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Justice Leauge of America reimagining

Ok here's J'onn J'onzz I did. It took me about an hour to draw and paint this.

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His costume is kinda inspired to the Silver Age and the one on the Batman.

Awsome. can you please draw

metropolis, gotham, atlantis, mars

J'onn Jonnz in his alien and human form, clark kent, bruce wayne and barry allen.
 
Awsome. can you please draw

metropolis, gotham, atlantis, mars

J'onn Jonnz in his alien and human form, clark kent, bruce wayne and barry allen.

Sure I can do that, but it might take me a while though. How do want J'onn's human form to be? Like the one on Smallville or the Batman version?
 
awsome I posted the Superman Reimagining prequel/year one board. If you want to check it out and help you can
I'm going to post the Batman board later and
I'm going to post issue 2 in parts
 
awsome I posted the Superman Reimagining prequel/year one board. If you want to check it out and help you can
I'm going to post the Batman board later and
I'm going to post issue 2 in parts

All right and sure, I can help you on the Superman story by putting some art work, manips, or even some ideas for the story . :woot:
 
Ok, here's the city of Metropolis

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Still working on Gotham, Atlantis, etc.
 
Yeah I would love your help and I'm doing Issue 1 for my Batman reimaging(year one/prequel too). I'll start issue 2 later. If you want do reimaging for superheroes. just pm and you can do it.
 
Ok, here's Gotham. It took me a long time to come up something like this. I also manipped this as you can tell half of the city.

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awesomeness and by the way Lex Luthor, Saul Erdel, Virgil Swann and The Atom will have a big part in the arc.

This is the silver age meets Smallville and the bATMAN
Anyone else got awsome pictures. Here's a rough draft.
A few monthes ago...
We see a was going on between giant robot aliens and the martian. the martians are losing hard. We see as some of the robot martians go down. two more take each robots place. We see J'onn J'onnz watch as the aliens kill his family and freinds. Then J'onn throws some bombs. J'onn is the equivilent of a detective and a vigilante and he is the highest rank. The robots go down and J'onn realize that the robots share the weakness of fire. A virus hits and kills almost every martian execpt for J'onn and a few survivars. Then J'onn is locked in suspended animation knowing that being in this state will save his life and he injects a cure in himself.
Now, Keystone
we see Barry(Bart hates being called Barry) getting yelled at by Jay Garrick his teacher, a former police officer, his freind and hero. Jay is angry because Bart was asleep in class and now is failing. Jay says that Bart might have to repeat the class but Bart pleads not to. Bart thinks it was not only because of Superman, Wonder Woman, and The Bat-Man that he chose to become a superhero and the death of his older police officer brother named Jay and the fame of being the city with the second worst crime rate but because Jay saved many people's life. Then Jay says that Barry has to come in on saturday and do some tests which Bart quickly agrees. Then he leaves go to his apartment and turn on tv. Then is shows A scene going on in Metropolis.
Metropolis

Some woman is about to commit suicide off of Lex corp towers. People are panicking but The Police tries to calm evreyone. There are alot of newrepoters trying to ask questions to get pulitzer. The lady is screaming about voices in her head. The Lady jumps off but a red, blue and yellow blur grabs her. Bart smiles and says way to go big blue. But the lady starts freaking out Superman's hands acting afraid and calls him a freak who should be experimented on. Superman looks shocked and sad. Then Superman drops her off on the ground and flies to the Daily Planet building. He changes into Clark Kent and acts sad thinking she might by right thinking at how he acts like a vigilante using his powers to scare criminals and corruption to do the right thing but didn't think about how it affect the innocent people and think about how he started being Superman at age 19 and now he is 21 years old hero and he should act more responsible and join the goverment so he doesn't make any mistakes that hurts or kills anyone he tries to protect. Then he reads a Daily Planet paper about the Bat-Man really hurts a cop leaving him mentally scared for life. Clarks gets and angry using his heat vision not only breaking his glasses but burning his glasses saying it's people like him that gives Superheroes a bad name.
We see mars a few weeks ago in Gotham
Dr.Saul Erdal is turning on a machine then lights are turning on and off. Then the lights flashed really brightly. Out comes J'onn J'onnz. Dr.Erdel looks scared.

