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whooo that edit was fast and amazing...
Okay, I'm getting started on 19 now.
Okay, I'm getting started on 19 now. 
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whooo that edit was fast and amazing...
Yeah maybe you should... Or should I break out the whip
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I had no idea my character was going to transform into such a big role...thanks guys..I wish I knew flash or something...I would totally make this into an animated series..
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It sort of was a logical brainchild of the tossing of ideas between Jolly and Me... Which really came from my plans for Teddy, and his plans for you... It was interesting indeed... So apparently I'm writing another extra episode before ep 20... so it's now 20, 21, 22, 23, and 24... AH I better silence myself before I say too much
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That was great as always. 
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This latest one is going be cowritten by JJ and Myself... Due to JJ's own personal life and other things that take precedence over this, JJ was only able to get 13 pages done... And due to my very strict ruling on deadlines, I'm taking it and adding in the other 10 pages or so as well as rewriting a lot of the original 13 pages due to the roughness of it all... But needless to say the core ideas and themes of this ep are still up to the usual standard 
It'll be up later today.
It'll be up later today.
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So I ended up co-writing this episode, I got give much thanks to Jolly Johnny for giving me the freedom to do mostly what I wanted to do since it was a lot of fun to write
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INT. HIPPIE HUNTER’S “OFFICE”
The camera spirals down to a dark room, the familiar yet ominous glow of screens fills the room. Plugged in front of the screens sits the masked man, a man of knowledge but of insanity as well.
INT. JESSIE WHITE’S HOUSE
It’s the 60s, a house plaster with pastel colors, funky lights, and even odder chairs. However in the middle lies a man and woman dead in there late thirties, detached police-man stand around as if reporting on a traffic accident. A closet near by is ajar, peering out through them are two eyes, then comes a cough, which disrupts the flow of police work. A police man goes over to examine the closet, he finds a nine-year old boy, trembling, silent, and fearful. Two detectives in the far right of the room who look on with coffee in their hands, obviously in charge of the investigation.
The boy has now begun to cry over his dead parent bodies.
INT. HIPPIE HUNTER’S “OFFICE”
Hippie Hunter sits in front of the monitor room, the screens are affecting him somehow. It is changing his persona and engulfing him into nothingness, however he’s pulled out of his dementia by seeing on one his screens a very pissed off Ballbuster entering his office.
The frame freezes as Ball Buster comes charging forward, his fist about ready to slam into the back of HH.
The reel starts back up again and Ball Buster lunges at Hippie Hunter but he ducks out of the way, and pushes Ballbuster into the wall, BB falls to the ground, Hippie Hunter keeps a reasonable distance back and allows BB to get up.
Ball Buster knees Hippie Hunter in the crotch hard, and Jesse falls over in pain. Michael spits down at his face.
He walks out of the room and out into the pipe-ways, leaving Hippie Hunter alone.
INT. HALLWAY – CONTINUOUS
Max Shreck looks around, his mask blocking his scarred face from the world. He is lost, and all he wants to do is get some followers and start a revolution, he yearns for answers and for a new way out. He is contemplating his own existence when Hippie Hunter comes from behind him and grabs him in a chokehold.
Max Shreck stuggles to get out of Hippie Hunter's grasp, but he cannot.
Hippie Hunter's tone suddenly changes, and he starts to realize that he's seen this same kind of thing before.
Hippie Hunter keeps his grip the same.
Hippie Hunter releases his grip and Lord Renos pukes all over the floor. Hippie Hunter drags Lord Renos down the hall.
INT. HIPPIE HUNTER'S "OFFICE"
Hippie Hunter sits hunched over in his black mask staring at the screens searching for the answer to his question. The Exalted comes, his presence felt, his message of love and peace has been etched in blood in the very fabric of the Hype.
The Exalted appears before Hippie Hunter per usual, no knock or forewarning, he simply is there. Then again such pleasantries would be lost on such calloused souls.
The Exalted is baffled by such insolence to such as the Exalted, Hippie Hunter recognizes the offence he's committed.
Hippie Hunter motions Exalted forward, he pops in a tape, and out of a black screen comes a video.
INT. HYPE HALLWAY
Danger Mouse is on a cell-phone, he seems very anxious, he's standing very close to the wall, in the shade as if not to be seen.
Silence
Jayna is coming down the hall, she's obviously distressed and in search of someone, when she sees Danger Mouse, she immediately grabs him, he drops the phone, in falls down a sewer drain. Danger Mouse pushes her away and drops to the floor.
Danger Mouse grunts and walks away with Jayna chasing after him.
INT. HIPPIE HUNTER'S "OFFICE"
Hippie Hunter sits in his chair as Exalted ponders.
The Exalted leaves Hippie Hunter alone with this screens constantly watching.
Out of the darkness of Hippie Hunter's office comes Lord Renos!
Hippie Hunter lets out a laugh.
Like a little kid, Lord Renos skulks into the darkness, Hippie Hunter turns back to his screen.
Hippie Hunter puts in a tape into his VCR, and on the screen, comes Pira in a hallway and Spork literally coming out of no where into the hallway.
Hippie Hunter takes out his pad and looks down at the last entry, "Startling new discoveries, something big is coming, the only thing I can uncover is the word "TRIAD", I'm on to something big I know, soon I'll be able to leave, only one last piece left." He gets up, locks the door, and yells that he's going out, and leaves.
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Episode 19
A Touch of Hippie
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A Touch of Hippie
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INT. HIPPIE HUNTER’S “OFFICE”
The camera spirals down to a dark room, the familiar yet ominous glow of screens fills the room. Plugged in front of the screens sits the masked man, a man of knowledge but of insanity as well.
HIPPIE HUNTER (V.O.)
It wasn’t always like this, I wasn’t always obsessed. It’s almost as if waking up one morning and going to work, it simply something that became part of me. It’s as if this whole place seemed to have been stricken with a kind of creeping paralysis - and it’s slowly crumbling, and I need to find a way out. No... It wasn’t always like this.
It wasn’t always like this, I wasn’t always obsessed. It’s almost as if waking up one morning and going to work, it simply something that became part of me. It’s as if this whole place seemed to have been stricken with a kind of creeping paralysis - and it’s slowly crumbling, and I need to find a way out. No... It wasn’t always like this.
INT. JESSIE WHITE’S HOUSE
It’s the 60s, a house plaster with pastel colors, funky lights, and even odder chairs. However in the middle lies a man and woman dead in there late thirties, detached police-man stand around as if reporting on a traffic accident. A closet near by is ajar, peering out through them are two eyes, then comes a cough, which disrupts the flow of police work. A police man goes over to examine the closet, he finds a nine-year old boy, trembling, silent, and fearful. Two detectives in the far right of the room who look on with coffee in their hands, obviously in charge of the investigation.
