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Yay its back The Symbiote must be having the time of its life feeding on all that anger, sorrow and despair radiating from Eddie. Update soon
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PART 10:
Eddie tossed and turned while he lied on top of his bed due to the nightmare he was having.
In the nightmare, Eddie was walking in an empty field of black as he began to look around in fear. A voice then erupted from the darkness.
"Where do you run, Edward? Where do you hide?"
Eddie looked around to try and discover the voice. Eddie then turned around and saw the two homeless men from earlier walk towards him; the one from the bus-stop carried a knife, the one from the alley carried a metal-pipe. Eddie backed up in fright as he turned around real quickly the opposite way, just to see if he was imagining the two, he then turned back around towards them and they weren't there. Before he could look around for them the man with the knife stabbed Eddie in the back as he fell to his knees, the other man then whacked Eddie with the metal-pipe to the back of his head and Eddie's head smashed the blank-black surface.
Blood began to pour from Eddie's head as he slowly began to look up, in-front of him stood Alicia, she was smiling down at him.
"...Alicia?..." - Eddie
Alicia then stopped smiling at him and turned away from him. Eddie could barely speak.
"Wait!..." - Eddie
Eddie reached his arm out towards her but she then disappeared into the darkness.
Eddie tried to crawl in her direction but couldn't move, he turned his head around slightly towards his back and saw that a dark-green, large stinger was in his back. Eddie followed it towards who it came from and it was Mac Gargan's stinger which was attached to his back. Eddie stared in rage at Gargan and from the black surface came the symbiote which crawled over Eddie's body, finally to his head which then formed Venom.
"What's the next move, Edward?" - Gargan
"Killing you" - Venom
Venom sprung up to his feet and quickly smacked the stinger off of his back as he leapt into the air and kicked Gargan in the jaw. Venom landed back on his two feet and looked to punch Gargan but Gargan moved his head to the side and kicked Venom in the stoamach then swung his stinger at Venom's face which launched Venom to the ground. Gargan stepped closer to Venom but then Venom tripped him and again flung himself back up into the air and kicked Gargan with both feet in the stoamach while still in the air which launched him further away from Venom. They both leapt to their feet again and charged towards each other, then leapt towards each other and before they hit each other, all of a sudden, they were in a new environment as they were in the air right next to a building. Finally, they both punched each other and began to fall further down, Venom was the lowest as they fell but that wasn't a very big disadvantage as he swung his leg up at Gargan's face which knocked him into the side of the building as he began to fall back down, Venom was now a bit further down but to slow down the fall, he shot a symbiote tentacle at the building which popped him a bit back up but before he could do a thing, Gargan's stinger smashed the face of Venom and they symbiote moved away from that point in Eddie's face as he fell down the building without movement until the final moment where he tried to launch a symbiote tentacle at the building to stop his fall but he couldn't as the symbiote wouldn't allow him, the symbiote then leapt off of Eddie's body and onto the building as Eddie fell to the bottom and hit the ground with a thud.
Eddie finally woke up from the nightmare as he breathed heavilly in fear. He then sat up on the edge of his bed and thought for a moment but then unbuttoned his shirt and saw the symbiote underneath and quickly bolted up to his feet.
"Why are you doing this to me?!" - Eddie
"Don't kid yourself, Edward. You deserved it, for how you shadow fear, over rage" - Symbiote
"But I feel rage..." - Eddie
"Yes, but that is only what we're trying to produce. Each day you feel fear it grows harder for us to overshadow it with inner-rage. Truly Edward, you're rage has run low ever since Alicia died, and during other events in our life" - Symbiote
"You're controlling me?..." - Eddie
"At a certain point in somebody's life, everyone needs control. But we are not under the classification of control. We accompany chaos, mayhem, or... carnage" - Symbiote
"But I have done neither, I have caused neither..." - Eddie
"Which is why it is so hard to grasp you, Edward. Everytime we try to, your insides always disagree, everytime we try cause we are shutout by your disapproval. Only when you agree can we truly... cause" - Symbiote
Eddie sat back down on the bed.
"You can't expect me to carry hate and rage along with me everyday. I'm only human" - Eddie
"True. But what attracted us to you was your gift to carry great deals of rage and hate, as most of your life revolved around it" - Symbiote
Eddie was speechless.
"Your rage, Edward, is your gift" - Symbiote
"My rage is not a gift, it's a curse. I've suffered for many years more than others which is why I have it" - Eddie
"Edward, what you fail to understand is that when you loss something, you gain something in return..." - Symbiote
"Something I never wanted" - Eddie
Eddie tossed and turned while he lied on top of his bed due to the nightmare he was having.
In the nightmare, Eddie was walking in an empty field of black as he began to look around in fear. A voice then erupted from the darkness.
"Where do you run, Edward? Where do you hide?"
Eddie looked around to try and discover the voice. Eddie then turned around and saw the two homeless men from earlier walk towards him; the one from the bus-stop carried a knife, the one from the alley carried a metal-pipe. Eddie backed up in fright as he turned around real quickly the opposite way, just to see if he was imagining the two, he then turned back around towards them and they weren't there. Before he could look around for them the man with the knife stabbed Eddie in the back as he fell to his knees, the other man then whacked Eddie with the metal-pipe to the back of his head and Eddie's head smashed the blank-black surface.
Blood began to pour from Eddie's head as he slowly began to look up, in-front of him stood Alicia, she was smiling down at him.
"...Alicia?..." - Eddie
Alicia then stopped smiling at him and turned away from him. Eddie could barely speak.
"Wait!..." - Eddie
Eddie reached his arm out towards her but she then disappeared into the darkness.
Eddie tried to crawl in her direction but couldn't move, he turned his head around slightly towards his back and saw that a dark-green, large stinger was in his back. Eddie followed it towards who it came from and it was Mac Gargan's stinger which was attached to his back. Eddie stared in rage at Gargan and from the black surface came the symbiote which crawled over Eddie's body, finally to his head which then formed Venom.
