Venom - thejon93

[thejon93]

Hope you don't think I forgot about your story.

Sounding good so far, though I do find Venom crouching outside of Alicia's bedroom a tad creepy. Which isn't a bad thing.

Thanks, Mr. WA. I wanted to come up with a quick idea to make the audience feel that Venom was not at all a good guy, much less a anti-hero as well. I think of it sorta like Hulk but Venom is much more evil and manipulative.

 

[thejon93]

PART 15:
"Why are you doing this to me?!" - Eddie

"We follow what your instincts tell us to... and we follow them together..."

"That wasn't right... I didn't want that... I didn't..." - Eddie

"Well, you got it either way... live with it, Edward..."

"How can I live with something like that?! I'm a monster with you!" - Eddie

The symbiote screamed at him and Eddie fell onto the bed.

"What have I become?... What?..." - Eddie

"We are no monster... we are your every desire..."

"You're not my desire... you're are my every burden" - Eddie

The symbiote on Eddie's body sizzled; as if it were laughing at Eddie's remark.

"Stop it!" - Eddie

"Make us, Edward..."

Eddie looked enraged at the symbiote as he looked down at it on his stoamach.

The symbiote then spawned Venom's face from his stoamach and he began to laugh at Eddie.

Eddie grasped at Venom's face and tore it off of himself.

The symbiote that Eddie tore off fell to the floor but then it screamed at him.

The remaining symbiote on Eddie's body straped Eddie to the bed.

"Let... me... GO!..." - Eddie

"But why?... So you can run?... So you can hide?... So we can find you?... So we take you back?... You see Eddie, we are together... forever..."

Eddie fell unconsious.

 

[Victarion]

PART 15:
"We follow what your instincts tell us to... and we follow them together..."

"That wasn't right... I didn't want that... I didn't..." - Eddie

"Well, you got it either way... live with it, Edward..."

"How can I live with something like that?! I'm a monster with you!" - Eddie

The symbiote screamed at him and Eddie fell onto the bed.

"What have I become?... What?..." - Eddie

"We are no monster... we are your every desire...".

I like this part: the symbiote's not bad; its just an animal. Its like saying a wolf is bad for killing the family pet in order to feed starving cubs. While it would undoubtably anger the pet's owner(s), it would help some poor pups live to see another day. Shades of gray. Nice and I hope to see more.

 

[thejon93]

I like this part: the symbiote's not bad; its just an animal. Its like saying a wolf is bad for killing the family pet in order to feed starving cubs. While it would undoubtably anger the pet's owner(s), it would help some poor pups live to see another day. Shades of gray. Nice and I hope to see more.

Yeah, except this animal feeds on Eddie's rage and hate, and I wanted to make as many scenes as I could with Eddie trying to reason or even talk with the symbiote because it's such an important character in this as well. Unlike 'Spider-Man 3', I wanted to let the audience understand more of the symbiote's character and there were some scenes in 'Spider-Man 3' that I was confused with like when Eddie suddenly relized Peter had a girlfriend named Mary Jane. An idea I had for that and how Eddie knew so much about Peter in the suit is that the suit still has his memories, thoughts, etc. It's just that, being the manipulative, animalist substance that it is it modifies those thoughts to make Peter seem like an even greater mortal enemy for Eddie.

 

[thejon93]

PART 16:
Eddie woke up and rose from his bed in fear.

Eddie checked underneath his shirt for the symbiote, it wasn't there.

Eddie looked around in fear then headed towards the door.

Eddie about to leave the gym locker room when he hears someone crash through the door.

"You think you can rat me out like that?! Now the entire faculty is on my case!" - Randell

"I'm sorry, Randell!" - Fred

Eddie ran to the other side of the room where he heard the two fighting.

Randell looked up as Eddie as he choked Fred on the ground.

"Your next, Eddie, if you don't piss off!" - Randell

Eddie ran towards Randell and then kicked him in the face, knocking him off of Fred.

Eddie picked up Fred.

"Go... get some help!... Run!" - Eddie

Eddie pushed Fred away as he began to run for help.

Eddie turned around towards Randell as he speared Eddie into the wall and began to punch him, Eddie tried to block as he fell to the ground.

Randell would not stop punching Eddie.

Eddie screamed in fear.

"Stop, Randell!... Please!..." - Eddie

Randell grabbed Eddie by the head and threw him at the bench where Eddie hit his back hard on it.

Randell walked over quickly towards Eddie and began to choke him, Eddie tried to pull Randell away but he couldn't as his face began to turn red.

Herman then came running into the locker room and tried to pull Randell away from Eddie.

"Let go of him now, Randell!" - Herman

Herman ried to pull Randell's hands off from around Eddie's neck.

Herman gave up and punched Randell in the head.

Randell didn't react.

Herman then punched him again and again, finally forcing him off of Eddie.

Randell screamed in anger at Herman and punched him in the face as Herman flew down to the bench.

Eddie coughed as he noticed Herman was in danger.

Eddie speared Randell and tried to hold him to the ground but Randell threw him off and punched him, knocking Eddie to the ground.

Herman then grabbed Randell and threw him out of the locker room where he first came in.

Eddie rolled to his back as he began to cough again, in the corner of his eye, he could see the symbiote coming towards him. Eddie was lost for breath as he laid out his arm for the symbiote to crawl on him.

Herman kicked Randell in the gut then threw an uppercut at him, launching him backwards.

