The SM4 Fan Trailer script thread.

Discussion in 'Spider-Man Sequels' started by Climperoonie, Dec 28, 2007.

  1. Climperoonie A God Named Sparkles?

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    Now, I THINK this should go here, because A) It isn't a script in the script sense and B) Everyone can post things on it. Sorry if this is the wrong forum. Basically, you post what you would like to see with SM4 trailers. And no "Omfg u can't pt venom in dat trailer coz he is dead!!!!1!", or "dat is sto0pid carange wont be in a filim!1!!11". This is for trailer scripts, not villian discussions. Anyway, here's an example (NOTE: *s indicate sounds):
    TEASER TRAILER
    -The "This PREVIEW is approved for ALL AUDIENCES by the MOTION PICTURE ASSOCATION OF AMERICA" screen.
    -We see pitch back.
    -*Beat*
    -Spider-man swings past in Slow motion
    -*Beat*
    -Close up of someone's eyes
    -MAN 1 [V.O]: Cletus Kassady, the jury finds you guilty of eleven counts of murder.
    -*Beat*
    -Slow motion of Connors injecting himself
    -*Beat Beat*
    -Slow motion of Peter's eyes widening, as the camera zooms past him to a shadow of Connos becoming a Monsterous "Lizard" on the wall
    -*Beat Beat Beat*
    -Quick flash a Lizard beast.
    -Cut to a tail smashing a vial. A small black blob escapes
    -*Beat Beat Beat Beat*
    -Cut to Kassady in a cell, he has a peice of plaster for the wall and is cutting his arm with it, all the while laughing to himself. A the blob falls in his cut.
    -Fade to black
    -Carnage leaps at the camera, roaring
    -4
    -June 14, 2010
     
  2. Arcturus Registered

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    Teaser Trailer for Spider-Man 4

    We see Spider-Man crouched on the top of a building staring down at the city below. It is dusk, there is also heroic music playing. "This city is corrupted by crime. I am the only one who can bring justice. This is my gift...this is my curse" .

    Suddenly there is a splat and Spider-Man yanks his mask off, it's a bunch of bird crap. An annoyed and disgusted Spider-Man looks up a the sky and spots a skinny old man in green tights with a ruffled collar made of feathers flying away and laughing. "Vulture!" Peter screams out. Spider-Man leaps toward the screen.

    May 22 2010
     
  3. I'm Venom "Hi, honey..."

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    TRAILER
    - "This PREVIEW is approved for ALL AUDIENCES by the MOTION PICTURE ASSOCIATION OF AMERICA"
    - *Beat*
    - Spider-Man swings past
    - *Beat*
    - Dr. Connors injects himself
    - *Beat*
    - Shadow of Connors becoming Lizard on the wall
    - *Beat*
    - Cut to Eddie Brock laughing
    - Fade to black
    - Venom leaps at the camera roaring
    - "4"
    - Cut to Spider-Man in the sewers. Suddenly, Venom jumps down with a roar.
    - "May 7, 2010"
     
  4. Visionary Registered

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    It's not even time for this. Keep it in your pocket. The damn writer's strike is not even over. :dry:
     
  5. dark_knight08 December 20, 2019

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    Here is my Teaser Trailer for Spider-Man 4
    :spidey:


    TEASER TRAILER
    -The "This PREVIEW is approved for ALL AUDIENCES by the MOTION PICTURE ASSOCATION OF AMERICA" screen.
    -We see pitch back.
    -*Beat*
    -Spider-man swings past in Slow motion
    -*Beat*
    -Close up of someone's eyes
    -MAN 1 [V.O]: Cletus Kassady, the jury finds you guilty of eleven counts of murder.
    -*Beat*
    -Dr. Curt Connors [Taping Himself]: Dr. Curt Connors, The Time is 8:47 PM
    -Slow motion of Connors injecting himself
    -*Beat Beat*
    -Slow motion of Peter's eyes widening, as the camera zooms past him to a shadow of Connos becoming a Monsterous "Lizard" on the wall
    -*Beat Beat Beat*
    -Quick flash a Lizard beast.
    -*Beat Beat Beat Beat*
    -Cut to Kassady in a cell, he has a peice of glass cutting his arm with it, while laughing to himself.
    -Fade to black
    -Carnage leaps at the camera, roaring
    -4
    -June 14, 2010
     
  6. matthooper Registered

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    Did anyone else but me read this? That is one of the funniest posts I've read in a long time. Damn funny Arcturus, damn funny.

    By the way...NO CARNAGE!
     
  7. Arcturus Registered

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    lol, thanks matthooper!
     
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    I think all this '*beat*' nonsense is really annoying me. Why would you have 1 beat then 2 (thats what I can agree with) but then 3 beats then 4?! I don't think I've ever seen a professional trailer with *beat beat beat beat* in it. Unless it's like a heart beat. But that's completely different. I say just have the beats at the start max. of 2, then have full 'actioness' scenes after that.

    geez, saying beat in my head that many times has made it lose it's entire meaning :p
     
  9. Spideyfan01 R.I.P. Heath Ledger.....

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    Here’s Mine:

    (Black Screen)
    Spidey’s Voice: They hate me….

    (News Broadcast)
    Reporter: The body count keeps rising as the monster runs loose.

    (Cut to Kraven and Spidey)
    Spidey: I won’t kill him, he’s human!
    Kraven: Can you live with yourself? Every death will be on your shoulders!

    (Doctor Conner’s Lab)
    Doc Conners: I’ve spent years working on this formula…time to test it.
    (He drinks the formula, he falls and knocks the camera over, Screen goes black)

    (Cut to Spidey and Kraven in the sewers, they hear a noise)
    Spidey: What was that?
    (Suddenly Lizard jumps down on Kraven with a roar)


    ‘4’
    ‘Opening date’
     
  10. Silver Sable Wild Pack Commander

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    I like this one lol :cwink:
     
  11. greenknight Registered

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    Here`s mine.

    (We see an explosion followed by a shot taking place in a graveyard)

    Peter: Who killed her?

    (close up of a tombstone saying Gwen Stacy)

    Man: This man did.

    (a few scenes of Casady turning into Carnage)

    Carnage: Casady is dead, there is only Caranage!

    On May 15,

    (An army of Tanks going down the street of NY only to be destroyed by Carnage)

    One Man

    (Spider-Man swinging towards the cam.)

    Must Face

    (Spider-Man dodges a car in Mid Air)

    The Ultimate Evil

    Carnage: It`s time to die!

    ( Random action scenes)
    4
    May 15, 2010.
     

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