"What's the next move, Edward?" - Gargan
"Killing you" - Venom
Venom sprung up to his feet and quickly smacked the stinger off of his back as he leapt into the air and kicked Gargan in the jaw. Venom landed back on his two feet and looked to punch Gargan but Gargan moved his head to the side and kicked Venom in the stoamach then swung his stinger at Venom's face which launched Venom to the ground. Gargan stepped closer to Venom but then Venom tripped him and again flung himself back up into the air and kicked Gargan with both feet in the stoamach while still in the air which launched him further away from Venom. They both leapt to their feet again and charged towards each other, then leapt towards each other and before they hit each other, all of a sudden, they were in a new environment as they were in the air right next to a building. Finally, they both punched each other and began to fall further down, Venom was the lowest as they fell but that wasn't a very big disadvantage as he swung his leg up at Gargan's face which knocked him into the side of the building as he began to fall back down, Venom was now a bit further down but to slow down the fall, he shot a symbiote tentacle at the building which popped him a bit back up but before he could do a thing, Gargan's stinger smashed the face of Venom and they symbiote moved away from that point in Eddie's face as he fell down the building without movement until the final moment where he tried to launch a symbiote tentacle at the building to stop his fall but he couldn't as the symbiote wouldn't allow him, the symbiote then leapt off of Eddie's body and onto the building as Eddie fell to the bottom and hit the ground with a thud.
Eddie finally woke up from the nightmare as he breathed heavilly in fear. He then sat up on the edge of his bed and thought for a moment but then unbuttoned his shirt and saw the symbiote underneath and quickly bolted up to his feet.
"Why are you doing this to me?!" - Eddie
"Don't kid yourself, Edward. You deserved it, for how you shadow fear, over rage" - Symbiote
"But I feel rage..." - Eddie
"Yes, but that is only what we're trying to produce. Each day you feel fear it grows harder for us to overshadow it with inner-rage. Truly Edward, you're rage has run low ever since Alicia died, and during other events in our life" - Symbiote
"You're controlling me?..." - Eddie
"At a certain point in somebody's life, everyone needs control. But we are not under the classification of control. We accompany chaos, mayhem, or... carnage" - Symbiote
"But I have done neither, I have caused neither..." - Eddie
"Which is why it is so hard to grasp you, Edward. Everytime we try to, your insides always disagree, everytime we try cause we are shutout by your disapproval. Only when you agree can we truly... cause" - Symbiote
Eddie sat back down on the bed.
"You can't expect me to carry hate and rage along with me everyday. I'm only human" - Eddie
"True. But what attracted us to you was your gift to carry great deals of rage and hate, as most of your life revolved around it" - Symbiote
Eddie was speechless.
"Your rage, Edward, is your gift" - Symbiote
"My rage is not a gift, it's a curse. I've suffered for many years more than others which is why I have it" - Eddie
"Edward, what you fail to understand is that when you loss something, you gain something in return..." - Symbiote
"Something I never wanted" - Eddie
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PART 11:
Eddie sat down in his chair behind his desk inside the Daily Globe but as soon as he sat down, his boss called for him.
"Edward!" - Max
Eddie shot up from his desk and ran to his boss's office.
"Yeah, Max?" - Eddie
Max looked up at Eddie as before he was looking a binder of papers.
"How would you like to add another story to your account?" - Max
"Definitly, so what is it?" - Eddie
"You'll find out, but one thing your going to need, is a ride. Anne!" - Max
Anne ran into Max's office from her desk across the room, Eddie slightly peered over his shoulder at her then turned away.
"Yeah?" - Anne
Anne peered over at Eddie real quick then looked at Max.
"Eddie needs a ride, he's doing a story" - Max
"Really?... Where?" - Anne
Max smiled.
"Let's just say afterwards he'll need to take a boat" - Max
Eddie leaned over the roof of Anne's car as she opened the door to the driver's side of the vehicle.
"Ryker's?! You've got to be s#%&in' me" - Eddie
"Yeah, well I doubt that Max is "s#%&in'" anyone" - Anne
Anne sat in the vehicle.
Eddie thought to himself for a moment then opened the door to his side of the vehicle and sat in it as he closed the door behind him. Eddie turned towards Anne as she started up the car.
"What's wrong?" - Eddie
Anne ignored Eddie as she started up the car.
Eddie turned away from her and sat up straight in his seat as he stared out the front.
"It's about that day, right?..." - Eddie
Eddie turned towards Anne whose eyes were red as she looked like she was about to cry.
"That video?..." - Eddie
"...What was that?" - Anne
Eddie took a deep breath.
"She was my friend, the man who..." - Eddie
Eddie cut himself off as his reds began to turn red.
Anne looked over at him.
"The man who killed her... he wants... me. And I don't know why... so he killed her, and I still don't understand why" - Eddie
Eddie turned away from Anne and looked out his window.
"Who is he?" - Anne
"...I don't know, all that I know is that he wants me. He wants me to suffer, he wants me to suffer until I perish" - Eddie
"Why?..." - Anne
"I don't understand why!" - Eddie
Eddie screamed at Anne as she jumped in fright. Eddie stared at her with rage but then slowly began to stop and again turned away from her and grabbed his shirt knowing that underneath was the symbiote feeding off his rage.
"I'm sorry... I just don't know what to do" - Eddie
Tears began to roll down Eddie's eyes as they did the same for Anne's. Anne then grabbed Eddie by the shoulder, turning him towards her and she hugged him as she leaned her chin on his shoulder.
"No... I'm sorry, Eddie. I'm sorry..." - Anne
Eddie walked to the entrence of Ryker's and a guard came up to him.
"You, Eddie Brock?" - Guard
"Yes" - Eddie
"This way" - Guard
Eddie followed the guard in the maximum security prison.
"Umm, may I ask, what is this about?" - Eddie
The guard didn't answer as he stopped dead in his tracks then turned around to face a glass window, inside was man handcuffed to the car from ankles to wrists and across from him was a blind man with red shaded glasses and a black cane with red stripes running down it's side.
