Design your own Exiles Universe

Donnie Darko said:
ok, my universe isn't very good, but here it is...

The Brotherhood

We all know that Magneto and Professor X met many years ago and differed in their views on human-mutant relations. In this universe, they agree, but unfortunately for humans, they both believe in mutant superiority. They join together, waging war on humans and non-mutant heroes. Since this takes place before most of the Marvel heroes came into existence, it was pretty easy for them to conquer North America, then the world. Now, along with their inner circle, "The Brotherhood," they rule over humanity. The Brotherhood, consisting of mutants like Quicksilver, Scarlet Witch, Sebastian Shaw, Sunfire, Exodus, Warren Worthington III, and Mastermind, serves as the regional leaders, presiding of the affairs of the different territories around the world. Doing the dirty work of the mutant rulers is the X-Men, a global army that is led by General Scott Summers and consists of many soldiers, including Nightcrawler, the Blob, Banshee, Colossus, Sabretooth, and many others.
Standing against these oppressors is a small band of superhuman heroes and renegade mutants... the Avengers. Members include Hawkeye, Spider-Man, Daredevil, Beast, Storm, the Human Torch, Invisible Woman, Havok (always wanting to stand against his evil brother), Hank Pym, and their powerhouse... the Juggernaut, who is bent on killing Xavier.
When the Exiles arrive, their mission is to assassinate the Brotherhood leaders and find the one man that can lead the attack on Xavier and Magneto's European stronghold.. Captain America.


awsome, but where's wolverine?
 
that's the one I really can't decide... years ago, I had this whole universe laid out, and I think I might have actually had the whole Team-X group still together doing black ops for the human resistance, but I don't remember.
 
heres one
the avengers were formed by a fantastic four x-men merger under court order and boy do THEY need govt. interferrence the merger seemed a good idea at the time but with the constant argueing between cyclops and reed over authority[ reed is in charge of the team while cyke is refusing for some reason to recognize a human as his superior,]this is where the exiles come in reed asks them if they can mediate which they do gladly but what nobody knows is that the feds want to use the avengers disharmony as an excuse to violate the civil rights of super beings and ENSLAVE THEM

is"fantastic four x-men merger under court order the right term or should i have written"formed under court order by a fantastic four x-men merger"
 
the frozen body of captain america is found not by the avengers but the fantastic four can the exiles help the ff to get cap adjusted to his brave new world or will his 1940's mindset as well as a military investigation into buckys death get cap in trouble with both military AND civilian authorities
 
3dman27 said:
who's alex wilder?
zoken and luprus your synopses are very good you two should work for marvel

thanks for the compliment.
 
My Exiles:
Mimic/Calvin Rankin: You already know him.
Blink/Clarice Ferguson: Same here.
Morph/Kevin Sydney: Same.
Archangel/Warren Worthington III: From a reality where after being transformed by Apocalypse, he was forced to kill his fellow X-Men. Afterwards he realizes what he's become and turns on Apocalypse and kills him. A dark, brooding, violent hero.
Storm/Emma Frost: From a reality where after Storm and Emma Frost's bodies were swapped, Emma's body died in the ensuing battle with Storm in it. With her newfound powers, Emma took complete control of both the Hellfire Club and the X-Men. This Emma is old-school, a sexy, manipulative, dominatrix-*****.
Doc Ock/Otto Octavius: In his reality, he is one of his world's greatest heroes. Handsome, heroic, humble, and brilliant. A staple of the super-hero community he is good friends with Captain America, Cyclops, Iron Man, Reed Richards, and Spider-Man.

The Story:

