Official Nightavenger Thread

[Ghostrider87]

Knock it off. Don't post stuff like that again.

 

[Ghostrider87]

I listened to people. I did take away a lot of my characters powers.

 

[shanti19]

I have seen the promotions of the reality series of Who wants to be a superhero which I am pretty sure will air on the Sci Fi Channel in the summer of 2006. The contestants on the show invented their own heros and the winner will get a deal with Marvel Comics and their own tv series. This inspired me to invent my own superhero. The name of my superhero is Nightavenger and I will tell you more about him in my next post. I would enjoy feedback until then.

I never caught the show, but it seemed kinda dumb. My friends thought it was comedy gold!

 

[Ghostrider87]

I am going to be posting the newest picture I finished. It looks really great has the symbol and his feet are facing foward so it was a challenge.

 

[Ghostrider87]

This is a thread to discuss the hero I created Nightavenger.

 

[Ghostrider87]

I have just downloaded the newest Nightavenger picture on a cd.

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[enterthemadness]

Seriously...copyright the character with the U.S Copyright Service...just incase you are taking this seriously.

 

[Ghostrider87]

He survives being hit by a shooting star.

 

[Duende Verde]

What are we supposed to discuss about Nightavenger?

 

[Ghostrider87]

The next picture I draw of him is going to be of Nightavenger shooting at Sabretooth or the Sentinels.

 

[Harlekin]

But that would be a little weird since Nightavenger doesn't exist in the MU and you don't plan on pitching him to Marvel...

 

[Ghostrider87]

Well I need some enemy to show that he is no pushover and those enemies for now serve as more than worthy adversaries. Plus also because I have not sketched any of the villains. But I could really see him just throwing on Sentinel at another or using his energy blasts and the shooting stars.

 

[WeaponZ2]

He survives being hit by a shooting star.

.....Makes sense. How aboot you post a bio eh? At least then we can "discuss" something aboot him (besides your "art").

 

[Ghostrider87]

Night Avenger
Real name: Jason Hairston
Identity: Publicly known
Occupation: (former) College disk jockey, Professional (professional) disk jockey.
Citizenship: U.S.A.
Place of birth: Chicago, Illinois
Known relatives: Melinda (mother), Paul (father)
Group affiliation: Known I can think for right now (now)
Education: College graduate ( broadcasting major), bachelor’s degree in broadcasting (complete)

Physical Characteristics
Height: 5'11"
Weight: 195
Eyes: Blue
Hair: Brown

(Powers: Superhuman strength, enhanced durability, Superhuman speed, energy blasts, command of shooting stars, flight.
Weapons: Star glider)


His parents Melinda and Paul raised Jason. Jason was very talented and skilled.
Jason was always one that wanted to work for something rather than just having it handed to him all the time. One of his greatest accomplishments was becoming a first-degree black belt in Taekwondo. His parents taught himabout right and wrong. His parents told him that it is easy not to do the right thing and just take the easy path.

Before High School, most students respected and admired Jason. Then High School came with students accusing false accusations giving him a hard time and criticized him. One of the reasons of he was criticized because he usually always did the right thing and they wanted to seem unhappy most of the time.

He was taken advantage of and lied to. Jason always managed to find a way to pass the classes he was in even when it was not going well. Despite this other students still gave him a hard time criticize him along with not recognizing him and respecting him.

He refused to believe what other students said, thought, and continued to prove them wrong. Students criticized that he learned Martial Arts to beat people up and gain things. However, he never used it that way.

He went to the University of Chicago of Illinois where he was the official radio disk jockey all four years he attended. He still received a hard time, criticized, and accused false accusations. In college, he confronted a student about the false accusations. In addition, asked the person do they have evidence and when they bet money on the answer. They did not have evidence and did not bet money on the answer forcing them to admit they were wrong. He graduated from the University in 2002.


Jason then auditioned for a radio station and got the job after one audition. A week later Jason met Rita when she was a in guest studio discussing the Chicago Cubs, Chicago White Sox, and baseball.




