Originally posted by ingraman
I, for one, don't mind rubber suits or all-black color schemes. However, the excessive detailing on the Begins suit did bother me a bit. I tried to streamline it and here are the results:
- Slightly tightened the cowl. I didn't add any lenses, though the small eyes might make it seem that way. Removed the cape clips.
- Made the logo a little more prominent and cut out some of the excess detail on the suit/belt. I tried to make it look like body armor with a bat logo stuck on the front.
- Got rid of the shoulder pauldrons(?) but kept the little sleeve under it. Removed the seams fom the gauntlets.
- Attempted to give it some texture, but failed miserably.
I wouldn't say it's better than the original, just a little more in line with my own preferences. Any constructive criticism?
I apologize if I'm supposed to post this in one of the existing threads instead of a new one.
Don't apologize. Sometimes it seems like some people here would piss their pants ANY time a new thread gets created. They'll get over it.
I liked your modications in that its more aesthetically pleasing. But I think the small imperfections in the Begins suit (the awkward fitting of the cowl, the visible padding) improve the look, in a way. Makes it seem more authentic, I guess, as opposed to something specially designed by a move studio, you know?
I liked the way you touched up the main body by making the details in the abdomen less clear and brightening the logo a bit. Nice work.
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