Read that "review" again. Incredibly inconsistent in their themes and storyline structuring. Crime Syndicate, Max Lord and introducing J'onn J'onnz? And supposedly the OMACS play a role? Not buying it.
The lack of character details in a script review that has PLENTY about the story would tend to indicate it is in fact, not a real review. Two, that is not the Mulroney's writing style at all, not from what little I've seen of them. Three, it doesn't line up with ANYTHING we've heard rumorwise from multiple sources. It smacks of someone who doesn't know how writing works trying to put together a halfway believeable "script" to rile people up.
Although if it does turn out to be real, I didn't hear anything that sounded completely horrible.
The film introduces the main characters very quickly as if theyre a 42-minute TV show and have to get it done quickly. You dont get to know much about any of our central heroes before they all unite.
Duh. It's an ensemble film and not, by most accounts, an origin one. Not a huge weak point as characters can be introduced and developed as the film progresses.
The film opens with John Stewart/The Green Lantern leaving space for the beachy surroundings of whats described in the brief as being a San Diego like town its there that hell have to rescue a Submarine crew (I dont think Ill give away the finer aspects of the sequences just to say they could look impressive) from something with a lot of arms. Were next introduced to Aquaman, who spots the leviathan battering a lighthouse. A large-scale skirmish occurs between the sea hero and the sea villain.
Doesn't sound bad at all. But strange that this "Aquaman meeting Green Lantern" scene happens, which doesn't seem to have much at all to do with a larger storyline.
Then, Wonder Woman is introduced but not before Superman, in a mid-air fight, crashes her scene.
Oh yeah? HOW is Wonder Woman introduced, person who had no problems telling us about the preceeding scene? Why does this scene exist? Given this lack of detail, nothing about this scene sounds awful.
Next, The Flash gets his big intro scene
. Rescuing plainclothes detective Ben Chyre from a ticking bear something the Trickster has cooked up. The Flash has a bit of fun with a news crew says something so fast that theyre unable to use it on air which might evoke a laugh or two.
Kay. He's The Flash. This doesn't sound horrible either.
Were introduced to our villain, Max Lord, as he watches a monitor where[what appears to be] Superman, Batman, Wonder Woman etc are terrorizing a building full of homeless people. Destroying the arches and pulling the supports down
We then learn that Lord has captured a team of superheroes already ULTRAMAN, SUPERWOMAN, OWLMAN, JOHNNY QUICK and POWER RING... who he plans to use for his own devious mission : pit them against the Justice League.
Wait a minute. Where'd this team of "villains" come from? And am I to believe that WB will use characters named "Ultraman", "Superwoman", "Owlman", "Johnny Quick" and "Power Ring" as the JLA villains? Does anyone actually believe this?
We see the Hall of Justice being built on the outskirts of space by the team themselves; as well as many construction robots. Seems Wayne Industries is footing the bill for it.
Why would the league need to build the hall if there are construction robots? Why would they be building it in space and not on Earth and then launching it? Regardless, building the satellite doesn't sound horrible to me.
Within a couple of minutes, alarm bells ring and the team er, suit up for action. The alarm bells have signalled for a visitor from Mars
. Martian Manhunter, who naturally the team presume is evil at first. The visitor informs the gang that their world is at an end and so begins their plight to destroy Lord and the OMACs.
Again, this doesn't sound horrible. However...suddenly the review mentions the OMACS, who this reviewer has yet to mention. At all. Kay...
Look, the film seems pretty underwhelming, sure, but what I think mightve been their motivation here is to distance themselves from any of the Superman or Batman films already in existence which is something the fans will be thankful for and as this is merely light and fluffy cartoon adventure-stuff, without any of the dark undertones of those other films (largely Batman), theyve definitely succeeded in that.
Again, other than him saying it seems underwhelming without actually mentioning WHY (bad dialogue? Story? Lack of characterization?), nothing horrible here. That's one of the tones JLA needs to have to work.
This will definitely appeal to a much younger crowd than those that say, loved Batman Begins itll be one the twelve-years-olds go ga-ga for. In fact, Batman doesnt even seem to have much of a part to play here not the pages I read anyway; its almost as if hes a secondary character or Warner have told the producers they can only use a bit of him and definitely isnt the same Caped Crusader weve seen on the screens for the past couple of years.
And the reviewer neglects to say how this Batman differs. Convenient omission, don't you think?
In fact, if this is anyones movie its The Flashs
he gets most of the gags, a lot of the action, and seems to have quite a few more scenes- again, in the pages I read than the others. If the character is cast right I believe Adam Brody (the OC) is the favourite at this stage he could be the break-out character here
. the one the twelve-year olds want on a T-Shirt.
And...how is this a bad thing?
So all-in-all, Justice League wont be our film and when I say our I mean, commonly anyone considered of adult age but it will probably be right up the kids alley. Its essentially a live-action version of Superfriends in terms of pace, story and set-up.
But...they never do say WHY they think this script is so horrible. Oh, there's vague mentions of pacing, story and set up, but no concrete examples. Which is why I don't buy it just yet.