Spider-Man 4 Screenplay

[batman11]

I definitly do need work. It is my first screenplay. So thanks for the feed. its only going to make me better.

Do you think I have potential though? Like do I have a good story, it's just the overall delivery on it?
Thanks again bro

Yeah, I think you have some potential with the story there. However, it just feels like it doesn't mesh with the rest of the Spider-Man series. I could see this being a Spidey movie, but not Spider-Man 4. Sort of like a sequel that draws lightly on the past movies, but is mainly a movie in it's own world. But as you said, I think the delivery may be the main issue. Keep it up though.

 

[MrShifty]

Yeah, I think you have some potential with the story there. However, it just feels like it doesn't mesh with the rest of the Spider-Man series. I could see this being a Spidey movie, but not Spider-Man 4. Sort of like a sequel that draws lightly on the past movies, but is mainly a movie in it's own world. But as you said, I think the delivery may be the main issue. Keep it up though.

See that's what I thought during the writing that it really wouldn't fit into the Spider-Man universe. As I write this I see an animated film or a 90s Action Flick.
This is just all in fun though, that's how I take this screenplay.

 

[red hood 4]

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