So who wants to do me a favor.

Did your teacher give that to you with all the mistakes already included and you're supposed to fix them? Some of the words are you used two or three times are spelled differently each time, at least be consistent when you misspell words. Why didn't you run spell check? Why ask a comic book movie message board?
 
So... how about... no?

The Hype is not here for your homework.

Will you give me a *******?
 
Ice-man said:
how many times do i have to say this, im 16 :woot:


but can anyone help me out, how come you all can fix my posts but you can fix my final.

i need to pass, they pulled me out of classes and sent me on home bound (dont feel like explaining why)

anyway my tutor hasnt tought me **** i actually failed a test because of her, she was trying to be nice and gave me some answers, and they were wrong, i would have gotten them right if i had kept the answer i wrote down!!!
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Dude Im a year younger than you, just finished 10th, and I cant believe that you cant do this on your own..... are you in bobo english?
EDIT: Oh lol I just read this
Ice-man said:
but can anyone help me out, how come you all can fix my posts but you can fix my final.
i need to pass, they pulled me out of classes and sent me on home bound (dont feel like explaining why)
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My guess is you were rollin a Joint in class, wait till you get home to do that **** everybody else :o
That or they found out that stupidity is contagious and they decided to quarantine you....
 
Who here wants to mow my lawn? Huh?

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Ice-man said:
or the most illeterate, not lazy, i cant do it, if i could i wouldnt ask for the help. i need this. i suck at grammar and punctuation.

il sacrafice my soul for who can ever get this done for me.
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Dude, if you're illiterate, then you're still lazy.
If you continue to ask other people to do your spelling/grammar work, then you'll continue to sound stupid to people even though you're not.
You have to learn how to express yourself in your own freaking language.
It's pathetic. :(
 
Acording to the critick Joeseph Conrad, "Teh beliefff in a supranatural source of evil is not nessassary;

men alone are quiet capable of every wikedness". In Lord of the Flies by William Golding, this is found to be evidant.


In this book, it shows that there is no supernatural forces on the ailand. Also, their is no evil beast or anythink

close to it. There is only evil in the minds of some of the homies who were isolated on the island. After the boys had buttsecks and

realised there are no adults on the island with them to tell them what to do, Some felt no need to act like

civilized humans, Jack as leader turned to savegry to have some phallic fun with the unwilling boys as well as some of the boys who follwed.

However, all this fun lead them to do evil things. They saw it as oppurtunity to get away with what ever they

wanted to do, because there are no adults there to repremand them.


I agree with Joseph Conrad, man could have just as much evil as any supranatural being, although it would

seem in realty there are no supernatural beings or supernatural sources, only evil in the minds and hearts of

young boys. The auther of the book used alot of literary elemants to symbolize and foreshadow the evil that existed on

the iland and in the minds of the boys, and a few examples could be read as followed.


William Golding used alot of literary techniques such as metaphores, foreshadowing, and symbolism threw out

the course of the book, he used it as a way for the readers to figure out what was going on, without direktly

teeling them, He used it as somewhat of a way to intise the readers to keep reeding.


A good literary elemant that golden showers uses, is the technique of foreshadowing, a good example would be

the killing of the mother pig in chapeter 8.

When Jack and his followers killed the mother pig it shows there great lack of foreskin, as by killing the mother

pig they were also loosing all the other piglets who would've been a future source of food. The events with

Simon are also some of the most important in the book. Simon's conversation with the head of the mother pig

is basically the theme of the novel, and is partly his imagination, and partly some kind of "massage" from the

unknown as it would seem, but its really his mind playing ****e-like tricks on him. The Lord of the Files basically

confirms to Simon that the Beast really is "inside" everyone, but says that everyone would rather have fun than

worry about anything else. The threat of being killed foreshadows the end of Simon's own life. Another example would be The imaginary beast that scares all the boys.

The kids are afraid of the beast, but only Simon reaches the realization that they're fear of michael jackson exists within each of the kids.