Herman went to punch him again but Randell fell right on him and pushed him to the ground.

Randell wrapped his arm around Herman's neck and began to choke him, Herman squirmed all around, trying to release himself from Randell's grasp.

Randell stood up and held Herman at the each of the staircase, threatening to throw him down it.

"I'm going to kill you, I'm going to kill everyone!" - Randell

Venom then quickly swung by Randell and pulled him away from Herman.

Herman fell down the edge of the staircase but stopped himself from falling down it completely by grabbing the stair below him.

The school bell rang, waking up from being on the staircase. He stood up as students came out from their classrooms, looking around for Randell.

Herman ran outside, looking around for Randell or even Venom.

Right above Herman was Randell, he was tied up by somekind of black web-like substance which held him up against the flag-post as he lied there unconsious.

Herman finally looked up at it and what he noticed while doing so was that Venom was right above Randell.

Randell couldn't breath as he was in fear of the very sight of Venom.

Venom then left the area, out of the sight of Herman. Leaving him staring up at the building in awe.

 

[thejon93]

PART 17:
Eddie with the symbiote suit on, sitting on the top of his apartment building.

"If I was... to only do things like that with you... I can live with it..." - Eddie

"Like what, Edward?..."

"...save people... I'm not looking to be the bad guy here..." - Eddie

"We were never the monster, Edward..."

"Don't fool yourselves, I remember when you were stalking my friend" - Eddie

"But you want her to be more, don't you?..."

Eddie was speechless.

"You are sad about the fact that you can't see her anymore because you chose gym class, and see chose journalism..."

"You know nothing about me, you know nothing about her. So do yourself a favour and shut the hell up!" - Eddie

"Refusal to accept what you have always told yourself inside... it can destroy you, Eddie... it can make you sick... why did you end up choosing over her anyhow, Eddie?... Were you afraid?..."

Eddie took a deep breath and sat up from the edge of his building.

"I don't know what to believe in anymore... I figured-" - Eddie

"-You figured you lost it all, when your father was taken from you..."

"...yes..." - Eddie

"Then here's your chance to discover what you've always believed in..."

"...and what was that?" - Eddie

"Only your heart can find the answers, Edward... even we don't have the power to penitrate it, to give you the answers. You'll just have to find them, as everyone else is destined to..."

Eddie smiled.

Eddie walks down to the school but is stopped by Herman Schultz.

"Eddie..." - Herman

Eddie turned around towards Herman.

"Hey, Herman... Look, I'm sorry we haven't talked in a while, I've just been busy..." - Eddie

"I know that, Eddie... and I know what you're hiding from me..." - Herman

Eddie was speechless.

"I know what you are" - Herman

"Herman... I honestly don't know what you're talking ab-" - Eddie

Herman ripped Eddie's shirt open and could see the symbiote on his body, it snarled at him.

"What do you think, I'm some kind of an idiot?!" - Herman

Herman slapped Eddie in the face.

Eddie grasped his face where Herman hit him.

"...I'm sorry, Herman. I'm sorry I didn't tell you..." - Eddie

Herman looked Eddie square in the eyes.

"I've protected you're scrawny ass for this?!" - Herman

Eddie couldn't answer Herman, he was lost for words.

"When I saw it felt emotions for you, I knew you were the one to watch for and here you are" - Herman

Eddie again couldn't talk to Herman.

"I've been tracking it forever now at this piece of crap school, to see what makes it tick and you were the one to help it sprout?!" - Herman

Herman slapped Eddie again.

Eddie began to shed tears in his eyes.

"Please... Herman, I didn't know..." - Eddie

Herman stood up straight.

"Then give it up, Eddie... give it up, or I'll gladly finish you myself..." - Herman

Eddie snarled and looked up at Herman, his eyes were white.

"&$%$ you, Schultz, it found me!" - Eddie

Eddie spoke in the voice of Venom himself. Eddie snarled at Herman then took off back the opposite way.

As Eddie walked away, Herman looked enraged at Eddie.

 

[thejon93]

PART 18:
Eddie walked into the back of the alleyway.

Eddie fell up against the wall and slid down to the ground.

Eddie slapped his fist against the wall.

Eddie then got up and threw a garbage can right through a nearby window.

The window shattered.

Eddie breathed rapidly in rage.

He then looked at the glass below his feet and he could see his eyes were glowing white.

Eddie stopped breathing rapidly and stared down at his reflection in awe.

Eddie began to calm down as his eyes turned back to normal.

He fell down again to the side of the building.

Eddie then held his head in his hands.

He then looked up to the top of the building where he could see the sun.

Eddie looked down to the ground then stood up.

Eddie knocked on the door of his guidence councillor's office.

"Hi there, Mr. Torries" - Eddie

"Eddie, what brings you down here?" - Mr. Torries

"I just..." - Eddie

Eddie walked into Mr. Torries office and sat down in the chair in-front of his desk.

"...I think I want to try a different subject" - Eddie

"What were you thinking?" - Mr. Torries

"...a friend of mine told me that I should persue a path in journalism, I'd like to see how it all turns out from there, Sir" - Eddie

"'Journalism', huh?..." - Mr. Torries

Mr. Torries walked up to the window behind his desk and stared out of it.

