Design your own Exiles Universe

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  1. Zoken

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    Rules are thus
    1: must describe how it is different from the 616
    2: must give a history of how it got this way
    3: must have a problem the Exiles must solve before they can leave
    4: do something... interesting.


    mine.... MONARCH!

    okay, in this world all the world is run by a single person who, by the majority, is called "The Monarch". most peoplelove him, but there are a few who think of him as a despot, including a terrorist cell called the "Freedom Now" lead by Hawkeye, operating out of LA, and using most of the Runaways. The entire world now has a futuristic feel to it due to the fact that Monarch, Reed Richards, and Tony Stark banded together to find solutions for the worlds problems.

    It turns out the world went of course long ago... when a woman died in a way she wasn't supposed to. her name was Gwen Stacy, she was supposed to die at the hands of the Green Goblin, but in this world she did not. she died at the hands of a normal every day, no-name mugger. her beloved, Peter Parker was enraged that couldn't save the woman he loved from a simple mugger. he went two weeks without leaving his apartment, when he did, he had had an apifany. the heroes are usless because they are seperated by their own petty differences. sure every now and then they work together, but they never know what each other is doing until after its done. thus Peter began the great initiative to gather all the willing super-humans on the planet into an organization called Hazardous Event Response Organization.

    it didn't take him long to recruit all the heroes on earth, and even reform a few criminals, such as Doc. Ock. and Dr. Doom. Then came Galactus. they repelled him, but Galactus returned, stronger and angrier. this time he didn't just want to devour Earth, he wanted to torture it. he destroyed ever capitol city on the planet before the heroes could even organize. with Spider-Man in the lead they lead the second charch and this time, Galactus didn't walk away. he was destroyedonce and for all. with a world in chaos, they set out to bring order. the people of the world looked to the heroes for their leadership...they looked to Spider-Man, the one who had brought them together. and so he was forced into the lead. he became the reluctant ruler of the world. as the years wear on new threats surface themselves. Polaris and her Acolytes become a major threat as well as the man called Xorn. what truly devastates the world are the Apocalypse Wars. Each year Peter sits on the throne people, ordinary civilian look to him more and more for his guidance. each year he offers to step down and set up democracies and republics where the people govern themselves, and each year at least 80 percent demand he remain their monarch. the Apocalypse Wars finally end ten months before the Exiles arrive.

    the problem... the mistake in this Universe... The Monarch, Peter, Spider-Man, in three months time will fall into a deep depression. three months later he will take his own life by an intentional overdose of sleeping pills. rumors fly as the populous, so dependant on the Monarch, refuses to accept suicide or natural death. a civil war breaks out that lasts two years resulting in the death of almost half the worlds population.

    the twist... The Tallus won't reveal their mission till they have been there a while. till, they have left the Monarch alone wiht one of their own... the mission... they must give the Monarch a Queen.
     
  2. Roughneck

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    I have one that hasn't been lfeshed out yet, but Juggernaut is the earths greatest hero. He is way more powerful and Took out Galactus single handedly, due to him being so good most of the earth's heroes retired or never became heroes. Some even turned to lifes of petty crime just to get by.
     
  3. Zoken

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    and what they need to fix?
     
  4. Roughneck

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    Uh, Spiderman was one of the criminals who turned his powers towards petty crimes (Petty cause he doesn't want to really hurt anybody and if he does any big crimes Uber Juggs will destroy him) Anyway the Exiles are there to stop Spidey from his next crime in which he will inadvertantly kill a little girl. The main problem is the Blink into the reality right between Juggs and The Masters of Evil (Abomination, Hulk, Rhino, The Thng and A manster version of Colossus) Juggs has pretty much wiped the floor with the MOE and before the tallus can explain anything the Exiles attack Juggernaut case he looks really mad (from just being in a fight) And he is bad on most of their realities. They attack and lose and him being the Juggernaut they are unable to convine him that they are good. So they have to fins and stop spiderman all the while with this unstoppable Juggernaut on their tails.
     
  5. 3dman27

    3dman27 super-hero wannabe

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    very interesting
     
  6. Doobie88

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    ComicCon

    The exiles appear in a Las Vegas Comic convention, however something seems very differnt here then any other reality. Everyone seems to be 3 dimentional and realistic, except for the exiles who appear to be drawn and colored. A news reported comments on their appearance claiming that they are the most deserving of the costume award handed out at the convetion. There task here is to prevent a comic book writter from senslessly killing off a comic book character. Trouble begins when Morph desides to demonistrate his powers infront of some onlookers, as he morphs into a "Superman" several of the bystanders scream and flee, others puke up their lunch after viewing such a transformation. After making a quick departure from the convention with blink also snatching the writter from the floor. They all appear on an isolated roof top where they convince the writter that killing such an iconic hero would have grave reprocussions for the industry and the world as they know it. The writter aggrees to not kill off that character, and the exiles blink out of existance.
     