"Cletus Kasady, only crime against him is homicide on countless occasions" - Guard
"Why was I sent here?" - Eddie
"Yesterday we caught him, again" - Guard
"You sent him here before? And he was released?!" - Eddie
"No, he escaped" - Guard
Eddie stared at Cletus. Inside the room, Cletus was staring up at the ceiling but then sniff and stopped staring at the ceiling and looked forward straight. Eddie looked curiously at Cletus as the symbiote underneath Eddie's clothes began to move as if it was breathing, Eddie looked down at his shirt but when he turned back towards Cletus, he was staring at Eddie with a demonic smile set across his face. Eddie stared at Cletus for a moment in fear but then turned away from him.
"Can he see us from inside there?" - Eddie
"No, but in the amount of time he's spent in there by now. I'd consider him to know our exact positions as he knows that there's always someone there, watching him" - Guard
Eddie stared back at Cletus.
Eddie sat down in his chair behind his desk inside the Daily Globe but as soon as he sat down, his boss called for him.
"Edward!" - Max
Eddie shot up from his desk and ran to his boss's office.
"Yeah, Max?" - Eddie
Max looked up at Eddie as before he was looking a binder of papers.
"How would you like to add another story to your account?" - Max
"Definitly, so what is it?" - Eddie
"You'll find out, but one thing your going to need, is a ride. Anne!" - Max
Anne ran into Max's office from her desk across the room, Eddie slightly peered over his shoulder at her then turned away.
"Yeah?" - Anne
Anne peered over at Eddie real quick then looked at Max.
"Eddie needs a ride, he's doing a story" - Max
"Really?... Where?" - Anne
Max smiled.
"Let's just say afterwards he'll need to take a boat" - Max
Eddie leaned over the roof of Anne's car as she opened the door to the driver's side of the vehicle.
"Ryker's?! You've got to be s#%&in' me" - Eddie
"Yeah, well I doubt that Max is "s#%&in'" anyone" - Anne
Anne sat in the vehicle.
Eddie thought to himself for a moment then opened the door to his side of the vehicle and sat in it as he closed the door behind him. Eddie turned towards Anne as she started up the car.
"What's wrong?" - Eddie
Anne ignored Eddie as she started up the car.
Eddie turned away from her and sat up straight in his seat as he stared out the front.
"It's about that day, right?..." - Eddie
Eddie turned towards Anne whose eyes were red as she looked like she was about to cry.
"That video?..." - Eddie
"...What was that?" - Anne
Eddie took a deep breath.
"She was my friend, the man who..." - Eddie
Eddie cut himself off as his reds began to turn red.
Anne looked over at him.
"The man who killed her... he wants... me. And I don't know why... so he killed her, and I still don't understand why" - Eddie
Eddie turned away from Anne and looked out his window.
"Who is he?" - Anne
"...I don't know, all that I know is that he wants me. He wants me to suffer, he wants me to suffer until I perish" - Eddie
"Why?..." - Anne
"I don't understand why!" - Eddie
Eddie screamed at Anne as she jumped in fright. Eddie stared at her with rage but then slowly began to stop and again turned away from her and grabbed his shirt knowing that underneath was the symbiote feeding off his rage.
"I'm sorry... I just don't know what to do" - Eddie
Tears began to roll down Eddie's eyes as they did the same for Anne's. Anne then grabbed Eddie by the shoulder, turning him towards her and she hugged him as she leaned her chin on his shoulder.
"No... I'm sorry, Eddie. I'm sorry..." - Anne
Eddie walked to the entrence of Ryker's and a guard came up to him.
"You, Eddie Brock?" - Guard
"Yes" - Eddie
"This way" - Guard
Eddie followed the guard in the maximum security prison.
"Umm, may I ask, what is this about?" - Eddie
The guard didn't answer as he stopped dead in his tracks then turned around to face a glass window, inside was man handcuffed to the car from ankles to wrists and across from him was a blind man with red shaded glasses and a black cane with red stripes running down it's side.
"Cletus Kasady, only crime against him is homicide on countless occasions" - Guard
"Why was I sent here?" - Eddie
"Yesterday we caught him, again" - Guard
"You sent him here before? And he was released?!" - Eddie
"No, he escaped" - Guard
Eddie stared at Cletus. Inside the room, Cletus was staring up at the ceiling but then sniff and stopped staring at the ceiling and looked forward straight. Eddie looked curiously at Cletus as the symbiote underneath Eddie's clothes began to move as if it was breathing, Eddie looked down at his shirt but when he turned back towards Cletus, he was staring at Eddie with a demonic smile set across his face. Eddie stared at Cletus for a moment in fear but then turned away from him.
"Can he see us from inside there?" - Eddie
"No, but in the amount of time he's spent in there by now. I'd consider him to know our exact positions as he knows that there's always someone there, watching him" - Guard
Eddie stared back at Cletus.
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Yes, my little intro to him for the third film. Also, I see my 12th part didn't make it on here for some reason when I posted it yesterday. Oh well, today you're getting two parts(might be some of my favourite parts so far).
PART 12:
Eddie began typing out a story based on his visit to Ryker's.
The symbiote underneath Eddie's clothes began to think that Cletus Kasady but as they thought of him, images of Cletus were projected inside Eddie's head.
Eddie looked down at his shirt as the symbiote then stopped thinking of Cletus.
Eddie continued typing again.
Eddie unlocked the door to his apartment but before he stepped inside, across the hall, inside another apartment, a man and woman were arguing. Eddie was about to walk into his apartment but then the apartment from where the arguing came from opened and all of a sudden a bag of clothes came flying out of it. Then the woman who was involved in the argument came running out of the apartment, behind, the man was stalking her with a belt in his hand. Eddie closed his door and walked towards the man, the man looked up at Eddie.
"Yo, piss off" - Man
"I would, but I see we have a little conflict here. You hit her, you deal with me" - Eddie
"What are you her boyfriend now, huh?!" - Man
"No, quite frankly I don't know who the hell she is and I surely don't care about who you are" - Eddie
"Go home, loser" - Man
""Loser?" I'm not the one assaulting a defenceless woman" - Eddie
"Oh, really?..." - Man
The man went to hit the woman with the belt but Eddie caught it before it hit her and punched the man in the nose. The man screamed in pain then got back up and looked to charge at Eddie but Eddie sidestepped him and the man ended up flying down the staircase.