"I was once an aspiring journalist myself, Mr. Brock" - Mr. Torries

"You were?" - Eddie

"Yeah... I loved it too" - Mr. Torries

"Why did you give it up?" - Eddie

"I was never accepted, that's all" - Mr. Torries

"What, to a newspaper company?..." - Eddie

"Of course, Eddie. Why do you think so many people signed up for journalism?" - Mr. Torries

"I just never really noticed, I guess" - Eddie

"Well, I'll gladly sort this all out for you, Eddie. Just attend your regular classes as you do now and we'll try to get you in. Oh, and what subject would you like to terminate to make room for this one?" - Mr. Torries

"Gym class, I've done enough weight-lifting, don't you think?" - Eddie

Mr. Torries laughed.

"See you later, Eddie" - Mr. Torries

 

[thejon93]

PART 19
Eddie walks into Alicia's apartment building.

A man behind him is bent down while walking around the room.

Eddie looks over at him.

"You lookin' for something?" - Eddie

The man looked up at Eddie.

"You see them, don't you?..." - Man

"See what?" - Eddie

"The rat turds!..." - Man

"...'Rat... turds'?..." - Eddie

Eddie looked around on the floor and then underneath his shoes.

"Can I see your eyes?" - Eddie

The man looked at Eddie again.

"What?" - Man

Eddie bent down to his level to check his eyes.

"Okay, well they aren't bloodshot, that's a start" - Eddie

Eddie bent back up and walked up the stairs.

The man took out his wallet, opened it and looked at his reflection in his mirror.

"...they aren't bloodshot..." - Man

Eddie knocked on Alicia's door.

Alicia answered the door.

"Oh, Eddie!..." - Alicia

"Lets go out for a coffee, shall we?" - Eddie

"...not a big fan of coffee, how about a cheeseburger?" - Alicia

"Well... you certainly did read my mind, let's go" - Eddie

"Oh, I have to get my-" - Alicia

"Forget about it, let's just leave, 'cause... I feel bad I didn't like even bother to come visit you or anything like that..." - Eddie

"...well, i just need to get my keys..." - Alicia

"...oh yeah, of course..." - Eddie

Eddie smirked.

Eddie took a bite out of his cheeseburger.

"Mmm... this is a good cheeseburger..." - Eddie

"You got some ketchup, right... there..." - Alicia

Alicia leaned over the table and wiped off the ketchup drop from Eddie's cheek.

"What, am I still to young to wipe off my own ketchup stain?" - Eddie

Alicia laughed.

"Look at that smile, you see, that's what I've been missing. That right there, that made my day" - Eddie

Alicia continued to laugh.

Eddie smiled at her.

"And I missed that smile from you, Eddie" - Alicia

"Yeah, well... unfortunately it's the first time I've actually smiled in a while" - Eddie

"Why? What's wrong?..." - Alicia

"...for a while now, I've been searching inside myself... to find out who I really am, I searched to be the man my heart told me to be... and that man is here today, with you..." - Eddie

Alicia and Eddie stared eye-to-eye.

"...just so you know, I was practicing that line all day, I swear" - Eddie

Eddie and Alicia laughed again together.

 

[thejon93]

I'll be writting another entry soon so here's another trailer:

Trailer #2:
0.00
"What are you doing with yourself, Eddie," Alicia.
0.02
Eddie was speechless.
0.04
Cut to Venom leaping onto someone in the distance, over the shoulder of Herman Schultz.
0.06
"What I am... is hard to describe... what I do... I can only barely control," Eddie.
0.12
Symbiote crawls up Eddie's body then it fades-away to black before the symbiote reaches Eddie's face. "...if at all," Eddie[cont.].
0.18
Venom begins to crawl up alongside wall(can only see his back).
0.19
Cut to Venom screaming at the camera willing moving towards his right.
0.22
Flash to 'Woodbrough College', Eddie looks up at it.
0.26
"Your Eddie Brock, right?" Mr. Torries.
0.29
"I sure am," Eddie.
0.31
Eddie turns towards a group of kids beating up a weaker kid.
0.34
"Do you ever wish you could-," Eddie.
0.36
Eddie lowers his head in shame.
0.38
"...do something," Eddie[cont.].
0.39
Eddie with symbiote suit on everywhere except his face looks down to the city streets while sitting on the edge of the building.
0.47
"With this... I can finally do it," Eddie.
0.51
Eddie stands up on the building as the symbiote covers his face and he jumps off the building.
0.56
Eddie picks up phone.
0.57
"You think you can use it to help others?" Herman Schultz.
0.59
Shocker shoots gauntlets at car.
1.01
Car explodes near Venom.
1.03
Venom leaps on-top of a moving car.
1.04
"You are wrong," Herman Schultz.
1.06
Venom turns towards camera.
1.08
"We'll see," Eddie.
1.09
Eddie hangs up the phone.
1.10
Venom's eyes form.
1.13
Cut to Venom drooling, he whips it away.
1.17
"Hate it when that happens," Venom.
1.19
Shocker flys towards Venom, Venom quickly clubs Herman to the ground before he hits him.
1.21
Venom throws a punch[towards camera].
1.22
'Evil Shines Best...'.
1.24
Venom dropkicks Shocker through window.
1.25
Eddie lays out his hand to let symbiote crawl onto him.
1.27
'In Darkness'.
1.31
Venom turns towards car headed towards him, the man pushes his brakes and rotates 90' before stopping right near Venom.
1.36
The man exits the door opposite Venom.
1.39
Venom smirks and then clubs the side of the car hard, making it fly over his head and towards Shocker.
1.43
At midnight, with the moon shining down on him, Venom stands up on-top of a tall building with the symbiote squirming all around comfortably.
1.51
'Venom'; in the background: flashes of Venom screaming in background in comic-book style.
Total Running Time: 1.57min.

