see i like that j. grey. its got subtlty in the line work and quality shading. The pose leans towards the "if i dont position a woman like this it wont look like a woman's body"*, but it works here by being enhanced by the shading. However, its the emblem that gets me. You see, its cool looking but not so practical. Its got to be reproducable. Theres no symetry to it so it will never look the same from panel to panel. I see this as a struggle in design that flies far above my head. Whatever ... in this sorta pin-up composition its really irrevelant but thats what struck me looking at the above.
Cant wait to see your style become more distinct.
*see any silvestri-esque or early image comics ...