Eddie looked up at the ceiling and took a deep breath then looked down at the woman.
"What's your name?" - Eddie
"Layla..." - Layla
"Well, Layla, you're staying with me for now until you find another place to live" - Eddie
"Well... ain't your place too small?" - Layla
"Yeah, but, then again you lived with him, right?" - Eddie
Layla stood up and walked up to Eddie.
"Thank you" - Layla
Layla went to kiss Eddie but he put his hand in-front of his face.
"I'm kinda in a relationship at the moment, so..." - Eddie
"Oh! Sorry..." - Layla
"That's alright. I live right here so when you got all of your stuff just come back and put it in the apartment, okay?" - Eddie
"Okay, and... thanks, again" - Layla
"Don't mention it" - Eddie
Eddie smiled at Layla and she smiled back.
They both then went into their apartments.
"So, please do me a favour, don't start with me while she's here, okay?" - Eddie
Eddie waited for a response but didn't get one, so Eddie looked underneath his shirt but there was nothing there. Eddie pulled it down and looked around his room. Layla then walked into Eddie's apartment with a box of her stuff.
"I hope there's enough room, I don't want to become a..." - Layla
Layla looked at Eddie.
"Are you, okay?" - Layla
"...yeah, never better..." - Eddie
The man who was unconsious down the staircase finally woke up again.
"Hello, John" - Symbiote
"What?... Who's there?..." - John
"We're here, John. And you're going to do us a favour" - Symbiote
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PART 13:
"So... you always this kind?" - Layla
"Pretty much, but you should see me when I ain't" - Eddie
"Why, are you like Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde?" - Layla
"Occasionally" - Eddie
Layla laughed as Eddie smiled at her.
Eddie then turned his attention to a stack of artwork on the floor beside Layla's sleeping bag.
"You made those?" - Eddie
Layla looked to where Eddie was pointing.
"Yeah, in collage... before I dropped out" - Layla
Eddie shook his head, not wanting to ask why.
"You going to ask why?" - Layla
"No. It's not my buisness" - Eddie
"Then what is your buisness" - Layla
"Well, I could make a list for you if you'd like" - Eddie
"Okay, so what are some things you'd like me to keep in mind while living here?" - Layla
"Always flush" - Eddie
"Hey, as long as you do the same then that's fine by me" - Layla
The phone rang and Eddie ran to get it.
"Want me to wait outside?" - Layla
"If you wish" - Eddie
Layla got up from the bed and left the room. Eddie then answered the phone.
"Hello?" - Eddie
"...hello, Eddie" - Gargan
Eddie was speechless.
"I see that you kept your phone and phone number like I told you to" - Gargan
"Just following the rules" - Eddie
"Yeah? Well follow this one. Tommorrow morning at exactly 9:15 you will catch the bus right outside your building, and yes, I know where you live. So make it a priority, and... good luck sleeping peacefully tonight, knowing I'm coming for you" - Gargan
"What makes you think I have any other reason to do this, you killed Alicia" - Eddie
"Well, for one, revenge. And two, whoever said Alicia was dead?" - Gargan
Eddie was again speechless.
"See you tommorrow, Eddie" - Gargan
"So... you always this kind?" - Layla
"Pretty much, but you should see me when I ain't" - Eddie
"Why, are you like Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde?" - Layla
"Occasionally" - Eddie
Layla laughed as Eddie smiled at her.
Eddie then turned his attention to a stack of artwork on the floor beside Layla's sleeping bag.
"You made those?" - Eddie
Layla looked to where Eddie was pointing.
"Yeah, in collage... before I dropped out" - Layla
Eddie shook his head, not wanting to ask why.
"You going to ask why?" - Layla
"No. It's not my buisness" - Eddie
"Then what is your buisness" - Layla
"Well, I could make a list for you if you'd like" - Eddie
"Okay, so what are some things you'd like me to keep in mind while living here?" - Layla
"Always flush" - Eddie
"Hey, as long as you do the same then that's fine by me" - Layla
The phone rang and Eddie ran to get it.
"Want me to wait outside?" - Layla
"If you wish" - Eddie
Layla got up from the bed and left the room. Eddie then answered the phone.
"Hello?" - Eddie
"...hello, Eddie" - Gargan
Eddie was speechless.
"I see that you kept your phone and phone number like I told you to" - Gargan
"Just following the rules" - Eddie
"Yeah? Well follow this one. Tommorrow morning at exactly 9:15 you will catch the bus right outside your building, and yes, I know where you live. So make it a priority, and... good luck sleeping peacefully tonight, knowing I'm coming for you" - Gargan
"What makes you think I have any other reason to do this, you killed Alicia" - Eddie
"Well, for one, revenge. And two, whoever said Alicia was dead?" - Gargan
Eddie was again speechless.
"See you tommorrow, Eddie" - Gargan
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PART 14:
Eddie looked both ways along the road before crossing the street to head over to the bus-stop.
Eddie sat on the bench underneath the bus-shelter, it just turned 9:14.
An older woman then walked over to the bus-stop. Eddie got up from the bench to let her sit on it.
"Thank you" - Old Woman
Eddie walked over in-front of the bus-stop sign, there were two bus numbers on it but one had a star beside it, it was labeled as '7', Eddie persumed that he had to catch that bus.
Eddie walked back underneath the bus-shelter.
"Which bus are you catching, Miss?" - Eddie
"Oh, the number 7" - Old Woman
"I'm sorry, but you can't catch that bus... not now?" - Eddie
"Why not?" - Old Woman
"Just trust me, please" - Eddie
The number 7 bus just came around the corner as the time turned 9:15. The bus driver stopped and Eddie walked into the bus.
"Wait! Why are you getting on?" - Old Woman
"Because I have to" - Eddie
The bus driver closed the doors and began to drive off.
Eddie leaned over the bus-driver and whispered in his ear.
"You can't let anyone else on" - Eddie
"I know" - Bus Driver
Someone in the back-row pulled the string to request a stop and got off out the back.
Eddie sat down in the front, near the bus driver. Eddie thought for a moment then got up.