 

[thejon93]

PART 20:
Herman Schultz walks into Eddie's apartment building.

Herman looks at the list of names on the bulletin and spots Eddie Brock's name and apartment number.

Herman tapped on the Eddie's name and went upstairs to his level.

Eddie walked into Alicia's apartment, followed by Alicia.

"Haven't you ever heard of ladies first, Eddie?" - Alicia

"Ahh, you know me, always breaking the rules" - Eddie

"Yeah! In more ways than one I must say" - Alicia

"How so?" - Eddie

Eddie sits on Alicia's couch and looks up at her.

"Well, for one walking on my clean carpet with your flithy shoes" - Alicia

Eddie quickly lifts his feet off the carpet and takes off his shoes.

"I'd thought you'd take it kindly if I left them on so you wouldn't have to deal with the stench of my smelly feet, you wanna smell?" - Eddie

"Oh, no Sir. You have to repeatedly clean those feet before you ever see me smelling them" - Alicia

Eddie laughs.

"Well, I guess I'm going to have to focus more on washing my feet rather than showering every morning" - Eddie

"Ahh, no. You can stick with both, Eddie" - Alicia

"Psst, Alicia. One thing I wouldn't have the energy for is to do both" - Eddie

"Then do both at the same time, that might be a little more convinent" - Alicia

Eddie rolls his eyes.

"Yeah, so I can slip and fall, I don't know if it has ever happened to you before, but it has happened to me and let me tell ya... ohh boy, I was home for days after that" - Eddie

"Oh yeah, I remember that. I thought you perposely did that just to leave me alone at school for a few days" - Alicia

"It was two days" - Eddie

"Sure, it doesn't seem like much now but it sure was a long wait for me... I missed you" - Alicia

Eddie was speechless.

"...I missed you all summer..." - Alicia

Eddie looked saddened at Alicia.

"...I'm sorry for bringing that up, Eddie. I didn't mean to..." - Alicia

Alicia walks into the kitchen.

Eddie gets up off the couch and follows her into the kitchen.

Alicia has her hands on the counter with her back facing Eddie.

Eddie stops walking behind her.

He wraps his arm around her shoulder.

"I missed you to, Alicia..." - Eddie

Alicia grasped Eddie's hand then turned around towards Eddie and hugged him.

"What? Do you want to dance?" - Eddie

Eddie picked up a controller off of the counter and tried to turn on the radio.

He couldn't find the button to turn it on.

"One thing I hate about these things is - Oh..." - Eddie; he found the button and turned on music.

Eddie wrapped his arms around Alicia as they slowly danced in circles.

"These were the kind of moments I missed most, where I get on your nerves and you have the courtesy to deal with me" - Eddie

Alicia smiled, Eddie peered over her shoulder and saw her smiling.

"...and there's the golden moment of my day, Alicia" - Eddie

Alicia looked up at Eddie and kissed him on the lips quickly.

Alicia looked up in awe at Eddie and tried to get away from him but he held onto her.

"Okay, make that smile number three on my list, and make that little kiss number two... because here's number one" - Eddie

Eddie kisses Alicia and they both join in this time.

Eddie and Alicia stopped kissing for a moment and looked at each other passionately in the eyes as they held both their hands together and they grasped them together tightly and began to kiss again.

Herman sat down at Eddie's couch in his apartment, he looks over at Eddie's hamster who was standing up and starring at him.

Herman smirked at her.

"And how old are you?..." - Herman

Herman leaned over and read her name-tag.

"Sarah?" - Herman

Sarah continued to stand there and look at him.

Herman took a deep breath then got up from the couch.

Herman walked into Eddie kitchen and opened the refrigerator and pulled out a can of pop and drank it.

Herman spotted a picture of Eddie and laughed sarcastically.

Herman reached back into the fridge and pulled out another pop and chucked it at Eddie's picture.

"Cheers to you, Eddie" - Herman

Herman rose his can up to Eddie broken picture and began to drink the remaining pop.

Eddie's symbiote hid underneath his clothes as Eddie and Alicia lied in the bed together, covered by the blankets.

"...you know... the first day I met you, I was in love" - Alicia

Eddie looked over at her.

"Really?..." - Eddie

Alicia shook her head.

Eddie turned towards the ceiling.

"Darn... we could've been young, young lovers back then. We'd be drawing each other pictures everyday and sitting at each other's birthday parties drinking Kool-Aid" - Eddie

Alicia began to laugh, Eddie turned towards her and laughed too.

He put his hand through her hair.

"...and I loved you too... just as much as I do now" - Eddie

Alicia smiled and put her hand on Eddie's cheek.

 

[thejon93]

PART 21:
Eddie got out of the bed and the symbiote crawled onto him.

Eddie checked to see if Alicia was still sleeping, she was.

The symbiote crawled up all along him.

Eddie put on his shirt and pants and sat back down on the bed.

He looked over at Alicia and smiled.

"So how are you doing on your project?..." - Alicia; talked in her sleep

"Oh, I handed it in already to Mr. Mack" - Eddie

"Are you leaving?" - Alicia

"If you want me to, but, I don't want you to come across thinking of me as an idiot by doing so without saying good-bye" - Eddie

Eddie crawled back onto the bed and kissed Alicia.