DETECTIVE 1
Looks like those Manson hippie freaks left one unscathed.
DETECTIVE 2
Did they? (Pause) No I’m afraid Jesse White, might suffer the worse fate of all.
Looks like those Manson hippie freaks left one unscathed.
DETECTIVE 2
Did they? (Pause) No I’m afraid Jesse White, might suffer the worse fate of all.
The boy has now begun to cry over his dead parent bodies.
INT. HIPPIE HUNTER’S “OFFICE”
Hippie Hunter sits in front of the monitor room, the screens are affecting him somehow. It is changing his persona and engulfing him into nothingness, however he’s pulled out of his dementia by seeing on one his screens a very pissed off Ballbuster entering his office.
HIPPIE HUNTER (V.O.)
Perhaps I should of been on my guard, however Ballbuster poses little harm, as long as you appease his ego, let him think your scared, he’ll back off.
BALLBUSTER
You ****ing *******
HIPPIE HUNTER
You think I’m scared of you? Why don’t you go cry about your miserable life to someone who cares.
Perhaps I should of been on my guard, however Ballbuster poses little harm, as long as you appease his ego, let him think your scared, he’ll back off.
BALLBUSTER
You ****ing *******
HIPPIE HUNTER
You think I’m scared of you? Why don’t you go cry about your miserable life to someone who cares.
The frame freezes as Ball Buster comes charging forward, his fist about ready to slam into the back of HH.
HIPPIE HUNTER (V.O.)
I can never do things the simple way, can I?
I can never do things the simple way, can I?
The reel starts back up again and Ball Buster lunges at Hippie Hunter but he ducks out of the way, and pushes Ballbuster into the wall, BB falls to the ground, Hippie Hunter keeps a reasonable distance back and allows BB to get up.
HIPPIE HUNTER
What seems to be the problem, Michael?
BALL BUSTER
"What seems to be the problem?" I’ll tell you what the problem is… your pedophile girlfriend just took my kid away from me again, and you know who gave him to her?
HIPPIE HUNTER
Sentinel?
BALL BUSTER
That’s right, and I do believe you talked to him just before it happened.
HIPPIE HUNTER
And what do you want me to do?
BALL BUSTER
Give her a message if you see her, tell her I’m coming, and when I catch up with her... well let say it’s not going to be pretty.
HIPPIE HUNTER
Why would I see her again?
BALL BUSTER
Let see... because she always hangs around this place.
HIPPIE HUNTER (V.O.)
Typical Ballbuster MO, try to scare people into getting what he wants... Still...
HIPPIE HUNTER
Get the hell out of my office...
BALL BUSTER
I want me kid back, and I’m going get him one way or another.
HIPPIE HUNTER
Oh, I’m so afraid.
What seems to be the problem, Michael?
BALL BUSTER
"What seems to be the problem?" I’ll tell you what the problem is… your pedophile girlfriend just took my kid away from me again, and you know who gave him to her?
HIPPIE HUNTER
Sentinel?
BALL BUSTER
That’s right, and I do believe you talked to him just before it happened.
HIPPIE HUNTER
And what do you want me to do?
BALL BUSTER
Give her a message if you see her, tell her I’m coming, and when I catch up with her... well let say it’s not going to be pretty.
HIPPIE HUNTER
Why would I see her again?
BALL BUSTER
Let see... because she always hangs around this place.
HIPPIE HUNTER (V.O.)
Typical Ballbuster MO, try to scare people into getting what he wants... Still...
HIPPIE HUNTER
Get the hell out of my office...
BALL BUSTER
I want me kid back, and I’m going get him one way or another.
HIPPIE HUNTER
Oh, I’m so afraid.
Ball Buster knees Hippie Hunter in the crotch hard, and Jesse falls over in pain. Michael spits down at his face.
BALL BUSTER
You’re pathetic.
You’re pathetic.
He walks out of the room and out into the pipe-ways, leaving Hippie Hunter alone.
HIPPIE HUNTER (V.O.)
How do I get involve with these characters?
How do I get involve with these characters?
INT. HALLWAY – CONTINUOUS
Max Shreck looks around, his mask blocking his scarred face from the world. He is lost, and all he wants to do is get some followers and start a revolution, he yearns for answers and for a new way out. He is contemplating his own existence when Hippie Hunter comes from behind him and grabs him in a chokehold.
HIPPIE HUNTER (V.O.)
Max Shreck was always an over-achiever, he lusted for power, but in the end... it led to his doom and that of others.
HIPPIE HUNTER
You're not going to hurt anyone today, Max.
MAX SCHRECK
…Please…don't kill me…
HIPPIE HUNTER
Come on, Max. Why are you so afraid? You died once.
Max Shreck was always an over-achiever, he lusted for power, but in the end... it led to his doom and that of others.
HIPPIE HUNTER
You're not going to hurt anyone today, Max.
MAX SCHRECK
…Please…don't kill me…
HIPPIE HUNTER
Come on, Max. Why are you so afraid? You died once.
Max Shreck stuggles to get out of Hippie Hunter's grasp, but he cannot.
MAX SHRECK
I don't…I don't know what you're talking about!
HIPPIE HUNTER
Sure you do Maximus. I tell you what, you tell me where you've been this whole time, maybe I'll let you go.
MAX SHRECK
All I remember were some doctors…
I don't…I don't know what you're talking about!
HIPPIE HUNTER
Sure you do Maximus. I tell you what, you tell me where you've been this whole time, maybe I'll let you go.
MAX SHRECK
All I remember were some doctors…
Hippie Hunter's tone suddenly changes, and he starts to realize that he's seen this same kind of thing before.
HIPPIE HUNTER
The doctors, what did they say to you?
MAX SHRECK
I don't remember much about it. One of the doctors, he was on a cell phone talking to somebody. Please stop putting so much pressure on my chest. I feel like I'm going to throw up.
The doctors, what did they say to you?
MAX SHRECK
I don't remember much about it. One of the doctors, he was on a cell phone talking to somebody. Please stop putting so much pressure on my chest. I feel like I'm going to throw up.
Hippie Hunter keeps his grip the same.
HIPPIE HUNTER
Did you catch who he was talking to? On the cell phone, I mean.
MAX SHRECK
All I heard was a name…it was a pretty stupid name too, probably a code name. I don't think anybody would name their kid "Danger Mouse". I mean, come...
HIPPIE HUNTER
Son of a *****.
MAX SHREK
And my name is Lord Renos, not Max Shre ghck-!
Did you catch who he was talking to? On the cell phone, I mean.
MAX SHRECK
All I heard was a name…it was a pretty stupid name too, probably a code name. I don't think anybody would name their kid "Danger Mouse". I mean, come...
