So because the ending was studio mandated, and the plot deviates in relation to Veidt and Dan, the entire script is horrible?
It's far from being the only reason why the script sucks. If the script were a superb adaptation of the source material (which it isn't) up to that point, that would make it even worse. It's equivalent to someone taking a dump on a Degas' painting. At least one can learn to accept the consistent crappiness of a work, whereas the Degas example comes off like a kick in the nuts.
Veidt's an obvious villain the second he becomes a villain, even in the comics. But his motivations and psychology remain intact.
Whereas in Tse's script, he's a villain from the very scene he first appears in.
What bearing does this have qualitywise for WATCHMEN?
Other than being unsubtle name-dropping (the script's full of those), Adrian Veidt, a known liberal in the graphic novel, here makes business deals with a notorious fascist dictator over the phone.
Why? Talk about overreacting.
Talk about (deliberate?) obtuseness. Seriously. It's hyperbole, dude.
But what I really think you mean is that "Not every little thing that makes Rorschach such a great character is in the script".
Well, you think wrong. Obviously, not every little thing is going to make it into an adaptation, that much should be accepted. However, here you can spot the pattern that shows which aspects of the character were left in and which were left out. Hardassness stays, dark melancholy doesn't.
His signature syntax comes and goes even in the graphic novel. Yeah, the Tse draft changed it a bit.
But there is always a reason why it comes and goes in the graphic novel. Tse gives off the impression like he didn't bother finding out why.
Explain to me why any ****** can't appreciate "This city is dying of rabies". Some of the lines are missed. That's the nature of it being an adaption.
Again, that argument doesn't fly. Note how any passage from Rorschach's journal that portrays his twisted world view are conviniently absent, whereas just about any pedestrian piece of dialogue remains intact.
Another example
Dialogue in the novel: "This rudderless world is not shaped by vague metaphysical forces. It is not god who kills the children, not fate that butchers them or destiny that feeds them to dogs. It's us, only us."
In the script: "It's not god who kills little children. It's us."
In other words, another case case of KISS - Keep It Simple Stupid.
And btw, Snyder has stated that the opening monologue will be in the film.
Like I said, my beef is with this particular script, I don't pretend to know what the shooting script is like. By the way, you have a link to that interview? Must have missed that one.
Who cares? The man HATES Communism, and his first few sentences uttered show us this. As opposed to being a random sign wielding homeless person?
I care. First of all, it's a reference to Garth Ennis' Preacher series that does not have a place in Watchmen. Secondly, it goes against Kovacs' character. Not even once do we see him use profanities in the novel, coupled with his sexual repression, him wearing a shirt with an F-bomb sign is extremely out of character.
So rather than realize that he put what he could to show you insights into Rorschach's character when the monologue wasn't used for whatever reason, you just ***** about it and overreact.
I realise that he'd rather resort to quoting other comic books than, you know, actually using material from Watchmen. **** him.
Because if Alan Moore didn't come up with, the concept is terrible, right?
You know, that's actually quite true. Not as a universal rule, of course, but in terms of previous Watchmen scripts, that theory holds water; best parts of the scripts are the ones that follow the comic to its letter, whereas all the needless, arbitrary changes range from terrible to f**king terrible.
When you say "missing", you must mean "some of it isn't present", because as I recall, quite a bit of it was still there. And let me get this straight. You're upset because some elements of "visual symbolism" is missing in a script?
I mean "missing" as in "there's barely any" (both visual symbolism/symmetry and overlapping dialogue). David Hayter actually did a pretty good job with this in his script.
No, that's just your assumption. Clearly you don't forgive the script for being an adaption. Does the end with Veidt suck compared to the book's take on it? Yes. But aside from that, Tse's draft is very faithful, albeit a bit modern.
I think it's a fairly safe assumption, however if he's an actual hardcore fan, that makes it even worse.
Once again, there's a difference between adaptation and bastardization. This script leans heavily towards the latter.
Based on what Snyder has said and what we've seen...pretty sure it's gotten it.
Which I am not denying the possibility of.