She opened her eyes.

"See you tomorrow?" - Alicia

"From now on, everyday. Sick or not, I'll be there... I promise" - Eddie

Alicia and Eddie kissed each other again.

The symbiote underneath Eddie's clothes began to squirm around in comfort.

"Yes..."

Eddie opened his eyes wide as he and Alicia still kissed.

He stopped kissing her and jumped off the bed in fright.

"What's wrong?" - Alicia

"...I... ahh... I'll see you tomorrow, okay?" - Eddie

Eddie rushed out of the apartment.

"...alright..." - Alicia

Eddie walked into his apartment but all of a sudden there was an explosion.

The fire alarm rang.

Eddie left the building immediately and headed to the streets.

He looked to the where his window to his apartment was and there he saw Herman Schultz.

Eddie looked in rage at him and ran back ino the building avoiding people running outside of it.

Eddie ran up the stairs to his apartment level and finally reached the floor.

Eddie came across the corner when all of a sudden he spotted someone dead on the floor in-front of his apartment, it looked as if the explosion came from his door.

It was his friend, Carl, who was dead on the floor. Eddie looked up at another figure he saw at the corner of his doorway, it was Herman Schultz.

Eddie looked at him with tears shedding from his eyes and rage in his face as well.

Eddie ran towards Herman.

Once Eddie got within attacking range, Herman then threw an uppercut at Eddie using one of his gauntlets.

When Eddie hit the ground, he rolled around in pain while gripping his head.

Herman bent down beside Eddie.

"How do you like it Eddie?" - Herman

Eddie couldn't answer back as he was still in pain from the attack.

Herman rolled up his sleeve and looked at the gauntlet on his right wrist.

"Well, you see, with the simple matter of science I made these wrist-bands that can generate enough energy to blast a bowling ball into orbit" - Herman

Eddie coughed up blood.

Herman looked enraged at Eddie then grabbed him by his hair and pulled him up to his face.

"YOU WANT TO AVENGE YOUR FRIEND'S DEATH, EDDIE?! HUH?!..." - Herman

Eddie starred at Herman, eye-to-eye.

"Meet me at the school, and we can both have the opportunity to settle our differences" - Herman

Herman threw Eddie's head down to the floor and stood up.

"You see, Eddie. I'm no coward, I'm not going to kill you here, now. I'm gonna give you time to perpare, anyways, I need to work my cardio... and you need to focus on actually making it to the school!" - Herman

Herman kicked Eddie in the stoamach and then walked away.

Eddie coughed up more blood and began to crawl towards Carl.

He finally reached Carl and laid on his stoamach and began to cry.

"I'm sorry, Carl... I'm sorry..." - Eddie

Eddie grabbed Carl's head and held it up against his chest as he cried.

Eddie then looked up at the ceiling with tears still running from his eyes as he looked up at it in rage.

Eddie gently put Carl's head back on the floor and walked into his apartment.

"See, Eddie... you could've destroyed him earlier, but instead, you chose to comfort your pretty little girlfriend..."

Eddie ignored the symbiote and took off his clothes as the symbiote was already covering his body except his hands and head.

The symbiote crawled along to his hands finally and then slowly began to crawl up his face.

The symbiote formed Venom as he snarled and then leapt out the window.

 

[thejon93]

PART 22:
Herman sat at the park bench in-front of the school, waiting for Eddie.

Herman checked the street clock in-fron of him.

Herman put his head down until he heard something behind him in the trees.

He smiled and turned around towards the trees.

In the tree, he could see white eyes glowing.

Herman took a deep breath and stood up.

"You let it come to this, Eddie... you could've gave it up, but look at what you became in the first place!" - Herman

Venom screamed at Herman and jumped out of the tree and landed right in-front of Herman.

Venom slowly stood to his feet.

Herman looked at Venom with a smirk on his face.

"I know what you're thinking, Eddie. Why did I start this?" - Herman

Venom didn't respond as he starred blankly into Herman's eyes.

"Well, if I didn't, then who the hell else would?" - Herman

Venom snarled.

"So... what are you waiting for, Eddie? Or do I have to start off first?" - Herman

Venom didn't respond.

"...so be it" - Herman

Herman threw a punch at Venom but Venom crouched out of the way and threw and uppercut at Herman.

Herman stumbled backwards towards the school as Venom continued to follow him.

Herman threw a punch at Venom which hit but Venom then kicked Herman in the gut and he moved backwards quicker.

Venom threw another punch at Herman but he twisted out of the way and punched Venom in the face instead.

Herman rotated to Venom's position and kicked him towards the school this time.

They both began to quicken their pace until finally they both reached the wall as Herman pushed Venom up-against it.

Herman quickly charged up his gauntlet and threw a punch at Eddie but instead it went through the wall.

Venom then hit Herman's gauntlet that was in the wall but by the hit it caused the gauntlet to set off which destroyed the wall.

Venom threw another punch at Herman which hit and threw him through the broken wall.

Venom kicked Herman in the gut again then kicked him in the head which made him stumble back to his regular stance.

Venom then hit Herman with his forearm as Herman continued to stumble backwards.

Venom went to hit Herman again but he hit Venom's forearm with his own and punched him in the face with his free arm.

Herman punched Venom in the face again and he headed backwards upstairs.