HIPPIE HUNTER
Son of a *****.
MAX SHREK
And my name is Lord Renos, not Max Shre ghck-!
Hippie Hunter releases his grip and Lord Renos pukes all over the floor. Hippie Hunter drags Lord Renos down the hall.
INT. HIPPIE HUNTER'S "OFFICE"
Hippie Hunter sits hunched over in his black mask staring at the screens searching for the answer to his question. The Exalted comes, his presence felt, his message of love and peace has been etched in blood in the very fabric of the Hype.
HIPPIE HUNTER (V.O.)
In a place full of looney super-heros, there's only one man to trust, a man full of pomp and grandeur, The Exalted.
In a place full of looney super-heros, there's only one man to trust, a man full of pomp and grandeur, The Exalted.
The Exalted appears before Hippie Hunter per usual, no knock or forewarning, he simply is there. Then again such pleasantries would be lost on such calloused souls.
EXALTED
I seek your consul about Danger Mouse what should be done, Hunter.
HIPPIE HUNTER
Seduce Jayna
I seek your consul about Danger Mouse what should be done, Hunter.
HIPPIE HUNTER
Seduce Jayna
The Exalted is baffled by such insolence to such as the Exalted, Hippie Hunter recognizes the offence he's committed.
HIPPIE HUNTER (CONT'D)
Exalted, have I ever steered you wrong, we have two separate goals, we've never lied about this, you do what's good for you and I do what's good for me, but I've never crossed you.
EXALTED
A rare feat in this damned place.
HIPPIE HUNTER
I need you to trust me, you need to do what I say and I promise you'll be rewarded and done with the danger mouse problem.
EXALTED
Speak and the Exalted will decide whether such an action is prudent.
Exalted, have I ever steered you wrong, we have two separate goals, we've never lied about this, you do what's good for you and I do what's good for me, but I've never crossed you.
EXALTED
A rare feat in this damned place.
HIPPIE HUNTER
I need you to trust me, you need to do what I say and I promise you'll be rewarded and done with the danger mouse problem.
EXALTED
Speak and the Exalted will decide whether such an action is prudent.
Hippie Hunter motions Exalted forward, he pops in a tape, and out of a black screen comes a video.
INT. HYPE HALLWAY
Danger Mouse is on a cell-phone, he seems very anxious, he's standing very close to the wall, in the shade as if not to be seen.
DANGER MOUSE
I told you not to call me at this time.
I told you not to call me at this time.
Silence
DANGER MOUSE (CONT'D)
Fine I'll get it done, I'll kill Hippie Hunter.
Fine I'll get it done, I'll kill Hippie Hunter.
Jayna is coming down the hall, she's obviously distressed and in search of someone, when she sees Danger Mouse, she immediately grabs him, he drops the phone, in falls down a sewer drain. Danger Mouse pushes her away and drops to the floor.
DANGER MOUSE (CONT'D)
DO YOU KNOW WHAT YOU'VE DONE!
JAYNA
I'M SCARED, WHERE WERE YOU!!!
DANGER MOUSE
YOU JUST THREW AWAY OUR TICKET OUT OF HERE!
JAYNA
I'm sorry... I'm sorry!
DO YOU KNOW WHAT YOU'VE DONE!
JAYNA
I'M SCARED, WHERE WERE YOU!!!
DANGER MOUSE
YOU JUST THREW AWAY OUR TICKET OUT OF HERE!
JAYNA
I'm sorry... I'm sorry!
Danger Mouse grunts and walks away with Jayna chasing after him.
JAYNA (CONT'D)
DON'T LEAVE ME ALONE!
DON'T LEAVE ME ALONE!
INT. HIPPIE HUNTER'S "OFFICE"
Hippie Hunter sits in his chair as Exalted ponders.
EXALTED
I understand now your interest in DM, however why must I seduce Jayne, you know I love only one...
HIPPIE HUNTER
Honey Vibe does not exist here, perhaps she never did!
EXALTED
DON'T MENTION HER NAME!
HIPPIE HUNTER
Fine... I need to break DM the only way to do that is to destroy the only thing his hollow life has left, his duty... He does everything to protect Jayne, we need to take that away...
EXALTED
But Jayna loves Danger Mouse
HIPPIE HUNTER
Women care about one thing, security. Provide her that Exalted... And DM will crumble.
EXALTED
Fine... But you are in Exalted Debt's... And thanks for Die Valuectic, I shall take care of him.
I understand now your interest in DM, however why must I seduce Jayne, you know I love only one...
HIPPIE HUNTER
Honey Vibe does not exist here, perhaps she never did!
EXALTED
DON'T MENTION HER NAME!
HIPPIE HUNTER
Fine... I need to break DM the only way to do that is to destroy the only thing his hollow life has left, his duty... He does everything to protect Jayne, we need to take that away...
EXALTED
But Jayna loves Danger Mouse
HIPPIE HUNTER
Women care about one thing, security. Provide her that Exalted... And DM will crumble.
EXALTED
Fine... But you are in Exalted Debt's... And thanks for Die Valuectic, I shall take care of him.
The Exalted leaves Hippie Hunter alone with this screens constantly watching.
HIPPIE HUNTER (V.O.)
Exalted, the only one I can trust since the Ferret died... God how I miss that dirty little rat...
Exalted, the only one I can trust since the Ferret died... God how I miss that dirty little rat...
Out of the darkness of Hippie Hunter's office comes Lord Renos!
LORD RENOS
When are we going take over the hype...
When are we going take over the hype...
Hippie Hunter lets out a laugh.
HIPPIE HUNTER
Max... it's good to see your lust for power still in tact.
LORD RENOS
My name isn't Max Shreck, I told you... it's LORD RENOS!
Max... it's good to see your lust for power still in tact.
LORD RENOS
My name isn't Max Shreck, I told you... it's LORD RENOS!
Like a little kid, Lord Renos skulks into the darkness, Hippie Hunter turns back to his screen.
HIPPIE HUNTER (V.O.)
I picked up Max, he was completely distraught and with a completely new identity... I'm not quite sure what it means, but I keep him pacified by telling him we're biding our time to take over the hype... God... I need to find a baby-sitter for him.
I picked up Max, he was completely distraught and with a completely new identity... I'm not quite sure what it means, but I keep him pacified by telling him we're biding our time to take over the hype... God... I need to find a baby-sitter for him.
Hippie Hunter puts in a tape into his VCR, and on the screen, comes Pira in a hallway and Spork literally coming out of no where into the hallway.
HIPPIE HUNTER (V.O.) (CONT'D)
Where did he come from? Spork, truely is a powerful one, but who is this Teddy he constantly speaks of? And how did he just do this... If I was going to figure out the riddle known as the Hype I'll need to find this Teddy.
