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Here is what I want the end to be like. It's long.
Green Goblin II and Sandman have both been defeated in the past and
decided to team up and take down Spider-Man. Harry has seen Peter and
Gwen hanging out lately and knew she was important to him. He knew
kidnapping her would make him come. He didn’t want to kidnap Mary Jane
because he still liked her.
Peter has just gotten rid of the Symbiote in the church where Eddie
Brock was and the Symbiote went to Eddie. Happy of getting rid of the alien
substance, Peter returns to his Apartment taking off his Spider-Man mask and
notices 2 messages on his machine. He checks the earliest one and it’s Gwen
asking if they could go on a date sometime that week. (Peter had broken up
with Mary Jane) Peter smiles and checks the next one before calling her back
with a “yes“. The next message we hear Gwen in the back round screaming
and yelling “Help!” as Green Goblin II says “You’ve taken my father’s life and
it’s time you’ve realized the pain! His voice gets deeper and more sinister.
“Meet me here at her apartment by 7:29 because her life ends a minute
after…” Goblin chuckles and then the phone clicks. Peter’s smile died when he
had heard the message. He wasn’t going to let somebody else die. The clock
read 7:22. He quickly puts his mask back on. We see the outside sky. Dark,
the sun is setting and there’s a pinkish purple color in the sky along with some
red. Spider-Man swings out the window and swings very fast to her
apartment.
Inside Gwen’s apartment there’s a balcony with two open doors. The
wind is blowing the curtains. We see a close up of Green Goblin’s face looking
down at Gwen who we can see reflecting in his eyes. Gwen is tied up in a
chair with a few bruises and scratch marks on her from trying to get away
from the Goblin. She had fallen into a few things while running earlier. Gwen
asks with a scared deep voice, “Why are you doing this to me?” “Revenge.
It‘s all revenge.” Harry replied. The clock read 7:28 and then Harry slowly
pulled out a sword from his belt. Gwen looks terrified.
Spider-Man came through the open balcony windows and landed on the
floor. “Let her go! You don‘t understand what happened!” (About his father)
he yelled. As Spider-Man said that there was sand pouring through a vent
onto the floor. Spider-Man’s Spider Sense went off but he didn’t move in time
to dodge Sandman’s enlarged arm smacking him out the window through a
skylight of another building. Spider-Man lands on top of a desk crushing it. It
looks like an office building. Sandman pours through the broken sky light and
piles up on the floor making himself. Spider-Man gets up and hits him. His fist
went through Sandman not doing any harm. Sandman fell on top of him as
sand and then his face formed in it. (Like the cover when he first appeared in
a comic) He was weighing Spider-Man down, then Spider-Man rolled out of it
and rolled into a water dispenser. The big jug on top of it hit the floor hard
and exploded. Water went everywhere. Sandman screamed and shielded his
eyes as if he was afraid of it. Spider-Man saw that he didn’t like water.
Before he could do anything else Sandman made his hand into a hammer and
hit Spider-Man out a window and into a construction site.
Spider-Man got up struggling as if something was pushing on his back.
He was just knocked out of a tall building. The ground was dirt and there was
some construction equipment around along with a metal frame building.
Sandman came down from building in sand and blended in with the dirt there.
Green Goblin also arrived on his glider with a cackle. He threw a bomb and it
exploded weakening the steel building frame on the building that was being
built. Spider-Man stood up and shot a web at the frame building taking himself
to it. Then got to the very top by using jumps and webs. He perched at the
top as Green Goblin pulled out a small sword from his belt heading towards
Spider-Man. Spider-Man lunged himself at him in the air and landed with him
on top of his glider. Spider-Man punched Goblin in the face once then Goblin
cut his leg stunning Spider-Man for a second then pushed him off. Spider-Man
shot a web and prevented a very painful fall while hitting the ground. Goblin,
meanwhile, didn’t notice the frame building ahead of him. He tried moving out
of the way but the left end of his glider hit it showering sparks everywhere.
The glider landed hardly on the ground making Goblin fall off onto the ground.