So what do you think
You don't have to listen to this Derrick but can you

Make Wonder Woman looks like a mixture of Wizard UltimateDC WW, ASBR Wonder Woman and the Dark Knight Strikes Again Wonder Woman and Megan Gale

Martian Manhunter alien form like how Martian's look in Invincible and the martian alien form in Justice Leauge New Frontier/DC New Frointier and The Batman's martian Manhunter

and make Martian Human form look like The Batman, Smallville and DCNF/JLNF
but you can do what ever you want and I'll just be back seat
Issue 2 part one

Everything starts in a observatory in Gotham City, in the woods. Dr. Saul Erdel is turning on cables on a advanced machine. He speaks in a gravator about his project to find alien civilizations, his fear that the govern use the machine to kill the aliens, what made him steal it and tryed to send a message of warning.

He turns tha machine. A Portal opens, revealing a golden city burning. A Creature with red eyes scream and the portal explodes. Martian reads Dr.Erdel's mind and learns evreything about the man. Then Martian tell him about the alien threat. Erdel get a scared and has a heart Attack telling him about mankind's problem and how J'onn should hide. Momentos later, J'onn J'ozz is alone in the laboratory, in front of Erdel's scared corpse. The police shows up to investigate the explosion and J'onn shape-shift into a cop, running from the place with the gravator.He then gets his first look at Gotham which is a mixutre of DCNF/JLNF Gotham, Derrick9592's Gotham, Birds of Prey's live action Gotham, The Bat Man(http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZOBthvllTYQ)'s Gotham, The Batman's Gotham, DCAU Gotham, the early Bill Finger/Bob Kane Gotham/New York, Frank Miller's Dark Knight Universe Gotham Tim Burton's Gotham and Chris Nolan's Gotham. J'onn looks amaze and runs to this giant city

part two later
 
OK, here MM in human form. A mixture of Smallville (the colors and his skin) and The Batman (You can tell his clothes)

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Ok, here's WW herself

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I kinda made her costume a little bit similar to the Lynda Carter costume.
 
Sorry I haven't been posting anything lately. I have been working on my Batman and Superman story. Here's issue 2.
by the way Derrick your work is getting good. can you the the people's secret identetitys.

Issue 2

Everything starts in a observatory in Gotham City, in the woods. Dr. Saul Erdel is turning on cables on a advanced machine. He speaks in a gravator about his project to find alien civilizations, his fear that the govern use the machine to kill the aliens, what made him steal it and tryed to send a message of warning.

