Peter Parker - The Spectacular Spider-Man

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Let's face it, folks: the stories Marvel has been publishing lately have been abysmal. Sure, the writing may be good, and the art is, and always has been, worth taking a look at. Still, things just haven't been going Spider-Man's way lately. From the mystical origins, to Civil War, to Brand New Day... Spider-Man's story arcs have grown more and more convoluted.

I figured, what better time to start writing my own rendition of Spider-Man? Sure, it's a story that's been told hundreds of times but... it's fun. I like the character and I like writing. Combining the two didn't seem so far-fetched.

So, without further ado, I present to you, my telling of "The Spectacular Spider-Man..."

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THE STORY SO FAR:

CHAPTER I

CHAPTER II

CHAPTER III

CHAPTER IV


CHAPTER V

CHAPTER VI

CHAPTER VII

CHAPTER VIII

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CHAPTER I

Queens, New York has always been a very rough and tumble part of the city. It's not rough or gritty like the heart of the Bronx. There aren't gangs waiting around every corner, and, oddly, like any suburban region, it's full of families, all of whom have children. Some even have a white-picket fence, 3.5 kids, and a dog named "Buzzy" who runs around the family's modestly-sized back yard. Of course, every morning the streets are adorned with the obligatory, yellow school buses that bring load after load of student to the elementary, middle, and high schools that were scattered throughout the neighborhood. In these schools, though, that was where life could be rough. Every day people were trying to fit in, and if they couldn't fit in, they'd stick out. Certainly, there were some youngsters who would lay low, simply trying to survive their high-school years. And that, with an everyman, an ordinary student, is where this story begins.

Peter Parker was, apparently, the typical high school student. He had a crush on a girl, sometimes more than one, he wasn't an athletic superstar, he didn't participate on the chess team, and he was by no means obnoxious or rude. He dressed in the typical outfit of jeans, a pair of modest sneakers, and a retro t-shirt. His hands were almost always buried in his pockets, unless holding up the spine of a book in which he could bury his gaze. He forgot his locker combination sometimes, was late to homeroom on occasion, and tripped over his own feet like most juniors in high school do. He was, in every sense of the word, "relatable."

Like most teenagers, though, the intrepid, young Peter was not without his quirks. Academically, he was one of the brightest boys that P.S. 138, known to the residents of Queens as Midtown High School, had seen grace its doors. The boy had an inherent gift for the sciences, and had an insatiable appetite for reading. His room was piled high with stack upon stack of books. Borrowed books, bought book, inherited books. All sorts of books. The books themselves had become a part of the decor, adding a somewhat lovable, albeit reclusive and nerdy, aspect to his bedroom. The rest of his home was as normal as could be, complete with a pair of loving parents.

Though not given to him by birth, the two adults Peter lived with had raised him as their own. Richard and Mary Parker, the boy's biological mother and father, but were killed suddenly in a plane crash a year after Peter was born. He was brought up, then, by his aunt and uncle. His aunt, May, was a kind, elderly woman whose eyes possessed a youthful gleam of someone far younger than her. Her sharp wit and quick, vibrant temper always kept Peter on his toes. A counterpoint to May's energy and anger lay in Peter's uncle. He was a calm man, not old or withering by any means. When Peter's Aunt May would use a swiftly placed, witty remark, his Uncle Ben would silently chuckle, open his eyes a bit, and make a reserved comment that cast a logical light on the situation at hand.

Every day it's the same thing. Peter thought, as his glasses sit on the bridge of his nose, magnifying the page of the book in front of him.

"Peter, I really think that you ought to be..." His aunt said, adjusting a tray of bacon in the oven.

Social .

"...more social at your age."

Three points for me.

He didn't bother looking up from his book, or even smiling, at the accuracy of his prediction. He was a bright kid; he was right most of the time.

"There's that dance coming up in a few days on Saturday night, Peter." May said, staring at the bacon.

After a few page-turns, Peter's aunt glared at him over her shoulder.

"Are you even listening to me?" She hissed.

Before Peter could reply with the half-hearted "uh-huh" that he normally would, his Uncle Ben was chiming in.

"Now, May," He began, sipping from his coffee. Her glare told him that this wasn't a conversation to be had so early in the morning. So, instead he simply muttered, "You're burnin' the bacon."

