Still, it's hardly awful.
I think that 'hardly awful' is selling things a little short.
If nothing else these sides tell us a bit more about how
big TDK is going to be. From the boats, mall, and National Guard info it's safe to say that there's going to be several large-scale action sequences. (The bank robbery might fit into this category, too).
Also, I love the fact that we're seeing so many players involved in the plot: Batman, Gordon, Joker, Dent, Maroni, Maroni's boss/underling, all these other GCPD members, possibly Scarecrow(?), amateur vigilantes, henchmen...there's
lot of stuff going on here.
While I do agree with you that some of the dialogue sounds a little cheesy, I think that dwelling on that is being overly negative. These sides are very encouraging, and I think anybody who is calling them awful is either expecting too much or is just being an ass.
One final thought that I had: I wonder if the role of 'defense attorney' is Dawes. It could be a case where she left the DA's office to become a public defender (and thus is still a true believer/good soul type). It would seem redundant to have her and Dent both prosecuting, and using her as a PD would allow both of them to be in court at the same time, too.