Another example of goleden's techniques is symbolism he seems to use alot of it thruout the book, a good

example would be the symbolism of the fire that the boys start, there is also a bit of foreshadowing with it as

well, the boys started the fire to attract adults to it so they can be molested, and the fire seems to devide

some of the boys apart later on in the book. Ralph wants the boys to be more organized and take shifts with keeping the fire raging,

but some of the other boys just want to be lazy, play and hunt with Jack. Also Jack seems to be the source of some of the evil in the boys.


And yet another example of symbolism would be the war paint. It symbolized the rejection of society.

In a way, when they put on the war paint, they hid themselves of their true selves just to act and play, but it turnes

out to be so much more it revealed their inner selves which was savage. They didnt have rules; they didnt have

adults to keep them in line with a firm back-hand to the backside; they had boyish playful and brutal instict.



In conclooshun , According to the critic Joeseph Conrad, "The belied in a supernatural saurce of evil is not nessassary;

men alone are quite capable of every wikidness"; found to be evidant in Lord of the flies by golding.

So judging by the above literary elemants, and quotes, it would seem that Joseph is correct in his statmeant that evil exists

within some people, and not just a supernatural farce. In this book, Jack would be the source of the evil things the boys did, they killed alot of inocent animals to the dismay of PETA

and they eventually killed Piggy and Simon. This also shows how Golding used the characters to represent "the belif that men are quite capable

of every wickedness" (Joesph Conrad)




Skylar Hamilton is quoted saying "Golding himself has said the cause is nothing more than the inherent evil of

the Chinese; no matter how well-intentioned he is, and no matter how reasonable a government he erects (lol...erect), man will

never be able to permanently contain the beast within the pants" ("What makes things break up like they do?" Alternative

Explanations For the Societal Breakdown, William Golding's Lord of the Flies © Copyright 1999, Skylar

Hamilton Burris)


Bernard F. ***** also agrees that the "societal breakdown is caused by the suppression of the Dionysian", or

"brute" side of man. Dick agrees with Golding that "evil is indigenous to the species"

(Dick, Bernard F. William Golding: Revised Edition. Boston: Twayne Publishers, 1987.)





Dude, submit this. :up:
 
Ice-man said:
anyone smart want to skim threw this, and revise it, spelling, grammar, and proper punctuation?

its due today, and my techer wants me t make two copys one normal one with no revision and one revised, problem is today is our last session, and she wont be able to revise it and give it back for me to reprint and hand in, i need some help like asap.

also for any of you english or ela lovers add some **** in here that could garantee me like a b



According to the critic Joeseph Conrad, "The belieff in a supernatural source of evil is not nessassary;

men alone are quite capable of every wickedness". In Lord of the Flies by William Golding, this is found to be evident.


In this book, it shows that there is no supernatural forces on the island. Also, there is no evil beast or anything

close to it. There is only evil in the minds of some of the boys who were isolated on the island. After the boys

realised there are no adults on the island with them to tell them what to do, Some felt no need to act like

civilized humans, Jack as leader turned to savegry to have some fun as well as some of the boys who follwed.

However, all this fun lead them to do evil things. They saw it as oppurtunity to get away with what ever they

wanted to do, because there are no adults there to repremand them.


I agree with Joseph Conrad, man could have just as much evil as any supernatural being, although it would

seem in reality there are no supernatural beings or supernatural sources, only evil in the minds and hearts of

man. The auther of the book used alot of literary elemants to symbolize and foreshadow the evil that existed on

the island and in the minds of the boys, and a few examples could be read as followed.


William Golding used alot of literary techniques such as metaphores, foreshadowing, and symbolism threwout

the course of the book, he used it as a way for the readers to figure out what was going on, without directly

telling them, He used it as somewhat of a way to intise the readers to keep reading.


A good literary elemant that golden uses, is the technique of foreshadowing, a good example would be

the killing of the mother pig in chapeter 8.