ADVENTURES IN SPACE

The Exiles are sent to a reality where the Shi'Ar have added the Milky Way Galaxy to their already vast empire. The unstable D'Ken rules along with his multiple wives Catherine Summers, Carrol Danvers, and Hepzibah. The Avians, an assembly of D'Ken's most trusted advisors and warriors, consists of Lilandra, Deathbird, Cerise, Deathcry, Eric the Red, Araki, Lord Samedar, and Gladiator. Each member, with the exception of Gladiator, governs a particular branch of the Empire. Gladiator, being a non-Shi'ar does not have the right to govern, however due to his extrordinary valour and prowess he is Praetor of the Imperial Guard. The Imperial Guard is an army consisting of nearly every superpowered denizen of the empire.
The Exiles arrive on Earth, which serves as the capital of the Milky Way System under Lilandra's rule. They are quickly met by an Imperial Guard Detatchment consisting of Hussar, Delphos, Webwing, Aurora, Bansee, and the Thing. The Exiles put up a good fight but are defeated soon enough. Chained up and de-powered, the group is to be deported to Chandilar, the homeworld of the Shi'Ar Empire. Along with them in the ship's prison quarters, the Exiles are astonished to find a Brood-infected Charles Xavier. Before succumbing to the monster, Xavier reveals that he led a band of rebels against the Empire...the X-Men. He also tells them that the Brood are no longer a viable threat, but have been conquered and simply serve as a means of torture for the Shi'ar. After transforming, the Xavier-Brood is both powerless due to an inhibitor and immobile because of his paralysis. It is then that the Tallus reveals their mission, possibly their most daunting and horrible mission yet...The Empire must be infested and destroyed by the Brood.
 
twisted and angsty, considering Mimic was not that long ago infested by the Brood.
 
lupus27 said:
awsome, but where's wolverine?
his mutant healing powers were latent in this universe i think so he only had a normal lifespan
he isprobaly dead by the time of caps reawakening :hyper:
 
