Writing tips

If anyone has any constructive criticism on my writing for Hank, Cyke, or Cannonball, (or, if you just want to tear me a new *******), please go ahead.
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I just don't get why you introduce character's name in a font.

Example: Spider-Man walked out on the streets, where he was confronted by The Green Goblin.

It's just a pet peeve of mine, I suppose.
 
Yeah, I tend to put an emphasis on main characters' names. Probably because it's done in actual comics a lot, as well. But thanks for the input.
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It's not the nineties anymore, so it rarely happens.
 
Someone tell me how bad I write!!! I write best when I got a chip on my shoulder
 
Someone tell me how bad I write!!! I write best when I got a chip on my shoulder

I've had bouts of constipation that moved me more than your writing. Leave, and take your FAIL with you. :cmad:

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That good, or shall I continue? :woot:
 
Someone tell me how bad I write!!! I write best when I got a chip on my shoulder

Dude. You're terrible.


No but seriously, you're Ghost Rider is awesome.

I haven't read much of your DC stuff, so can't comment there. Plus, I'm too lazy to read right now.

I've really never seen any problems with your writing. You're dialogue is witty, and I haven't noticed any punctuation flaws either. But maybe that's just because MY punctuation sucks. o_o
 
I've really never seen any problems with your writing. You're dialogue is witty, and I haven't noticed any punctuation flaws either. But maybe that's just because MY punctuation sucks. o_o

Way to go. You've made my ego even bigger. :cmad: BOW TO BYRD!
 
Someone tell me how bad I write!!! I write best when I got a chip on my shoulder

You're Ollie is a pansy.

You're Slade comes off as gay.


So **** you using the horse you rode in on!
 
You're Ollie is a pansy.

You're Slade comes off as gay.


So **** you using the horse you rode in on!


For the love of all things holy, people! "You're" is a ****ing contraction for "you are". "Your" is the possessive form of you. FOR CHRIST'S SAKE IS IT TOO MUCH TO ASK THAT PEOPLE USE THOSE TWO ****ING WORDS CORRECTLY!?

*tears her ****ing hair out*:cmad::cmad::cmad:
 

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