He turns tha machine. A Portal opens, revealing a golden city burning. A Creature with red eyes scream and the portal explodes. Martian reads Dr.Erdel's mind and learns evreything about the man. Then Martian tell him about the alien threat. Erdel get a scared and has a heart Attack telling him about mankind's problem and how J'onn should hide. Erdel says the speach he says in DCNF when J'onn comes. Momentos later, J'onn J'ozz is alone in the laboratory, in front of Erdel's scared corpse. The police shows up to investigate the explosion and J'onn shape-shift into a cop, running from the place with the gravator.He then gets his first look at Gotham which is a mixutre of DCNF/JLNF Gotham, Derrick9592's Gotham, Birds of Prey's live action Gotham, The Bat Man(http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZOBthvllTYQ)'s Gotham, The Batman's Gotham, DCAU Gotham, the early Bill Finger/Bob Kane Gotham/New York, Frank Miller's Dark Knight Universe Gotham Tim Burton's Gotham and Chris Nolan's Gotham. J'onn looks amaze and runs to this giant city
Some Sailors are talking about the myth of Aquaman and wonder if he actually exists and if he does what would he do. Then they’re about to start a weapon then weapon explodes. We see Aquaman on top of a Whale holding the destroyed weapon. Aquaman threatens and terrorizes the workers. Aquaman then goes underwater and then destroys the ship. None of them know that they’re being watched by a very interested Wonder Woman.
We see Central City, Los Angeles or Illinois.
The Flash is rescuing people from a burning building. The building is about to fall down on a 8 year old bystander. The Flash is about to save the kid when a green flame covers the burning building which starts to levitate. Bart and the Crowd are shocked by the amazing feat when Bart looks at where the Green Flame is coming from and see Hal in the Green Lantern Corps suit. He is able to make the building fall down without hurting anyone and put out the fire. Flash is amazed. He reaches Green Lantern and starts a conversation saying things like how cool that was and talks about the myths of Green Lantern and how this is The Flash’s first team up. Hal rolls his eyes and thinks this is another one of those groupies. Hal said he heard about a fire and he also says how he looking for escaped convict Sinestro. We get a flashback which shows Sinestro taking down the whole GL corps by himself. We also see the great friendship between Hal and Sinestro which also shows Hal mourning when his best friend turned evil. The Flash though Hal said Sinatra or Sinister. Then they move to a discrete place and take off his mask and say his name is Bartholomew Henry "Barry" Allen (The Silver Age Flash). Flash then reveals he just started the superhero gig 2 months ago.
We see some criminals murdered some kid’s dad and stole from the store running away. Then his nose was broken and loss the teeth after getting kicked in the face by a black combat boot. Batman stabbed the criminal in the leg. Batman also punches his gut and smashes the criminals face on the wall. We see he is pissed by the death of the kid’s dad. We then see a 6 year old Bruce is next to the dead corpses of his parents and the mugger ran away. Batman uses a signet ring to make a bat mark on the thug’s cheek. Then the Batman grabs the criminal’s cell phone called the police and destroyed the phone climbing a escape ladder. Bruce said he is so used to doing that it is like a second nature. We see the cops came and we see a sad John Jones (J'onn J'onzz). We hear a voice over explain that he joined the force a week after coming to earth. We also hear explain using the television, comic books, DVDs and movie theaters to teach John more about Earth culture. John used his martian ability to shapeshift so he can pass as a human. John uses his psychic powers to discover the truth behind seemingly unsolvable crime and when nescarry employed a more formidable apperace in order to startle and subdue the real culprits. He knows he that he human is afraid of the unknown and will destroy it with ease. He says after events like September 11, 2001 and wars and thanks to the influence of people like Lex Luthor people has become xenophobic. He then says they won't be ready for the uncoming alien attack because of this. He then hears about the corruption and the Joker escaped from Arkham Asylum again.
Gotham
Clark is in a WayneTech Apartment looking at the Gotham skyline thinking that Gotham is a darker, grittier version of Metropolis. He also thinks about being in metropolis with Lois Lane and Jimmy Olsen to report about the public meeting between Bruce Wayne, Oliver Queen and his former friend Lex Luthor. He also thinks he is in Metropolis to take down the Bat-Man and make his secret identity public as the first step of the public trusting him. Clark looks at the picture of his parents and remember his dad dead because of a heart attack and how they taught him how to use his powers for good.
New Olympians
We see Diana Prince talking to her mother about how her mother used to be the Wonder Woman of War World II, Wonder Woman’s powers and how Wonder Woman will try and take over the man’s world for Amazon and womankind. We also see Wonder Woman change into her silver age guise of Diana Prince(glasses included)
Lexcorp
We see Lex smiling talking with Bruce about how they are going to use their technology to help the military as well as other people we see Bruce stands up and leave going to a wrestling match in Vegas between Ted Grant and a tough challenger. Lex thinks about how he could never find out Supermans weakness and take him down but seeing that horrible message of earth being destroyed by alien menaces means now more than ever that he finds out the heroes secrets including their weaknesses and create weapons to combat them.

to be continued
next episode team up and we learn about the threat
 
Hey, sorry I haven't post some art lately. I was working some stuff for your Superman reimaging story. Here's Clark Kent that I made.

SAClarkKent.jpg


Clark Kent-mixture of Christopher Reeve and Brandon Routh combined
 
I going to make another 6-7 story arc for this one. The first is going to be character development yet is full of action(explains the alien threat, first team ups, ect) and the second has more action.