Herman then grabbed Venom's head and slammed it on the wall then the railing as he tried to then throw him down the stairs but he couldn't because Venom had swung his symbiote lines to the back of stairs.

Herman tried to push harder down the stairs but noticed Venom had leverage, he looked back at Venom and Venom smirked at Herman and then threw him back up the stairs with his body weight and then threw the two symbiote lines at Herman's face and then it came back onto Eddie's suit.

Venom then dropkicked Herman up to the top of the staircase and stopped himself from falling down.

Herman dropped to his knee and as soon as he stood up, Venom leapt at him and flew over his head(quickly grabbing it) and then throwing him down to the ground.

The Fight Will Continue...

 

[thejon93]

(I really wish I could use animatics to do this fight sequence but, I'll do my best at it)

PART 23:
Herman slid along the floor as Venom leapt back towards him but Herman then punched Venom in the jaw and blasted him with both of his gauntlets combined. Venom flew into a classroom.

Herman walked slowly towards him as he could see the symbiote was scurrying away from where Herman blasted him with the gauntlets.

The symbiote then slowly made it's way back on Eddie's exposed body.

Herman then ran towards Eddie and kicked him in the stoamach.

The symbiote covered Eddie's face and Venom screamed at him, quickly leapt up to his feet and pushed Herman with his both hands across the room.

Herman shook it off and leapt towards Venom to hit him with a charged punch but Venom threw himself to the ceiling and kicked Herman in the back of the head launching him into the desk.

Herman looked back and could see Venom was running towards him, he turned around but before he could react, Venom leapt into the air and punched Herman across the face.

Herman twisted away from Venom but as he came back towards Herman, he quickly threw both his fists at Venom's jaw then grasped his hands together and clubbed Venom's back, launching him to the ground. Herman then threw himself towards the ground and kicked Venom with both his feet across the face. Venom slid across the floor a bit but then stood up and leapt towards Herman and speared him, launching both towards the window and then out of it.

As Herman and Venom fell, Venom quickly kicked Herman with both feet in the gut which launched him into the wall but then Herman launched his gauntlets at Venom which made him launch further away from the building and into a car in the parking lot.

Herman finally hit the ground with a thud. He coughed and then peered up at Venom who was in the windshield of the car.

Herman threw his hand at the wall and tried to lift himself up against the wall and did successfully. Herman coughed again and then began to march towards Venom and then began to run.

Venom started to get up but Herman was finally within his range as he leapt up into the air with his jet-boots and hit the hood of the car with his hands clamped together and both fully-charged gauntlets and hit the hood of the car and it's rear end was thrown up into the air as the car moved backwards and then finally as it began to fall over on the hood, Venom quickly rolled out of the way before it squished him.

Venom felt his back which was cut by the glass of the windshield.

Herman walked towards Venom while he was on his knees but then Venom quickly sprinted to his feet and tackled Herman right through a park bench.

Venom threw a fury of punches at Herman as he was down but Herman then punched Venom which launched him off of Herman.

Herman stood up and booted Venom in the face which made him fall back down to the ground. Herman knelt down over Venom and began to choke him, Venom coughed but then Herman began to use his gauntlets to sufficate Venom even more as the symbiote on Venom's face began to quickly crawl away from the blast.

"Underneath it all, Eddie, you are still just a weak, defenseless boy. And now you're going to die!" - Herman

Eddie screamed in pain but all of a sudden the symbiote threw Herman off of Eddie. The symbiote quickly recovered Eddie as he continued to attack Herman by throwing punches and kicks at him until Herman quickly punched Venom across the face but Venom shook it off and kicked Herman in the gut, launching him into the lamp-post.

Herman once again coughed repeatedly as Venom walked towards him with an enraged look across his face.

"Weak? WEAK?!" - Venom

Venom grasped Herman by the neck and held him high up in the air.

"You're the only "weak" one here!" - Venom

Herman and Venom stared eye-to-eye at each other. Herman then threw his feet at Venom stoamach and activated his jet-boots. As he was thrown away from Venom, leaving on his stoamach burnt symbiote from the spot where he put his feet.

Venom cried in pain as Herman flew along the parking lot due to his jet-boots then finally shut them down.

Herman stood to his feet as Venom fell to the ground in pain while still trying to lift himself up. Herman smirked and then activated his jet-boots again then speared Venom while flying with him threw the air but the jet-boots quickly ran low on energy and died off as Venom and Herman fell to the ground below. Herman kept trying to get his jet-boots to work and finally they did for a matter of seconds, enough to save him from falling to his death. Venom then quickly grabbed onto the foot of Herman but just then the jet-boots shut down again as they fell to the traffic-filled highway below. Venom and Herman landed with a thud but couldn't waste too much time as a car was headed at high speed towards them. Venom threw Herman towards the car but he headed up flying right underneath the car. Venom then jumped into the air and grasped his hands together and hit the hood of the car which its rear end was thrown up as it headed backwards towards Herman. Herman looked up at it then quickly threw it high up into the air with his gauntlets.

Venom and Herman quickly looked at each other then ran towards each other but right before they collided, the car that flew high into the air crashed down right in-between them causing them both to fly backwards away from each other. Venom rolled along the road then finally stopped as the symbiote screamed in pain. Herman stopped himself from rolling any further and then looked back at a big-rig truck just about a few feet in-front of him. He stood up and ran towards it. He opened the door.

