Thank you for the comments, ladies and gents. They are...wait for it...always appreciated.
Love the relationships all the characters seem to have with one another.
Thanks, SML. The funny thing about the characters is that I already know how the series and their arcs are going to play out over time, so I try to build these little foundations every time I write a scene between, say, Norman and Byrdmann or Bella and Hunter.
Basically just trying to make the relationships as real as possible so as we move along and things begin to develop, the developments make sense.
Mr.Peg..haha. Somethin that'll always be talked about on the Hype
Yuppers.
I had to do my own research into this thing. So for you Hype veterans, look out for all the nuggets!
I hope the team investigates who the members of the committee are and what happend to them.
I may (or may not) leave the identities of the committee a mystery. It might be something that comes back later, or a twist in this particular story. We'll see how it shapes up.
O my! Another masterpiece by the master of fanfics! Very impressive, cmill.
Awwww shucks, B.
Haydelishas!? And Morg's a ****emonger! Who'd have thunk?!!
Crazy. I know.
And another thing... looks like Audrey is a good influence on Norm.
Hunter Rider said:
Norm, less glum and moody, Audrey has put some steam in his strides.
Oh, most definitely. She's going to play a very important role over the next few stories and her relationship with him.
Why is Bella always getting pimped out?
Because she's just so darn amazing. Man can't resist her, which makes her the ultimate superweapon.
Awesome first chapter, i love the simple scene between Tza and Aster, it gives us a look at a different side of her character.
Thanks, Hunt. I was trying to think of a way to start this story off with something different for you guys, and I thought pairing those two in a scene would be a nice sequence.
I am still waiting for Hunter and Norm to settle the serious sexual tension.
Love all of the characters' interaction, and glad to see my character is still around
Thank ya, ATP. And Audrey will be hanging around for a while.
New chapter should be up sometime this week.