'Raining Down' - thejon93

[thejon93]

Ladies and Gentlemen, the screenplay I've been working on for the majority of this and last month is finally coming soon on ScriptBuddy.com. Stay tuned to this thread as I'll be showing previews, sneak peeks and other features I can think of, all up to the play's release which should be up in a day or two. So, here's your first look at what to expect:

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Audience: All Users
Genre: Action/Adventure Rating: R

Description: 'Raining Down' tells the tale of AARON JOHNSON, who takes matters into his own hands when he recognizes his school needs a savior. Someone who isn't afraid to pass the barriers in the war against the people who cause his school to be ridden with drugs and violence. So, when the clock strikes twelve, AARON takes form of a duel-idenity, in his war against the school's evil.

Copyright Message: (default)

Author: Jonathan Abbott('thejon93')



Teaser Trailer:
0.00
(SCREEN-BLACK; AARON; VO)
It was a cold night, just as usual.
0.02
CUT TO...
Two teenagers beating up a defence-less teenager, as he lied on the ground(SLOW-MOTION)
0.05
(SCREEN-BLACK; AARON; VO)
I could feel the wind brush up against my face and then have it blow my hair back and forth.
0.09
CUT TO...
AARON, LEWIS, SAMUEL and SARAH walking towards the school; just as AARON described, the wind blew their hair back and forth freely(SLOW-MOTION).
0.11
(SCREEN-BLACK; AARON; VO)
Along with the wind as it brushed past and through my ears, creating a whistle in the air.
0.15
(SCREEN-BLACK; SOUND FX: WIND WHISTLING)
0.17
(WIND WHISTLING cont.)
CUT TO...
A black figure walking towards the group of teenagers, who were beating up the defence-less teenager(SLOW-MOTION).
0.21
(SCREEN-BLACK; AARON; VO)
And then have the rain... fall.
0.23
(SCREEN-BLACK; LIGHTNING FLASHES)
You can see the black figure punch one of the teenagers attacking the other teenager(SLOW-MOTION).
0.26
(SCREEN-BLACK; AARON; VO)
I'd like things to be peaceful, although if you actually open your eyes to look, you see it ain't.
0.30
A person on a dirt-bike swings baseball bat towards MARK's face, the bat breaks in two once the bat hit's MARK.
0.32
AARON sits on bed, with black ski-mask on.
0.33
FADE TO...
AARON takes off the ski-mask to reveal his face.
0.35
LEWIS
Why are you doing this anyways?...
0.36
AARON
You know why I'm doing this LEWIS...
0.37
EDGAR charges towards AARON(disguised) in the hallway, but AARON quickly leaps towards him and wraps his arm around his neck as he then lunged his head right through the railing baluster. As AARON and EDGAR flew right down towards the bottom floor.
FADE-OUT before they land.
0.40
(SCREEN-BLACK; AARON; VO)
This is what I do, I keep things peaceful...
0.42
AARON sitting on the roof, looking into the distance as the sun slowly falls behind the distant land.
CUT TO BLACK...
0.46
(SCREEN-BLACK; AARON; VO)
Or, at least try to.
0.48
CUT TO...
'RAINING DOWN'
TOTAL RUNNING TIME: 0.53min.

Theme Song(End Credits Theme):

[YT]7XqBNHKpR64[/YT]
Daughtry ~ "Crashed"

 

[thejon93]

Finally, 'Raining Down' is now up on 'ScriptBuddy'. Hope you guys check it out, I'd like to hear some of your thoughts on it

Direct link to the script:
http://www.scriptbuddy.com/community/?p=4291532446&t=&pg=