Dragonball Script Thread (Contains Spoilers Duh)

[JP]

Ah. I completely disagree. I think it's a solid first draft that (hopefully) got better with rewrites. The story is coherent, the characters are fun and faithful, he pacing is great, and most importantly it feels like Dragonball.

 

[Adam]

I agree with JP. For a script that can only get better with rewrites, it's pretty decent.

 

[Humpty Dumpty]

Eh, people are complaining without even reading the script, or only reading 1/16th of it.

Read the whole thing before you make an opinion.

You don’t need to finish the script to realize how laughable it would be to have Goku mark the final resting places of his friends with trading cards. That’s as bad as writing can get. That’s like if Luke had buried Darth Vader’s body someplace and then put a Han Solo card from the Star Wars card game on top.

 

[Adam]

You don’t need to finish the script to realize how laughable it would be to have Goku mark the final resting places of his friends with trading cards. That’s as bad as writing can get. That’s like if Luke had buried Darth Vader’s body someplace and then put a Han Solo card from the Star Wars card game on top.

LOL I agree with that too. The card/video game thing needs to be scrapped. Seriously.

 

[JP]

You don’t need to finish the script to realize how laughable it would be to have Goku mark the final resting places of his friends with trading cards. That’s as bad as writing can get. That’s like if Luke had buried Darth Vader’s body someplace and then put a Han Solo card from the Star Wars card game on top.

I didn't find that laughable at all. It was rather toughing.

It's most likely been cut anyway as both characters aren't in the film.

 

[Cartman Blues]

Ah. I completely disagree. I think it's a solid first draft that (hopefully) got better with rewrites. The story is coherent, the characters are fun and faithful, he pacing is great, and most importantly it feels like Dragonball.

I concur. And Humpty it's symbolic because that was a way to remember them because they were ZOMGing over the cards.

 

[Adam]

I just hope to christ Wong doesn't turn the card thing into some horror movie. lol.

 

[MoPlaYa]

Just got done reading it...I liked it..I give it a 7/10

I think Wong will correct all the mistakes in the script

 

[JP]

Same. I'd give it a 7.. borderline 8.

 

[Adam]

You gotta give Ramsey credit for trying to include every single character (well almost).

 

[MoPlaYa]

I will admit...Ramsey did a better job with the script then I thought he would.

 

[Abstract]

Any chance I could get a copy?

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[Crosswind Ghost]

Since james wong added the world martial arts tournament to the script, we can probably expect a cameo from tien, and an extended one from krillin who i expect to participate.

 

[Adam]

Any chance I could get a copy?

[email protected]

It's on my site (link in signature).

 

[JP]

Any chance I could get a copy?

[email protected]

It's on my blog.

 

[Abstract]

Rad.

 

[louiebling$]

The script is a little cliche... like if I watched this version on screen I could call everything that was gonna happen... I hate that

 

[louiebling$]

But its a 1st draft and re wrties would have fixed it... also I think wong totally could fix the mistakes and I think we arte all gonna love this film I'd this is wat wong had to work with 7/10

 

[Adam]

Wong is a pro at endings so I hope he fixes the god awful ending.

 

[Legion]

I hope they wrote a whole new script cuz this one sucks.

 

[louiebling$]

Yea.... I give BR props to a pretty faithfull script

 

[RED-RAIN]

can someone please pm me the script? or email for that matter??
[email protected]

 

[Adam]

can someone please pm me the script? or email for that matter??
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Wow... no one reads... www.dbthemovie.com

 

[JP]

can someone please pm me the script? or email for that matter??
[email protected]

http://www.dragonballmovieblog.net/

 

[craigdbfan]

I hope they wrote a whole new script cuz this one sucks.

I wholeheartedly agree.

Yea.... I give BR props to a pretty faithfull script

The only faithful thing that Ben Ramsey actually wrote in that script is the fact that he tried cramming almost all of the characters from the Dragonball series (Which in my opinion didn't work and felt forced). The overall story was a butchered/victimized retelling of Dragonball. The script included a Dragonball Video games and Card games (Hated how the Dragonball mythology was part of merchandise), A Goku and Bulma relationship, tons of inaccuracies.... need I say more.