Sequels The Official "How YOU would do Spider-Man 4" thread

[HughJackFan420]

no.....

Carnage will live right lol, wow im just thinking its early if you are killing Carnage now.​

well he's done for Spiderman 4 for now...i of course mentioned the symbiote crawling back on him after he put the fire out on him for a reason. i also used the sewer collapsing on him to kind of show that there's no telling if he died or not. but i'm gonna leave it at that. my main focus is Spiderman and Venom and setting up Spiderman 4 for 2 more sequels if Marvel is truly going with 6 Spiderman movies.

 

[Spider-Kid]

Best Script Ever!

 

[al_ien5000]

I posted this in another topic and I do not know if this board has rules about copying and pasting other posts ( still kind of new here) but I thought I would post it here so others can tell me what they think of my plot ideas.It is more or less like the first post, but with more stuff. I think with the way the third one ended, things should be a little rocky between MJ and Peter, with them kind of just being friends and Peter feeling bad about the way things happend. In the last three movies there was always something recurring through out, i.e. the death of Uncle Ben and the death of Norman Osbourn. Also, in the last three, there was a recurring foe throughout the series, Goblin/Norman. So with that, they should introduce someone, I am kind of leaning towards The Kingpin. Also, I completely agree with the villain suggestions in The Lizard and Kraven. The idea of Kraven wanting to hunt Lizard actually makes a lot of sense on film in a way to introduce him. I also noticed that with the toy line for Spider-Man 3, they released figures of those two, so that probably means they are thinking of it. I also think that Jameson should have a lot more involvement with maybe the fact that since spider-man was kind of bad in the last movie, he just goes more off of that, maybe making a deal with the kingpin? Instead of the city following JJJ though, the city still likes and needs him, and that makes JJJ and Kingpin even more desperate to get rid of, expose, or whatever to Spidey. I also read a lot of people saying Conners should use the symbiote for his experiment to regrow his arm. Now, I know nothing like that happend in the comic book, but if they were to go that route, and it were capable of regeneration, wouldn't that be a great way to have brock return? Have him just regenerate, in a visual similar to, I don't know, maybe the way the leech monster first did in resident evil 0? I mean, I am just throwing ideas around, but that would logically make sense to me. I also think maybe for the sake of the story, perhaps another tragedy? Not MJ, but perhaps Gwen or George. Another key would be Aunt May perhaps finding out or hinting even more towards the fact that she knows Peter's secret. Maybe even throw The Black Cat in for a replacement for Harry as new friend, or have him like flashbacks or appirations like the Uncle Ben ones. Another idea would be, as stated before, Aunt May finding out, but, perhaps maybe having her pass away, peacefully though. I think that would be something the series could end on. Also, like I said, if Eddie does come back, have it kind of like the Ultimate Spider-Man video game, where Peter is completely shocked at his return and maybe he could just be a complete monster. I also really like the idea of having a petty villain, like Shocker or Rhino, at the start of the movie, just to start the film on a high note. I also think it is time for a wedding! Well, that is all I have. Thanks for reading my ideas.

 

[*ANTHONY*]

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[ThatDamnNinja]

Okay, I know people don't like it when people start new threads just to put in their own plot ideas, but I looked, and there's really no place I could reasonably put these. Also, don't just look at this as a thread where I promote myself; by all accounts, I'd like to hear other people's thoughts on what the stories for the fifth and sixth movies should be.

Note: This is assuming Spider-Man 4 includes Kraven and Lizard, but does not include Black Cat. Also, these ideas are kind of half-baked. Feedback (positive or negative) appreciated.

Spider-Man 5 could have Mysterio, Scorpion, and Black Cat... with the Daily Bugle creating Scorpion as an attempt at superhero to defeat the villain Spider-Man, and he is initially marketed as such, and a good portion of the public buys into it (before he goes completely nuts), Mysterio would obviously be up to his old Mysterio-stuff, and Black Cat would provide a sort of foil to Spider-Man, and additional internal emotional conflict within Peter and the audience, and uncertainty as to whether she is an enemy or an ally... the theme being explored, of course, is that of truth and illusion.