"Are you following orders?" - Eddie
"I have to, or he'll kill me, my wife, you, and your friend" - Bus Driver
"She's still alive..." - Eddie
"Yeah, I saw her" - Bus Driver
Eddie quickly stared down at the bus driver.
"Where is she?..." - Eddie
"I can't tell you" - Bus Driver
"Look, I can save your wife. You can't. Once this is over, he won't need her, and he'll kill her. But he won't kill Alicia, he wants her for something... something to do with me" - Eddie
"What does he want from you?" - Bus Driver
"I don't know... but, then again I have a funny feeling that I'll be seeing him today" - Eddie
"We will" - Bus Driver
"Where?" - Eddie
"My guess, the bridge" - Bus Driver
"Why?" - Eddie
"...that's where he told me not to stop" - Bus Driver
Eddie looked both ways along the road before crossing the street to head over to the bus-stop.
Eddie sat on the bench underneath the bus-shelter, it just turned 9:14.
An older woman then walked over to the bus-stop. Eddie got up from the bench to let her sit on it.
"Thank you" - Old Woman
Eddie walked over in-front of the bus-stop sign, there were two bus numbers on it but one had a star beside it, it was labeled as '7', Eddie persumed that he had to catch that bus.
Eddie walked back underneath the bus-shelter.
"Which bus are you catching, Miss?" - Eddie
"Oh, the number 7" - Old Woman
"I'm sorry, but you can't catch that bus... not now?" - Eddie
"Why not?" - Old Woman
"Just trust me, please" - Eddie
The number 7 bus just came around the corner as the time turned 9:15. The bus driver stopped and Eddie walked into the bus.
"Wait! Why are you getting on?" - Old Woman
"Because I have to" - Eddie
The bus driver closed the doors and began to drive off.
Eddie leaned over the bus-driver and whispered in his ear.
"You can't let anyone else on" - Eddie
"I know" - Bus Driver
Someone in the back-row pulled the string to request a stop and got off out the back.
Eddie sat down in the front, near the bus driver. Eddie thought for a moment then got up.
"Are you following orders?" - Eddie
"I have to, or he'll kill me, my wife, you, and your friend" - Bus Driver
"She's still alive..." - Eddie
"Yeah, I saw her" - Bus Driver
Eddie quickly stared down at the bus driver.
"Where is she?..." - Eddie
"I can't tell you" - Bus Driver
"Look, I can save your wife. You can't. Once this is over, he won't need her, and he'll kill her. But he won't kill Alicia, he wants her for something... something to do with me" - Eddie
"What does he want from you?" - Bus Driver
"I don't know... but, then again I have a funny feeling that I'll be seeing him today" - Eddie
"We will" - Bus Driver
"Where?" - Eddie
"My guess, the bridge" - Bus Driver
"Why?" - Eddie
"...that's where he told me not to stop" - Bus Driver
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PART 15:
"So what's your wife's name?" - Eddie
"Wanda" - Bus Driver
Eddie looked down at the bus driver.
"Well "Bus Driver", one thing I promise you, is to save your wife's life" - Eddie
"No, no, you don't worry about-" - Bus Driver
"No, I want to worry, because I want to help" - Eddie
The bus driver looked up at Eddie.
"Thank-" - Bus Driver
The Bus Driver was cut off when Gargan's stinger crashed through the front of the bus and hit Eddie in the stomach, throwing him backwards towards the end of the bus.
"Eddie?!..." - Bus Driver
Eddie held his stomach in pain as blood began to pour from his mouth.
"Eddie?!" - Bus Driver
"Open the doors... keep driving..." - Eddie
Eddie grasped hold of the bar beside him to help him stand up.
Eddie looked out the window to his right and saw Gargan driving beside them, he turned towards Eddie and smirked.
"Everyone get down... now!..." - Eddie
Eddie quickly shot down to the floor of the bus right before Gargan swung the stinger threw the window in an attempt to hit Eddie again, he then pulled it out as Eddie crawled towards the front of the bus. Eddie finally reached the front and stood up to his feet.
"Eddie..." - Bus Driver
Eddie turned towards the bus driver.
"Unlike him, you have faith to be with you" - Bus Driver
Eddie smiled.
The bus driver held out his hand towards Eddie and Eddie grasped it as they shook hands.
Eddie turned away and looked outside the bus door to try and signal down Gargan.
"Hey! Come get me, a&%hole!" - Eddie
Gargan drove faster towards Eddie.
Eddie then climbed to the top of the bus.
"What the hell are you thinking, Eddie? Damn lord, what the hell are you thinking?" - Eddie
Gargan climbed out of his car and onto the hood as he then jumped towards the roof of the bus and threw himself up real quick.
Eddie charged towards him but Gargan quickly shot to his feet and threw Eddie to his back. Gargan then crawled over-top of him and began to punch Eddie repeatedly in the head as Eddie tried to block them. Gargan then wrapped his hands around Eddie's neck as Eddie's face began to turn blood red.
"What do you do, Eddie? What do you do when you're about to die?" - Gargan
"You count on others" - Eddie
The bus driver then slammed the brakes on the bus, launching Eddie and Gargan off of the bus.
The bus driver got out of the bus and ran towards Eddie and Gargan.
"Eddie?..." - Bus Driver
Gargan then stood to his feet and pulled a gun out of his coat pocket and shot the bus driver in the stomach.
Eddie then shot to his feet to try and charge Gargan but Gargan quickly smashed Eddie in the face with the gun, knocking him out.
"So what's your wife's name?" - Eddie
"Wanda" - Bus Driver
Eddie looked down at the bus driver.
"Well "Bus Driver", one thing I promise you, is to save your wife's life" - Eddie
"No, no, you don't worry about-" - Bus Driver
"No, I want to worry, because I want to help" - Eddie
The bus driver looked up at Eddie.
"Thank-" - Bus Driver
The Bus Driver was cut off when Gargan's stinger crashed through the front of the bus and hit Eddie in the stomach, throwing him backwards towards the end of the bus.
"Eddie?!..." - Bus Driver
Eddie held his stomach in pain as blood began to pour from his mouth.