Where did he come from? Spork, truely is a powerful one, but who is this Teddy he constantly speaks of? And how did he just do this... If I was going to figure out the riddle known as the Hype I'll need to find this Teddy.
Hippie Hunter takes out his pad and looks down at the last entry, "Startling new discoveries, something big is coming, the only thing I can uncover is the word "TRIAD", I'm on to something big I know, soon I'll be able to leave, only one last piece left." He gets up, locks the door, and yells that he's going out, and leaves.
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INT. HIPPIE HUNTER'S RECORDS ROOM
Hippie Hunter is in a small room filled with filling cabinets and shelves filled with tapes, this is Hippie Hunter's secret records room.
Hippie Hunter takes out a sheet of paper with the following information:
LIST OF PATIENTS IN CELL BLOCK A:
For your consideration:
Kasper Kowalski, Jesse White, Alexandria Ivonavich, and Patrick (last name unknown)
LIST OF PATIENTS IN CELL BLOCK B:
SIGNED, DR. DEW.
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Then a creak is heard at the door, who could it be? No one knows of this place. Hippie Hunter takes out his sword, a head peaks through the door, it's greeted by a sword, luckily, it doesn't slice very deep.
Hippie Hunter lowers his weapon and in comes Chain Reaction and Robin.
Chain Reaction ushers Robin outside, her beauty radiates, Hippie Hunter amidst all his anger, misses caressing her during the twilight hours, in her arms he could forget his obsession. When she steps back in, his mask is off, he only took his mask off for her, he grabs her, she tries to push him away, he forces his deformed face against her, they being to make-out, they fall to the floor, there clothes going everywhere. It fades to black.
INT. EXALTED'S CHAMBERS
Die Valuectic is tied up to a chair in the center of a dark room, he is alone. His skin is pale, he's shivering, wet, and has been starved. The Exalted emerges from the darkness.
Die Valuectic dies of shock, Exalted calls for Danger Mouse, but Jayna comes from the shadows.
Jayna cries in Exalted Robes, Exalted is so wooden, like a rusty robot he tries to hug her, Jayna is too distress to notice his apathy.
INT. OUTSIDE HIPPIE HUNTER'S RECORD'S ROOM
The hallway is empty, nothing but a door in a rather plain hallway. It opens and a disheveled Chain Reaction walks out, she starts to look around, she doesn't know where robin is.
Hippie Hunter comes outside, Chain Reaction grabs him frantically.
INT. MAX SHRECK'S OLD ROOM – NIGHT
Jayna lays on top of the broken down bed while Danger Mouse paces around the room. On the floor a bunch of stuffed animals lie tossed about. She looks at her boyfriend, and she no longer sees the man she once loved. He goes to leave without saying anything.
Danger Mouse grimaces.
Jayna gets up and into his face.
Danger Mouse shrugs, and turns to Jayna, a deep look of hate upon his face.
Danger Mouse walks out the door and shakes his head. Jayne cries in the bed.
INT. HIPPIE HUNTER'S RECORDS ROOM
Hippie Hunter walk toward his Record's room, obviously empty handed. But something's not right, it's too quiet. He runs into the room, it's compeltely ransacked, with everything a mess, obviously someone was looking for something and left in a hurry.
Hippie Hunter runs out of the room.
INT. HIPPIE HUNTER'S "OFFICE"
Hippie Hunter's Office is completely trashed as well, screens broken, files all over the place.
INT. HYPE SEWER SYSTEM
The hype sewer system, another area of the hype not traveled due to the dangers that lurk there. It's a dirty place, filled with rats and other rodents. Danger Mouse searches for the only thing that shows any promise of getting out of this hellhole. Then he hears the phone ringing, down the endless systems of tunnels. He breaks into a dash, running with all his life, through the muck. Till finally he sees it, then he also sees it, THE FERRET, it's BACK! The ferret looks straight at him, as if it's sentient being, then the ferret looks at the cell=phone. Danger Mouse knows what's going down, they both stare at each other one last time, then they break into a mad dash for the cell-phone in between them. Danger Mouse jumps for it but the ferret is too fast for him and grabs it, and scurries away. Danger Mouse runs after it but it's already up the sewer walls and to the surface.
INT. EXALTED'S CHAMBERS
The Exalted sits on his throne alone, contemplating the state of things, reminiscing of his true love, Honey Vibe. When Jayne walks in.
Jayne embraces the Exalted, Danger Mouse walks in drenched in muck. His mouth drops and is thrown into a rage the likes of never seen.
Danger Mouse storms out into the Hype Hallways, completely baffled and angered. Out of no where, appears Hippie Hunter, with a sword, he pushes him to the ground, and puts the blade to Danger Mouse's neck.
Hippie Hunter cold clocks Danger Mouse, he's left unconscious. It cuts to Danger Mouse being left in front of Matt Murdock's base with a note saying that the Exalted and him were finished, and he needs protection.
Hippie Hunter is in a small room filled with filling cabinets and shelves filled with tapes, this is Hippie Hunter's secret records room.
HIPPIE HUNTER (V.O.)
My collective of information, the only place hidden from the hype, how no one's found it but me is anyone's guess, soon I won't need it though, I'm close...
My collective of information, the only place hidden from the hype, how no one's found it but me is anyone's guess, soon I won't need it though, I'm close...
Hippie Hunter takes out a sheet of paper with the following information:
LIST OF PATIENTS IN CELL BLOCK A:
- Alexia Dark
- Jose Mulando
- Maximus Nathaniel Shreck
- Michael Smith, David Johnson
- Liberty Williams
- Billy Scott
- Mehzeb C.
- Dante Hall
- Nick Web
For your consideration:
Kasper Kowalski, Jesse White, Alexandria Ivonavich, and Patrick (last name unknown)
LIST OF PATIENTS IN CELL BLOCK B:
- Theodore Weller
- Matthew Finkel
- Marvin Granger
SIGNED, DR. DEW.
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HIPPIE HUNTER (V.O.)
Long I have suspected that the names we had were simply aliases for our real names that we did not know, some of which connect to our names... Theodore, is a give-away for the one known as Teddy. Now I can guess the second part of the Triad is Matrix, but third... there's no one who's shown themselves... Now for the strange... I have no record, video, otherwise of either the Matrix or Teddy... Do they exist outside the minds of Para and Spork? They have to why would they be on this sheet, if they didn't? I need to figure out the riddle of the Triad, if I wish to escape this place.
Long I have suspected that the names we had were simply aliases for our real names that we did not know, some of which connect to our names... Theodore, is a give-away for the one known as Teddy. Now I can guess the second part of the Triad is Matrix, but third... there's no one who's shown themselves... Now for the strange... I have no record, video, otherwise of either the Matrix or Teddy... Do they exist outside the minds of Para and Spork? They have to why would they be on this sheet, if they didn't? I need to figure out the riddle of the Triad, if I wish to escape this place.