Spider-Man 6 could have the Vulture and Electro... Electro being an insecure and emotionally unstable man who had a terrible childhood and never really had love, who, upon getting his powers, is manipulated in the direction of evil by Adrian Toomes (for his own personal benefit); as sort of a dark mentor, an evil Uncle Ben to Electro's Peter. We realize that so much of what culminated in Electro becoming a dangerous enemy is the lack of love and guidance from someone like Uncle Ben or Aunt May in his life, and the theme that could be explored is how love and the people around us can impact and shape our lives, and Peter is forced to realize that he is not so different from Maxwell Dillion, who, like himself, was pretty much an ordinary person who has strange powers, and all the baggage that comes with them, thrust upon him without warning or preparation, and, without guidance, love, and support from people like Uncle Ben, Aunt May, Mary Jane and others, he very easily could have gone in the same direction as Electro: the direction of using his powers for destruction. Every man is responsible for his own actions, but we must have the humility to recognize where others have carried us and pushed us in the direction of what's right.

And yes, I know I took that straight from where I posted it in another thread, but, hey.

 

[Chris B]

I've been thinking along the same lines for S-M5. Though I would omit the Black Cat. And I think that you have an interesting idea for S-M6 which I could see working. I also wouldn't mind using the Sinister Six as an alternate route.

 

[ThatDamnNinja]

I've been thinking along the same lines for S-M5. Though I would omit the Black Cat. And I think that you have an interesting idea for S-M6 which I could see working. I also wouldn't mind using the Sinister Six as an alternate route.

Black Cat is definately the most expendable part of that plot... she's in there semi-arbitrarily, because I figured that's where she would fit in best with the theme if she WAS going to be put in the series, but she might be one character too many.

Sinister Six is definately an interesting option... at this point, I think 6 should either be Sinister Six (but that is reeeeallly risky) or Electro/Vulture (or Electro/Hobgoblin, but I think people would rather see Vulture).

 

[Chris B]

Sinister Six is definately an interesting option... at this point, I think 6 should either be Sinister Six (but that is reeeeallly risky) or Electro/Vulture (or Electro/Hobgoblin, but I think people would rather see Vulture).

I agree.

 

[Spider-Fan]

Black Cat is definately the most expendable part of that plot... she's in there semi-arbitrarily, because I figured that's where she would fit in best with the theme if she WAS going to be put in the series, but she might be one character too many.

Sinister Six is definately an interesting option... at this point, I think 6 should either be Sinister Six (but that is reeeeallly risky) or Electro/Vulture (or Electro/Hobgoblin, but I think people would rather see Vulture).

I WOULD RATHER SEE HOBGOBLIN!!!

He is a great villain. I don't care if we have had 2 goblins, Hobgoblin is one of Spidey's best villains and deserves to be used at some point.

 

[ThatDamnNinja]

I picture a climax where Electro has a nervous breakdown and turns on Vulture, either killing him or otherwise putting him out of comission, because of some percieved betrayal on Toomes part or simply because Electro is sick of being someone else's pawn, absorbs a huge amount of electricity and threatens to fry an entire crowd of onlookers out of an attempt to prove himself (y'know, the whole inferiority complex business). Spider-Man tries to save both him and the crowd, and tries to warn him about what he's doing... and it starts to work for a minute, but then he refuses to accept any help, and he either ends up killing himself inadvertently, or Spider-Man saves him, at which point he's so humiliated he kills himself.

And this whole thing would take place in the rain.

 

[FaT_tONle]

Okay, I know people don't like it when people start new threads just to put in their own plot ideas, but I looked, and there's really no place I could reasonably put these. Also, don't just look at this as a thread where I promote myself; by all accounts, I'd like to hear other people's thoughts on what the stories for the fifth and sixth movies should be.

Note: This is assuming Spider-Man 4 includes Kraven and Lizard, but does not include Black Cat. Also, these ideas are kind of half-baked. Feedback (positive or negative) appreciated.

Spider-Man 5 could have Mysterio, Scorpion, and Black Cat... with the Daily Bugle creating Scorpion as an attempt at superhero to defeat the villain Spider-Man, and he is initially marketed as such, and a good portion of the public buys into it (before he goes completely nuts), Mysterio would obviously be up to his old Mysterio-stuff, and Black Cat would provide a sort of foil to Spider-Man, and additional internal emotional conflict within Peter and the audience, and uncertainty as to whether she is an enemy or an ally... the theme being explored, of course, is that of truth and illusion.

