Willie Lumpkin
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Carp Man said:Yea there were so many hands in that script. This time there's 1, mabey 2.
Yeah, but the problem is I read the first draft and I thought the final version was an improvement. The first draft had very little respect for the source material, and later drafts brought it closer to the source material (while not fixing all of the problems).
Problems with the first, Frost draft:
Von Doom is "Van Damn" - Fixed in later drafts
Victor is a businessman and seems only vaguely scientifically gifted- Not fixed
Victor is the charming lover of Sue Storm - Later drafts made him darker and creepier. It became obvious that they didn't really have a romantic relationship.
There wasn't even a mention of Latveria - fixed with a quick reference.
Victor gets "Organic Powers" rather than building his own armor - not fixed.
Victor owns the baxter building - fixed.
So as a fan of the comics, my biggest problem with Frost was that he didn't have enough respect for the source material. He felt that he had to re-invent the characters. Later drafts brought the story closer to what we know from the comics, but some of the flaws were too broad to fix.
On the other hand, Ben, Reed, Sue, Johnny and Alicia were all recognizable as their comic counterparts, so Frost showed some strength there. One moment I liked was cut out - a scene in which Ben is first transforming and Johnny goes to knock on his door but pauses when he hears the groans thinking he's with a woman and says something like: "You dog, you". But other good scenes (like the mirror scene) were kept.
I think Frost has a talent for writing interesting, fun character interaction, and that was a strength of the first film, but he got too "clever" on the broader elements and some of those things he did to "fix" the comics didn't work IMHO.
I just hope that they told him to stick closer to the source material for any involvement he had on this one.