When Jack and his followers killed the mother pig it shows there great lack of foresight, as by killing the mother

pig they were also losing all the other piglets who would've been a future source of food. The events with

Simon are also some of the most important in the book. Simon's conversation with the head of the mother pig

is basically the theme of the novel, and is partly his imagination, and partly some kind of "message" from the

unknown as it would seem, but its really his mind playing tricks on him. The Lord of the Flies basically

confirms to Simon that the Beast really is "inside" everyone, but says that everyone would rather have fun than

worry about anything else. The threat of being killed foreshadows the end of Simon's own life. Another example would be The imaginary beast that scares all the boys.

The kids are afraid of the beast, but only Simon reaches the realization that they fear of the beast exists within each of the kids.


Another example of goleden's techniques is symbolism he seems to use alot of it thruout the book, a good

example would be the symbolism of the fire that the boys start, there is also a bit of foreshadowing with it as

well, the boys started the fire to attract adults to it so they can be rescued, and the fire seems to devide

some of the boys apart later on in the book. Ralph wants the boys to be more organized and take shifts with keeping the fire going,

but some of the other boys just want to be lazy, play and hunt with Jack. Also Jack seems to be the source of some of the evil in the boys.


And yet another example of symbolism would be the war paint. It symbolized the rejection of society.

In a way, when they put on the war paint, they hid themselves of their true selves just to act and play, but it turnes

out to be so much more it revealed their inner selves which was savage. They didnt have rules; they didnt have

adults to keep them in line; they had boyish playful and brutal instict.



In conclusion , According to the critic Joeseph Conrad, "The belied in a supernatural saurce of evil is not nessassary;

men alone are quite capable of every wickedness"; found to be evidant in Lord of the flies by golding.

So judging by the above literary elements, and quotes, it would seem that Joseph is correct in his statmeant that evil exists

within some people, and not just a supernatural force. In this book, Jack would be the source of the evil things the boys did, they killed alot of inocent animals

and they eventually killed Piggy and Simon. This also shows how Golding used the characters to represent "the belif that men are quite capable

of every wickedness" (Joesph Conrad)




Skylar Hamilton is quoted saying "Golding himself has said the cause is nothing more than the inherent evil of

man; no matter how well-intentioned he is, and no matter how reasonable a government he erects, man will

never be able to permanently contain the beast within" ("What makes things break up like they do?" Alternative

Explanations For the Societal Breakdown, William Golding's Lord of the Flies © Copyright 1999, Skylar

Hamilton Burris)


Bernard F. ***** also agrees that the "societal breakdown is caused by the suppression of the Dionysian", or

"brute" side of man. Dick agrees with Golding that "evil is indigenous to the species"

(Dick, Bernard F. William Golding: Revised Edition. Boston: Twayne Publishers, 1987.)
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Wow after actually reading this thing.... you should just go and re-write it man. I actually had to write a simmilar essay on Lord of the Flies but we actually had to make a good compairison relating to the inherent evil in all of mankind. I drew some good similarities between the events of the book to those of the Holocaust and other atrocities commited by the Nazis, and I ended up getting a 100%, grade being based content, grammar, MLA formatting, etc.
 
BRUTAL said:
Like a certain bunny in a certain avatar?
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See what you want to see.
 
Ice-man said:
anyone smart want to skim threw this, and revise it, spelling, grammar, and proper punctuation?

its due today, and my techer wants me t make two copys one normal one with no revision and one revised, problem is today is our last session, and she wont be able to revise it and give it back for me to reprint and hand in, i need some help like asap.

also for any of you english or ela lovers add some **** in here that could garantee me like a b



According to the critic Joeseph Conrad, "The belieff in a supernatural source of evil is not nessassary;

men alone are quite capable of every wickedness". In Lord of the Flies by William Golding, this is found to be evident.


In this book, it shows that there is no supernatural forces on the island. Also, there is no evil beast or anything

close to it. There is only evil in the minds of some of the boys who were isolated on the island. After the boys

realised there are no adults on the island with them to tell them what to do, Some felt no need to act like

civilized humans, Jack as leader turned to savegry to have some fun as well as some of the boys who follwed.

