Official Nightavenger Thread

[Ghostrider87]

]Powers: Superhuman strength, enhanced durability, Superhuman speed, energy blasts, command of shooting stars

I think this is going to be the final draft of his powers and weapons.


My Nightavenger Sketches

 

[Colossus24]

What I have for the Mob Villain is more hair parted off to the side and fancy suits. I am thinking about him having a right hand man. I also want him to have a fancy building in downtown Chicago.

wait you're thinking of having a mob villian? who has a fancy building? and has a right hand man? with hair parted off to the side? stop please the originality is overwhelming. If you want to have a chance at this being successful you need to more time into developing the characters, including Nightavenger.

 

[Ghostrider87]

What I have left with Nightavenger is his personality and his manners.

 

[spdrknight]

What I have left with Nightavenger is his personality and his manners.

What do you mean by "manners"?

 

[Colossus24]

i think he means mannerisms.

 

[spdrknight]

ohh, I see.

 

[Ghostrider87]

wait you're thinking of having a mob villian? who has a fancy building? and has a right hand man? with hair parted off to the side? stop please the originality is overwhelming. If you want to have a chance at this being successful you need to more time into developing the characters, including Nightavenger.

I already have the full biography done for Nightavenger.

 

[Colossus24]

I know...I struggled through it. My point was you need to re work it.

 

[Ghostrider87]

I know...I struggled through it. My point was you need to re work it.

I am going to get help from The Writing Center. After that I can start writing the biography for the other characters.

 

[Colossus24]

No after that you need to redo Nightavenger's bio.

 

[Ghostrider87]

I already have his biography done. I don't get what is with this you have to redo Nightavenger's bio. The changes I will be making are the ones after having it edited. Other than that I am keeping it the same except for changing Rita to a fitness instructor.

 

[Colossus24]

I already have his biography done. I don't get what is with this you have to redo Nightavenger's bio. The changes I will be making are the ones after having it edited. Other than that I am keeping it the same except for changing Rita to a fitness instructor.

I dont mean to be rude, but you don't seem to understand my point. Your writing is terrible and your ideas are not original. Editing is not going to fix everything. If you really want this to work, you need to have something that separates NA from other superheros.

 

[Victor Creed]

I dont mean to be rude, but you don't seem to understand my point. Your writing is terrible and your ideas are not original. Editing is not going to fix everything. If you really want this to work, you need to have something that separates NA from other superheros.

Well said.

My last post was trying to get the point across that his sounds ridiculous, but apparently even saying it right out isn't going to make him understand. I hope he dumps large amounts of money into this project.........

He'll be homeless within a week.

 

[Ghostrider87]

Well said.

My last post was trying to get the point across that his sounds ridiculous, but apparently even saying it right out isn't going to make him understand. I hope he dumps large amounts of money into this project.........

He'll be homeless within a week.

I will say that none of my ideas are not original that is not all true. Another it is a draft so do not expect to be perfect. I am sure I will think of something that separates Nightavenger from other superheroes.

Another thing you know you are wrong about the statement below. I am not going to become homeless. One more thing Nightavenger would beat Sabretooth in a fight if they ever faced each other.

 

[Colossus24]

I will say that none of my ideas are not original that is not all true.

so its not true that none of your ideas are not original? If you wanted to say that simply you would say "my ideas are unoriginal."

 

[animateer]

I actually like the idea of a DJ as a Superhero. He could use his position in the underground night club scene to learn of mobsters, and track illigal activity.

Although I wouldn't have him hit directly by the meteor, that would kill a mortal man. I would have him investigate the crash site and be infected by the meteor (not original, but better).

As far as his clothes, It needs alot of work. No personality.
I am thinking Blade, or Punisher, but scewed towards tha fantastic.
If he is unpenatratible, he doesn't need armor. And if he shoots stars from his hands, doesn't need weapons.

I would make his love intrest an up and coming recording artist, or chick that is in the music industry(promoter, agent, owner of a record lable). She should be better than him in the "real world".

Good luck... and Excelsior! (Stan Lee reference)

 

[Ghostrider87]

1. Yoda makes more sense when he speaks than you do.

2. It's Sabretooth not Sabertooth.

3. I'm sure Nightavenger might "waist" someone quite easily (I am assuming waist means to gayly straddle another man), but Sabretooth would kick his ass.

4. Moron

Ok you are right for the comics it is spelled Sabretooth. No, I do not mean that for waist. You have to be kidding me if you think Sabretooth would win against Nightavenger in a fight. Sabretooth would be lucky to put a scratch on him.

Never call me a moron again.

 

[Harlekin]

Okay, Ghostrider, would you mind just posting right now what you plan on doing?

- You'll need an artist.
- You'll need to get it printed.

Y'know, that kinda stuff.

 

[Ghostrider87]

I would do that if people would stop repeating what was already said.

 

[Asteroid-Man]

sounds ok, but I am guessing the contest is over

 

[Kevin Roegele]

I am glad you asked. I will tell you that he will have his own main set of enemies along with a main villan how most superheors have a main villan and I will list them another time also he will fight established villans in the Marvel Universe such as Dr. Doom and Thanos. Also could the next person post other villans that exist in the Marvel Universe that also be worthy opponents of Nightavenger.

Nightavenger, as a name, suggests a night time vigilante like Batman, Nightwing or Daredevil, whereas if he's battling cosmic threats like Thanos he needs a name more in the Superman or Captain Marvel vein.

 

[Ghostrider87]

I am not selling the character to Marvel. His archnemesis is going to be on the same level as him so I am keeping his name.

 

[Colossus24]

Your response made zero sense.

 

[Ghostrider87]

I am not going to sell Nightavenger to Marvel. His archnemesis is going to be about equal to him. Since his enemies are not cosmic threats I don't have to change his name and I get to keep his name as Nightavenger.

 

[Immortalfire]

Nightavenger...all I'm hearing is from the fourth season of Knight Rider when RC3 worked as the Street Avenger in Chicago.