"You need help, buddy?" - Driver

Herman charged his gauntlet and then fired it at the driver as he flew out of the truck along with his side of the door.

Herman moved to the driver's seat and started up the truck.

Venom looked up when he heard the noise from the truck. He could barely see anything over the fire and smoke of the vehicle in-front of him as he stood to his feet.

The big-rig truck then began to move forward as it began to grow in speed, it finally hit the destroyed car in-front of it as Venom then realized what was coming towards him.

Herman laughed manically.

Venom then leapt high up into the air and landed on the rig of the truck. Venom held himself stable on the rig as Herman then pushed the brakes and the rig at the end of the truck moved over to the right side of the truck. Herman looked out of his window and saw Venom. He then pushed the truck to the right which it crashed into the side of the rig. The end of the rig crashed through the barrier leading to below the highway was a few hundred-feet down. Herman then pushed the truck to the left where the cable was then detached between the rig and the truck. The rig pushed further into the barrier as much of the rig was over the drop. Herman moved the truck further down the highway and then turned it back around towards the rig. Venom looked up at Herman in the truck as he drove it forward towards the rig.

"Man, this guy's nuts" - Venom

Herman kept the truck driving towards the rig and climbed out of the loose door to the top of the truck. Venom stood up and stared at Herman and then walked backwards as did Herman and once the truck was about to hit the rig, Venom and Herman leapt towards each other. But Venom then threw his feet at Herman's head which caused Herman to fly the opposite way as the truck ran right through the rig then exploded, throwing Venom and Herman high into the air and right below the hundred-foot plus drop down below. Herman pointed his charged gauntlets towards Venom but Venom grabbed them both and pointed them at Herman's jaw.

"You're gonna let it control you, Eddie?!" - Herman

"No..." - Venom

The symbiote moved away from Eddie's face.

"This is me" - Eddie

Herman stared into the eyes of Eddie and then Eddie activated the gauntlets which threw Herman into the distance. Eddie threw a symbiote line at the edge of the bridge, saving himself from falling down below.

 

[red hood 4]

i love the way you have created your own universe

 

[thejon93]

i love the way you have created your own universe

Thank you very much, red hood. I planned on having it like so for a long time. I always felt that Venom could be made into a movie as long as they stood true to the comic-book character but at the same time, gave the character his very own universe. I plan on doing more sequels for this fan-fic to continue to improve upon the characters own universe.

PART 24:
Venom looks down to the streets while standing on-top of a tall-building.

The symbiote over Eddie's face crawled away as he sat down on the edge of the building with tears in his eyes.

Eddie looked up at the moon above him and took a deep breath as if releasing everything that was held up inside of him.

Alicia sat on her couch while watching TV when all of a sudden the phone rang.

She got up from the couch and picked it up.

"Hello?" - Alicia

"Hey, Alicia..." - Eddie

"Eddie?! Where are you?" - Alicia

"I'm downstairs, can you come meet me?" - Eddie

"Sure" - Alicia

"And, you better bring some shoes along with you" - Eddie

"Okay, what are you, to lazy to walk up to my door?" - Alicia

Eddie hung up the phone as Alicia still had it up to her ear.

She quickly looked up at her window then walked towards it and looked outside.

When she did, she just briefly caught a black figure walk into the shadows of an alleyway.

She let go of the phone and ran to her door.

Alicia came out of her apartment building and looked to the shadowy alleyway where she believed Eddie walked into.

She ran towards the alleyway and stopped right before it.

"Eddie?" - Alicia

"...yeah?..." - Eddie; the voice came from the shadows

"I missed you, Eddie" - Alicia

"So did I" - Eddie

"...you weren't there at school, where were you?" - Alicia

"...out..." - Eddie

""Out"? That's below any kind of Eddie Brock answer that I've ever heard from you, Eddie" - Alicia

"...it's because I'm different..." - Eddie

"What do you mean?" - Alicia

"...I've changed into something I've never been before... something I don't think anyone else has been as well..." - Eddie

"...what are you talking about, Eddie?..." - Alicia

"I'm talking about what's behind the shadows..." - Eddie

"And what's right in-front of me, Eddie" - Alicia

"...no..." - Eddie

Alicia couldn't reply.

"...the shadows will always be blocking me from ever being with you again, Alicia..." - Eddie

Tears began to run down from Alicia's eyes.

"...wh... what are you talking about... Eddie?..." - Alicia

"What I've become... what I will always be... what I will forever be..." - Eddie

Alicia once again couldn't reply.

Alicia moved closer to the shadows.

"I want to see you, Eddie..." - Alicia

"...no..." - Eddie

"Please, Eddie... I need to see you..." - Alicia

Alicia reached into the shadows and then all of a sudden felt a symbiote tentacle touch her, she fell backwards in fright.

Then all of a sudden a car quickly passed by, Alicia then briefly saw what was behind the shadows. It was Eddie with the symbote suit on, the symbiote tentacles were freely moving around from Eddie's suit.

Alicia looked into the shadows in awe even when the car was gone.

"Now you see what I truly am..." - Eddie

"...no... NO!..." - Alicia

Alicia ran back to the edge of the shadows and reached her hand in, she could feel Eddie's face.

"You are Eddie Brock... you are Eddie Brock... you are Eddie Brock!..." - Alicia

Alicia began to cry again but then felt Eddie face come closer towards her. She then leaned her head in closer to the shadows and right on the edge of the shadowy-barrier, Eddie and Alicia leaned both their heads together.

