Write YOUR own voice-over opening!

[Chris Wallace]

Nice thread, Naite. A hell of a lot more fun than anything else that's come across the Spidey boards lately.

 

[Chris Wallace]

Thanks...I love to write.

No, seriously-I had to re-think mine b/c I didn't wanna step on your toes.

 

[HughJackFan420]

I'm guessing it would be something about peter proposing to mj.

kinda like my opening?

 

[HughJackFan420]

Here goes my thoughts:

"She is the woman of my dreams, Mary Jane Watson. Now part of my life and the choices I make with it. I won't let anything happen to her or come between us.

But what happens when someone is presented more power. Will it corrupt the man he is or change forever the man he is becoming. My Uncle Ben once said that with great power comes great responsibilty. Who am I you ask? I am Peter Parker and Spider-Man. And, I have a job to do."

its ok but its kinda repetitive

especially the "with great power comes great responsibility" its like yea yea we get the message Uncle Ben

hey by the way was Uncle Ben a great cook when it comes to rice??

 

[lordofthenerds]

kinda like my opening?

Just read, yeah you pretty much nailed it.

 

[Sentinel X]

"A great man once told me 'With Great power comes great responsibility', to this day those words are still engraved within me. Everyday I think of him, my beloved Uncle Ben, if it were not for him I wouldn't be who I am today. I have a responsibility, one I had taken years ago, seconds after the last breath of life escaped my Uncle's lips. Who am I? you may ask. If someone told you my story was just a happy litte fairy tale, that person lied.I have a gift, a curse, a responsibility...I'm Spider-man."

 

[Chris Wallace]

"A great man once told me 'With Great power comes great responsibility', to this day those words are still engraved within me. Everyday I think of him, my beloved Uncle Ben, if it were not for him I wouldn't be who I am today. I have a responsibility, one I had taken years ago, seconds after the last breath of life escaped my Uncle's lips. Who am I? you may ask. If someone told you my story was just a happy litte fairy tale, that person lied.I have a gift, a curse, a responsibility...I'm Spider-man."

Nice.

 

[Sentinel X]

Thanks...
I did another one

"What more can I possibly ask for? Some people could say I have a perfect life. I have the amazing girl that one could only dream to be with, and an Aunt who has been the one and only mother I have ever had in my life....but still there is something wrong. Everyday people need my help, be it from a criminal on a killing spree or mad scientist. I took a vow years ago to use my abilities for the good of mankind. And here I am today, swinging through the city's enormous skysrappers. This is my home, a place I vowed to protect after I let a crimainal I could've stopped,kill my Uncle. I could never let that feeling happen to anyone else, this why Im Spider-man"

 

[Chris Wallace]

I'd change one line:
"Be it FROM a criminal on a killing spree..."

 

[Sentinel X]

Oh, my mistake

I love this thread btw,

 

[chaseter]

its ok but its kinda repetitive

especially the "with great power comes great responsibility" its like yea yea we get the message Uncle Ben

hey by the way was Uncle Ben a great cook when it comes to rice??

With great power comes great responsibilty is kind of the theme for the movies. It was said in SM1 and SM2 and I can guarantee you it will be in SM3.

 

[chaseter]

I tweaked mine a bit:

"She is the woman of my dreams, Mary Jane Watson. Now part of my life and the choices I make with it. I won't let anything happen to her or come between us. I will try my best to give her what she deserves, and be that man beside her on the hilltop.

But what happens when someone is presented with more power? Will it corrupt the man he is or forever change the man he is becoming. It is my life, my gift, my curse. Who am I you may ask? I am Peter Parker and Spider-Man, given a job to do."

 

["Iron Man"]

Something like this would work....



"Can life get any better? I have everything I want, although my uncled may not be here to see it. I have the girl of my dreams, and the most caring aunt. I'm getting payed great and I'm still getting great pictures. And believe it or not, Spider-Man is becoming a bit more famous..."

(goes to MJ's play, then Harry/Peter alley battle after awhile, THEN Spidey Day!)

 

[Naite22]

Thanks...
I did another one

"What more can I possibly ask for? Some people could say I have a perfect life. I have the amazing girl that one could only dream to be with, and an Aunt who has been the one and only mother I have ever had in my life....but still there is something wrong. Everyday people need my help, be it from a criminal on a killing spree or mad scientist. I took a vow years ago to use my abilities for the good of mankind. And here I am today, swinging through the city's enormous skysrappers. This is my home, a place I vowed to protect after I let a crimainal I could've stopped,kill my Uncle. I could never let that feeling happen to anyone else, this why Im Spider-man"

Very good, and VERY deep!

 

[Naite22]

i think it should go something like this...

I finally realized my love for Mary Jane has no boundaries. I promised myself that I could never bring her into my world because of enemies that wish harm on my loved ones. I promised to just be her friend and her personal protector. Now she knows who I really am. She knows all my secrets and more importantly she finally knows how I really feel about her. Ontop of my heroic duties and my odd jobs for cash I see another job in my future. My job as a good husband to the woman I love. Mary Jane Watson will you marry me??? There's only one way too find out....

Cut to the theatre scene in the trailer....and just use your imagination from there...

While not beeing too dark, not too dark at all, I guess this is my favorite.... well, so far!

 

[Naite22]

Admit it... Good thread, right! keep em coming!

 

[Chris Wallace]

Oh, my mistake

I love this thread btw,

Apart from that it was great; or was that what you meant to say in the first place?

 

[Sentinel X]

Apart from that it was great; or was that what you meant to say in the first place?

I meant to say it in the first place but I think it my be a grammar error, but Im not sure
Thanks btw

 

[webhead731]

How long can any man fight the darkness, how long can any man stay in control...before darkness finds him? With greater power comes greater responsibility...
When someone discovers something so dark in his life that feeds on revenge and hate, it puts a poison in your heart for vengeance, a venom that consumes your whole body...


Maybe something like that.

 

[Eggyman]

Hey, anybody thinking about whether or not there will be a voice over at the end like in Spidey 1? I think it'd be fun to write that because in it would show each persons' idea of how the film would play out and what major things they are exspecting in it: Harry dies, MJ moves away, Aunt May turns red and gets an axe for a hand (joke), etc etc. Could be cool, and then naite22 could be the proud father of two cool threads seen as this idea was born from his.

 

[Naite22]

How long can any man fight the darkness, how long can any man stay in control...before darkness finds him? With greater power comes greater responsibility...
When someone discovers something so dark in his life that feeds on revenge and hate, it puts a poison in your heart for vengeance, a venom that consumes your whole body...


Maybe something like that.

cool!

 

["Iron Man"]

How long can any man fight the darkness, how long can any man stay in control...before darkness finds him? With greater power comes greater responsibility...
When someone discovers something so dark in his life that feeds on revenge and hate, it puts a poison in your heart for vengeance, a venom that consumes your whole body...


Maybe something like that.

Yes, that would work.


There's DEFINETLY got to be a clue to Venom or the symbiote.

Perhaps this...


"Mary Jane. The girl I've always wanted. Aunt May. The mother figure, who has always cared for me. They both would never give up on me. But these feelings I've been having, that something bad is about to happen. Can Spider-Man handle much more venomous things?"

 

[webhead731]

That's good too.^

 

[lordofthenerds]

Sam Raimi voiceover- "Just incase any of you are wondering....Venom's gonnna die and he'll barely be in the movie HAHA! SANDMAN RULES!"
That should clear out the crowd.

 

[Sean Adisano]

ever since the first time i heard the first voice over: "who am i? you sure you want to know?" i couldn't get the song out of my head, the one by The Who, "Who Are You"...i love that song