Since it is a realistic story my JLA story influences is mostly going to be JLA/DC: New Frontier universe, Identity Crisis, golden age(elseworld story), Smallville Justice Leauge, The Batman Justice Leauge, JL/JLU animated series, Justice Leauge:Heroes, Wizard Ultimate DC, George Miller's JLA movie, JLA: the nail/another nail, Stan Lee's Just Imagine, Frank Miller's Dark Knight universe, JSA:Liberty Files/Unholy Three and regular stories is watchman, Image's Invincible, Marvel stories like Ultimate Marvel , Ruin, Marvels and Powerless


By the way I'm going to stop working on my prequels and deal mostly with the JLA story.
 
Hey, sorry I haven't post some art lately. I was working some stuff for your Superman reimaging story. Here's Clark Kent that I made.

SAClarkKent.jpg


Clark Kent-mixture of Christopher Reeve and Brandon Routh combined

thanks can you do the other heroes secret identity and Lex Luthor and make some covers and pictures for the issue protocida and I wrote. Thanks for your support man
 
Lex Luthor's plan will be a mixture of the plan in superman birthright, the batman and it will be seen in the third arc
 
Hey, I made a comic cover that could go with the story. Hope you like it.

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Issue 3

Clark Kent—Superman—awakes with a start. Yesterday he had the public press conference that was between LexCorp and Wayne Tech Foundation Clark then sees explosions, people scream and dying and giant robots attacking. Clark knows that The Bat-man must be rich with all the equipment he has and he has the profile of an angry victim of a crime that made him dangerous. Then Standing before him is the ghostly image of a shriveled, alien-looking creature which is J’onn J’onzz is his true Martian form. “He is coming,” the apparition states before dissipating in the breeze. “He is coming.” Clark hears the door and uses his X-Ray vision to see Lois and Jimmy at the door. He uses his super speed to put on his superman clothes and then a suit, tie and glasses over it. Lois heard a loud screaming from Clark’s room saying it is coming and jokes that he is worried that she will win the Pulitzer Prize instead of him where Jimmy states that he also had nightmares of aliens and Armageddon where Clark looks suspiciously wondering if it’s all connected.
Bruce is at a Wayne Corp elevator where he studied flight patterns at the speed of sound around the Daily Planet and Luthor hotel/apartment where ClarkKent lives who looks a lot like superman. Then Bruce saw the same dreams and J’onn. Hal foils a bank robbery and he thinks about how Sinestro who was his teacher and best friend betrayed him and now he must find a way to stop him because he has a weapon which is the Green Lantern’s greatest weakness: a yellow ring. He also thinks how he hasn’t been to his home town in Los Angeles in a long time. He then sees J’onn and wonder if Sinestro is using a weapon of mass delusion against him. Bart is at the Los Angeles police academy learning forensics when he sees the visitation and rushes out at super speeds out to see what does this have to do and wonder if the threat is imminent.
Aquaman is on the throne of his palace and Wonder Woman comes and declares that her Amazonian sister will conquer man’s world and she needs the help of Aquaman where Aquaman refuses saying he and his people will help no surface dweller. Then Wonder Woman and Aquaman start fighting. They are evenly matched when Aquaman calls sharks, squids and octopuses to contain Wonder Woman. He tells Wonder Woman to get out but before she leaves Aquaman asks if she saw of strange visitation of Armageddon. Wonder Woman hesitates for a moment and angrily and suspiciously says what if she did. Aquaman says thanks to his telepathy he knows what theses visions mean and who is sending it. There is going to be a threat so powerful and dangerous that not even the greatest armies can stop it. Wonder Woman leaves with fear and anger. Flash greets Green Lantern with a joke. Green Lantern say that this is not funny because he saw and Flash ask if he saw monster and mass destruction as far as the eye can see. Green Lantern and Flash argue weather or not Flash should help against this threat. Green Lantern says Flash should call himself Impulse or Kid Flash and make his own team called the Teen Titans, Superfreinds or Young Justice. Flash stomp out that he will make his own team and Green Lantern can’t be a part of it even if he begs. Flash then mutters that it will be called something cool like Legion of Superheroes.
J’onn claimed that the same great evil that destroyed Mars is coming to Earth and the Martian hunts men for a super-league capable of defeating help against an evil no one hero can defeat. We see John Jones talking to a brilliant but insane scientist he not only saw the dreams of mass destruction but also saw information from NASA and LexCorp about a mission to mars. Then the man stuffed his mother in a trunk and attempted to move out of the country so they could be safe. Then he accidentally killed a police officer and injured another one. Then government agents and it ends like in DC: New Frontier. J’onn realizes that he needs to get the superhero faster now. J’onn remembers his entire race burned away by a telepathic plague. J’onn was alone in his thoughts and now the monsters that destroyed mars will be brought to justice.
Ray Palmer is at WayneTower where he is working on the miniaturization project for Wayne Tech. Ray is an expert in nanotechnology. He is also diminutive college student and later a physicist who was depicted as a tough guy while the smartest kid of his class, a symbol of all the short kids who could still make a difference. Ray is a scientist first and foremost and approaches many of his adventures from the perspective of scientific discovery and investigation. Ray made a high tech suit that not only gives the wearer limited super-strength, and an energy charged 'atomic punch' but also the ability to shrink his body to varying degrees (including the subatomic level) while manipulating his weight and mass to his advantage. This allows him to glide on air currents on a low setting, while a high setting allows him to handle or strike objects with the equivalent strength of his normal size and build. Also he can call some location on the telephone and when the intended phone is answered, Palmer can shrink down enough to literally travel through the phone lines in seconds to emerge out of the answering phone. The suit is controlled by encephalotronic grid in the costume's headpiece to control the costume, mechanisms in a bio-belt and controls in the palms of his gloves. He came here because he found a job a Wayne Tech Foundation so he is going to sell the suit not only for 1 million dollars but also so the army can use it to fight against terrorists. Especially after seeing Armageddon in his dreams help America win the super-being arms race against places like Russia and Iraq where it is full of super terrisom and the commonly held belief that the next world war will be fought with genetically altered soldiers. There was an international test-ban treaty concerning development of super-soldiers, but many countries still maintain undercover genetic projects.He then gets a call on his cell phone and he looks at the caller id and it says Lex Luthor’s phone number.