At this, she jumped in surprise, opening the smoking oven wide. And, with her mitt on her hand, heaved the tray of black, sizzling meat out.

"I'm sorry, boys." She said, wearily. "Looks like it's hotcakes for this morning."

The pair exchanged a set of worried grins. Hotcakes rarely had a better fate than bacon.

"Uh!" Peter said aloud, trying to stall. "I have to get going anyway. Bus an' all."

May looked somewhat relieved.

"Well, if it's alright with you, Peter..."

"Yup!" He said, kissing her forehead as he thrust himself out of his chair. "Absolutely fine. Gotta go!"

He snatched his iPod off of the corner of the table, a prize from the latest science fair.

"Hey, Peter!" His uncle called as Peter headed for the door. "About that dance. Why not ask that nice girl, Liz Allan we met at the ballgame a few weeks ago."

"I'll think about it Uncle Ben!" Peter called, gripping his book in his palm.

May placed a thankful palm on Ben's shoulder, and he gripped the top of her hand with his own as they watched their boy leave for the day.

As soon as he set foot on the pathway outside, and heard the door slam behind him, Peter snorted out loud.

Liz Allan? He said in his own mind. Yeah, that'd be a good move. As the quarterback's girl out to a huge school function. Great idea, Uncle Ben. Keep those ideas a-comin'!

He made his way to the bus stop, plugging his music into his ears as he went. He contemplated opening the book as he waited, but in combination with his music, that could only lead to him missing the bus.

I mean, c'mon. He though, raising the issue of the dance once more. Flash Thompson's girlfriend and me? At a dance? For real?

He shook his head begrudgingly and waited for the bus to arrive.

Ex-girlfriend, that is.

His eyes opened wide behind his circular glasses.

NO! Nope. Nuh-uh. No siree, Bob. I'm just going to read.

With that, he opened his theoretical physics book and started reading, distracting himself from the scantily-clad Liz Allan who was dancing around in his head.

The brakes of the arriving bus squealed and Peter glanced up.

Finally.

He shut his book and heaved himself into the open door of the bus.

"Morning, Mr. Collins." Parker greeted the bus driver with an affectionate grin.

"Mornin', Peter." the driver said with a chuckle and a pat on the back.

The floor beneath his feet was sticky, for a reason that Peter didn't even care to know.

He glanced warily down the left aisle, then the right. Only one empty seat left.

He seized it quickly, much to the chagrin of the sticky floor.

A glob of liquid hit the back of his head and he cringed. Sliding a handkerchief lodged in his right pocket into his hand, he wiped the gel from the back of his head and examined it.

Jelly.

Peter snarled over his shoulder, too timid to even fully glance towards the back of the bus.

No doubt, this morning's dose of reality was prescribed by a member of Flash Thompson's loathsome football fraternity.

Every day it's the same thing. Peter thought, replacing his used hanky.

Liz Allan? Yeah, right.
 
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Good Job! I'm looking foward to the next part! :up:
 
I really hope to have part II up tonight, but I can't make any promises.
 
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CHAPTER II

Peter Parker maneuvered his way through the packed corridors and halls of Midtown High School until he finally, at last, made it to his locker.

Still, he was convincing himself that he didn't find Liz Allan at all attractive.

I guess if you were going to force me to go with her to the dance, I wouldn't mind. He thought. She's good looking and all, but I mean she's not all tha--

Peter glanced over his shoulder and saw Flash Thompson, the kid who could teach "Jerkiness 101" like a pro, with his arm around Liz's hip, who looked amused, but not enthralled. The rowdy crowd that surrounded them was laughing and shoving each other.

Everyone seemed to be having a good time.

Nevermind.

Now, Peter was glum, no doubt about that. Peter placed his theoretical physics book in his locker, next to his yearbook. He pulled his binder for first period out of his locker and pushed the door closed, glaring at the floor as he did so.

His first class was AP English Language and Composition, a fancy title for an easy class. It might as well've been called "Learn to Write Well."

For Peter, a student more apt in the literal and physical subjects, the elements of writing presented a unique challenge. He, and his teacher, found his writing to be somewhat mechanical, reliant on an abundance of independent clauses, and a surprisingly small amount of subordination. This made his writing stilted and lacking in flow. These were two things that any teacher, especially one who taught English, didn't enjoy.

