GarysMyOldman
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Yeah so this whole movie has been bothering me to no end and I came up with what I think is a good fix for some parts of the movie.
For the scene where Rey is being intimidated by Snoke and the whole fight breaks out this is what I would i done and it would of made SO much more sense & tied things together perfectly.
Snoke should of had Rey in this force grip pretty much killing her slowly since he's come to the realization that she won't turn & just before he crushes her Kylo Ren yells out, "Stop! She's my family!" and the grip is released. Rey ends up being Ben Solos sister just like the skywalker brother/sister Leia had 2 children and separated them as they did in the 3rd/4th film.
Ren convinces Snoke he can turn her, she plays along, Ren and Rey disappear and he tries to get her to turn on Snoke w/ him in exchange for turning & she agrees. Just then Snoke enters the room and draws a lightsaber, Ren & Snoke fight until Ren eventually chopped his arm off, Rey force grabs Snokes lightsaber and chops his head off. A scene that calls back to limb-losing characters & I would place this in a similar setting to the Palapatine/Emperor reveal in Episode 3.
They still get to a similar place with now Ren expecting Rey to join the First Order but she expects him to be Jedi Ben Solo and they have their force fight and separate there like in the film.
Next the a Luke Skywalker situation is disrespectful in Ep. 8, so I will also rewrite that.
We meet Luke on the island, Rey hands him the lightsaber. Luke puts the saber on his belt after a moment with it, and tells Rey he knows who she is, he sees her in the force. They go straight to the falcon, Han's dead speech, Falcon needs fixing & Rey needs training, the secret island tribe is strong with the force, there is a dark side force ghost on the island as well. While training Luke, Rey & Chewie go on a mission to meet someone similar to the Canto Bright mission but faster, & also alerting the First Order. Ren arrives to meet them on the island, along with the Knights of Ren the Jedi are all but defeated & Rey is abducted.
Now we're at a place where many questions have been answered from the previous EPISODE & elements of TLJ are still used bc its not ALL bad, its a well made movie but the story is just egregious.
Crystal foxes gotta go, Porgs are fine esp the Chewie BBQ scene, Luke would join the resistance on Crait in real life, take down the AT-ATs and most of the First Order to his own surprise with just the force & laser sword. Ren decends to fight Skywalker, Luke defeats Ren infront of the First Order & Rey. Ren force pulls Reys new lightsaber she receives earlier thats Obi Wan's lightsaber Luke gave to her and Ren slays Luke through the chest like he did his father. Rey fights Ren, she gets him to say his name is Ben Solo & the force again breaks them apart some how.
These little changes would make so much of a difference.
For the scene where Rey is being intimidated by Snoke and the whole fight breaks out this is what I would i done and it would of made SO much more sense & tied things together perfectly.
Snoke should of had Rey in this force grip pretty much killing her slowly since he's come to the realization that she won't turn & just before he crushes her Kylo Ren yells out, "Stop! She's my family!" and the grip is released. Rey ends up being Ben Solos sister just like the skywalker brother/sister Leia had 2 children and separated them as they did in the 3rd/4th film.
Ren convinces Snoke he can turn her, she plays along, Ren and Rey disappear and he tries to get her to turn on Snoke w/ him in exchange for turning & she agrees. Just then Snoke enters the room and draws a lightsaber, Ren & Snoke fight until Ren eventually chopped his arm off, Rey force grabs Snokes lightsaber and chops his head off. A scene that calls back to limb-losing characters & I would place this in a similar setting to the Palapatine/Emperor reveal in Episode 3.
They still get to a similar place with now Ren expecting Rey to join the First Order but she expects him to be Jedi Ben Solo and they have their force fight and separate there like in the film.
Next the a Luke Skywalker situation is disrespectful in Ep. 8, so I will also rewrite that.
We meet Luke on the island, Rey hands him the lightsaber. Luke puts the saber on his belt after a moment with it, and tells Rey he knows who she is, he sees her in the force. They go straight to the falcon, Han's dead speech, Falcon needs fixing & Rey needs training, the secret island tribe is strong with the force, there is a dark side force ghost on the island as well. While training Luke, Rey & Chewie go on a mission to meet someone similar to the Canto Bright mission but faster, & also alerting the First Order. Ren arrives to meet them on the island, along with the Knights of Ren the Jedi are all but defeated & Rey is abducted.
Now we're at a place where many questions have been answered from the previous EPISODE & elements of TLJ are still used bc its not ALL bad, its a well made movie but the story is just egregious.
Crystal foxes gotta go, Porgs are fine esp the Chewie BBQ scene, Luke would join the resistance on Crait in real life, take down the AT-ATs and most of the First Order to his own surprise with just the force & laser sword. Ren decends to fight Skywalker, Luke defeats Ren infront of the First Order & Rey. Ren force pulls Reys new lightsaber she receives earlier thats Obi Wan's lightsaber Luke gave to her and Ren slays Luke through the chest like he did his father. Rey fights Ren, she gets him to say his name is Ben Solo & the force again breaks them apart some how.
These little changes would make so much of a difference.