Spider-Man 6 could have the Vulture and Electro... Electro being an insecure and emotionally unstable man who had a terrible childhood and never really had love, who, upon getting his powers, is manipulated in the direction of evil by Adrian Toomes (for his own personal benefit); as sort of a dark mentor, an evil Uncle Ben to Electro's Peter. We realize that so much of what culminated in Electro becoming a dangerous enemy is the lack of love and guidance from someone like Uncle Ben or Aunt May in his life, and the theme that could be explored is how love and the people around us can impact and shape our lives, and Peter is forced to realize that he is not so different from Maxwell Dillion, who, like himself, was pretty much an ordinary person who has strange powers, and all the baggage that comes with them, thrust upon him without warning or preparation, and, without guidance, love, and support from people like Uncle Ben, Aunt May, Mary Jane and others, he very easily could have gone in the same direction as Electro: the direction of using his powers for destruction. Every man is responsible for his own actions, but we must have the humility to recognize where others have carried us and pushed us in the direction of what's right.

And yes, I know I took that straight from where I posted it in another thread, but, hey.

I was gonna reply in the other thread about your ideas... but we really didn't need another thread... heck Lizard Kraven isn't even close to being a lock for SM4... but anyway... good ideas... I hope for the same... Vulture/Electro can hold their own in SM6... I don't think we need the Hopgoblin for SM6... ofcourse there is always a Sinister Six but if not I'd be perfectly fine with this outline... also Toomes could be a good behind the scenes villain like Dafoe... not the type of end guy in the video game type bad guy... but if you build it up and pair him with Electro... that could be very potent... we can really do without Hopgoblin just for the redundant aspect (We agree to disagree here SPiderfan930)... I know the hype for SM4 has really died down since everyone wants pretty much different variations of the same story and we want to look ahead... but lets worry about getting Lizard/Kraven in this thing before looking too far ahead... not there is anything wrong with it... but you know what I mean.

 

[Spider-Fan]

I picture a climax where Electro has a nervous breakdown and turns on Vulture, either killing him or otherwise putting him out of comission, because of some percieved betrayal on Toomes part or simply because Electro is sick of being someone else's pawn, absorbs a huge amount of electricity and threatens to fry an entire crowd of onlookers out of an attempt to prove himself (y'know, the whole inferiority complex business). Spider-Man tries to save both him and the crowd, and tries to warn him about what he's doing... and it starts to work for a minute, but then he refuses to accept any help, and he either ends up killing himself inadvertently, or Spider-Man saves him, at which point he's so humiliated he kills himself.

And this whole thing would take place in the rain.

Funny thing is, a couple of days ago I was trying to think of ways Raimi could make someone like Electro sympathetic and make sense for him (because I know that is what Raimi would end up doing), and I ended up coming up with a storyline for him.

 

[ThatDamnNinja]

Funny thing is, a couple of days ago I was trying to think of ways Raimi could make someone like Electro sympathetic and make sense for him (because I know that is what Raimi would end up doing), and I ended up coming up with a storyline for him.

Do tell.

 

[Spider-Fan]

Do tell.

It would kind of have to do with the "don't want to be pushed around" thing. In my idea, Dillon is a man struggling to get by with a wife who is dying and is getting a transplant that would cure her. At the last second, a rich guy takes her spot, and she is bumped off the list. She dies. Then Max ends up getting his powers, and decides to strike at the rich (especially the man who killed his wife). He starts robbing a lot of banks, etc. Breaking the rules that keep people like him down. Eventually he encounters Spider-Man, says they are similar and they shoul ally. Spider-Man declines, and Electro decides he is just another bully pushing other people around. Peter learns what happend, and tries to reason with Max, but he is too far gone to be good again. I wouldn't kill him (so I could use him in the SS if they end up doing it).

This is the Raimi-fied Electro. Raimi would probably kill him, though.

 

[ThatDamnNinja]

It would kind of have to do with the "don't want to be pushed around" thing. In my idea, Dillon is a man struggling to get by with a wife who is dying and is getting a transplant that would cure her. At the last second, a rich guy takes her spot, and she is bumped off the list. She dies. Then Max ends up getting his powers, and decides to strike at the rich (especially the man who killed his wife). He starts robbing a lot of banks, etc. Breaking the rules that keep people like him down. Eventually he encounters Spider-Man, says they are similar and they shoul ally. Spider-Man declines, and Electro decides he is just another bully pushing other people around. Peter learns what happend, and tries to reason with Max, but he is too far gone to be good again. I wouldn't kill him (so I could use him in the SS if they end up doing it).