"Eddie?!" - Bus Driver
"Open the doors... keep driving..." - Eddie
Eddie grasped hold of the bar beside him to help him stand up.
Eddie looked out the window to his right and saw Gargan driving beside them, he turned towards Eddie and smirked.
"Everyone get down... now!..." - Eddie
Eddie quickly shot down to the floor of the bus right before Gargan swung the stinger threw the window in an attempt to hit Eddie again, he then pulled it out as Eddie crawled towards the front of the bus. Eddie finally reached the front and stood up to his feet.
"Eddie..." - Bus Driver
Eddie turned towards the bus driver.
"Unlike him, you have faith to be with you" - Bus Driver
Eddie smiled.
The bus driver held out his hand towards Eddie and Eddie grasped it as they shook hands.
Eddie turned away and looked outside the bus door to try and signal down Gargan.
"Hey! Come get me, a&%hole!" - Eddie
Gargan drove faster towards Eddie.
Eddie then climbed to the top of the bus.
"What the hell are you thinking, Eddie? Damn lord, what the hell are you thinking?" - Eddie
Gargan climbed out of his car and onto the hood as he then jumped towards the roof of the bus and threw himself up real quick.
Eddie charged towards him but Gargan quickly shot to his feet and threw Eddie to his back. Gargan then crawled over-top of him and began to punch Eddie repeatedly in the head as Eddie tried to block them. Gargan then wrapped his hands around Eddie's neck as Eddie's face began to turn blood red.
"What do you do, Eddie? What do you do when you're about to die?" - Gargan
"You count on others" - Eddie
The bus driver then slammed the brakes on the bus, launching Eddie and Gargan off of the bus.
The bus driver got out of the bus and ran towards Eddie and Gargan.
"Eddie?..." - Bus Driver
Gargan then stood to his feet and pulled a gun out of his coat pocket and shot the bus driver in the stomach.
Eddie then shot to his feet to try and charge Gargan but Gargan quickly smashed Eddie in the face with the gun, knocking him out.
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PART 16:
Eddie's hands were tied up on the ceiling above as he was held up by the rope.
Gargan then threw a bucket of water over Eddie's head which made him awaken. Eddie screamed in fear.
"Where am I?!" - Eddie
"Home, Eddie. My home, of course. As a child, this was where we lived, my father and I. But, of course he died" - Gargan
"What are... you talking... about?..." - Eddie
Gargan ran towards Eddie and kicked him in the stomach then grabbed his hair and held his head up to face Gargan's.
"Don't play with me! You should know by now what you've done!... You should know by now what you cost me!" - Gargan
Gargan punched Eddie in the stomach, as Eddie coughed in pain.
Gargan turned away from Eddie and took a deep breath.
Eddie turned his head slightly to the side and caught a glimpse of Alicia who was strapped to a chair.
"Alicia..." - Eddie
Gargan heard Eddie's whisper as he then turned towards Alicia and smiled.
Gargan began walking towards her.
"I see you've spotted your pretty, little grilfriend. Sleeping, she is..." - Gargan
Gargan picked up a taser from a counter beside Alicia.
"But we can fix that" - Gargan
Gargan tased Alicia on the arm.
"Stop it! Leave her alone!" - Eddie
Gargan finally stopped tasing her.
"Don't tell me what to do, Eddie" - Gargan
"Let her go!" - Eddie
"Don't tell me what to do!" - Gargan
Gargan pulled a knife out of his pocket and cut the strap she was attached to and pulled her to her feet but she fell to her knees.
"Now's your chance to go, either you take it or die" - Gargan
Alicia and Eddie looked at each other.
"Go..." - Eddie
Alicia got up to her feet and was about to run towards Eddie but Gargan quickly grasped hold of her hair which made her fall to the floor.
"I'm so sorry about that, beautiful... but, I lied" - Gargan
Gargan smiled down at Alicia but then began to drag her towards Eddie.
"No, no, no! Please, let her go. You have me!" - Eddie
As Gargan continued to drag her towards Eddie, she finally found a way to get away from Gargan as she then ran towards Eddie and hugged him.
"Don't leave me, Eddie. Please don't leave me" - Alicia
"Run, Alicia... Run!" - Eddie
Eddie tried to push her away with his body until she finally let go of Eddie and ran towards the door, but Gargan ran after her.
"Run!" - Eddie
Alicia was about to reach the door but Gargan quickly struck her from behind, knocking her to the floor, right before the door.
"She cares for you, I give you that. But here love for you, cost her, her life" - Gargan
Gargan sniffed the air for a moment, then looked down at Alicia and pulled out a knife.
"No!... No don't do this!" - Eddie
"Do you know what you did?..." - Gargan
Eddie didn't respond.
Gargan then pulled out a picture from his back-pocket which featured a man in it.
"You know what you took from me?..." - Gargan
Gargan threw the picture to the floor.
"I don't understand, tell me what I did" - Eddie
"Answer me" - Gargan
"No, you answer me. I obviously did something to hurt you in the past. Just tell me what it was. Tell me what I did!" - Eddie
"You killed my father..." - Gargan
Eddie was speechless.
"Miles Gargan, was my father. He was a great man. We lived here because we were down on our luck, no money. My father spent everyday of the week, searching for work. He made me a promise, that at one point in my future, I'd be happy. That at one point in time, I'd be free. But he didn't include himself. I finally relized this after he died. You remember how he died? I do. I remember the police officer told me not to see him. But I had to. I remember seeing them... remove the trophy from my father's stomach, and then the blood running out of his body afterwards, I was alone, I was scared. I'll never forget how day-in, day-out I had always thought of my redemption. And now... that day has finally come. After today, I will be free, after today... I will be happy" - Gargan
Gargan stabbed Alicia in the stomach.
"No!..." - Eddie
Alicia fell to her knees until finally her head fell to the ground.
Tears began to run down Eddie's face as he also fell to his knees.
"Why won't I kill you? Because, I want you to suffer. Just as I did" - Gargan
"You killed her..." - Eddie
"Oh yes, I did" - Gargan
"You killed her..." - Eddie
"You said that already, Eddie" - Gargan
"You killed her..." - Eddie
Eddie stood to his feet and stared at Gargan.