Then a creak is heard at the door, who could it be? No one knows of this place. Hippie Hunter takes out his sword, a head peaks through the door, it's greeted by a sword, luckily, it doesn't slice very deep.
HIPPIE HUNTER (CONT'D)
STATE YOUR BUSINESS!
CHAIN REACTION
IT'S ME!
STATE YOUR BUSINESS!
CHAIN REACTION
IT'S ME!
Hippie Hunter lowers his weapon and in comes Chain Reaction and Robin.
HIPPIE HUNTER (V.O.)
When I said I'm the only one who knew about this place... I lied
HIPPIE HUNTER
What the hell is this? I told you not to come back, and I sure as hell don't want the kid here
CHAIN REACTION
I just want to know where it's safe to hide. I thought you could help.
HIPPIE HUNTER (V.O.)
Women... Leaches... They'll suck you dry even when they don't have to.
HIPPIE HUNTER (CONT'D)
But yet you could have left simply used the monitors in my office, couldn't you of? But no, you decided to find me. To taunt me, no less.
CHAIN REACTION
Don't flatter yourself. I could care less about you now. But I have the sinking suspicion that there's something big going on that you're not telling me about, and Max Shrek pretty much confirmed all of those little warnings floating around in my head.
HIPPIE HUNTER (V.O.)
She has been to my office... the little minx...
HIPPIE HUNTER (CONT'D)
Perhaps... Perhaps Not, put the kid outside.
CHAIN REACTION
Why!
HIPPIE HUNTER (V.O.)
Because I need to know...
HIPPIE HUNTER (CONT'D)
Just do it!
When I said I'm the only one who knew about this place... I lied
HIPPIE HUNTER
What the hell is this? I told you not to come back, and I sure as hell don't want the kid here
CHAIN REACTION
I just want to know where it's safe to hide. I thought you could help.
HIPPIE HUNTER (V.O.)
Women... Leaches... They'll suck you dry even when they don't have to.
HIPPIE HUNTER (CONT'D)
But yet you could have left simply used the monitors in my office, couldn't you of? But no, you decided to find me. To taunt me, no less.
CHAIN REACTION
Don't flatter yourself. I could care less about you now. But I have the sinking suspicion that there's something big going on that you're not telling me about, and Max Shrek pretty much confirmed all of those little warnings floating around in my head.
HIPPIE HUNTER (V.O.)
She has been to my office... the little minx...
HIPPIE HUNTER (CONT'D)
Perhaps... Perhaps Not, put the kid outside.
CHAIN REACTION
Why!
HIPPIE HUNTER (V.O.)
Because I need to know...
HIPPIE HUNTER (CONT'D)
Just do it!
Chain Reaction ushers Robin outside, her beauty radiates, Hippie Hunter amidst all his anger, misses caressing her during the twilight hours, in her arms he could forget his obsession. When she steps back in, his mask is off, he only took his mask off for her, he grabs her, she tries to push him away, he forces his deformed face against her, they being to make-out, they fall to the floor, there clothes going everywhere. It fades to black.
HIPPIE HUNTER (V.O.) (CONT'D)
Yeah, I had slept with her, I'm a man, what do you expect of me, and I just might be in love with this crazy *****, and she's great with kids.
Yeah, I had slept with her, I'm a man, what do you expect of me, and I just might be in love with this crazy *****, and she's great with kids.
INT. EXALTED'S CHAMBERS
Die Valuectic is tied up to a chair in the center of a dark room, he is alone. His skin is pale, he's shivering, wet, and has been starved. The Exalted emerges from the darkness.
THE EXALTED
LOVE AND PEACE, DO YOU FEEL THE LOVE AND PEACE, DIE VALUECTIC!
DIE VALUECTIC
YES... LOVE AND PEACE, I BELIEVE... PLEASE JUST FEED ME!
THE EXALTED
Now tell me everything YOU KNOW!
DIE VALUECTIC
A girl... (gasp)... she... is the key...
THE EXALTED
A GIRL!!! WHAT GIRL!!
DIE VALUECTIC
Quiet... Least Expected... please... food!
THE EXALTED
NOT TILL YOU GIVE ME SOMETHING OF USE!
DIE VALUECTIC
Three Elllddarrs, they cooonnntroolll the hype... The girlll connects to them....
LOVE AND PEACE, DO YOU FEEL THE LOVE AND PEACE, DIE VALUECTIC!
DIE VALUECTIC
YES... LOVE AND PEACE, I BELIEVE... PLEASE JUST FEED ME!
THE EXALTED
Now tell me everything YOU KNOW!
DIE VALUECTIC
A girl... (gasp)... she... is the key...
THE EXALTED
A GIRL!!! WHAT GIRL!!
DIE VALUECTIC
Quiet... Least Expected... please... food!
THE EXALTED
NOT TILL YOU GIVE ME SOMETHING OF USE!
DIE VALUECTIC
Three Elllddarrs, they cooonnntroolll the hype... The girlll connects to them....
Die Valuectic dies of shock, Exalted calls for Danger Mouse, but Jayna comes from the shadows.
JAYNA
You were magnificent... The power you wield...
EXALTED
(Blushing)
Yes... Well... Um... I'm THE EXALTED! WHERE'S DANGER MOUSE!
JAYNA
Searching in the sewers for some useless cellphone.
EXALTED
Hmm... So um... you guys... um... getting along...um good... like?
JAYNA
No... It's terrible... He's not the man I once knew.
You were magnificent... The power you wield...
EXALTED
(Blushing)
Yes... Well... Um... I'm THE EXALTED! WHERE'S DANGER MOUSE!
JAYNA
Searching in the sewers for some useless cellphone.
EXALTED
Hmm... So um... you guys... um... getting along...um good... like?
JAYNA
No... It's terrible... He's not the man I once knew.
Jayna cries in Exalted Robes, Exalted is so wooden, like a rusty robot he tries to hug her, Jayna is too distress to notice his apathy.
INT. OUTSIDE HIPPIE HUNTER'S RECORD'S ROOM
The hallway is empty, nothing but a door in a rather plain hallway. It opens and a disheveled Chain Reaction walks out, she starts to look around, she doesn't know where robin is.
CHAIN REACTION
ROBIN! ROBIN! ROBIN! WHERE ARE YOU!
ROBIN! ROBIN! ROBIN! WHERE ARE YOU!
Hippie Hunter comes outside, Chain Reaction grabs him frantically.
HIPPIE HUNTER
I'm sure he's around, we'll find him!
