dude stannis
Avenger
- Joined
- Jul 28, 2003
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It doesn't drag at all. It's about the build up of it all. You need to pay attention to what they are saying. If you are into it, you are waiting for something to happen, hence the tension. The opening scene and the bar scenes are the best scenes because of the use of trension.
Only in chapter 4 does it drag for me. Chapters 1 and 3 are perfect dialogue sequences. But after how intense chapter 3 was, the momentum needed forwarding, I wanted to see where the story was going to go.
It is the finest script I've read since NCFOM.
That's a fair call, the script is great.

t: And yeah, the milk bit...my lord.