This is the Raimi-fied Electro. Raimi would probably kill him, though.

Hm... I sort of like that direction, I sort of don't. It's almost too Sandman-like, but I like the "not wanting to be pushed around" aspect. One of the things I didn't like about Sandman was that they made his story too black-and-white, almost. They prettty much made him a good guy. I want Electro not to be someone the audience hates, but not someone the audience is completely on the side of.

I definately think he should be someone who was bullied as a child, and abused, not necessarily physical, but definately verbally, by his parents, who essentially told him he'd never amount to anything... and now that he works on electric lines, he believes it and he's convinced himself that he is worthless. But when he gets powers... he's so overwhelmed, and he isn't quite sure what to do with them... but he gets guidance (the WRONG KIND OF GUIDANCE!) from the opprotunistic Adrian Toomes, who feels he could come in handy in his seedier business practices. Toomes more or less manipulates him by telling him that he can worth something for the first time in his life, and he can prove everyone wrong. He sort of becomes a father figure to Dillon, until he becomes saavy to the fact that he's being manipulated, and turns on him.

Where I don't exactly know what to do is how I could flesh out Vulture's story and motivations a little bit more, and give a plausible explanation for how, where and why he gets the Vulture suit.

Oh, and the plot I'm describing is under the assumption that there would be no Sinister Six. I think that, if there's any villain that should die (and I'm definately not in favor of ALL of them dying) it's Electro. The Vulture, however, should be left to rot in prison... unless Electro kills him. I think either one could work for different reasons.

But there should definately be comparisons between how Peter and Maxwell both had great powers thrust upon them, but Peter was able to make the right decisions due to guidance from those who loved him; an advantage Dillion didn't have. I mean, how close did he come (in Spider-Man 1 and 3) to going down the wrong path, but didn't, thanks to Aunt May, Uncle Ben, and MJ? They could definately exploit the events of the first and third movies in that regard.

 

[Spider-Fan]

Hm... I sort of like that direction, I sort of don't. It's almost too Sandman-like, but I like the "not wanting to be pushed around" aspect. One of the things I didn't like about Sandman was that they made his story too black-and-white, almost. They prettty much made him a good guy. I want Electro not to be someone the audience hates, but not someone the audience is completely on the side of.

I definately think he should be someone who was bullied as a child, and abused, not necessarily physical, but definately verbally, by his parents, who essentially told him he'd never amount to anything... and now that he works on electric lines, he believes it and he's convinced himself that he is worthless. But when he gets powers... he's so overwhelmed, and he isn't quite sure what to do with them... but he gets guidance (the WRONG KIND OF GUIDANCE!) from the opprotunistic Adrian Toomes, who feels he could come in handy in his seedier business practices. Toomes more or less manipulates him by telling him that he can worth something for the first time in his life, and he can prove everyone wrong. He sort of becomes a father figure to Dillon, until he becomes saavy to the fact that he's being manipulated, and turns on him.

Where I don't exactly know what to do is how I could flesh out Vulture's story and motivations a little bit more, and give a plausible explanation for how, where and why he gets the Vulture suit.

I agree with adding stuff like that to further the mentality of Max, but something has to push him over the edge. I don't think it mirrors Sandman (as he didn't lash out...he was protective) as much as it does Peter (how would Peter handle MJ's death). In fact, this kind of plotline might work well with the Lizard.

 

[Spider-ManHero12]

Originally Posted by ThatDamnNinja
Okay, I know people don't like it when people start new threads just to put in their own plot ideas, but I looked, and there's really no place I could reasonably put these. Also, don't just look at this as a thread where I promote myself; by all accounts, I'd like to hear other people's thoughts on what the stories for the fifth and sixth movies should be.

Note: This is assuming Spider-Man 4 includes Kraven and Lizard, but does not include Black Cat. Also, these ideas are kind of half-baked. Feedback (positive or negative) appreciated.

Spider-Man 5 could have Mysterio, Scorpion, and Black Cat... with the Daily Bugle creating Scorpion as an attempt at superhero to defeat the villain Spider-Man, and he is initially marketed as such, and a good portion of the public buys into it (before he goes completely nuts), Mysterio would obviously be up to his old Mysterio-stuff, and Black Cat would provide a sort of foil to Spider-Man, and additional internal emotional conflict within Peter and the audience, and uncertainty as to whether she is an enemy or an ally... the theme being explored, of course, is that of truth and illusion.