"...please, Eddie... don't leave me..." - Alicia

"...Eddie's not the one who's leaving you, Alicia... Eddie's been with you... forever... but... this... this thing behind the shadows... this isn't Eddie Brock..." - Eddie

"You're wrong you are still Eddie Brock... you are still Eddie Brock!..." - Alicia

Eddie pulled his head away from Alicia's.

"...no... this is not Eddie Brock... with this... I can never be Eddie Brock... never..." - Eddie

Alicia looked down to the ground but then quickly looked back up when she heard Eddie run off.

"Eddie?..." - Alicia

Alicia ran into the shadows.

"EDDIE!..." - Alicia

Alicia fell to her knees and began to cry again out-loud.

Eddie stood on the rooftop right above her as tears began to shed from his eyes as well.

Eddie walked into his guidence councillor's office and shut the door behind him.

"Mr. Torries... I qu-" - Eddie

"Eddie! Mr. Mack must've sent you down" - Mr. Torries

"Ahh... no..." - Eddie

Mr. Torries ignored Eddie and picked up a letter from his desk and handed it to Eddie. It was a letter from the 'Daily Globe'.

Eddie opened it. And it read that he was hired as a journalist to the newspaper company 'The Daily Globe'.

Eddie looked at it in awe.

"But... how?..." - Eddie

"Your paper on the Watergate scandal from back in the 70's really did catch their eye, Mr. Mack sent them a copy of it and they agreed to immediately get you the job" - Mr. Torries

Eddie couldn't reply as his eyes were still on the paper.

"Your plane tickets and all of that are all included you just have to accept" - Mr. Torries

"...I accept... it's just... this can't be real..." - Eddie

"What, do you want me to pinch you?" - Mr. Torries

Eddie again didn't reply but looked up at Mr. Torries.

"This happened because of you, Eddie, because you chose to make it happen" - Mr. Torries

Eddie looked up at Mr. Torries again and nodded his head.

Eddie sat on the plane and looked out the window and then pulled out a piece of paper from his backpack and looked down at it then looked back out his window. Eddie then pulled out a pen from his backpack and began to write a letter for Alicia.

Alicia walked down stairs from her apartment and checked her mail and there was a letter from Eddie. She quickly tore it open. The letter read: "I told you I'd always be with you". Alicia smiled.

Eddie with the symbiote suit on stood on-top of the Empire State Building, he looked up at the sun as he closed his eyes and took a deep breath. Just then the symbiote from Eddie's suit began to cover his face and then formed Venom's face. Venom smirked and then leapt off of the building and just at the halfway point of the building, Venom shot a symbiote tentacle at the building to stop himself from falling any further then grabbed hold of the building wall and stood up against it as he began to run down along the building.

THE END

Hope you guys enjoyed 'Venom', and there will be sequels for this fic later on so stay on the lookout.

 

[red hood 4]

Brilliant well thought out i have an idea for Carnage if you ever did him maybe have him as an invincible beast bent on the consumption and destruction of the human race. kassidy could maybe be a preist who beileves that Carnage has come as an avenging angel to purge mankind of its sins just my idea probaly really rubbish keep up the good work

 

[thejon93]

Brilliant well thought out i have an idea for Carnage if you ever did him maybe have him as an invincible beast bent on the consumption and destruction of the human race. kassidy could maybe be a preist who beileves that Carnage has come as an avenging angel to purge mankind of its sins just my idea probaly really rubbish keep up the good work

Thanks, red hood. I like your idea for Carnage, I'd like to see Carnage portrayed as a man at the same day and age as Eddie Brock, I'd like to see him at this age but act as if he were a young boy lost because he has nobody left, he has nothing left, until he finds the symbiote. The only problem I face with ever including Carnage is to not make it seem like too much of a coincidence when the symbiote finds him and I don't want to just introduce him with the symbiote already because then people will wonder how in the world he got it. Before Cletus Kasady becomes Carnage, I'd like to see him become a character first that people can somehow relate to and not just make him a regular generic super-villain bent on world-domination or whatever. I plan on making all of the villains in this franchise a villain to only Eddie Brock himself, make them like a personal villain towards him, and him alone, to keep the feel that he isn't a superhero like Spider-Man or whatever.

 

[red hood 4]

Ok ive read through the last part of the script again but what happened to Herman did he die or have i missef a bit

 

[thejon93]

Ok ive read through the last part of the script again but what happened to Herman did he die or have i missef a bit

Considering he fell hundred-plus feet and his jet-boots couldn't save him, yeah, I'd consider him pretty much dead at this point in time. I'm pretty sure I didn't quite varify that enough in the script but, yes, he does die.

 

[red hood 4]

thought so could you please check out my Venom script and tell me what you think its broken in to two halves

 

[thejon93]

thought so could you please check out my Venom script and tell me what you think its broken in to two halves

Sure thing.

 

[red hood 4]

Its Red hood could you please check out the first scene of my Carnage script please and tell me what you think thanks

 

[thejon93]

Its Red hood could you please check out the first scene of my Carnage script please and tell me what you think thanks

I'll check it out, but if you want to have more people check it out, put the link to it in your sig so people know more about it; like mine.

 

[red hood 4]

How do i do that

 

[thejon93]

How do i do that

'User CP', 'Edit Signature', copy address bar from your fic and paste it into the space.