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Nope , nope it wasn't In fact it was very very lame :P
How about everyone who likes the trilogy post what they didn't like in Reloaded and Revolutions and also explain why they didn't like it or how they would've improved on it. You can also use scenes which you felt were good , but also could've been improved on.
I'll start off .
1 scenes in Zion :
Now before you think i hate Zion , hear me out. I don't hate or nor don't i like it. In fact i like it alot. However there are moments in Zion which i don't like and it puts me towards a point.
As i stated before i don't like the Rave at all. I understand the meaning of it which is of course , mankind's celebration , showing that in spite of a looming war we are still human , that unlike machines who always crave for feelings we are truly able to feel those things ( neo banging trinity , the grinding of bodies in rave ) , the fact that neo will always care for trinity ( instead of them celebrating in unison with the zionites , they go off and have sex ).
But i just don't see it working. I would've liked to see more scenes with the zionoties preparing to fight . More scenes with councillor hammann or for that matter Cornel West talking to neo and morpheus.
I mean one thing that Reloaded immediatly shows us is that this isn't M1. Stop drawing conclusions or thinking that it's the same...cause it's not.
Reloaded shows us that morpheus isn''t as all knowing , that his believes are questioned.
And of course , more scenes featuring the zionities with their dependance on neo and neo showing again and again that he will always go for trinity. IMO it wou'ld've made that much more of an impact.
2 Burly Brawl
I dunno if any of you know how the burly brawl originally was going to be.
For those who don't know anything about it :
It was going to be a far more threatening thing for neo. One of the main criticisms of the burly brawl is that neo is god and that he could've just flown away easily. However many people who come up with such arguments , also fail to realise that neo is always trying to overcome a situation. Even if he doesn't understand it. With the first fight in Reloaded we see that the agents attack neo and after a few moves he begins to see that the agents are upgrades. Still trying to overcome the situation , he kicks their butts. In Reloaded he does the same thing , trying to realise just why the smiths are their and trying to overcome the situation. That is why he fights them and as more smiths arrive , he knows that physically he can't win....in that moment. That's why he escapes.
Now going back to the burly brawl as it was originally conceived , smith was a far more threatening presence. He goes all out and begins to take over everyone in the vicinity. First he tries to take over neo and seeing that he can't do that , he takes over everyone. Check out how the wachowskis wrote that scene :
I mean that scene just sounds soo cool reading that. And the fact that it was storyboarded ( see the matrix dvd's for that) shows that they were in fact planning to shoot the sequence.
Why they changed it , i dunno. Mebbe for budgetary reasons.
3 Deleted Stuff
See burly brawl description above. Alot of scenes in Reloaded and Revolutions were ditched because of Budgetary reasons.
In Revolutions there was going to be a shot of neo flyin thru the megacity whoch also got removed. Pre-VIZ alone would've costed almost 1 million dollars . Animation would've probably costs millions more.
Also the freeway chase was changed abit in the end , although i'm not sure how much. I knew that Morpheus and Trinity would be surrounded in the end and they would then escape with in the end neo saving the day in bullet time. I just don't know how. Need to do some digging up.
THe opening scene was also changed quite drastically in Reloaded. It had the scene with the motorcycle landing and exploding. Trinity fought , if i remember correctly , just one person and then we'd see a frightened trinity as she walks and you'd constantly go in and out of the matrix code until that show came of her falling out of the building and firing in bullet time.
IMO alot of those removed scenes would've made Reloaded and Revolutions better.
That's all for now. There are more stuff but i'll post them later
How about everyone who likes the trilogy post what they didn't like in Reloaded and Revolutions and also explain why they didn't like it or how they would've improved on it. You can also use scenes which you felt were good , but also could've been improved on.
I'll start off .
1 scenes in Zion :
Now before you think i hate Zion , hear me out. I don't hate or nor don't i like it. In fact i like it alot. However there are moments in Zion which i don't like and it puts me towards a point.
As i stated before i don't like the Rave at all. I understand the meaning of it which is of course , mankind's celebration , showing that in spite of a looming war we are still human , that unlike machines who always crave for feelings we are truly able to feel those things ( neo banging trinity , the grinding of bodies in rave ) , the fact that neo will always care for trinity ( instead of them celebrating in unison with the zionites , they go off and have sex ).
But i just don't see it working. I would've liked to see more scenes with the zionoties preparing to fight . More scenes with councillor hammann or for that matter Cornel West talking to neo and morpheus.
I mean one thing that Reloaded immediatly shows us is that this isn't M1. Stop drawing conclusions or thinking that it's the same...cause it's not.
Reloaded shows us that morpheus isn''t as all knowing , that his believes are questioned.