Three years later after their first meeting Jason was called the Radio station where he worked by Rita telling him that it was her and that she needed him to walk her home because her car was in the shop. Rita became a secretary at a law firm. Jason became a professional disk jockey on a radio station.


Jason was walking Rita home from work. Then heading towards her apartment Rita a gang member knocked Rita out. Jason trying to prevent any further harm took on all gang members with Taekwondo moves and wristlocks. He managed to get them to go away. But one gang member managed to sprain his ankle before Jason knocked him down with two punches. Jason fell unconscious after seeing the gang members run away very fast..

Two minutes later a shooting star hit Jason survived giving him powers making him more than a man. Ten minutes later Rita woke up after getting knocked out Rita took out her cell phone called 911 and asked for emergency emts while looking at Jason seeing he was unconscious. The emts took Jason to the hospital along with Rita. Rita waited by the hospital bed in a chair waiting for Jason to wake up. Rita fell asleep. It is morning and Rita has awoke again and then 10 minutes later Rita watched as Jason started to wake up the support systems were hit with energy from Jason’s hand. Rita was handed a newspaper and on the front page, Disk jockey defends female citizen and survives being hit by a shooting star. Jason what happened to you. I defended you from further harm my ankle was sprained by a gang member and passed out. Did you know a shooting star hit you? Thank god Rita hugs your alive Jason. He called in and told his boss that he would need time to recover from the incident and to find what happened to him.


Jason went to workout by running during his first day off and discovered that he was running faster than he ever did before that was the same, as some superheroes would have. He then discovered another one of his powers with the next by hitting the heavy punching bag what was holding it. He was stretching with his hands out and energy blasts came out of his hand. He did it again and discovered other ways to use the energy blasts with his hands. He played Mocap Boxing on of his favorite video games on the fourth day he was off at ESPN Zone. He noticed that after beating the game that he was not even tired or exhausted at all so he then ran from Wrigley Field to US Cellular Field and Sears Tower but still was not exhausted. He was starting to believe that the shooting star had given him powers. So decides to talk to Rita and tells her this. Rita is shocked and amazed what she hears. To conclude he went through tests and a human scanner which showed nonhuman traits and characteristics proving he was more than a man and revealed powers and weapons.

He continued to take time off to learn the other powers. Since the event of where he tried to protect Rita crime continued to rise and the rumor of a man with powers continued talk by other people. However, it did not stop criminals from continuing to commit crimes and the crime rate to rise higher.


He was not willing to become a hero at first. One of the reasons was that he was afraid that it makes people grow afraid of him especially Rita. He thought of it would be easier to forget his powers ever existed. However, the dream he had finally convinced him. He had a nightmare that had Rita murdered at her apartment. Jason woke up used his ultra speed to get to her and knocked on the door. He told her she was in danger and that she had to leave. Rita believed him and took her back to his apartment with ultra speed.

Jason told her about his powers. Rita was a little shocked but not afraid. Rita told Jason he could use his powers to protect the city. Both of them went to bed knowing about his powers.

During the few weeks Jason stops small crimes such as grand theft, mugging, robbing, and assaults. When stopping these crimes he is once again exposed to his powers and starts to learn how to control them. After seeing a tragic murder it is then that he finds out that he must use his powers to protect the city and the people. He goes back home and come up his name and a costume.

 

[WeaponZ2]

Night Avenger
Real name: Jason Hairston
Identity: Publicly known
Occupation: (former) College disk jockey, Professional (professional) disk jockey.
Citizenship: U.S.A.
Place of birth:Chicago, Illinois
Known relatives: Melinda (mother), Paul (father)
Group affiliation: Known I can think for right now (now)
Education: College graduate ( broadcasting major), bachelor’s degree in broadcasting (complete)

Physical Characteristics
Height: 5'11"
Weight: 195
Eyes: Blue
Hair: Brown

(Powers: Superhuman strength, enhanced durability, Superhuman speed, energy blasts, command of shooting stars, flight.
Weapons: Star glider)


His parents Melinda and Paul raised Jason. Jason was very talented and skilled.
Jason was always one that wanted to work for something rather than just having it handed to him all the time. One of his greatest accomplishments was becoming a first-degree black belt in Taekwondo. His parents taught himabout right and wrong. His parents told him that it is easy not to do the right thing and just take the easy path.

