ledge. I've fought hard to keep it from falling in. Then you showed up. Your people showed up. And another city was laid waste. Now they're ALL on the ledge. You know what they say about the road to Hell, right? Paved with good intentions. I don't care how good your intentions are...I will do whatever is necessary to keep my city from falling into that Hell; I will fight whoever I have to...including you. GET OUT OF GOTHAM."

Intercut over ominous music ("Molossus" as a stock track if necessary):
* Bruce and Lois dancing at a charity function - Clark eyeing them;
* An armored boot being strapped on;
* A military escort toward an opening pair of Wayne Aerospace hangar doors, revealing the remnants of the scout ship/Fortress;
* A utility belt being clicked into position;
* Swanwick looking up and away from a computer monitor with a flashing red prompt saying "Security Alert: Database";
* A compartment on the utility belt being closed;
* A masked shooter wearing armor over a crimson bodysuit crouched in the open rear door of an armored car with a heavily-modified rifle, firing it; a POV through the scope of a clearly-unamused Superman racing up in pursuit, past cars being sent askew by the ricochets;
* An armored, scalloped glove being slid on;
* Lois, Perry and Jenny looking up from a rooftop; at the fiery remains of a Wayne satellite streaking across the overcast sky;
* An angry pair of eyes, over which a mask is slid into place;
* Superman being tackled left and right by figures in military exo-suits which vaguely, crudely resemble the Black Zero crew's armor;
* A cape being locked into position over the Bat-symbol;
* And of course, the grand finale of intercutting: Superman thundering through the stormy Gotham sky, eyes literally ablaze as he's peppered with ordnance; Lois running screaming through the street; a distinctly Bat-shaped craft charging head-on at Superman in that same tempestuous sky, all its weapons firing at him; back at the party, a shot from behind of a tuxedoed man with a bald head raising a flask in toast to the partygoers on the ballroom floor below; and BOOM! A colossal mid-air explosion that outshines even the lingering lightning...a single caped figure limp and consumed in flames plummeting to the earth below...

Cut to black. The S-shield fades in, then behind it the firelit rim of the Bat symbol.

Release date fades in and out.

 

You know what, after writing my own trailer and reading the ones you guys are writing, I cannot lie, I think I've become STOKED for this movie! This trailer could easily be the one that wins comic con next year and one of the coolest trailers of all time!

 

Almost 2 years of wait before the release of the teaser.
Better be a good teaser.

 

I'm honestly kinda shocked they haven't uploaded it to the official website

 

To give a taster of mine and KillerWolf's BvS script

(V.O) PERRY WHITE: The world as we knew it, has changed.
* Superman stands before a grand court.
GOVERNMENT OFFICIAL: How do you plead to the charges brought against you?
* Superman hovers above a firey wreckage in the middle of the ocean.
SUPERMAN: Not guilty.
(V.O) ALFRED PENNYWORTH: Things are never going to be the same way again.
* Riots in the streets. Hundreds of citizens rant and jeer against armed police forces. Between the police and the citizens, a shadowy figure drops down from the sky. Hunched, it rises - Batman.
* Standing on a platform before thousands of people - Lex Luthor.
LEX LUTHOR: Ladies and gentleman, this is the future you've all been waiting for. I hope you're ready.
* Flashes of Superman flying through the air at high speed. Images of Batman brutally fighting a large gang of thugs. A Nuclear warehead comes zooming in towards Superman. The Batmobile zooming down the street, getting fired at by the police. Superman fighting against heavily armed guys in power suits. An explosion at the Wayne Enterprises building. Lois falling from a tall building. Superman catches her.
*Batman and Superman stand opposite eachother on a rooftop.
SUPERMAN: It doesn't have to be this way.
BATMAN: The night is coming for you. Be prepared for it.
*Hundreds of Bat-Drones fly towards Superman in the sky.
End of teaser

 

Good job!

 

I would love a scene where Superman lands in the Gotham streets for the first time. Dark, rainy. Steam forming in the humid; Gotham air.

I always loved when Batman messed with thugs on the ground and jumping from wall to wall; rooftop to rooftop above without being seen and the scary suspense he brings upon local gangs.

I would like to see Batman toying with Superman in this instance with Superman using his super-hearing trying to locate where Batman actually is. Superman definitely hears where Bruce is jumping on and from to and moves his eyes around and around trying to locate him until the noise stops dead silent and all Superman could hear now is a steady heartbeat. Clark pauses, turns his head to the side to look behind him and there's Batman's shadowy figure standing behind him.

Imaginging this in my head is awesome.

 

Thank you, my friend!
Just need to get the rest of it filled in now