Spider-Man got up and sand started swirling around him. In a annoyed voice
Spider-Man said “Oh crap.” then Sandman hit him to the floor. Sandman was
towering above Spider-Man who was leaning against a pile of dirt. Spider-Man
remembered the water dispenser inside the building and how the water
frightened Sandman. Spider-Man saw a wheel against a wall in the
construction site and looked behind Sandman where he saw a pipe dripping
with water. He knew this was perfect. He shot a web at the wheel then
pulled. Water shot out from the pipe hitting Sandman. Spider-Man got up,
punched Sandman a few times and noticed it was harming him because
Sandman’s expressions looked like he was being hurt. The water shut off
because it was out and needed to be pumped again. Spider-Man’s vision was
a little blurry from the water spraying on his lenses. He did see Sandman
looking almost normal again though, but not enough to fight. Spider-Man was
hit by an unknown figure into a pile of bricks. A black blur lands on the ground
in front of Sandman making a little dust come around it’s feet. We see a close
up of sharp teeth with a tongue come at the screen very fast. Then we see
Venom’s mouth take a big chunk out of Sandman. Sandman looks frightened
at its looks and what it did. He melts to the floor in sand and goes down a
drain. We see who it was. Venom. He looks like the comic version and is
about the same size as Spider-Man but his arms are a little bigger. He has the
evil white eyes and sharp teeth with a long tongue. He looks scary. He saw
Harry over there lying on the floor but didn’t think he would get up. Venom looks
ticked and excited as we hear some bricks hitting the ground. He turns
around to the big pile of bricks where he hit Spider-Man and smiles.
Spider-Man comes up in a hurry making dust fly everywhere. His mask is
ripped off and his head is visible, his costume has some tears in it. He couldn’t
see two feet ahead of him. All of a sudden Venom lunges through the dust
towards the camera with his arms reached out and his teeth and tongue
showing. He tackles Spider-Man and they slide in the ground. Venom is on top
of Spider-Man showing his teeth smiling. He says “Remember us?!” then uses
his claws to dig in to Spider-Man’s stomach. Spider-Man gives a terrifying
scream and we see a painful look on his face. Saliva is dripping on Spider-Man
from Venom’s mouth. Venom is still smiling as he pulls his hand out of his
stomach with blood on it. Spider-Man looks at the face in horror. Venom’s
face pulls back to show Eddie’s. “Eddie?!” Spider-Man asked in surprise. “NO!”
Venom yelled while making the Symbiote come back over his face. He throws
Spider-Man to the ground near the frame building. Venom screamed at him as
he walked towards him. “You ruined my life, took my girlfriend, (Gwen) got me
fired from my job, and took my home away from me!” Venom picks up
Spider-Man with both hands around his neck as he says “But now you’re
gonna’ pay! From now on we are poison to you!” He throws Spider-Man
against the frame building as he says “We are VENOM!”
Venom comes up to Spider-Man who is getting up. He grabs him by the
neck with his left hand and pins him against the wall. He leans his head in six
inches away from Spider-Man’s face. His tongue is close to his face too.
Venom puts his tongue in and snarls. In a really low menacing voice he says
“I wanna’ eat your brains…” Venom punches Spider-Man twice in the face
with his right hand really hard. The blows sound painful. He then shoves his
knee into Spider-Man’s stomach. Venom throws Spider-Man to one of the
lower frames and jumps up on it next to Spider-Man. He kicks Spider-Man’s
face knocking it into the air and punches it while it‘s in the air. A long thin
tentacle comes out of his hand. Venom swings his arm smacking Spider-Man
with it. We see Harry look at the fight and sees that Venom is doing this to
his best friend. Harry realizes that he himself has been wrong doing this the
whole time. Harry decides to help his friend. Spider-Man tries to hit Venom
but Venom catches his fist then twists it making a cracking noise. Spider-Man
screams. His wrist is hurt, not broken. Venom holds his fist in the air about
to do the finishing blow, he snarls then says, “Burn in Hell.” Venom’s fist flies
towards Spider-Man’s gut but Harry comes between Spider-Man and Venom
taking the blow. Venom’s arm goes through Harry’s chest and we see a spray
of blood. Spider-Man is shocked. Harry falls to the frame and lies there barely
alive. Venom smiles. Spider-Man is ticked and remembers the bell at the
church. He jumps to the floor and Venom follows him. Spider-Man grabs a
metal bar as Venom is coming towards him and hits the frame making a
clanging sound. Venom holds his ears and screams. “What’s happening?!” he
yells. Spider-Man does it three more times and sees the Symbiote going wild
on Venom then it slides off revealing Brock. Spider-Man catches him as he
falls. He puts him on the floor and webs him there. The Symbiote slides
through a crack in a building escaping.