Spider-Man 6 could have the Vulture and Electro... Electro being an insecure and emotionally unstable man who had a terrible childhood and never really had love, who, upon getting his powers, is manipulated in the direction of evil by Adrian Toomes (for his own personal benefit); as sort of a dark mentor, an evil Uncle Ben to Electro's Peter. We realize that so much of what culminated in Electro becoming a dangerous enemy is the lack of love and guidance from someone like Uncle Ben or Aunt May in his life, and the theme that could be explored is how love and the people around us can impact and shape our lives, and Peter is forced to realize that he is not so different from Maxwell Dillion, who, like himself, was pretty much an ordinary person who has strange powers, and all the baggage that comes with them, thrust upon him without warning or preparation, and, without guidance, love, and support from people like Uncle Ben, Aunt May, Mary Jane and others, he very easily could have gone in the same direction as Electro: the direction of using his powers for destruction. Every man is responsible for his own actions, but we must have the humility to recognize where others have carried us and pushed us in the direction of what's right.

And yes, I know I took that straight from where I posted it in another thread, but, hey.

very good. I like the idea of making Electro Sympathetic. Electro can be robbing banks easily and committing alot of Crims and stoping the police from catching him becaue of His Electricity. But as Spidey and Electro battle, Spidey can start talking to him saying that "I didn't even know my Parents but that doesn't mean I should be committing Crimes". or Spidey could say, "Vulture is trying to keep you committing crimes!. You Parents were bad People but what your doing is bad to, we all have to learn to rise above the bad things that happen to us. Committing Crimes is turning you into a bad person just like your Parents.....which is why you need to rise above them and be a better person unlike your Parents". I'm sure those ines aren't as good as they would be if Electro being Sympathetic happened in a Spidey Film but I think it should be along the lines of that. I personally think that Electro should be sympathetic if He ever is in a Spidey Film.

 

[ThatDamnNinja]

I agree with adding stuff like that to further the mentality of Max, but something has to push him over the edge. I don't think it mirrors Sandman (as he didn't lash out...he was protective) as much as it does Peter (how would Peter handle MJ's death). In fact, this kind of plotline might work well with the Lizard.

I dunno... Lizard has such rich story potential already, which I don't think needs much enhancement. The thing that you developed (even if I don't necessarily love certain aspects) seems pretty much tailor-made for Electro, and doesn't really seem like it could suit anyone else as well...

 

[Spider-Fan]

I dunno... Lizard has such rich story potential already, which I don't think needs much enhancement. The thing that you developed (even if I don't necessarily love certain aspects) seems pretty much tailor-made for Electro, and doesn't really seem like it could suit anyone else as well...

You misunderstand what I said. I meant with this kind of story, he could easily be paired with the Lizard. This story is tailor made for Electro.

My goal with Electro in this concept is to mirror what loss can do to you and how Peter needs to see what he could become had something happend to MJ (works great along with the super-powers effecting family message of the Lizard), and how Max ends up becoming that which he hates (a bully). He never turns good. His wife (in my concept) was the only person ever good to him, and when she dies, he loses the one good thing in his life, and he snaps.

Now I have how I'd have him defeated. I would have Spider-Man start saying extremely mean things to him (get him angry), and as he gets irrational with his blasts, Spider-Man leads his blast into somekind of puddle (depending on where the fight takes place), and he get jolted (but I don't kill him).

 

[Blader5489]

My only problem with your Electro idea is that it's the same as Eddie Brock: essentially Peter Parker without the positive influences in his life. Also, I'm a bit hesitant on Vulture and Electro being the series' final villains - almost seems a bit anti-climactic.

But other than that, your ideas have been the most sensible suggestions I've read for SM5 and 6.

 

[HughJackFan420]

(Next day is Graduation Day for Peter the scene is at a Stadium and there's an announcer at the padioum.)

Announcer: Peter Parker for the Science Award in study of DNA.

(Peter Parker is walking up to the stage in disbelief.)

Peter: (thinking to himself walking up to get his award) Wow. Thanks Dr. Connors.

(Peter shakes hands with announcer and smiles at the crowd applauding. Aunt May and Mary Jane cheer and take pictures. We fast forward to everyone meeting outside.)

