What have you achieved since you joined the hype?

[Tangled Web]

I bet I can right one for Garden State:

A heavily medicated young man travels home for his mother's funeral and takes a vacation from his anti-depressents where he attempts to re connect with old friends and find himself in the process.

 

[Cmill216]

^ See?

So, if you can't seem to do that with your current story, you need to find out what the focus of it is and what the general story you're trying to tell is. Once you do that, you shouldn't have a problem writing a logline (which is essential if you are interested in selling the script to anyone).

 

[Spider-Man Luvr28]

Um..... Let's see..... Wasted hours on here but on the postive side I met lots of cool people. In a few months next year, I'll be done with high school..That's about it.

 

[Tangled Web]

^ See?

So, if you can't seem to do that with your current story, you need to find out what the focus of it is and what the general story you're trying to tell is. Once you do that, you shouldn't have a problem writing a logline (which is essential if you are interested in selling the script to anyone).

Hmm. I guess your'e right. I'll try to figure something out with my current script.

 

[Helghast]

I'll go

-kissed a girl
-Taken a bunch of honors classes (AP and IB this year)
-Passed the AP Euro exam I got a four.
- Dry humped a girl

I guess that's it.

Dry humping is not an achievement, lol. Anyway. Since 2004 I've done some special ops around the world, small stuff. I've gotten my body fat down to 1% and I can sprint for thirty three miles before my body gives out on me. Uh. I learned Krav maga and Sayoc kali and Brazilian Jiu Jitsu. I banged like fifty thousand women. I sky dived from a space ship while it was going through the atmosphere (my body is wicked burned). Nanananana. I'm not going to list anymore. Hahahhahha.

 

[Socrates]

Dry humping is not an achievement, lol. Anyway. Since 2004 I've done some special ops around the world, small stuff. I've gotten my body fat down to 1% and I can sprint for thirty three miles before my body gives out on me. Uh. I learned Krav maga and Sayoc kali and Brazilian Jiu Jitsu. I banged like fifty thousand women. I sky dived from a space ship while it was going through the atmosphere (my body is wicked burned). Nanananana. I'm not going to list anymore. Hahahhahha.

I would believe you if your body fat percentage was more realistic.

Otherwise, the rest is totally plausible.

 

[Tangled Web]

It was an acheivment for me.




It was really a big step

 

[Helghast]

lol, it's ok TW. When you have sex I will applaud you. And call the woman sexy, because all women like that. Except conservative Christian women. Other than nuns.

I would believe you if your body fat percentage was more realistic.

Otherwise, the rest is totally plausible.

Dude, they came up with these new rations. It tastes bleh but it's awesome.

 

[Socrates]

They..?

As in, the Government?

It was an acheivment for me.

It was really a big step

You're well on your way to becoming a date rapist, bravo.

 

[Tangled Web]

They..?

As in, the Government?
Captain America


You're well on your way to becoming a date rapist, bravo.

No.

She started it.

 

[Helghast]

They..?

As in, the Government?



You're well on your way to becoming a date rapist, bravo.

Nooo, the scientists. Duhuuh.

 

[Socrates]

But where do the scientists originate from?

No.

She started it.

...Where the f**k did Captain America come from?

Anyway. I wouldn't have brought it up in the first place, but then I remembered your picture. Yeah, you look like a potential date rapist.

 

[Green Lantern]

Dry humping is not an achievement, lol. Anyway. Since 2004 I've done some special ops around the world, small stuff. I've gotten my body fat down to 1% and I can sprint for thirty three miles before my body gives out on me. Uh. I learned Krav maga and Sayoc kali and Brazilian Jiu Jitsu. I banged like fifty thousand women. I sky dived from a space ship while it was going through the atmosphere (my body is wicked burned). Nanananana. I'm not going to list anymore. Hahahhahha.

MC get on AIM or MSN or somethin

 

[Helghast]

But where do the scientists originate from?



...Where the f**k did Captain America come from?

Anyway. I wouldn't have brought it up in the first place, but then I remembered your picture. Yeah, you look like a potential date rapist.

I dunno, they just give it to me in a square metal box and I chomp down like a good little... hungry guy.

MC get on AIM or MSN or somethin

Is it important? Because I was going to play Lego Star Wars II. And like, I need my computer screen for that. And like... No, that's it.

 

[Socrates]

MC get on AIM or MSN or somethin

Speaking of AIM, I don't suppose you'll ever take me off ignore...

 

[Tangled Web]

But where do the scientists originate from?



...Where the f**k did Captain America come from?

Anyway. I wouldn't have brought it up in the first place, but then I remembered your picture. Yeah, you look like a potential date rapist.

The Cap was a government experiment.

lol. yea. That picture may not have been the best one to post on here especially given the thread it was on.

 

[Green Lantern]

I dunno, they just give it to me in a square metal box and I chomp down like a good little... hungry guy.



Is it important? Because I was going to play Lego Star Wars II. And like, I need my computer screen for that. And like... No, that's it.

You don't have it on Xbox?!

 

[Green Lantern]

And Soc, there, you're unblocked

 

[Socrates]

Oh, cool. I thought I was on ignore on the hype as well, for just a moment...

 

[unstoppable]

nothin

 

[Spider-Bite]

This is a thread to name and discuss all that you have achieved since joining the hype.

I don't mean...on the internet...I mean what you have achieved in real life.

I shall start:

-Kissed a girl
-done alot more than that later on
-Finished my GCSEs.
-Joined a band.
-Started to drink.
-Smoked weed.

I acheived a post count of 3,608, no wait make that 3,609. I also got a neat little avatart:

 

[MyPokerShirt]

Developed a harsh hatred for mankind. -- wahay! My first post on the community forum!

 

[unstoppable]

Developed a harsh hatred for mankind. -- wahay! My first post on the community forum!

I've never posted on anything besides this forum and the marvel and misc

 

[Snipershot]

since i have joined a long year ago, i have become more of a loser

 

[Hades]

I can't really remember anything past yesterday to be honest.