Before High School, most students respected and admired Jason. Then High School came with students accusing false accusations giving him a hard time and criticized him. One of the reasons of he was criticized because he usually always did the right thing and they wanted to seem unhappy most of the time.

He was taken advantage of and lied to. Jason always managed to find a way to pass the classes he was in even when it was not going well. Despite this other students still gave him a hard time criticize him along with not recognizing him and respecting him.

He refused to believe what other students said, thought, and continued to prove them wrong. Students criticized that he learned Martial Arts to beat people up and gain things. However, he never used it that way.

He went to the University of Chicago of Illinois where he was the official radio disk jockey all four years he attended. He still received a hard time, criticized, and accused false accusations. In college, he confronted a student about the false accusations. In addition, asked the person do they have evidence and when they bet money on the answer. They did not have evidence and did not bet money on the answer forcing them to admit they were wrong. He graduated from the University in 2002.


Jason then auditioned for a radio station and got the job after one audition. A week later Jason met Rita when she was a in guest studio discussing the Chicago Cubs, Chicago White Sox, and baseball.




Three years later after their first meeting Jason was called the Radio station where he worked by Rita telling him that it was her and that she needed him to walk her home because her car was in the shop. Rita became a secretary at a law firm. Jason became a professional disk jockey on a radio station.


Jason was walking Rita home from work. Then heading towards her apartment Rita a gang member knocked Rita out. Jason trying to prevent any further harm took on all gang members with Taekwondo moves and wristlocks. He managed to get them to go away. But one gang member managed to sprain his ankle before Jason knocked him down with two punches. Jason fell unconscious after seeing the gang members run away very fast..

Two minutes later a shooting star hit Jason survived giving him powers making him more than a man. Ten minutes later Rita woke up after getting knocked out Rita took out her cell phone called 911 and asked for emergency emts while looking at Jason seeing he was unconscious. The emts took Jason to the hospital along with Rita. Rita waited by the hospital bed in a chair waiting for Jason to wake up. Rita fell asleep. It is morning and Rita has awoke again and then 10 minutes later Rita watched as Jason started to wake up the support systems were hit with energy from Jason’s hand. Rita was handed a newspaper and on the front page, Disk jockey defends female citizen and survives being hit by a shooting star. Jason what happened to you. I defended you from further harm my ankle was sprained by a gang member and passed out. Did you know a shooting star hit you? Thank god Rita hugs your alive Jason. He called in and told his boss that he would need time to recover from the incident and to find what happened to him.


Jason went to workout by running during his first day off and discovered that he was running faster than he ever did before that was the same, as some superheroes would have. He then discovered another one of his powers with the next by hitting the heavy punching bag what was holding it. He was stretching with his hands out and energy blasts came out of his hand. He did it again and discovered other ways to use the energy blasts with his hands. He played Mocap Boxing on of his favorite video games on the fourth day he was off at ESPN Zone. He noticed that after beating the game that he was not even tired or exhausted at all so he then ran from Wrigley Field to US Cellular Field and SearsTower but still was not exhausted. He was starting to believe that the shooting star had given him powers. So decides to talk to Rita and tells her this. Rita is shocked and amazed what she hears. To conclude he went through tests and a human scanner which showed nonhuman traits and characteristics proving he was more than a man and revealed powers and weapons.

He continued to take time off to learn the other powers. Since the event of where he tried to protect Rita crime continued to rise and the rumor of a man with powers continued talk by other people. However, it did not stop criminals from continuing to commit crimes and the crime rate to rise higher.


He was not willing to become a hero at first. One of the reasons was that he was afraid that it makes people grow afraid of him especially Rita. He thought of it would be easier to forget his powers ever existed. However, the dream he had finally convinced him. He had a nightmare that had Rita murdered at her apartment. Jason woke up used his ultra speed to get to her and knocked on the door. He told her she was in danger and that she had to leave. Rita believed him and took her back to his apartment with ultra speed.