Even with the claims of Lieutenant. Gordon, Commissioner Loeb declares the Dark Knight a criminal and a murder (Crimes of Dr. Hugo Strange). Superman is manipulated by Lex Luthor to think the buyer of several tons of Kryptonite is Batman. Superman thinks because of The Bat-man’s anarchical terrorism makes the government believes that all Superheroes and terroists and criminals. Batman stopped a crime which he found on a handheld police scaner/NASCAR racing scaner. Bruce then throws the grapling hook/titanium cable to another crime he finds out
Superman grabs Batman's cable and flies with him by the rooftops. Batman jumps and hides on the church, using explosive Baterangs to distract Superman. The man of steel lands and uses the heat vision, but Batman uses chains and stuck Superman, that frees himself and end up blowing the electrical chain. The bat mobile looks primitive.
Bruce re-configures a black Lincoln Continental into a makeshift "bat-mobile." It looks like a mixture of a black sports car without and identification plates and a black Lincoln Continental. Its windows are tinted opaque. Heavy, steel bumper modifications have been welded to the chassis. The hood has been chopped back to make room for the super-charged school bus engine that powers it. And it drives without headlights. LIKE A CAR POSSESSED, reckless and demonic.

The Bat-man falls in a alley and Superman attack, but him uses Kryptonite to elevate the tings and both fight equal. Batman sees Superman as a big dumb alien who is so cocky and over cofident with his powers even a first grader can kick his ass back to his destroyed planet. Superman uses his last strength and hides the Kryptonite. Batman convoys the Bat mobile and shots Superman. Superman tries to find out Bruce’s secret identity but can’t because of the lead on his mask.

The fight reaches and Axis chemistry factory, where Batman blows up all the place and sends the Batmobile against Superman, using the distraction to run away to the bat cave. The Bat-Man throws a flash bomb which blinds Superman. He then activates a whistle that cause dogs to bark like crazy and bats are flying around in the sky. We see Superman’s ears are bleeding and he is in major pain shaking. He glares at the dark silhouette of The Bat-man leaving.

