i'm helping with problems again.

[Abaddon]

goodnight Danamanamalus.

 

[Danalys]

my eyebrows seem to change from straight to curved downward depending on my mood...is that normal?

i find that shocking and thus my eyebrows curve

 

[Danalys]

goodnight Danamanamalus.

dan a man amalus.

 

[Batty for Bats!]

Danalys, this morning whenever I woke up, I ate a bowl of Cheerios. Now my tummy aches

 

[Danalys]

well it might always be bad for your stomach but now you noticed it. or something you did previously to your stomach might have hurt it in such away that you can't stomach cherrios and/or milk. i suggest eating fruit in the morning instead anyway.

 

[Danalys]

http://www.4shared.com/file/2548639/8af2a647/closer_still.html

got rid of the errors in my previous piece i think. so tell what you think or feel please. i need to know how the experience is to others.

 

[Abaddon]

the start of it makes you anticpate a good buildup but the middle is frantic and erratic.

 

[Danalys]

i might try it with all the notes in reverse order sometime. also pausing part way through can change the experience.

 

[Danalys]

i could do with more opinions. also i got one comment on the actual site and it just said wtf?