Mary Jane: Wow Peter you haven't changed since high school. Another Science Award. Congratulaions Tiger.

Peter: Yeah but this time I graduate without Harry here.

Aunt May: I'm sure both your uncle and your best friend Harry are watching you proud where they are. Congratulations sweetheart. Oh my little Peter. I have the most brilliant nephew.

(In the crowd of people nearby Venom is in Eddie Brock mode and is disguised in a trenchcoat, a cap and sunglasses listening in.)

Venom: So that's Aunt May? It would be sad for Parker if he lost both of his only parents. Hehe oh Parker...what we are going to do with you.

(Venom starts to walk to hide to watch and track down Aunt May from somewhere else when...)

Gwen: Hi Peter. Congratulations.

(Gwen runs up and hugs Peter. MJ gives a little mean face.)

Venomthinking to himself) Gwen...Parker took you away from us. He will pay.

(Venom continues to watch everyone's move especially Aunt May's.)

Gwen: Oh hi Mary Jane.

MJ: Hi Gwen Congratulations.

Gwen: Thanks.

(Capt. Stacy walks up behind and places his hands on Gwen's shoulder's)

Capt Stacy: Isn't my little princess a genius? Peter Parker right??

Peter: Yes sir.

Capt. Stacy: We're sorry son. We lost track of that Flint Marko character. But we're still working hard on getting this guy. Only one problem. He might have an easier time slipping through our fingers since we have reason to believe that he's that Sandman guy that held that poor girl hostage.

MJ: That was me.

Capt. Stacy: You?? Well my dear you're very brave.

Peter: She is but luckily Spiderman saved the day. We won't press charges even if you guys do catch him.
Trust me it's ok.

Capt. Stacy: You sure?? You almost chewed my head off my head over this guy last time.

Peter: I'm sure.

Capt. Stacy: Either way we still have to take him down. It's the law. A fugitive is a fugitive.

Aunt May: So Spiderman didn't kill him??

Peter: Um no Aunt May. I thought he did.

Aunt May: And he became that awful sand monster I saw on the news awhile back?? How do you officers plan to catch this beast??

Capt. Stacy: Water seems like the only way we can slow him down. These bad guys in New York become wierder and wierder. Wouldn't you agree son??

Peterh yeah a man with mechanical arms, a sand monster, a superhero in red and blue tights and villains in black mimicking him?? I mean what's this world come to?

(MJ looks at Peter and smiles.)
Capt. Stacy: Well that's what I needed to talk to you about. The man that attacked you recently has broke free.

Peter: Eddie Brock?? He's free??? Capt. Stacy he's infected by something I'm not quite sure what it is but it looks dangerous and may infect or hurt other people. Just like he almost hurt MJ.

(MJ and Peter look at each other worried)

Capt. Stacy: Yes as a matter of fact we got our second dosage this time and double the dosage i might add.

Peter: What do you mean?

Capt. Stacy: Whatever this ex-coworker of yours is infected with it has infected Cletus Cassidy a serial killer as well. We lost trace of him but once again Spiderman saved the day. We lost track of him too while he was chasing a large lizard. But according to him Carnage, from what he called himself after the infection took place or Cassidy, is pronounced dead.

(Eddie smiles as he hears this.)

Eddie: (thinking to himself) That pathetic soul was no match for us anyways. Thanks for finishing him off for us Parker.

Peter: A rabid dog running around like that I guess Spiderman had to do what he had to do.

Capt. Stacy: He said he had no choice. Well now with Cletus out of the picture we still have to worry about this Brock character. We have our plates full. We have a giant mutant lizard running wild in the sewers and now this Brock, black Spiderman wanna be infected with some living organism for a suit character are both giving me a headache.

Peter: I'm sure Spiderman is on it.

Capt. Stacy: I hope so otherwise we're gonna have to call in the military. This city is one of the greatest cities in the world and for it to be crapped on by monsters or mutants or whatever really gets under my skin.

Peter: I'm somewhat of Spiderman's official photographer for the Bugle and maybe I can chat with him to see what's up.

Capt. Stacy: Please do son. We need all the help we can.

Gwen: Well daddy how about we head to that party?

Capt. Stacy: Sure dear. Aren't you going to invite your friends?

Gwen: Oh yeah Peter do you and MJ want to come??

Aunt May: Oh sounds like fun. You guys should go.