Jason told her about his powers. Rita was a little shocked but not afraid. Rita told Jason he could use his powers to protect the city. Both of them went to bed knowing about his powers.

During the few weeks Jason stops small crimes such as grand theft, mugging, robbing, and assaults. When stopping these crimes he is once again exposed to his powers and starts to learn how to control them. After seeing a tragic murder it is then that he finds out that he must use his powers to protect the city and the people. He goes back home and come up his name and a costume.

I suggest you re-write that.....

 

[Harlekin]

I suggest you re-write that.....

He won't. I gave him a full analysis, word per word of what he could do better and he disregarded it.

 

[Duende Verde]

Okay, so if I draw a picture of Aunt May defeating a Sentinel, does that make it true.

My Super Saiyan Pikachu can defeat Nightavenger, Sabretooth, a Sentinel and Aunt May at the same time.

 

[Ghostrider87]

I suggest you re-write that.....

I will re-write it.

 

[Ghostrider87]

I am going to draw the picture. It's just a fact that Nightavenger would beat the Sentinels. I am not going to give up.

 

[Machx72]

I am going to draw the picture. It's just a fact that Nightavenger would beat the Sentinels. I am not going to give up.

It's not a fact. So you draw a picture of it, so what? I can draw my own little superhero destroying the world, does that make it fact? Nope.

Like I said before, your superhero is a broken piece that you're in over your head about. You need serious help with the storytelling and the piecing together of the puzzle- both the puzzle that makes up the story, and the puzzle that makes up your mind... Because you're seriously lacking key elements in both.

 

[Ghostrider87]

He would win. Either he would just throw the Sentinels down on the ground. Or he would use the fire or heat energy blasts. There are plenty of other ways Nightavenger would beat a Sentinel or a group of Sentinels.

 

[spdrknight]

Ghostrider87, why do you keep coming back for punishment? It does not seem like you like criticism, nor do you take any advise from posters who are trying to offer your guidance on how to improve your writing and creative skills.

My suggestion to you is this: start from scratch with your character, you have not put much thought into him or his world. Go back to the drawing board and take your ego out of your work. From my point of view, you are powering up your character because your lack confidence, or something, and need to endue this "new" superhero with enough power to overcompensate for whatever it is in your psyche that your lack.

I am not trying to be mean, but I think your need a blunt smack over the head. But some posters have tried to do that already, so I think I am wasting my time.

 

[Machx72]

Dude, don't try it. He's gonna tell you that you're wrong and that his character is going to be a historical work of art.

When really, he fails to see that he's just created a hyped fanboy piece, like I've told him many times. I suggest that he sends the piece to Stan Lee and asks for his honest opinion.

 

[Ghostrider87]

Dear spdrknight

I am taking the advice on the writing. I realize you are not trying to be mean but people already told me and not to mention they still did it even after I got the point.



I am going to say I have depowered my super hero down.

(Powers: Superhuman strength , ultra speed, energy blasts, near invulnerability, enhanced awareness of almost anything, command of shooting stars, enhanced vision, enhanced hearing, enhanced durability.
Weapons: Star vehicle)

(Powers: Superhuman strength, Superhuman durability, ultra speed, energy blasts, near invulnerability, command of shooting stars.
Weapons: Star vehicle)

(Powers: Superhuman strength, enhanced durability, Superhuman speed, energy blasts, command of shooting stars, flight.
Weapons: Star glider)

(Powers: Superhuman strength, enhanced durability, Superhuman speed, energy blasts, command of shooting stars, flight.
Weapons: Star glider) This is the currunt set of powers I have for my super hero.

 

[spdrknight]

I don't think you have de-powered your hero, he still has a lot of the outrages powers he had before, minus a couple.

Plus you still are insisting he can beat up almost every super villain ever created. Why don't you just make up your own villains? Are you out of ideas or something?