CHAIN REACTION
What if Ball Buster has him!
HIPPIE HUNTER (V.O.)
The strange what-if question, I have become involved with Chain Reaction once again, someone's got look out for her, she got a crazy guy out to kill her... So this is where I opened my big mouth.
HIPPIE HUNTER
I'll find him.
CHAIN REACTION
Thank You! I'll wait here, in case he comes back.
I'm sure he's around, we'll find him!
CHAIN REACTION
What if Ball Buster has him!
HIPPIE HUNTER (V.O.)
The strange what-if question, I have become involved with Chain Reaction once again, someone's got look out for her, she got a crazy guy out to kill her... So this is where I opened my big mouth.
HIPPIE HUNTER
I'll find him.
CHAIN REACTION
Thank You! I'll wait here, in case he comes back.
INT. MAX SHRECK'S OLD ROOM – NIGHT
Jayna lays on top of the broken down bed while Danger Mouse paces around the room. On the floor a bunch of stuffed animals lie tossed about. She looks at her boyfriend, and she no longer sees the man she once loved. He goes to leave without saying anything.
JAYNA
Where are you going?
DANGER MOUSE
Out.
JAYNA
Where?
Where are you going?
DANGER MOUSE
Out.
JAYNA
Where?
Danger Mouse grimaces.
DANGER MOUSE
Let's not go through this again, Jayna…
JAYNA
No, I want to. Where have you been going all this time?
DANGER MOUSE
Look, there's just some stuff I have to take care of. I've explained that to you already.
Let's not go through this again, Jayna…
JAYNA
No, I want to. Where have you been going all this time?
DANGER MOUSE
Look, there's just some stuff I have to take care of. I've explained that to you already.
Jayna gets up and into his face.
JAYNA
What about Sentinel? I'm worried about what happened to him.
DANGER MOUSE
I took care of it. Why do you even care about him anyway?
JAYNA
Because he helped it. And how did you manage to take care of it, by the way.
DANGER MOUSE
He needed a safe place to go and I showed him one.
JAYNA
Really? Or did you just knock out and leave him in some hallway?
What about Sentinel? I'm worried about what happened to him.
DANGER MOUSE
I took care of it. Why do you even care about him anyway?
JAYNA
Because he helped it. And how did you manage to take care of it, by the way.
DANGER MOUSE
He needed a safe place to go and I showed him one.
JAYNA
Really? Or did you just knock out and leave him in some hallway?
Danger Mouse shrugs, and turns to Jayna, a deep look of hate upon his face.
DANGER MOUSE
Look why do you care, your job is to comfort me, and I take care of you... So why don't you do your job and let me do MINE!
Look why do you care, your job is to comfort me, and I take care of you... So why don't you do your job and let me do MINE!
Danger Mouse walks out the door and shakes his head. Jayne cries in the bed.
INT. HIPPIE HUNTER'S RECORDS ROOM
Hippie Hunter walk toward his Record's room, obviously empty handed. But something's not right, it's too quiet. He runs into the room, it's compeltely ransacked, with everything a mess, obviously someone was looking for something and left in a hurry.
HIPPIE HUNTER (V.O.)
That *****, I'd been had, it was all a ruse to get me out of my record's room... Crap!
That *****, I'd been had, it was all a ruse to get me out of my record's room... Crap!
Hippie Hunter runs out of the room.
INT. HIPPIE HUNTER'S "OFFICE"
Hippie Hunter's Office is completely trashed as well, screens broken, files all over the place.
HIPPIE HUNTER (V.O.)
Just as I expected, she trashed my office too so I couldn't find her, she probably on the other side of the hype by now. Well serves me right, I hope whatever information she gleaned was worth it, that girl is on her now!
Hippie Hunter checks the other room, Lord Renos is gone.
HIPPIE HUNTER
Aw crap... I got go see the Exalted...
Just as I expected, she trashed my office too so I couldn't find her, she probably on the other side of the hype by now. Well serves me right, I hope whatever information she gleaned was worth it, that girl is on her now!
Hippie Hunter checks the other room, Lord Renos is gone.
HIPPIE HUNTER
Aw crap... I got go see the Exalted...
INT. HYPE SEWER SYSTEM
The hype sewer system, another area of the hype not traveled due to the dangers that lurk there. It's a dirty place, filled with rats and other rodents. Danger Mouse searches for the only thing that shows any promise of getting out of this hellhole. Then he hears the phone ringing, down the endless systems of tunnels. He breaks into a dash, running with all his life, through the muck. Till finally he sees it, then he also sees it, THE FERRET, it's BACK! The ferret looks straight at him, as if it's sentient being, then the ferret looks at the cell=phone. Danger Mouse knows what's going down, they both stare at each other one last time, then they break into a mad dash for the cell-phone in between them. Danger Mouse jumps for it but the ferret is too fast for him and grabs it, and scurries away. Danger Mouse runs after it but it's already up the sewer walls and to the surface.
DANGER MOUSE
****... I'm never going leave this place.
****... I'm never going leave this place.
INT. EXALTED'S CHAMBERS
The Exalted sits on his throne alone, contemplating the state of things, reminiscing of his true love, Honey Vibe. When Jayne walks in.
THE EXALTED
Hello, Jayna
JAYNE
Would you protect me if I left him.
THE EXALTED
The EXALTED PROTECTS ALL THOSE WHO BELIEVE IN LOVE AND PEACE!
Hello, Jayna
JAYNE
Would you protect me if I left him.
THE EXALTED
The EXALTED PROTECTS ALL THOSE WHO BELIEVE IN LOVE AND PEACE!
Jayne embraces the Exalted, Danger Mouse walks in drenched in muck. His mouth drops and is thrown into a rage the likes of never seen.
DANGER MOUSE
YOU ****! YOU WANT TO LEAVE ME! WHO DO YOU THINK HAS PROTECTED YOU!
JAYNE
YOU DON'T OWN ME!
DANGER MOUSE
OBVIOUSLY NOT! EXALTED WE'RE THROUGH!
YOU ****! YOU WANT TO LEAVE ME! WHO DO YOU THINK HAS PROTECTED YOU!
JAYNE
YOU DON'T OWN ME!
DANGER MOUSE
OBVIOUSLY NOT! EXALTED WE'RE THROUGH!
Danger Mouse storms out into the Hype Hallways, completely baffled and angered. Out of no where, appears Hippie Hunter, with a sword, he pushes him to the ground, and puts the blade to Danger Mouse's neck.
HIPPIE HUNTER (V.O.)
Originally I had a hold cat and mouse game planned, but I've had a hard day and I'm going get some answers NOW!
HIPPIE HUNTER
TELL ME WHAT YOU KNOW OR I EMPTY YOUR JUGULAR ACROSS THE FLOOR!