Spider-Man quickly jumps to where Harry is and sees that he’s barely
alive. He asks Harry, “Can you hear me?!” and tears are coming to Peter’s
eyes. Harry makes a smile and says, “Pete, I’m so sorry. Please forgive me. I
was wrong *coughs up a little blood* to blame my father’s death on you. I’m
so sorry” “Harry?!” Peter cries out. “No! Somebody help!” Harry smiles “Bye
Pete.” and closes his eyes leaving nothing but a empty body. Peter holds
Harry close to him and cries.
The End.
Then we just see the end of the movie, what happens with Gwen, some other stuff and after that the credits.
Green Goblin II and Sandman have both been defeated in the past and
decided to team up and take down Spider-Man. Harry has seen Peter and
Gwen hanging out lately and knew she was important to him. He knew
kidnapping her would make him come. He didn’t want to kidnap Mary Jane
because he still liked her.
Peter has just gotten rid of the Symbiote in the church where Eddie
Brock was and the Symbiote went to Eddie. Happy of getting rid of the alien
substance, Peter returns to his Apartment taking off his Spider-Man mask and
notices 2 messages on his machine. He checks the earliest one and it’s Gwen
asking if they could go on a date sometime that week. (Peter had broken up
with Mary Jane) Peter smiles and checks the next one before calling her back
with a “yes“. The next message we hear Gwen in the back round screaming
and yelling “Help!” as Green Goblin II says “You’ve taken my father’s life and
it’s time you’ve realized the pain! His voice gets deeper and more sinister.
“Meet me here at her apartment by 7:29 because her life ends a minute
after…” Goblin chuckles and then the phone clicks. Peter’s smile died when he
had heard the message. He wasn’t going to let somebody else die. The clock
read 7:22. He quickly puts his mask back on. We see the outside sky. Dark,
the sun is setting and there’s a pinkish purple color in the sky along with some
red. Spider-Man swings out the window and swings very fast to her
apartment.
Inside Gwen’s apartment there’s a balcony with two open doors. The
wind is blowing the curtains. We see a close up of Green Goblin’s face looking
down at Gwen who we can see reflecting in his eyes. Gwen is tied up in a
chair with a few bruises and scratch marks on her from trying to get away
from the Goblin. She had fallen into a few things while running earlier. Gwen
asks with a scared deep voice, “Why are you doing this to me?” “Revenge.
It‘s all revenge.” Harry replied. The clock read 7:28 and then Harry slowly
pulled out a sword from his belt. Gwen looks terrified.
Spider-Man came through the open balcony windows and landed on the
floor. “Let her go! You don‘t understand what happened!” (About his father)
he yelled. As Spider-Man said that there was sand pouring through a vent
onto the floor. Spider-Man’s Spider Sense went off but he didn’t move in time
to dodge Sandman’s enlarged arm smacking him out the window through a
skylight of another building. Spider-Man lands on top of a desk crushing it. It
looks like an office building. Sandman pours through the broken sky light and
piles up on the floor making himself. Spider-Man gets up and hits him. His fist
went through Sandman not doing any harm. Sandman fell on top of him as
sand and then his face formed in it. (Like the cover when he first appeared in
a comic) He was weighing Spider-Man down, then Spider-Man rolled out of it
and rolled into a water dispenser. The big jug on top of it hit the floor hard
and exploded. Water went everywhere. Sandman screamed and shielded his
eyes as if he was afraid of it. Spider-Man saw that he didn’t like water.
Before he could do anything else Sandman made his hand into a hammer and
hit Spider-Man out a window and into a construction site.
Spider-Man got up struggling as if something was pushing on his back.
He was just knocked out of a tall building. The ground was dirt and there was
some construction equipment around along with a metal frame building.
Sandman came down from building in sand and blended in with the dirt there.
