Hawkeye_MockingBird_AntMan_Wasp vs GA_BCanary_Atom
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another update for those who want to see all the pages to date in a row, i found a place that uses the html code to run them in one swoop
about 6 posts down
http://www.comicvine.com/forums/artist-show-off/4/my-jla-vs-avengers-book/387173/?page=2
about 6 posts down
http://www.comicvine.com/forums/artist-show-off/4/my-jla-vs-avengers-book/387173/?page=2
marcolivier0110
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Awesome dude!
i guess it would help to explain some things
the hall of justice is under attack and the leftover surviving members of jla, jsa, titans, and outsiders being overtaken by a team of villains led by Count Nefaria, Superboy Prime, and Maxima
Alan Scott and John Stewart are protecting the hall with a giant green bubble, and below Cap comes up with an idea, he asks Zatanna, Strange, Wanda, and Dr. fate(who appears later), to create an enchantment along with Thor's hammer, to transport the entire hall of justice to another dimension for retreat so that regrouping and plans of coordinated efforts can be made. They can do it, but it's going to take some time, time they don't have. So an already beaten down WW, Supes, Flash, and Cap, head topside to help buy some time
the hall of justice is under attack and the leftover surviving members of jla, jsa, titans, and outsiders being overtaken by a team of villains led by Count Nefaria, Superboy Prime, and Maxima
Alan Scott and John Stewart are protecting the hall with a giant green bubble, and below Cap comes up with an idea, he asks Zatanna, Strange, Wanda, and Dr. fate(who appears later), to create an enchantment along with Thor's hammer, to transport the entire hall of justice to another dimension for retreat so that regrouping and plans of coordinated efforts can be made. They can do it, but it's going to take some time, time they don't have. So an already beaten down WW, Supes, Flash, and Cap, head topside to help buy some time
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Your artwork is looking great! I'm noticing major improvements from the earlier stuff. I think my biggest crit would have to be the amount of lines you use. It gives the pencil drawing a cool, detailed look, but if those lines were to be inked, much of that detail may become a bit of a mess, and a lot of the depth that's there with the encil would be lost with the inks.
It looks like you cut down a lot on your amount of lines with the latest update, and I have to say the image reads much better. It may not have that cool McFarlene-esque detail in it like your earlier stuff, but it a hell of a lot more coherent, and when you're drawing sequencial art coherency is the MOST important thing.
Keep up the good work, I can't wait to see more!
It looks like you cut down a lot on your amount of lines with the latest update, and I have to say the image reads much better. It may not have that cool McFarlene-esque detail in it like your earlier stuff, but it a hell of a lot more coherent, and when you're drawing sequencial art coherency is the MOST important thing.
Keep up the good work, I can't wait to see more!
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