Miranda Fox
Haters to the Left.
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Are fake ones okay, Kel? 


I already explained my take on the exceprts themselves. You tend to write a lot about other people´s writing like you know so much about it, it makes it only natural that your own writing is mentioned.
So, when I exposed the success I achieved as a writer that was "self-*****iating", when you do it´s not?

Like I said, I didn´t say anything to make myself look anything, I was just explaining where I stand on writing, how far I have gone with it and where my take on judging writing comes from.
You don´t have to care about brevity, but getting to the point is a good quality in any writer or debater.
But you didn´t mention the positives that you did later. When you criticized, you got into detail. Then to say something good, you made a vague and generic comment.
For someone who doesn´t worry if people agree or care about what you say, you certainly write like you make a huge deal out of it. If I criticize you a lot, it´s exactly because you constantly ger overly argumentative, defensive and even aggressive, I was actually to some extent teasing you a bit when I brought up your writing, and you as always fall for it.
Is there any way I could get them from you? I didn't get to see them at all...imageshack pulled them.
Are fake ones okay, Kel?![]()
Is there any way I could get them from you? I didn't get to see them at all...

Why would that be natural? That's a tactic people who can't come up with arguments on their own merit utilize. "I can't dispell his notions with logic, so I will either resort to rudeness, or actually attempt to undercut his credibility". Are you incapable of seperating criticism of a medium from someone's personal work?
What successes of mine are we referring to? I write fanfictions. For fun. Fanfictions that most people who read them seem to like. If me saying that is self-******iating, then so be it. I won't deny it. I've gotten good responses to my fan fictions. I won't bother to provide the numbers, though.
You know what would have explained that better? You actually being able to DISCUSS a piece of writing without just saying "These are my successes in the field". So...once again. Can you discuss a piece of writing or not?
Fair enough. I find your lack of ability or desire to discuss a piece of writing without making this a personal competition to be the key issue here.
There aren't that many positives. I mentioned the one I really liked specifically in my first post. I don't consider writing being average a "positive" or a "negative".
I write how I speak, and how I am. With intensity. You don't want me to get defensive? Don't bait me. Don't provoke me. I'm not stupid. I know when you are teasing me for the hell of it. You think my responses aren't based in that knowledge? Hence my attempt to get you to provide a single example showing you have read an ounce of what I've written.
If you disagree with me, then you disagree with me. If you don't like me and my methods, then you don't like me and my methods. But if you act like a child because of it, or you present an immature argument, then you're going to be called on it.
wow, does anyone even know what this argument is about anymore? guard? ultimatefan?
t:The menstruation cycle of the Pathagonian crimsom butterfly...t:
I thought it was about African and European swallows...

I don't believe I said that, or ever implied it. I'm quite pleased to see that element show up here. It's an element I wish had been present in BATMAN BEGINS. My sarcastic statement was meant as a barb at the lack of honor written into Falcone's character and mob element in BEGINS.
Because it's rambling, speechified, the wording is lousy, and it just feels awkward. And some of it just doesn't make logical sense.
There are better ways for a mobster to express displeasure over a new breed of criminal. And certainly better methods than insulting a man who may well kill you by calling him a freak. It just rings false to me.
Wait Miranda.....are u saying that girls from Africa and Europe swallow........
*books a one way ticket to Europe*
PS: Before someone jumps all over me, I do know what a swallow is, I'm just attempting to be funny.
PPS: But I still do like girls that swallow.
PPPS: I apolojize for any information u didn't need to hear.
PPPPS: BatmanEVH u might have a hard time finding them now, as i know myself and a few others won't even PM them out anymore.

I thought it was about African and European swallows...
t:For those who missed the pages.

Where was Falcone or any of his outfit shown not to have honor? I know he wasn't specifically demonstrated to have it, really, but I don't recall anything that said he didn't? He seemed like basically any mob boss, from what I could tell.
Where does it not make logical sense?
Honestly, it may ring false to you, but when I read it I could hear it being delivered with conviction and it sounded fine. You seem to think it has to be delivered like a speech. I don't see it that way.
Look. First he thinks he's dealing with a generic hoodlum... he asks him if he has any idea whose money he's stealing. It's a threat. When the robber isn't impressed by it, the manager's first reaction is to call him an idiot. Then he instead tries to reason with him - what makes you think the guy who hired you isn't gonna kill you, too? This guy's been around the racket, he knows how it works.
But the thug isn't impressed, whips off his mask. Now the banker is scared, he knows he's dealing with... something much more sinister than he first thought. That changes things. He's scared at first. After the initial "what are you" he then gathers his nerve and berates the guy. He knows he's dead, but he's just... look, as a banker for Maroni, he's got protection. This isn't supposed to be happening. All that talk about honor and respect, that's what that's about - this isn't supposed to be happening to him. He's got protection, you don't mess with Mr. Maroni's bank. But he's already tried that route and Joker wasn't impressed. So all he's got is a handful of honor and respect that amounts to a cup of piss as far as the man with the gun is concerned. "What do you believe in?" It has to be a plea. Maybe an angry plea, but a plea.
Seriously. In the hands of even an essentially competent actor, these lines are fine. Especially with a director who knows what he wants out of it.
You're looking at scenes out of context and accusing the writers of incompetence. Trust me, Guard, I've seen incompetence. It doesn't look like this.