DANGER MOUSE
Do it I have nothing to live for, now that she's gone!
HIPPIE HUNTER
God... He had to turn EMO on me!
DANGER MOUSE
I'm not emo!
HIPPIE HUNTER
You going cry about it? Grow a set, now tell me about the doctors!
DANGER MOUSE
What doctors?
HIPPIE HUNTER
I know about the doctors, and how about this hot shot, I'm in league with the Exalted so I'll have him kill Jayne, the same Jayne that so woefully infatuated with him now.
DANGER MOUSE
NOO!!!
HIPPIE HUNTER (V.O.)
God... Us men are ******ed, women give us the complete ringaround and yet we're still willing to jump for them.
HIPPIE HUNTER (CONT'D)
THEN TELL ME WHAT I WANT KNOW!
DANGER MOUSE
Fine... One day I found a cell-phone, it was a doctor, her name was Dew... She said that soon a triad would come!
HIPPIE HUNTER
Teddy and Matrix right!
DANGER MOUSE
No... She said a Clown, a Guru, and a Clerk. They will come and bring the end of all here, and if I wanted out... I'd kill you!
HIPPIE HUNTER
WHY?!
DANGER MOUSE
You know too much!
Originally I had a hold cat and mouse game planned, but I've had a hard day and I'm going get some answers NOW!
HIPPIE HUNTER
TELL ME WHAT YOU KNOW OR I EMPTY YOUR JUGULAR ACROSS THE FLOOR!
DANGER MOUSE
Do it I have nothing to live for, now that she's gone!
HIPPIE HUNTER
God... He had to turn EMO on me!
DANGER MOUSE
I'm not emo!
HIPPIE HUNTER
You going cry about it? Grow a set, now tell me about the doctors!
DANGER MOUSE
What doctors?
HIPPIE HUNTER
I know about the doctors, and how about this hot shot, I'm in league with the Exalted so I'll have him kill Jayne, the same Jayne that so woefully infatuated with him now.
DANGER MOUSE
NOO!!!
HIPPIE HUNTER (V.O.)
God... Us men are ******ed, women give us the complete ringaround and yet we're still willing to jump for them.
HIPPIE HUNTER (CONT'D)
THEN TELL ME WHAT I WANT KNOW!
DANGER MOUSE
Fine... One day I found a cell-phone, it was a doctor, her name was Dew... She said that soon a triad would come!
HIPPIE HUNTER
Teddy and Matrix right!
DANGER MOUSE
No... She said a Clown, a Guru, and a Clerk. They will come and bring the end of all here, and if I wanted out... I'd kill you!
HIPPIE HUNTER
WHY?!
DANGER MOUSE
You know too much!
Hippie Hunter cold clocks Danger Mouse, he's left unconscious. It cuts to Danger Mouse being left in front of Matt Murdock's base with a note saying that the Exalted and him were finished, and he needs protection.
HIPPIE HUNTER (V.O.)
I couldn't simply leave him there for the wolves, and I know the two might say they hate each other, but like all men, there just being proud... Danger is finally where he belongs... Now I need to talk to the Exalted.
I couldn't simply leave him there for the wolves, and I know the two might say they hate each other, but like all men, there just being proud... Danger is finally where he belongs... Now I need to talk to the Exalted.
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INT. THE EXALTED'S CHAMBERS
The Exalted's Chambers are empty again except for the Exalted, Hippie Hunter makes his final entrance here.
Hippie Hunter leaves the Exalted to ponder.
INT. PIRA'S HANGOUT
Pira and Spork are outside the door leading to her residence, where the almighty Matrix also resides.
Spork and Pira look at each other, Spork slumps up against the wall Pira enters her humble abode. It's quiet, too quiet, all of sudden Hippie's Blade silently makes it's way to Pira's neck.
Hippie sheathes his sword and goes to walk out.
When Hippie Hunter walks out, Matrix appears to Pira, a older bad-ass looking black man with an eyepatch.
INT. HIPPIE HUNTER'S DESTROYED "OFFICE"
Hippie Hunter sits amidst the wreck that was once his office, completely baffled.
With that he hears a familiar sound, the scratching of feet crawling on the floor, then he sees it, the only thing he truely trusts in this place, the ferret with a cell-phone in it's mouth.
The ferret drops it in front of him, the cell-phone rings, Hippie Hunter answers it.
The Exalted's Chambers are empty again except for the Exalted, Hippie Hunter makes his final entrance here.
HIPPIE HUNTER
We need to talk, I have new information.
EXALTED
So do I
HIPPIE HUNTER
I thought you might.
EXALTED
There a quiet girl who apparently is the key to everything, she's connected to three elders.
HIPPIE HUNTER
Pira! And the Matrix... And Teddy with Spork! It makes so much sense, the three elders, however no one's seen Teddy or Matrix...
EXALTED
Interesing, what did you learn from Danger Mouse.
HIPPIE HUNTER
How did you... Whatever. The triad isn't the elders, it's a clown, a clerk, and a guru, whatever that means. They come to exterminate all within the hype, and apparently they want kill me because I know too much.
EXALTED
Interesting...
HIPPIE HUNTER
We still don't know WHY we're here...
EXALTED
There still hope, Agent M-205, is still on the other side of hype.
HIPPIE HUNTER
Agent M-205! You got be kidding me, I figure that bugger died long ago...
EXALTED
No... I don't know when he's returning but... Perhaps he's turned out more than we have.
HIPPIE HUNTER
That's a long shot, Exalted... I'm off to find Pira or Spork, they have to know something! By the way Max Shrek is running around but he's not really Max Shrek but you already know don't you
EXALTED
Good bye, Friend
HIPPIE HUNTER
Good bye
HIPPIE HUNTER (V.O.)
Like I said, Exalted the only one I can trust in this berg.
We need to talk, I have new information.
EXALTED
So do I
HIPPIE HUNTER
I thought you might.
EXALTED
There a quiet girl who apparently is the key to everything, she's connected to three elders.
HIPPIE HUNTER
Pira! And the Matrix... And Teddy with Spork! It makes so much sense, the three elders, however no one's seen Teddy or Matrix...
EXALTED
Interesing, what did you learn from Danger Mouse.
HIPPIE HUNTER
How did you... Whatever. The triad isn't the elders, it's a clown, a clerk, and a guru, whatever that means. They come to exterminate all within the hype, and apparently they want kill me because I know too much.
EXALTED
Interesting...
HIPPIE HUNTER
We still don't know WHY we're here...
EXALTED
There still hope, Agent M-205, is still on the other side of hype.
HIPPIE HUNTER
Agent M-205! You got be kidding me, I figure that bugger died long ago...