"And I'll kill you" - Eddie
"That's it, Eddie! That's it!" - Gargan
Eddie stared with rage at Gargan.
Gargan then began to walk closer towards Eddie.
"You see, that's what I want from you, to see which of us is better than the other" - Gargan
Gargan picked up a control-switch.
"So let's see" - Gargan
Gargan pushed the button and Eddie's hands were released as he then quickly came charging after Gargan. Gargan grinned as Eddie tried to shoulder block him but Gargan sidestepped him and punched Eddie in the face. Eddie quickly shot back to his feet and threw a punch at Gargan's face as he fell to his knee, Eddie punched him again with his over hand but Gargan pushed Eddie away and kicked him in the stomach as he fell to the floor on his back. Gargan then quickly threw his foot into Eddie stomach and then went to do the same to his head but Eddie rolled out of the way as he got to his feet and speared Gargan right through the door. Eddie then repeatedly began to punch Gargan in the face but then, all of a sudden, two groups of police officers came from both ends of the hallway. Eddie paid no attention to them as he kept punching Gargan.
"Get him off of me!" - Gargan
One of the police officers tried to pull Eddie off but couldn't as the rest tried to help and finally got him off of Gargan.
"You alright, Ethan?" - Officer #1
"Gave us quite the scare there when you called in, now we see why" - Officer #2
"He killed a girl" - Gargan
"God dammit, anyone else?" - Officer #1
"Not sure, but we should search this whole building, top to bottom" - Gargan
"Okay. Henry, Lloyd, start upstairs, go" - Officer #1
The two officers headed upstairs as the remaining officers kept Eddie subdued. Gargan winked at Eddie but Eddie finally broke free from the officers holding him back and charged towards Gargan, but the second officer shot Eddie with the taser-gun and Eddie fell right before Gargan's feet as they shocked him.
"Get some cuffs on this son of a b&%$#!" - Officer #1
Eddie lied pretty much still on the ground, apart from the constant twitch due to the electrical shock. Two of the officers pulled Eddie's arms behind his back as the one of them placed the cuffs on him and pulled him to his feet.
Gargan stepped towards Eddie and pulled his head up towards his viewing.
"You sad, little man..." - Gargan
Gargan let go of Eddie's head and the two police officers dragged him out of the building.
Eddie's hands were tied up on the ceiling above as he was held up by the rope.
Gargan then threw a bucket of water over Eddie's head which made him awaken. Eddie screamed in fear.
"Where am I?!" - Eddie
"Home, Eddie. My home, of course. As a child, this was where we lived, my father and I. But, of course he died" - Gargan
"What are... you talking... about?..." - Eddie
Gargan ran towards Eddie and kicked him in the stomach then grabbed his hair and held his head up to face Gargan's.
"Don't play with me! You should know by now what you've done!... You should know by now what you cost me!" - Gargan
Gargan punched Eddie in the stomach, as Eddie coughed in pain.
Gargan turned away from Eddie and took a deep breath.
Eddie turned his head slightly to the side and caught a glimpse of Alicia who was strapped to a chair.
"Alicia..." - Eddie
Gargan heard Eddie's whisper as he then turned towards Alicia and smiled.
Gargan began walking towards her.
"I see you've spotted your pretty, little grilfriend. Sleeping, she is..." - Gargan
Gargan picked up a taser from a counter beside Alicia.
"But we can fix that" - Gargan
Gargan tased Alicia on the arm.
"Stop it! Leave her alone!" - Eddie
Gargan finally stopped tasing her.
"Don't tell me what to do, Eddie" - Gargan
"Let her go!" - Eddie
"Don't tell me what to do!" - Gargan
Gargan pulled a knife out of his pocket and cut the strap she was attached to and pulled her to her feet but she fell to her knees.
"Now's your chance to go, either you take it or die" - Gargan
Alicia and Eddie looked at each other.
"Go..." - Eddie
Alicia got up to her feet and was about to run towards Eddie but Gargan quickly grasped hold of her hair which made her fall to the floor.
"I'm so sorry about that, beautiful... but, I lied" - Gargan
Gargan smiled down at Alicia but then began to drag her towards Eddie.
"No, no, no! Please, let her go. You have me!" - Eddie
As Gargan continued to drag her towards Eddie, she finally found a way to get away from Gargan as she then ran towards Eddie and hugged him.
"Don't leave me, Eddie. Please don't leave me" - Alicia
"Run, Alicia... Run!" - Eddie
Eddie tried to push her away with his body until she finally let go of Eddie and ran towards the door, but Gargan ran after her.
"Run!" - Eddie
Alicia was about to reach the door but Gargan quickly struck her from behind, knocking her to the floor, right before the door.
"She cares for you, I give you that. But here love for you, cost her, her life" - Gargan
Gargan sniffed the air for a moment, then looked down at Alicia and pulled out a knife.
"No!... No don't do this!" - Eddie
"Do you know what you did?..." - Gargan
Eddie didn't respond.
Gargan then pulled out a picture from his back-pocket which featured a man in it.
"You know what you took from me?..." - Gargan
Gargan threw the picture to the floor.
"I don't understand, tell me what I did" - Eddie
"Answer me" - Gargan
"No, you answer me. I obviously did something to hurt you in the past. Just tell me what it was. Tell me what I did!" - Eddie
"You killed my father..." - Gargan
Eddie was speechless.
"Miles Gargan, was my father. He was a great man. We lived here because we were down on our luck, no money. My father spent everyday of the week, searching for work. He made me a promise, that at one point in my future, I'd be happy. That at one point in time, I'd be free. But he didn't include himself. I finally relized this after he died. You remember how he died? I do. I remember the police officer told me not to see him. But I had to. I remember seeing them... remove the trophy from my father's stomach, and then the blood running out of his body afterwards, I was alone, I was scared. I'll never forget how day-in, day-out I had always thought of my redemption. And now... that day has finally come. After today, I will be free, after today... I will be happy" - Gargan
Gargan stabbed Alicia in the stomach.