  7. 3dman27

    3dman27 super-hero wannabe

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    say doobie what was the iconic hero in your synopsis supposed to be? :hyper:
     
  8. OA blaster

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    new law of the jungle

    the wakanda people of this universe didn't stay within the wall of their city, they began to conquer the world, the black panther leads his people in every battle to victory, they have conquered most of the world except lataveria lead by Doctor Doom and his Honour knights (wolverine, franklin richards, punisher, juggernault and lady polarius)
    the wakanda people believe that as long as the black panther leads them into battle they can't loose
    T'challa is married to storm and she is with child.
    on the night before the final battle for laterveria, the exiles must kill T'challa so as to give dooms armies time to recover
    with T'challa dead the wakandain armies will not attack lataveria without a bloody line king at the head of the army
    giving doom time to build a stronger army to defeat the wakanda

    however they will have to defeat T'challa personnel gaurds (elektra, husk, deathstrike, black widow, marrow, cloak and dagger) to get close to T'challa
     
  9. The Question

    The Question Objectivism doesn't work.

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    my alternate world is called:


    HEROES OF SHEILD


    in this world, sheild became much more proactive after captain america disapeared. whenever a superhuman apeared, sheild recruted them. now, almost every superhero on earth works for sheild. professor xavier's school has become a shield training camp, and the proffesor is racked with guilt over alowing his school to become a military training camp. the only heroes that don't work for sheild are the more street level vigilantes like cloak, dagger, punisher, moon knight, blade, luke cage, iron fist, and daredevil. these heros have banded together as the vigilante group, the urban legends. daredevil is their leader(much to the punisher's dismay) the urban legends are outlaws(at least moreso than they are in the 616 universe) because sheild has a zero tolerance policy for vigilantes, especially superpowered ones like blade, cloak, luke cage, and dagger. the danger is that when the shield operatives and the urban legends have their final confrontation, the brotherhood is going to take advantage of the fact that both sheild and the urban legends are distracted, and atack washington with an army of reprogramed sentinels.
     
  10. Zoken

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    Trust Me

    (takes place after Monarch) This is a universe with no non-mutant super-humans. all mutants wear control collars unless they work for SHEILD. their mission is to stop a madman who plans on destroying the world...Reed Richards. in this universe his ship entirely failed to work. it was actually through sheer chance that it failed, but Reed never accepted that. with out his super adventures to take his time, he continues inventing at an accelerated rate. soon, he becomes convinced he is the next level of humanity, not mutants.

    Reed has destroyed every agent and every mutant that SHEILD has thrown at him. mostly because he was able to out think them. Now the Exiles have to charge in to save the day... the catch? they have a new member. he hails from the same universe as Beak, though Beak doesn't trust this new Exile, not because he has no powers, but because he gets the feeling the new guy isn't telling the whole truth about how he became unhinged. the Tallus states their mission is to kill not only Reed Richards, but the woman he keeps captured for... reasons, Mary-Jane Watson and her unborn child.

    oh, by the way, the new Exile... Alex Wilder.
     
  11. 3dman27

    3dman27 super-hero wannabe

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    who's alex wilder?
    zoken and luprus your synopses are very good you two should work for marvel
     
  12. Zoken

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    Alex Wilder is from the Runaways series
     
  13. 3dman27

    3dman27 super-hero wannabe

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    thanks but why would he be worried about mj?i dont read runaways
    pm me so we don't sidetrack this thread
     
  14. Zoken

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    You should read Runaways, but he wouldn't... well, you'll have to read up on Alex Wilder to find out what the threat there is.
     
  15. Anubis

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    The Defenders Must DIE!!!

    Okay, my Exiles team consist of:

    Blink (team Leader)
    Mimic
    Morph
    Hornet (From Slingers)
    Beak
    Juggernaut (Clarissa Marko)


    This entire reality they visit is protected by the Defenders, a team consisting of the Sentry, Beast, Captain Britain, Dr. Strange, The Marvel (Photon/ the chick not Genis), and She-Hulk. Thanks to a spell by Dr. Strange, the entire universe has been placed in a small snow globe, with the exception of Earth. They did this to protect it from extraterrestrial threats. They aren’t evil, just waaay to focused on protecting humanity. To the point of fascism. The Exiles job is to help a rogue scientist by the name of Jim Jaspers create his secret weapon, The Fury. They succed in activating it, but Jaspers dies in the battle, and doesn't have time to change the Fury's primdirective. Kill all the Superheros? I could see this coming back to haunt them, by way of the Fury following them into a few more realities. Looking to finish the job it started.
     
  16. Zoken

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    as a side game, also Design your own Exile.

    RULES: must be based on Marvel mythos, they cannot be completely original.
    2: if based on a marvel character, they must differ notabley from their 616 counterpart
    3: must explain why they are unhinged... what happened that wasn't supposed to.

    mine...

