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I wrote a poem

Orko Is King

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Dinner

Eating with chopsticks
Is a fun thing to do
Even if the thing you’re eating
Is a delicious eyeball stew
We don’t watch DuckTales
We just devour their entrails
I don’t really like chicken parts
As much as I love human hearts
And although the taste of a finger
May stay in your mouth and linger
Be a good boy and remember
To shut them up before you dismember
Eating dinner always makes me grateful
That it is you, not I, that is layed out on the table
 
:dry: I made this face while reading all of that as in not funny and not creative.
 
Hmmm...some of the lines rhyme. Not a bad poem...I wanted ot hate it more but not bad, but no good. I guess so-so.
 
Orko Is King said:
Dinner

Eating with chopsticks
Is a fun thing to do
Even if the thing you’re eating
Is a delicious eyeball stew
We don’t watch DuckTales
We just devour their entrails
I don’t really like chicken parts
As much as I love human hearts
And although the taste of a finger
May stay in your mouth and linger
Be a good boy and remember
To shut them up before you dismember
Eating dinner always makes me grateful
That it is you, not I, that is layed out on the table
put down the gun and don't kill yourself, it's not worth it...

well actually....
 
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November Rain said:
put down the gun and don't kill yourself, it's not worth it...

well actually....

:) He should visit the 11th place of principalities.

That would inspire creativity.
 

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