And of course , more scenes featuring the zionities with their dependance on neo and neo showing again and again that he will always go for trinity. IMO it wou'ld've made that much more of an impact.
2 Burly Brawl
I dunno if any of you know how the burly brawl originally was going to be.
For those who don't know anything about it :
It was going to be a far more threatening thing for neo. One of the main criticisms of the burly brawl is that neo is god and that he could've just flown away easily. However many people who come up with such arguments , also fail to realise that neo is always trying to overcome a situation. Even if he doesn't understand it. With the first fight in Reloaded we see that the agents attack neo and after a few moves he begins to see that the agents are upgrades. Still trying to overcome the situation , he kicks their butts. In Reloaded he does the same thing , trying to realise just why the smiths are their and trying to overcome the situation. That is why he fights them and as more smiths arrive , he knows that physically he can't win....in that moment. That's why he escapes.
Now going back to the burly brawl as it was originally conceived , smith was a far more threatening presence. He goes all out and begins to take over everyone in the vicinity. First he tries to take over neo and seeing that he can't do that , he takes over everyone. Check out how the wachowskis wrote that scene :
EXT. TENEMENT PARK - DAY
The courtyard is overrun by the seemingly endless mob and their relentless attack begins to overwhelm Neo.
INT. NEBUCHADNEZZAR - MAIN DECK - DAY
Trinity can't stand it.
TRINITY
Come on! Get out of there!
EXT. TENEMENT PARK - DAY
Almost buried beneath Smiths, Neo seems to hear her. Screaming with Herculean effort, he hurls himself upward, reaching for the freedom of the sky but--
The Smiths refuse to let go.
Together they rise; a twisted knot of bodies uncoiling as it bends up into the air--
Several Smiths slip off, others leap up to grab on--
The last snatching onto the lowest Smith's ankle as--
Neo drags his chain skyward.
EXT. CITYSCAPE - DAY
The Smiths cling to him, arms and legs wrapped like strangling vines around the trunk of a tree as their fingers dig, gouging, slowly sinking into his skin.
Neo tries to shake them loose, jack-knifing, suddenly reversing his direction as--
The ankle-holding Smith is whip-snapped free--
Thrown spinning through open space until smashing into the glass wall of a skyscraper.
Still, Neo cannot get free.
Like a devil perched on his back, the Smith nearest his ear smiles.
SMITH
It is... inevitable.
Fingers sink like vampire fangs into Neo's neck.
The blackness spreads, enveloping his face, one eye covered as the other eye seems to go dead and his flight becomes a fall--
Plunging with his comet-tail of Smiths to the city below.
INT. NEBUCHADNEZZAR - MAIN DECK - DAY
Trinity covers her mouth.
TRINITY
Oh no.
EXT. TELEVISION SUPPLY HOUSE - DAY
They break through, falling into the center display, toppling stacks of screens.
Neo's eyes focus as the collision severs Smith's connection and he leaps to his feet.
Before the Smiths can reach for him, Neo leaps into the air, soaring through the hole in the ceiling.
The Smiths stand, the image surreally filling up the monitors through the store's live camera feeds.
A woman screams as Smith stabs his fingers into her neck.
I mean that scene just sounds soo cool reading that. And the fact that it was storyboarded ( see the matrix dvd's for that) shows that they were in fact planning to shoot the sequence.
Why they changed it , i dunno. Mebbe for budgetary reasons.
3 Deleted Stuff
See burly brawl description above. Alot of scenes in Reloaded and Revolutions were ditched because of Budgetary reasons.
In Revolutions there was going to be a shot of neo flyin thru the megacity whoch also got removed. Pre-VIZ alone would've costed almost 1 million dollars . Animation would've probably costs millions more.
This sequence was also drawn.John Gaeta gave a short description of that sequence :
In fact, one of the most elaborate shots in Revolutions didn't make it out of the previz stage. This scene had Neo flying through the mega city in a curved, zigzag pattern while the camera orbited his body and sliding lenses created a feeling of vertigo. The shot was nixed because of its steep $1 million production price tag. "It was super killer and my favorite," says Gaeta.
Also the freeway chase was changed abit in the end , although i'm not sure how much. I knew that Morpheus and Trinity would be surrounded in the end and they would then escape with in the end neo saving the day in bullet time. I just don't know how. Need to do some digging up.
THe opening scene was also changed quite drastically in Reloaded. It had the scene with the motorcycle landing and exploding. Trinity fought , if i remember correctly , just one person and then we'd see a frightened trinity as she walks and you'd constantly go in and out of the matrix code until that show came of her falling out of the building and firing in bullet time.
IMO alot of those removed scenes would've made Reloaded and Revolutions better.
That's all for now. There are more stuff but i'll post them later