"No!..." - Eddie
Alicia fell to her knees until finally her head fell to the ground.
Tears began to run down Eddie's face as he also fell to his knees.
"Why won't I kill you? Because, I want you to suffer. Just as I did" - Gargan
"You killed her..." - Eddie
"Oh yes, I did" - Gargan
"You killed her..." - Eddie
"You said that already, Eddie" - Gargan
"You killed her..." - Eddie
Eddie stood to his feet and stared at Gargan.
"And I'll kill you" - Eddie
"That's it, Eddie! That's it!" - Gargan
Eddie stared with rage at Gargan.
Gargan then began to walk closer towards Eddie.
"You see, that's what I want from you, to see which of us is better than the other" - Gargan
Gargan picked up a control-switch.
"So let's see" - Gargan
Gargan pushed the button and Eddie's hands were released as he then quickly came charging after Gargan. Gargan grinned as Eddie tried to shoulder block him but Gargan sidestepped him and punched Eddie in the face. Eddie quickly shot back to his feet and threw a punch at Gargan's face as he fell to his knee, Eddie punched him again with his over hand but Gargan pushed Eddie away and kicked him in the stomach as he fell to the floor on his back. Gargan then quickly threw his foot into Eddie stomach and then went to do the same to his head but Eddie rolled out of the way as he got to his feet and speared Gargan right through the door. Eddie then repeatedly began to punch Gargan in the face but then, all of a sudden, two groups of police officers came from both ends of the hallway. Eddie paid no attention to them as he kept punching Gargan.
"Get him off of me!" - Gargan
One of the police officers tried to pull Eddie off but couldn't as the rest tried to help and finally got him off of Gargan.
"You alright, Ethan?" - Officer #1
"Gave us quite the scare there when you called in, now we see why" - Officer #2
"He killed a girl" - Gargan
"God dammit, anyone else?" - Officer #1
"Not sure, but we should search this whole building, top to bottom" - Gargan
"Okay. Henry, Lloyd, start upstairs, go" - Officer #1
The two officers headed upstairs as the remaining officers kept Eddie subdued. Gargan winked at Eddie but Eddie finally broke free from the officers holding him back and charged towards Gargan, but the second officer shot Eddie with the taser-gun and Eddie fell right before Gargan's feet as they shocked him.
"Get some cuffs on this son of a b&%$#!" - Officer #1
Eddie lied pretty much still on the ground, apart from the constant twitch due to the electrical shock. Two of the officers pulled Eddie's arms behind his back as the one of them placed the cuffs on him and pulled him to his feet.
Gargan stepped towards Eddie and pulled his head up towards his viewing.
"You sad, little man..." - Gargan
Gargan let go of Eddie's head and the two police officers dragged him out of the building.
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Hey, red hood, long time, no see. Anyways, thanks for the comment, I'll be getting back to this fic shortly but I wanted to take a little break from Eddie Brock right at the moment and look to Spider-Man this time around with my fic for 'Spider-Man 4'. So, keep your eyes open for this one, as I'm not done with it quite yet.
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I look forward to it . I have one small question which version of Venom is your story based on the mainstream, Ultimate, Movie or all three?
Another thing I like is that although Eddie is tortured he isnt a raving lunatic like his movie incarnation. but is young enough for the reader to understand and find intersting. I never liked the fact that in the mainstream comics a fully grown forty something man blamed a teenager/young adult for everything wrong in his life. Unlike Ultimate Venom and movie Venom who were more realistic.
Brilliant work you have great insight into characters.
Another thing I like is that although Eddie is tortured he isnt a raving lunatic like his movie incarnation. but is young enough for the reader to understand and find intersting. I never liked the fact that in the mainstream comics a fully grown forty something man blamed a teenager/young adult for everything wrong in his life. Unlike Ultimate Venom and movie Venom who were more realistic.
Brilliant work you have great insight into characters.
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I'd say it takes from all three in someway, but mainly I only wanted to look to the comics as a reference so I can create a universe around these characters that you never read of in the comic-books.
Yeah, I always hated the muscle-crazed lunatic that was Eddie Brock from the comics. It was just so hard to relate and care for the character in a way that he just wouldn't have fit into this fic because he has to deal with so much more pain in his life then anyone else has to endure, his mother died giving birth to him, his father was always pushing him out of sight because he had believed he was in someway responsible, his father died once he finally began to respect Eddie, Eddie knew he had to kill Schultz(Shocker) from the first film. In this film, it gets far worse as the symbiote leaves him so he has pretty much no chance at fighting Gargan, witnesses the death of his life-long friend, Alicia right before his eyes, and then finally is belamed for her own death, but, you can expect much more to happen to the character later on.
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It does not even enter Gargans head that Eddie will seek vengance
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No, that never enter's any villain's head when they make a plan like that, with Gargan it's proven. So anyways, here's...
PART 17:
The two police officers dragged Eddie out to the vehicle, followed behind by Gargan.
"Wife... I was... supposed to save his wife..." - Eddie
"Who's wife?" - Officer #1
"He's probably imagining these things, afterall, he belame me for killing that girl when he did it him-" - Gargan
Gargan was cut off when all of a sudden, the building they just came from exploded. As Eddie, Gargan and the two officers fell to the ground in fear of the explosion.
Eddie then quickly got up and ran towards Gargan, who was still down on the ground. But Gargan quickly pulled out his gun and shot Eddie in the shoulder, as he fell to the ground next to Gargan, Gargan leaned up against Eddie's ear.
"I won't kill you, but I'll watch you rot." - Gargan
Eddie tried to reach over to Gargan to choke him but the first police officer grabbed him by the cuffs and pulled him to his feet, Gargan smirked as he then got back up to his feet. The officer then pushed Eddie into the backseat of the police car.
"We'll come back to get you after we take in this psycho, 'kay Ethan?" - Officer #2
The second officer stood over the passneger's side of the vehicle.
"Okay." - Gargan
The second officer entered the vehile and waved to Gargan as they backed up onto the road.
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Brilliant Gargan thinks he,s won but he shall be very mistaken
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Indeed so, sir
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