Green Goblin also arrived on his glider with a cackle. He threw a bomb and it
exploded weakening the steel building frame on the building that was being
built. Spider-Man stood up and shot a web at the frame building taking himself
to it. Then got to the very top by using jumps and webs. He perched at the
top as Green Goblin pulled out a small sword from his belt heading towards
Spider-Man. Spider-Man lunged himself at him in the air and landed with him
on top of his glider. Spider-Man punched Goblin in the face once then Goblin
cut his leg stunning Spider-Man for a second then pushed him off. Spider-Man
shot a web and prevented a very painful fall while hitting the ground. Goblin,
meanwhile, didn’t notice the frame building ahead of him. He tried moving out
of the way but the left end of his glider hit it showering sparks everywhere.
The glider landed hardly on the ground making Goblin fall off onto the ground.
Spider-Man got up and sand started swirling around him. In a annoyed voice
Spider-Man said “Oh crap.” then Sandman hit him to the floor. Sandman was
towering above Spider-Man who was leaning against a pile of dirt. Spider-Man
remembered the water dispenser inside the building and how the water
frightened Sandman. Spider-Man saw a wheel against a wall in the
construction site and looked behind Sandman where he saw a pipe dripping
with water. He knew this was perfect. He shot a web at the wheel then
pulled. Water shot out from the pipe hitting Sandman. Spider-Man got up,
punched Sandman a few times and noticed it was harming him because
Sandman’s expressions looked like he was being hurt. The water shut off
because it was out and needed to be pumped again. Spider-Man’s vision was
a little blurry from the water spraying on his lenses. He did see Sandman
looking almost normal again though, but not enough to fight. Spider-Man was
hit by an unknown figure into a pile of bricks. A black blur lands on the ground
in front of Sandman making a little dust come around it’s feet. We see a close
up of sharp teeth with a tongue come at the screen very fast. Then we see
Venom’s mouth take a big chunk out of Sandman. Sandman looks frightened
at its looks and what it did. He melts to the floor in sand and goes down a
drain. We see who it was. Venom. He looks like the comic version and is
about the same size as Spider-Man but his arms are a little bigger. He has the
evil white eyes and sharp teeth with a long tongue. He looks scary. He saw
Harry over there lying on the floor but didn’t think he would get up. Venom looks
ticked and excited as we hear some bricks hitting the ground. He turns
around to the big pile of bricks where he hit Spider-Man and smiles.
Spider-Man comes up in a hurry making dust fly everywhere. His mask is
ripped off and his head is visible, his costume has some tears in it. He couldn’t
see two feet ahead of him. All of a sudden Venom lunges through the dust
towards the camera with his arms reached out and his teeth and tongue
showing. He tackles Spider-Man and they slide in the ground. Venom is on top
of Spider-Man showing his teeth smiling. He says “Remember us?!” then uses
his claws to dig in to Spider-Man’s stomach. Spider-Man gives a terrifying
scream and we see a painful look on his face. Saliva is dripping on Spider-Man
from Venom’s mouth. Venom is still smiling as he pulls his hand out of his
stomach with blood on it. Spider-Man looks at the face in horror. Venom’s
face pulls back to show Eddie’s. “Eddie?!” Spider-Man asked in surprise. “NO!”
Venom yelled while making the Symbiote come back over his face. He throws
Spider-Man to the ground near the frame building. Venom screamed at him as
he walked towards him. “You ruined my life, took my girlfriend, (Gwen) got me
fired from my job, and took my home away from me!” Venom picks up
Spider-Man with both hands around his neck as he says “But now you’re
gonna’ pay! From now on we are poison to you!” He throws Spider-Man
against the frame building as he says “We are VENOM!”
Venom comes up to Spider-Man who is getting up. He grabs him by the
neck with his left hand and pins him against the wall. He leans his head in six
inches away from Spider-Man’s face. His tongue is close to his face too.
