AndThePickles
Kiss the girl
- Joined
- May 23, 2005
- Messages
- 21,628
- Reaction score
- 10
- Points
- 158
Lol if you don't wanna quote Dane Cook, my name is Andrea. I'm a woman not a bro
I have no problem with you and your opinions, but all I've seen of you on these boards has been the quick, sarcastic part. So you'll have to forgive me for laughing at what honestly appeared to be a thread created while on some sort of substance. Next time I'll be sure to answer you seriously 
Since you ARE a writer, I will tell you that the metaphors in particular are what I found cliche. It was pretty, but if I were to critique it, I'd want something a little fresher. Not a bad bit of prose though.
I have no problem with you and your opinions, but all I've seen of you on these boards has been the quick, sarcastic part. So you'll have to forgive me for laughing at what honestly appeared to be a thread created while on some sort of substance. Next time I'll be sure to answer you seriously Since you ARE a writer, I will tell you that the metaphors in particular are what I found cliche. It was pretty, but if I were to critique it, I'd want something a little fresher. Not a bad bit of prose though.
The weirdest thing is that I was referring to actual events. I actually have poured paint into a bathtub and watched the colors escape into the drain. And to me that was very symbollic. I can see what you're saying though. It does some kind of cliche when you think about it.