EXALTED
No... I don't know when he's returning but... Perhaps he's turned out more than we have.
HIPPIE HUNTER
That's a long shot, Exalted... I'm off to find Pira or Spork, they have to know something! By the way Max Shrek is running around but he's not really Max Shrek but you already know don't you
EXALTED
Good bye, Friend
HIPPIE HUNTER
Good bye
HIPPIE HUNTER (V.O.)
Like I said, Exalted the only one I can trust in this berg.
Hippie Hunter leaves the Exalted to ponder.
INT. PIRA'S HANGOUT
Pira and Spork are outside the door leading to her residence, where the almighty Matrix also resides.
SPORK
Why can't I meet him?
PIRA
Why can't I meet Teddy?
Why can't I meet him?
PIRA
Why can't I meet Teddy?
Spork and Pira look at each other, Spork slumps up against the wall Pira enters her humble abode. It's quiet, too quiet, all of sudden Hippie's Blade silently makes it's way to Pira's neck.
HIPPIE HUNTER
Silent, or it's good night for you.
PIRA
What you want?
HIPPIE HUNTER
I want see the Matrix!
PIRA
You can't?
HIPPIE HUNTER
Why not!
PIRA
Only I can see Matrix!
HIPPIE HUNTER
That's preposterous, WHERE IS HE!
PIRA
Matrix please show yourself!
There's nothing but silence.
HIPPIE HUNTER (V.O.)
Another dead end it seemed, nothing but them all damn day... Now what?
HIPPIE HUNTER
I don't suppose you can shed any light on what's going on?
PIRA
I have no memory of a past self.
HIPPIE HUNTER
What? But everyone has a memory...
PIRA
Well I don't...
HIPPIE HUNTER
Well thanks
Silent, or it's good night for you.
PIRA
What you want?
HIPPIE HUNTER
I want see the Matrix!
PIRA
You can't?
HIPPIE HUNTER
Why not!
PIRA
Only I can see Matrix!
HIPPIE HUNTER
That's preposterous, WHERE IS HE!
PIRA
Matrix please show yourself!
There's nothing but silence.
HIPPIE HUNTER (V.O.)
Another dead end it seemed, nothing but them all damn day... Now what?
HIPPIE HUNTER
I don't suppose you can shed any light on what's going on?
PIRA
I have no memory of a past self.
HIPPIE HUNTER
What? But everyone has a memory...
PIRA
Well I don't...
HIPPIE HUNTER
Well thanks
Hippie sheathes his sword and goes to walk out.
PIRA
You could of just asked?
HIPPIE HUNTER
I find the sword produces better results.
You could of just asked?
HIPPIE HUNTER
I find the sword produces better results.
When Hippie Hunter walks out, Matrix appears to Pira, a older bad-ass looking black man with an eyepatch.
PIRA
I'm sorry, Matrix
MATRIX
It's fine... His end is looming near, I sense.
I'm sorry, Matrix
MATRIX
It's fine... His end is looming near, I sense.
INT. HIPPIE HUNTER'S DESTROYED "OFFICE"
Hippie Hunter sits amidst the wreck that was once his office, completely baffled.
HIPPIE HUNTER
I'm more lost than I was when this day began, I've been hustled by a woman, been jerked around by a guy named Ballbuster, and had a run in with a girl I think is plain crazy... Can I get just one break today!?
I'm more lost than I was when this day began, I've been hustled by a woman, been jerked around by a guy named Ballbuster, and had a run in with a girl I think is plain crazy... Can I get just one break today!?
With that he hears a familiar sound, the scratching of feet crawling on the floor, then he sees it, the only thing he truely trusts in this place, the ferret with a cell-phone in it's mouth.
HIPPIE HUNTER (CONT'D)
YOUR ALIVE! And you brought me.... the cell-phone?
YOUR ALIVE! And you brought me.... the cell-phone?
The ferret drops it in front of him, the cell-phone rings, Hippie Hunter answers it.
HIPPIE HUNTER (CONT'D)
Hello?
Hello?
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Glad you like it... I suggest you tune in next week for the next chapter which provides closure to a lot of the stuff set up in the last two episodes and is the beginning of the end... 
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I've said too much...Glad you like it... I suggest you tune in next week for the next chapter which provides closure to a lot of the stuff set up in the last two episodes and is the beginning of the end...
And I'm editing the next chapter!
I have no plans of rewriting it or spending the next two months doing little edits here and there. But, hey, I'm actually looking forward to doing it.
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And I'm editing the next chapter!
Awesome, and to boot I could have it done by tonight...
Since I wrote it two weeks ago when I asked Jolly if he wanted me to write an episode... And well it needed like 2 episodes to segway into... So what the last two eps have been building up to could be resolved in this episode, but then again it's really just the begining of the finishing arc ! So Soc, you got AIM? E-Mail? How do you want me to send this to you?
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Sup *****es... Anyway... I just finished writing ep 20... Jolly it's about %25-30, like I wrote new scenes for Matt Murdock/Danger Mouse (I don't think I'm spoiling anything considering DM was dropped off at Matt's doorstep last ep), the "confrotation" is much more dramatic since it's been rewritten, well let's just say it's SHOCKING , more exposition, more character development, and things of that nature were thrown in. In end this is a mammoth of an episode since it deals with all the characters in the series and ties it into one storyline FINALLY! Anyway... Socrates, how shall I send this to you? JJ, you want just wait till Socrates is done wiht his edits to read it?
, more exposition, more character development, and things of that nature were thrown in. In end this is a mammoth of an episode since it deals with all the characters in the series and ties it into one storyline FINALLY! Anyway... Socrates, how shall I send this to you? JJ, you want just wait till Socrates is done wiht his edits to read it?
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No I'll take it first. Soccy's busy, he can't get to a computer easily because he has to go to apple store. So yeah, send it my way.Sup *****es... Anyway... I just finished writing ep 20... Jolly it's about %25-30, like I wrote new scenes for Matt Murdock/Danger Mouse (I don't think I'm spoiling anything considering DM was dropped off at Matt's doorstep last ep), the "confrotation" is much more dramatic since it's been rewritten, well let's just say it's SHOCKING
PATRICK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Awesome, and to boot I could have it done by tonight...
Obviously you've already sent it to JJ, but he'll send it to me and I'll post it as soon as I'm finsished, by around Wednesday or Thursday.
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... God damn... Has anyone else read the latest ep besides Hippie
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My computer's been on the fritz the passed week but I read majority of it at school. It was pretty good. I really don't like Hippie Hunter but his pov was pretty interesting. You also made Matrix seem more nicer that JJ and Scorates did, but I'm assuming some of epp was in the past right? Because Spork and Pira came to the conclusion that Matrix was just in her mind, yet later he tries to tell her he did see him...
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