However, all this fun lead them to do evil things. They saw it as oppurtunity to get away with what ever they

wanted to do, because there are no adults there to repremand them.


I agree with Joseph Conrad, man could have just as much evil as any supernatural being, although it would

seem in reality there are no supernatural beings or supernatural sources, only evil in the minds and hearts of

man. The auther of the book used alot of literary elemants to symbolize and foreshadow the evil that existed on

the island and in the minds of the boys, and a few examples could be read as followed.


William Golding used alot of literary techniques such as metaphores, foreshadowing, and symbolism threwout

the course of the book, he used it as a way for the readers to figure out what was going on, without directly

telling them, He used it as somewhat of a way to intise the readers to keep reading.


A good literary elemant that golden uses, is the technique of foreshadowing, a good example would be

the killing of the mother pig in chapeter 8.

When Jack and his followers killed the mother pig it shows there great lack of foresight, as by killing the mother

pig they were also losing all the other piglets who would've been a future source of food. The events with

Simon are also some of the most important in the book. Simon's conversation with the head of the mother pig

is basically the theme of the novel, and is partly his imagination, and partly some kind of "message" from the

unknown as it would seem, but its really his mind playing tricks on him. The Lord of the Flies basically

confirms to Simon that the Beast really is "inside" everyone, but says that everyone would rather have fun than

worry about anything else. The threat of being killed foreshadows the end of Simon's own life. Another example would be The imaginary beast that scares all the boys.

The kids are afraid of the beast, but only Simon reaches the realization that they fear of the beast exists within each of the kids.


Another example of goleden's techniques is symbolism he seems to use alot of it thruout the book, a good

example would be the symbolism of the fire that the boys start, there is also a bit of foreshadowing with it as

well, the boys started the fire to attract adults to it so they can be rescued, and the fire seems to devide

some of the boys apart later on in the book. Ralph wants the boys to be more organized and take shifts with keeping the fire going,

but some of the other boys just want to be lazy, play and hunt with Jack. Also Jack seems to be the source of some of the evil in the boys.


And yet another example of symbolism would be the war paint. It symbolized the rejection of society.

In a way, when they put on the war paint, they hid themselves of their true selves just to act and play, but it turnes

out to be so much more it revealed their inner selves which was savage. They didnt have rules; they didnt have

adults to keep them in line; they had boyish playful and brutal instict.



In conclusion , According to the critic Joeseph Conrad, "The belied in a supernatural saurce of evil is not nessassary;

men alone are quite capable of every wickedness"; found to be evidant in Lord of the flies by golding.

So judging by the above literary elements, and quotes, it would seem that Joseph is correct in his statmeant that evil exists

within some people, and not just a supernatural force. In this book, Jack would be the source of the evil things the boys did, they killed alot of inocent animals

and they eventually killed Piggy and Simon. This also shows how Golding used the characters to represent "the belif that men are quite capable

of every wickedness" (Joesph Conrad)




Skylar Hamilton is quoted saying "Golding himself has said the cause is nothing more than the inherent evil of

man; no matter how well-intentioned he is, and no matter how reasonable a government he erects, man will

never be able to permanently contain the beast within" ("What makes things break up like they do?" Alternative

Explanations For the Societal Breakdown, William Golding's Lord of the Flies © Copyright 1999, Skylar

Hamilton Burris)


Bernard F. ***** also agrees that the "societal breakdown is caused by the suppression of the Dionysian", or

"brute" side of man. Dick agrees with Golding that "evil is indigenous to the species"

(Dick, Bernard F. William Golding: Revised Edition. Boston: Twayne Publishers, 1987.)
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Ice-man,

I read it and its purfect. Know need to change anythig


Raybia
 
16 = Grade 10 = you should be able to spell most things by now...

Get yourself a TUTOR immediately.
 
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