Venom puts his tongue in and snarls. In a really low menacing voice he says
“I wanna’ eat your brains…” Venom punches Spider-Man twice in the face
with his right hand really hard. The blows sound painful. He then shoves his
knee into Spider-Man’s stomach. Venom throws Spider-Man to one of the
lower frames and jumps up on it next to Spider-Man. He kicks Spider-Man’s
face knocking it into the air and punches it while it‘s in the air. A long thin
tentacle comes out of his hand. Venom swings his arm smacking Spider-Man
with it. We see Harry look at the fight and sees that Venom is doing this to
his best friend. Harry realizes that he himself has been wrong doing this the
whole time. Harry decides to help his friend. Spider-Man tries to hit Venom
but Venom catches his fist then twists it making a cracking noise. Spider-Man
screams. His wrist is hurt, not broken. Venom holds his fist in the air about
to do the finishing blow, he snarls then says, “Burn in Hell.” Venom’s fist flies
towards Spider-Man’s gut but Harry comes between Spider-Man and Venom
taking the blow. Venom’s arm goes through Harry’s chest and we see a spray
of blood. Spider-Man is shocked. Harry falls to the frame and lies there barely
alive. Venom smiles. Spider-Man is ticked and remembers the bell at the
church. He jumps to the floor and Venom follows him. Spider-Man grabs a
metal bar as Venom is coming towards him and hits the frame making a
clanging sound. Venom holds his ears and screams. “What’s happening?!” he
yells. Spider-Man does it three more times and sees the Symbiote going wild
on Venom then it slides off revealing Brock. Spider-Man catches him as he
falls. He puts him on the floor and webs him there. The Symbiote slides
through a crack in a building escaping.
Spider-Man quickly jumps to where Harry is and sees that he’s barely
alive. He asks Harry, “Can you hear me?!” and tears are coming to Peter’s
eyes. Harry makes a smile and says, “Pete, I’m so sorry. Please forgive me. I
was wrong *coughs up a little blood* to blame my father’s death on you. I’m
so sorry” “Harry?!” Peter cries out. “No! Somebody help!” Harry smiles “Bye
Pete.” and closes his eyes leaving nothing but a empty body. Peter holds
Harry close to him and cries.
The End.
Then we just see the end of the movie, what happens with Gwen, some other stuff and after that the credits.
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I don't feel like it.
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Spider-X said:
fixed it
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The Last Meatbag said:fixed it
your both wrong.
MJ, Gwen, Betty Brant, Christina Cindrich, and the scremaing girl from part 2 when Ock's tentacle poked through the wall while climbing the building.
ahh hell just give us that chick with christina. we ain't got time for MJ and Gwen and betty.
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Abaddon said:
I think the whole point was to cause you to climax.
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it'll probably end with peter pissing on uncle ben's grave, before he realizes what he's done.
then, spidey 4 will delve into the emotional depths of peter's psyche after this traumatizing event.
then, spidey 4 will delve into the emotional depths of peter's psyche after this traumatizing event.
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Whether we'll ever see Carnage in a Spidey film or not, to be honest, I don't care... but an ending with Brock and Kasady as cellmates would be a great homage to the comics... and of course a wide open door for a possible future storyline.
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For me, i say leave Carnage alone, we got one symbiote villian, and we just want other villains for other if anhy possible movies. However my ideal ending would be Spider-man and the grave of who ever dies and he walks away credits. like the first movie.
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If they do a Cletus Cassidy mention, it should be subtle, so that anyone who doesn't get it isn't neccissarily confused. Just mention it in passing, no dramatic music behind it or anything. Brock could be walking to his cell, and the guard could make a mention of his cellmate Cletus.
This would also eliminate the need to cast him just yet. I mean, if they actually show him, then they have to cast Cletus now, and hope the actor wants to come back for a sequel. What respectable actor would want to play such a small role, when there's a chance they wont even be back for a sequel This way, they can give a minor nod to him, aren't forced to commit to anything.
This would also eliminate the need to cast him just yet. I mean, if they actually show him, then they have to cast Cletus now, and hope the actor wants to come back for a sequel. What respectable actor would want to play such a small role, when there's a chance they wont even be back for a sequel This way, they can give a minor nod to him, aren't forced to commit to anything.
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Abaddon said:It failed.
since when is the final scene supposed to be a climax, the climax comes before the ending............
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dark_b said:
I was thinking that Balck Spidey would cause a bunch of crimes, no one identifies him as spider-man, just as a similar enity, but black, so the cops are out looking for a black creature, well the symbiote leaves Peter and goes onto Brock, have venom and spidey figting, and the cops show up, show venom killing Harry, then Spider-man defeating venom, all this while the police are watching, as the symbiote leaves brock, Brock is caught by the police.... Brock gets accused for all of black spider-mans crimes plus venoms............. imagine Brocks hatred towards Peter after all that happened
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Either Mj and Peter getting married, or Spidey just swinging through New York
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