the war between the universe ruled by amazonian women,super men and dark knights ad the universe overun by mutants,super soilders and living weapons continued of and on since thier first meeting,the victors excepted many rematchesthis of course turing the marvel universe into a virtual battle ground after the villains were wiped from the planet by the heros in a tie of truce) after defeating thier apprent signifigant other,but as time went on,challenges became uneven,infact som where downright crazy,after silver surfers voctory over green lantern,many other GL corps decided to take him on,as each fell,galactus took notice and decided to give one of them (kilowog) a boost,hoping to wipe surfer off the face of the planet,After being charged by galactus,he went stright for surfer only to find that he was still out matched by the one who has just killed him,super man.Since the rules set fourth said that no inter universe matches could take place the two made a wager on the marvel universe most formidable competitor,the hulk,who was enraged after beating the life out of the atom(who thought after being trained by zantana could magically take out the hulks mind at a cellular level by takign out his psyce with it)byexposing himsef to a near fatal posion treatment that he almost lost his healing factor to.the flash(who had taken out every super speeder in the marvel universe after some hard psyical training from batman snd haveing recently beat war machine by back tracking his missles and vibrating himself through his armor before impact)by thunder clapping his body into a "cell shock" when he tried phasing through the hulks fist and taking out plastic man after he forced himsef into the body of mr fantastic,thus streching him to far and riping him apart) by digesting him and melting him in his gastric acid which was coverd in a titanum hard gut.Super man had decided to take on lesser opponents who were arogant enough to challenge him,wolvering after he killed batman and nightwing,as well as arsenal in a mistake strike which since arsenal was aiding nightwing was not a violation of the rules,but enough to cause super man to super heat wolverines skeleton until his skin ashed away in the wind,at the tie wolverine was so berserk that hed take on anyone.Kilowog was one of the last gl coprs to try and take on silver surfer and was called by galactus who was dieing and wanted to see his quest to kill the surfer completed.kilowog was the first to go,he surrounded hulk in a barrier stronger then any we had ever seen,hulk pounded as hard as he could but instead of it breraking,the shock waves(kilowogs ring usally repelled the but with his new power it wsnt as easy and with hulks strenth at a level that not even the watchers could measure,they got thorugh) began breakign apart the planet,volcanos began to erupt,in an accident,storm who had finally taken out wonder women by freeze shocking her,was killed while taking on wonder girl,who had taken all of wonder womans gadgets,although wonder girl survived,she was unable to fight anymore and allowed herself to die.Kilawog knew that he had to finish the challnge after excepting it and released hulk just as a title wave smacked into what ws chicago.If the battle ground was destroyed,no one would win and many would die.He began to use his new strenth,which was enough to phase the hulk if it was a direct hit,but kilowog was being beatin to a pulp,he gained the ability of forsight by galactus and began to dodge the attacks until hulk landed a head shot and and knocked his memorys away,then as kilowog blasted a hole in hulks chest with his ring,his head was knocked away from his body by a hulk whos power had increasd so much his body heat was melting the earth beneath him away,his sweat was boiling water that instead of faling away evaporated.before charles xavier died from stress brough on by attcks from a wounded dr fate and zantanna he unlocked and settled hulks mind so even at such and enraged state the hulk could relize he wasnt challenged yet,he looked to super man who hooverd in the sky,his powers had also increased,the atom devised a way to turn krytonite in a sort of anti venom,thus immuning him to it,this after he killed captain america and most of the avengers,those left behind,tygra for instance was killed by green arrow and the falcon taking down by black canary who also perished since he grabed her foot before falling from the building,she had severd his wings after cathing his feet with a bolo.the avenger were takign on many times,killing most of the teen titans,beast boy was killed by scarlet witch whos powers were exausted after a battle with zantana,after she tricked him into becoming a mouse,she then steped on his tail and crushed his head.Kid flash was takin out by hawkeye,who had lost an arm and had to use huntresses cross boy,the one who took his arm.Because super mans kryptonite weakness was gone his powers increased,it was found out that if any was on the same planet as he was,he would be weakend.He gazed at the hulk,as he slowly burned a hole into the ground,then decided to call for a deal.THe planet was destoryed,the DCU had lost its most powerfull soilders and Dr was still alive somwhere,he had gone into hiding to try and find a way to fix what was going on,the beast and many young x-men who survived booster gold and the martain man hunters attack,booster gatherd up many of the weapons lost in battles and drivin by insecurty,adapted it to his own,using cyborgs dieing body,he had been ravaged by the ff after upgrading using iron mans last suit of armor,tony was still alive but cybor wasnt going to make it.the martian hunter was able to take on many of the students,killing over 120 that came to the mansions defense.THey did this knowing humanity wasnt thier only enemy.He offerd the DCU,he knew that with rouge(who had taken power girls life and many others) help he could help DR stragne fuse them togeather,the hulk wasnt satified but agreed knowing a world for the rest of the heros and his new love(invisible girl,who became fond of him after he avenged mr fantastic) knwogin he didnt want to lose another and some day have a family and peace,he called upon strange who had transported he and the rest of the survivors into the ind of the hulk,and they worked towards fusing the universes,the DCU was untouhed as it blended well with marvels desolant land,the last heros,beast,dr strange,invisible women,super man,rouge,a few young mutants and the hulk formed the survivors,they were needed after the villains returned,and after seeing what happend and seeing the new and inproved adversarys slowly were killed or rounded up,thier wasnt much left for morality after what had happend and no one was beyond killing,the world they live in now is peacefull,somtimes facing alien threats but always over coming,since that time,super man has lost his new found powers and baner is not able to change into hulk without rocking the planet but all is well,the son of sue and bruce,todd,whos powers emerged in the form of flash personality and super strenth(he can keep changin into differnt versions of himself,eac exsisting at certain points in his life,his imagination spawned them each time he had a good or powerful memory,when they leave he doesnt remember them) joined the exiles and is with them to this day. Sorry for spelling,my key boards wacky right now.The rules to the war was if you were challenged and excepted,you had to finish,if you had help you were killed but there were times like with wolverine it didnt matter,he killed them both.those who were takin out by the rules were the thing,after trying to save the human torch from fire storm,who died after colliding with thing as he stood over jhonnys dieing body.Franklin didnt exsist in this universe by the way.The other rule breakers were hawkman,who tried to take out the falcon in a drunken stuper after thor turned down his challenge,thor left the planet.relizing he had things to take care of in asgard,because of this he was killed,he had agreed to fight,he then forfit and died.
 
would you mind editing and punctuatint this post a bit more ang hulk?
 
Yeah,I know Its really bad,I spilled pop on the key board so I dont know if I could do much beter,I cant get the kys to work all the time.
 
I'd create an exiles universe where Reed Richards didn't exist. Thus the exiles would actually have to complete a task without his help (or him being massively instrumental) to move on.


Or perhaps a universe where Richards stayed to help Victor with his machine and when it blew up they both became Dooms and take over the world.

Meh, that sounded really good in my head - at work at the mo and can't elaborate.
 
Shades of gray

After loosing yet another member they gain another new member, this one Shang-Chi; Phoenix Master. in this new universe there are no heroes. not that the ones we know don't exist, but everyone is out for themself. Black Panther, Black Bolt, Dr. Doom, Captain America, and the Red Skull are the last few people left vying for world domination. the best choice, not at all a good choice but the best, is Dr. Victor Von Doom. the mutants are almost extinct from the civil war that has raged for twenty years between the two would be leaders; Xavier and Magneto.