Peter sat, holding the top of his head in his hands over his most newly acquired novel, A Clockwork Orange. The young man, enthralled with his book, disregarded the teacher's current activity, namely passing back the latest assignment.

He slid the paper under Peter's nose, and he saw his grade circled in red ink on the top of his assignment.

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Oh...no.

He looked up at the teacher in shock, not having any idea how to respond to getting the first "F" in his life. Ever.

Eh-ver.

His professor seemed to have a look of both smug satisfaction and bitter empathy on his face.

"Wha..." Peter stammered, terrified for his average. "How?"

"Mr. Parker, it seems that you just aren't suited for the precision or eloquence that the AP Course demands. However, I know that with practice you can do well." The teacher said, almost condescendingly.

Peter gritted his teeth. His teacher was relishing this. He'd finally taken puny Peter Parker down a notch, hadn't he? Finally, Peter wasn't the kid who got straight A's, he was, at last, humbled.

He wanted to say something snarky, he wanted to put the teacher in his place. But, instead, he mumbled quietly.

"Yes, Mr. Warren. I'll try to do better next time."

"Ensure that you do. Or you will fail this course."

The student groaned wearily under his breath and shoved the paper into his bag.

The period ended quickly, and Peter made his way to his locker.

"Hi, Pete!" a voice next to him called. He closed his locker quietly, still lurking on the paper he got back in his language class.

He closed his locker and saw the smiling face of Gwendolyn Stacy at her locker.

"Heya, Gwen." Peter said, smiling back at her.

"Ready for another day of science class?" she asked, slinging her purse over her shoulder.

"You know me. I'm always ready."

"Of course you are." She said, smiling. "Walk me?"

"Sure." Peter said, grinning. He was never suave or smooth around girls, so he wasn't sure of what Gwen meant exactly.

She looped her arm through his, and he pushed his glasses up the bridge of his nose.

"So, Pete. I don't know if you've heard or not,"

She has a boyfriend. Why am I always the last to find out about these things? Peter asked himself angrily.

"but there's a dance this Saturday night,"

And I'm going with my new boyfrie--

"and I was wondering if you'd like to go with me."

Peter felt his jaw drop.

Gwen Stacy... the cheerleader... the girl who got A's in every one of her classes was asking him, puny Peter Parker, to a dance?

"M-me?" He stammered. "Me?"

"Yes, you, goofball. I thought you might want to go to dinner before, too." She said, blushing. Hoping to deflect the 'is this a date' question, she added, "I sent you a text message last night, but you didn't respond."

"Oh." Peter said, embarrassed, "I don't get texts, so I just leave my phone off in my room."

"Maybe you should turn it on, then." She said.

The pair rounded the corner and entered the science lab.

"So, Gwen..." Peter said, putting his bag beneath his seat. "Would this be a date?"

He had to ask. He didn't want to, for fear of the answer being "No, I'm just desperate." But, what if it was a date? What then?

"Would it be okay with you if it is?"

"Oh, boy, yeah." Peter said, a little too enthusiastically.

Gwen giggled, and Peter tried not to smile. Like that, he was convinced he had a crush on this girl.

"Thanks, Peter." She said, leaning over and kissing him on the cheek. Peter Parker had been kissed by a girl.

At the end of the day, after walking Gwen to her car and getting another kiss, Peter Parker was overjoyed. He stood, giddily waiting for Harry Osborn to pick him up.
 
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Cocky good, not cocky Byrd.
I know. I'm actually glad you used 'cocky' to describe him. I'm sure Peter would take pride in that. After all, he's well aware that he uses humor and sarcasm as a defense mechanism.
 
After further review, the kick is good! Uh...I mean...I like your story so far.

But damn you for making want to do a short story origin from Eddie Brock's perspective! I need to focus my energy on getting my Superman back on track.
 
How do you think I feel? I just keep getting kicked further and further to the point of making a Batman spinoff of these. :csad:
 
That was too short of a read but I'm looking foward to the next chapters! :woot:
 
Good work, Parker. I'm liking this story a lot. Good capture of the character and his enviroment. Look forward to the next one.
 

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