    Shang-Chi, Phoenix Master.

    Shang Chi trained all his life for excellence. in his universe, the Phoenix force recognized his potential and chose to endow him with awsome power and ferocious being that is the Phoenix.

    Phoenix Master was supposed to be destroyed by his one true love, Jewel (Jessica Jones). instead the Phoenix force was prepared to lash out and destroy her. the timebreakers snatched him just before he could... luckily he left most of the Phoenix Force's Persona's energy behind. he still possess the incredible power of the phoenix, but the Phoenix force struggling to control his mind is now at half strength meaning with strict meditation he can combat it.
     
  17. 3dman27

    3dman27 super-hero wannabe

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    who are the timebreakers?
     
  18. Zoken

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    they are the ones actually pulling the Exiles' strings. the Timebroker was something they made up to appease the Exiles, who are used to humanoids. the Time Breakers are actually more insect like.
     
  19. 3dman27

    3dman27 super-hero wannabe

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    so their kang/immortus wannnabes?
     
  20. Anubis

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    They aren't bad guys, or even rulers of time. They just found this reality watching thing and began studying it. They tried to use it, but they f**ked up and caused a rift in many realities. So they started pulling people from various realities in order to fix their mistake. Kang/Immortus? More like a s**t load of R2D2's and C-3PO's in inscect form.
     
  21. 3dman27

    3dman27 super-hero wannabe

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    or moltarr or tom from toonami
     
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    Let's just say this takes place later on in the series...

    My Exiles:
    Mimic/Calvin Rankin: You already know him.
    Blink/Clarice Ferguson: Same here.
    Morph/Kevin Sydney: Same.
    Archangel/Warren Worthington III: From a reality where after being transformed by Apocalypse, he was forced to kill his fellow X-Men. Afterwards he realizes what he's become and turns on Apocalypse and kills him. A dark, brooding, violent hero.
    Storm/Emma Frost: From a reality where after Storm and Emma Frost's bodies were swapped, Emma's body died in the ensuing battle with Storm in it. With her newfound powers, Emma took complete control of both the Hellfire Club and the X-Men. This Emma is old-school, a sexy, manipulative, dominatrix-*****.
    Doc Ock/Otto Octavius: In his reality, he is one of his world's greatest heroes. Handsome, heroic, humble, and brilliant. A staple of the super-hero community he is good friends with Captain America, Cyclops, Iron Man, Reed Richards, and Spider-Man.
     
  23. The Question

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    anything that pays tribute to alan moore's captain britian is a-okay in my book.
     
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    Molly Hayes
    Codename: Bruiser/Princess Powerful (Depends on her mood)
    Powers: telekinesis that mimics invulnerability and superstrength. in the 616 timeline she doesn't have the ability to keep this state all the time, only when she goes into "combat mode" (Glowing pink eyes, and a pink aura). in this reality she masters her power faster and quickly remains in her powered up state all the time
    Bio: she became unhinged when her psionic ablitities went into serious flux. had she not been removed she would have killed man of her friends and innocent bystanders around her. in her world the Runaways started their run in New York (as opposed to LA) and most the major super-heroing went on in Chicago. she joined up with Power-Pack and was considered, along with the youngest Powers child, to be the "Olsen Twins of Super-heroes"
     
  25. Donnie Darko

    Donnie Darko Forgotten Pre-New 52 Hero

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    ok, my universe isn't very good, but here it is...

    The Brotherhood

    We all know that Magneto and Professor X met many years ago and differed in their views on human-mutant relations. In this universe, they agree, but unfortunately for humans, they both believe in mutant superiority. They join together, waging war on humans and non-mutant heroes. Since this takes place before most of the Marvel heroes came into existence, it was pretty easy for them to conquer North America, then the world. Now, along with their inner circle, "The Brotherhood," they rule over humanity. The Brotherhood, consisting of mutants like Quicksilver, Scarlet Witch, Sebastian Shaw, Sunfire, Exodus, Warren Worthington III, and Mastermind, serves as the regional leaders, presiding of the affairs of the different territories around the world. Doing the dirty work of the mutant rulers is the X-Men, a global army that is led by General Scott Summers and consists of many soldiers, including Nightcrawler, the Blob, Banshee, Colossus, Sabretooth, and many others.
    Standing against these oppressors is a small band of superhuman heroes and renegade mutants... the Avengers. Members include Hawkeye, Spider-Man, Daredevil, Beast, Storm, the Human Torch, Invisible Woman, Havok (always wanting to stand against his evil brother), Hank Pym, and their powerhouse... the Juggernaut, who is bent on killing Xavier.
    When the Exiles arrive, their mission is to assassinate the Brotherhood leaders and find the one man that can lead the attack on Xavier and Magneto's European stronghold.. Captain America.
     

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