The Exiles' mission is to assisnate the world's largest threat to Victor Von Doom; Iron Man, Captain America's personal bodyguard. but they are being backed up by Von Doom's elite Guard; Ben and Sue Grimm, Mr. Fantastic and the Invisible, Jonny Storm, Pyro, and Doom's best friend, Reed Richards, The Elastic Thing. the guards they have to fight against; Spider-Man, Luke Cage, Scott Summers: the Black Widower (world's greatest black ops agent), and Alex Summers (X-Man; the last mutant, a misnomer), Juggarnaut, Rhino, Electro, and leading this ragtag team, the teenage prodigies Beak and Wilder.

The twist? Doom knows he has a mole in his operation, but he doesn't realize its the last person he expected. the Exile's hit list grows to include Reed Richards. Not to mention that this Alex Wilder seems to know quite a bit about the Exiles... almost as if he were one of there own.
 
The Exiles

Blink
Mimic
Morph
Beak
Phoenix Master
Bruiser
Sabertooth

The universe: In this Universe Captain America was not lost in WWII, he was brough home, only to be met with suspicion. post-Traumatic Stress syndrome, induced by watching the death of his only friend, Bucky, drove him to a psychotic break. he charasmatically rallied his allies from the War, Namor and the Original Human-Torch, and swept through america in a month. by the end he was "The People's Soverign" he formed the Avengers, his super soldier brigade. most super's joined him.

Now the last hero left int he world has rallied most of Europe and Russia into one world power; their leader and last hope: Dr. Doom. he is a gentler man with a kind soul, but still a swift and decisive leader. all in all, he reflects 616 captain America. he wears the Iron Mask only for his subjects benifit. when he meditates each evening he removes it to remind himself of the fooliish mistake he made in his youth.

the Mission: there is a third force, preparing to rear its head. the Tallus calls them the Brood, though they are not the aliens that the Exiles have encountered before. all the Tallus says is that they are mutants, and can quickly over take the population through numbers. they have short maturation cycles (conception to maturity in a year and a half) and that any mutant, meta-human, or human they mate with will have five children, all brood and all genetically subservient to "the Father". the Exiles must destory the current five brood before the reproduce, and then destory the Father, and his mate before they produce more offspring.

The twists: Doom in forms them that the day they arrived, Captain America employed a new advisor, a teen calling himself "Wilder". two: they find the Father's mate, Angel... Beak's angel. the "Brood" are his and Angel's children from this reality. The Beak of this reality is more aggressive and dominating than the sweet and good natured 616 Beak. Molly, who is devloping feelings for Beak, has a hard time not crushing Angel's windpipe when she grabs her.

oh, and each of the five children have an extra power allong with thier acid vomit and wings and a good portion of super strength
 
cap as a super villian thats a switch
no sarcasim intended
 
Reward

Exiles:
Beak
Morph
Bruiser
Phoenix Master

Transitionals
Blink
Mimic
Jubilee
Spider-Girl

Plot
The Exiles are brought back to earth prime, our earth, Beak's earth. the only catch is that Beak is not allowed to fully form on this earth. Only other Exiles, former and current, can see and hear him. The Time Breakers inform the Exiles that for their extended service and valiant behavior, Blink and Mimic are being released to Earth Prime together. the new bearer of the Tallus is... Beak. They also recieve two new Exiles to replace those going.

Jubilee: this young girl comes from a reality where she was found younger and taken in more by Gambit than by Wolverine. her feelings though, for Gambit were strongly romantic. when she was fourteen he broke her heart by marrying Captain Britain, Betsy Braddock. her anger and sadness drove her to not become the bubbly firecracker we know, but a dark and brooding girl. her dresses in black hues, and wears dark make-up. she also seemed to be able to teleport, though it is an ornate process, not useful in combat. she became unhinged in time because in her corrupted timeline, she was also raped by Jaime Braddock, and commited suicide not long after.

Spider-Girl- not the MC2 version, or the one they've encoutered before. while she is the daughter of Peter Parker and Mary-Jane Watson-Parker, she takes after he father more in the social department. she is veryfriendly and quite glib in battle. she has all the powers and abilites of Spider-man. she became Unhinged in time because in her corrupted timeline she and the Tom-Cat (the love of her life, Peter Hardy the illigitimate son of Felicia Hardy) killed each other.

while here on earth Prime, they are allowed to visit. Morph and Phoenix go to NYC to visit Peter and Mary-Jane because May (Spider-Girl) just has to meet them.

