About ACT THREE:
1) I can't accept Alfred leaving Bruce. So I'll say I don't like this subplot with Barbara taking place of Alfred. There must be something to include Barbara, if she's needed.
2) Cool stuff with Martha discovering destroyed grave.
3) Because Lois wanted to know. I don't like it for a numerous reasons. Villains explains their motivation for no reason at all - it's as cliche as it can be. Lois - damsel in distress AGAIN.
4) I like the egg timer. ) Mirrors BvS. Kinda unites all DS cultists. Though I don't get the reason for setting the clock.
5) Swanwick's restroom saga continues.
6) Mannheim's sudden teleport to the lab?
7) Batman saving Lois is a cool idea (outside the fact that she requires saving again), but we need to know how he got there. Did he track Lois somehow?
8) Not a big fan of the idea of Lois going everywhere with JL. What's the reason for her to be there anyway?
9) Cool utilization of MM.
10) How does Superman find Lois?
11) Also, I love the tone of the ending and Superman delivering a speech on behalf of other heroes.
12) I don't think it should be a montage. Things like Clark returning home should be a really powerful moment. The ending should take it's time to wrap these stories. It doesn't need to show all JL members doing something. Just enough to setup future films. For example, show a scene where they part ways till they're needed again. Like where they can find each other.
Overall impressions:
-It looks like it's a story of Lois in the first place, not Batman assembling JL to protect the Earth, it feels like she has the most important job to do and and a key to everything. JL is just brute force. I would totally put Lois back a bit;
-Superman's resurrection is handled well, and it's an awesome idea to introduce MM though his resurrection;
-I would cut Batfamily subplot in favor of JL doing something. Alfred helps Bruce and other JL members;
-Darkseid cult is an awesome enemy, but provides little action;
-Leave individual JL members enemies outside of the story. There should be one common enemy and maybe some tension between Themyscira and Atlantis;
-I like the idea of using Waller and Lex more, linking Lex to Darkseid cult and overall subplot of opening a portal;
-I haven't noticed much opinion of JL members on JL as an idea, why they should act together and so on...
That's it for now.