Peter: We would but I have things I need to do. Sorry.

Gwen: Oh that's ok but by the way Pete I asked the sub that gave us the finals where Dr. Connors is and he doesn't know. Do you?

Peter: No but I'm sure he'll turn up.

Capt. Stacy: Well let's get going sweetie. MJ, Peter, May it was a pleasure meeting you all. Don't worry son we have Spiderman on our side so with his help there won't be any more foul ups with these wackos trying to hurt you and your family. What is about you son that these criminals turned freaks have it out for you?

Peter: A run of bad luck I guess.

Capt. Stacy: Yeah but we're lucky to have a guardian of the city and I'm sure he'll come through. Talk to him and you'll see he won't let you down.

Peter: He hasn't yet.

Capt. Stacy: Alright well congratulations and take care.

Gwen: See you Pete.

Peter: You too sir. Thank you. Bye Gwen.

MJ and Aunt May: Bye it was a pleasure. Nice meeting you.

Capt Stacy and Gwen: Like wise nice meeting you all. Good bye.

(Felecia walks up)

Felecia: Poor Dr. Connors. I hope he does show up though. He's a great professor.

Peter: Felecia??

Felecia: Hi Pete congratulations.

Peter: Thank you. Um MJ Aunt May this is Felecia Hardy. Felecia MJ and Aunt May.

MJ: Nice to meet you.

Aunt May: Yes very nice to meet you.

Felecia: Likewise.

Peter: So you graduated to huh??

Felecia: Yeah it's a miracle huh??

Peter: Yeah you were never around. I mean you were absent a lot.

Felecia: Let's just say it was all a family emergency.

Peter: What's wrong??

Felecia: My father passed away the other night.

Peter: I'm sorry.

Aunt May: Oh you poor thing.

MJ: Yeah I'm sorry too.

Felecia: It's ok I mean Spiderman can't save everyone right?

Peter: How did he die??

Felecia: He was murdered by a cold hearted monster. ::Sighs:: Anyways I got my diploma I'm gonna head on outta here.

Peter: You sure. How come you don't go to Gwen's party?

Felecia: I'm not in the partying mood. I gotta lot to do. I'm sorry I can't stay and chat. I'll be in touch though ok. I know where to find you Bugle boy.

MJ: (thinking to herself) Bugle Boy??

Peter: Yeah call me anytime.

(MJ looks at Peter wierd)

Felecia: Nice meething you MJ and you to Mrs. Parker.

Aunt May: Likewise my dear.

MJ: Yeah bye.

(Felecia walks off.)

Aunt May: Poor girl.

Peter: Yeah I wonder who killed her father.

MJ: I'm sure you can help her out Bugle Boy.

Peter: Come on MJ give her a break she's going through some hard times.

Aunt May: Well I'm gonna go now. Peter I will see you later and you be careful.

(Aunt May looks at MJ)

Aunt May: Take care of her Peter.

Peter: Always

MJ:Bye Aunt May. I will stop by to see you later ok.

(Venom smiles in Eddie mode still but you see his jagged sharp teeth.)

Venom:That's right...just walk into the lions den. This is going to be so easy and fun.

(Venom goes to a building and starts to climb to the top and keeps an eye out on the Peter and company.)

 

[FaT_tONle]

Its still a little too light for my taste... Electro is a bit overrated... I'd prefer Kingpin doing his dirty work from SM4 itself and eventually forming a Sinister 6 to cap it off... that would connect the villains more seemlessly. Say what you want but a S6 wouldn't be too campy for me if handled properly.

 

[pjspider1C]

^ It sounds like Venom had no idea who Aunt May was. Since the symbiote bonded with Peter, it gained all the knowledge Peter had. Therefore, Venom should not be surprised when he sees Aunt May - he should already know who she is. Everything Peter knows, Venom should know.

 

[HughJackFan420]

^ It sounds like Venom had no idea who Aunt May was. Since the symbiote bonded with Peter, it gained all the knowledge Peter had. Therefore, Venom should not be surprised when he sees Aunt May - he should already know who she is. Everything Peter knows, Venom should know.

oh so is that how he knew about Flint Marko/Sandman at the end of Spiderman 3??? Remember when Venom says "Flint Marko...I know all about you"

by the way i'm coming down to the end so fear not impatient ones

 

[Superhero 101]

THis Script is great can't wait till the End