Bruiser goes with Beak to see his family. this is difficult because though Bruiser is arguable Beak's best friend, she also is head over heals in love with him. so her being the medium through which he gets to speak to Angel is hard for her.

The Jubilees are amazed at how different they are from each other, and Jubilee (goth) hits on Gambit, getting her into a fight with Rogue.

While there though Wilder, now revealed to be the 616 Alex Wilder somehow following them from reality to reality, makes a deal with Mystique. she steals two things with Alex's information. one thing for herself, the other for Alex. his true mission is now revealed. on each reality he visits, he aqquires something. so far he has been given the Super-Soldier formula, and has possesion of the Soul Sword.
 
I miss the Jubilee of old, the one who tagged along with Wolverine in the early 90's. Now, what the hell is she? Is she straight or gay? Hell, they don't make her seem much more than a cheap fireworks display nowdays. (Hey, we haven't even seen the little blonde haired girl who was in the earlier Wolverine comics. Never could figure her out.)


Phaed
 
A Sad Saga of a Series of Substandard Spiders

this is actually somewhere between a spin-off (no pun intended) and a tie-in.

Spider-Man is Killed! at least thats what Jameson tells the public. the fact of the matter is that he was blasted into another universe... but no one can figure out just which one. The Exiles cross over as the Time Breakers make their presense known to certain persons, Cap, Tony, MJ, to explain what has happened. while they cannot find him right away, his exit from the 616 universe was far too chaotic, they have determined that if there is no hero to fill his gap, a hero somehow connected to either Spider-man or Peter Parker, then there are terrible consequences. thus they begin to borrow heroes from other realities to fill the gap until the one and Only Spider-Man can return.

Some of the Temps include
Monarch, from a reality where Peter is ruler of most of earth.
Super-Spider, who utilizes the guantlets of Shocker, the arms of Doc. Ock, and the illusions of Mysterio
Titan- the son of Spider-Man and the Black Cat
Spidey- the son of Ben Parker and May Parker
and many more
 
The Terrifying Task of Taking-in a Teenager

Sequal to Sad Saga of a Series of Substandard Spiders, again an Exiles tie-in.

Well the saga couldn't last forever. eventually the Time-breakers have to find the one and only original 616 Spider-Man. and when they do, a whole new can of worms is opened. for starters, Peter Returns facing away from the others on his knees. when they rush to greet him, he shushes them, admonishing that they will wake 'her'

The 'her' in question is a 13 year old girl in Peter's arms. she has Peter's eyes, MJ's face, and Peter's hair. look out, here comes the Spider-Girl. yes its Mayday Parker on the scene. this one is from the world Peter has been stuck on for however long the Sad Saga ran. on this world, shortly after before he arrived, all Super-Humans were ordered to be executed. Peter, luckily, blipped into a safe-house run by the Urich's and sponsored by JJJ. there he met his old friend the Human Torch and his god-child, May Parker. This universe's Peter Parker was killed as Spider-Man by a lynch mob while he forced Human-Torch to fly away. Mary-Jane was killed a week afterwards for laying with a "non-human". Luckily May had already been spirited away by a dying Aunt May, into hiding.

Peter was visited on night, long after he arrived, by a time-breaker. they told him of the situation and instructed him on exit procedure, but he refused to leave without May, who had already taken him as her father. the Time Breaker said adjustments had to be made, but said it would be possible later the next day. Peter didn't ask why, but found out when the safe-house was raided by SHEILD agents. Jonny was shot and killed before he could flame on, the other super-humans resisted, but Peter and May blinked out. they allowed May to leave because she was destined to Die in that raid.

Now Peter and Mary-Jane have the child they always wanted, the child they were meant to have. But young May has already started showing signs of Spider-Powers. whats a family to do?
 
again interesting VERY interesting
 
I would do a world where the team is dropped in the middle of Kingdom Come. Take out the DC characters and put in the Squadron Supreme in the appropriate spots.
 
I would do a World where Doom got ahold of the Gems of Cytorak and became the Juggernaut. With that kind of power he would rule the World. The Exiles job is to get the power away from him and to it's rightful owner, Eddie Brock. They team up with other heros of the resistance, consisting of Johnny Storm, Hawkeye, Brock, Spider Woman II, Nick Fury, She-Hulk, and led by T'Challa.
 

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