It's not over yet.


Lex towers.
Lex Luthor plays (and checkmates) fourteen different chess games, finds a cure for a desiease, makes a new language and sucsecfully teaches it to a robot, reads Machiavelli's Il Principe, designs a portable tape recorder, and teaches himself the Urdu language -- all while on his lunch break.
Lex has has a knack with machinery and access to powerful technology. he's shown as highly intelligent (able to cure such diseases as Muscular Dystrophy), but extremely amoral (has his scientists find ways to draw out such cures to make a higher profit). Lex Luthor is a leading astrobiologist/industrialist., Luthor is his knowledge as a general scientist is apparently unmatched (he is referred to as the smartest man in the world), Astrobiology is his particular forte. In the eyes of the public, he appears to a beloved humanitarian, but Superman knows the truth. Luthor compares himself to Prometheus he is taking fire from the gods and giving it to the people. Luthor is an egotistical but ultimately benevolent super-genius. Lex is also a Machiavellian corporate white-collar criminal and His vast resources keep him one step ahead of Superman, and he almost never answers for his crimes due to his massive wealth and connections. Lex Luthor who is a bigoted, opportunistic gentleman explorer, contemptuous of women and non-Caucasians. He has an entire African village slaughtered to obtain a unique meteoric crystal (kryptonite).Luthor believes he could be the world’s savior if Superman has not been taking up his time. Lex veiws himself as the only hero in a world full of villians.
Lex says he hate superman because Luthor had to fight tooth and nail for his power, but Superman received his through a simple twist of fate. Also, while he had to buy the good will of the people through donations and other charitable works, Superman received their devotion for free, Luthor must be in control of every situation, but he cannot control Superman, Superman is big brother, and his presence lulls humanity into a false sense of security. As a result, the people will wait idly for Superman to save them, rather than try to save themselves, plus Luthor believes Superman is the first agent of an alien invasion. Finally just because of the implication that Superman is more intelligent than himself. Lex knows that Superman’s weakness to a meteroite that crashedlanded 20 years ago.The metorite contains Sodium lithium boron silicate hydroxide with fluorine plus titanium, phosphorus,krypton difluoride, unbihexium/eka-plutonium, borosilicate, uranium, iron, and7.57 percent unknown material has the radioactive half-life of 250,000 years. Lex knows Superman's cells absorb electromagnetic radiation from stars (like Earth's sun). Kryptonite's radioactivity interferes with this semi-photosynthetic process, driving the energy out of his cells in a painful fashion. Superman feels the detrimental effects of kryptonite radiation quicker that normal humans because his body absorbs it more readily, as a result of sharing a common point of origin with the element. The effect is so potent that even a tiny shard is enough to painfully affect Superman at a short distance. This makes it impossible for Superman to even touch the substance, as it would be the equivalent of a normal man touching radioactive rods from a nuclear reactor with his bare skin. Only the element of lead is able to block the radiation, and is therefore Superman's only protection. The only bad part is that green kryptonite can cause normal humans to mutate and acquire superhuman abilities, although an outside catalyst (such as a strong electrical charge) is usually required and long-term exposure causes radiation poisoning in humans. Plus the genetic arms race and the commonly held belief that the next world war will be fought with genetically altered soldiers. There was an international test-ban treaty concerning development of super-soldiers, but many countries still maintain undercover genetic projects. It is illegal to deliberately alter a human being's genetic makeup without government sanction. Lex said he saws the dreams of Armegedon and he is going to use it for his advantage against the superhumans and in his new plans. Lex reveals that if someone will control the superhuman it will be Lex and he is going to use them so humans will be the one to control their destiny and his new plan will make sure of that and it is going to start with Ray Palmer.



to be continued
 
In Issue 4

The Bat-Man learns Superman secret Identity and Superman learns The Bat-Man secret identity

Wonder Woman will actually be Diana Prince, a secret agent and member of the Department of Metahuman Affairs
 

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