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I'm of the opinion that Hal Jordan should be the focus of a GREEN LANTERN franchise, with Kyle Rayner or John Stewart being the Lantern featured in any Justice League project. Hal is just so, so great on his own, I don't think teaming him with others helps him out so much as a character. I think Hal's lone struggle adds a lot to the Green Lantern story.
In regard to the Golden Age Green Lantern, I've always thought that Ed Harris could play a pretty solid Alan Scott.
Here's an excerpt from a GREEN LANTERN script I toyed with a while back, featuring Hal.
Darkness. Silence.
As the orchestral strains of the Green Lantern March begin, a soft green glow fades into the screen. The universe appears. Planets and stars. The green glow fades, becoming the vast, star-dotted blackness of space. We sweep through the cosmos.
GANTHET (V.O.)
Since the creation of the universe, the forces of order have clashed with the forces of chaos. Eons ago, on the planet Oa, The Guardians of the Universe, beings of incredible power, sought to repel the forces of chaos through the establishment of an elite corps. of peacekeepers, comprised of beings from all sectors of the known universe. Through these beings would flow the incredible power of The Guardians.
Keep moving through the universe.
GANTHET (CONT’D)
These beings were brought together for a single purpose. To defeat the forces of chaos, and to create universal order.
We are in a strange system, moving toward a small planet.
SUPER TEXT: OA, THE CENTER OF THE KNOWN UNIVERSE
As we near the surface of Oa, we see a disturbing sight. The planet is a battlefield, lit up with green and red flashes.
As me move closer, we can make out dozens and dozen of beings of various races, all clad in identical black and green battlesuits with green insignias on their chests. These are THE GREEN LANTERN CORPS. And their homeworld is under attack.
EXT. OAN CITADEL
At the edge of the battlefield, a towering silver FORTRESS rises above the landscape, the home of The Guardians and the stronghold of the Green Lantern Corps. The battlefield is littered with dead and wounded. The Green Lanterns battle on.
One group of three Green Lanterns is flung from the source of the destruction, a massive golden armored CONSTRUCT. Whatever this thing is, it's all but unstoppable. A group of Lanterns attack in tandem, and the construct fires red LASERS from its arm-mounted pulse cannons, burning holes right through them.
The construct marches over a field of bodies, toward another group of Green Lanterns, who fire continuous streams of green lasers. This has no effect on the construct, which plows right through the soldiers, FRYING them with a strafing red laser blast. The construct charges on through the confusion.
EXT. OAN FORTRESS, WATCHTOWER
High above, on a parapet, four senior Green Lanterns watch as chaos ensues below. The Oan equivalent of commanders, these four beings watch in silence as their forces are decimated. The four beings are:
KILOWOG, a massive, eight hundred pound being resembling an alien hippopotamus, with brown skin and a massive jaw.
SINESTRO, a tall, thin humanoid with blood-red skin, thin features, a shock of slicked black hair and black eyes.
ABIN SUR. The same race as Sinestro, although shorter and more muscular, he is in fact the other Lantern’s brother.
TOMAR-RE, a tall, thin beak-headed alien with dark orange scale-covered skin and a large dorsal fin on his head.
The sounds of combat can be heard below. Lasers and the screams of injured Green Lanterns. Abin Sur speaks.
SUBTITLES
ABIN SUR
Another squadron has fallen. We must sound the retreat, Kilowog.
KILOWOG
Not while The Corps still stands. The Guardians must be protected.
TOMAR-RE
Most of our forces have fallen. We cannot stop it. We must evacuate.
SINESTRO
No, Tomar-Re. We mustn’t waver. We must halt this intruder.
SINESTRO
The tchkk-tchkk. The Guardians imprisoned them on their homeworld...now they want revenge.
ABIN SUR
How, Brother?
KILOWOG
A frontal attack is no good. Its armor weakens our auras. Our rings are next to useless against it.
SINESTRO
So far.
KILOWOG
You have an idea, Sinestro?
SINESTRO
Perhaps. Regardless, we must all intervene now. The Lanterns’ wills are fading. If our foe gains the fortress, then...all is lost.
KILOWOG
For The Guardians, then. Attack!
The four Green Lanterns rise into the air, rings glowing, auras bright with the strength of their wills, and descend toward the battleground below. Their presence creates an element of hope, and some of the Green Lanterns cheer, rallying.
Kilowog and Sinestro land in front of the construct. The two of them attack in tandem, using well-oiled combat strategies.
The Construct, unaffected, raises its pulse cannons. Both Sinesatro and Kilowog throw up force fields as it fires, and are propelled backward across the battlefield.
Abin Sur flies forward, firing his own power beam into the ground beneath the construct, disrupting its balance. A red laser strikes Sur’s aura and sends him spinning. He crashes to the ground and rolls, injured and out of action. The construct approaches him, leveling it's laser cannon at him.
SINESTRO
Abin Sur!
Sinestro flies forward, creating a bubble to shield Abin Sur from the construct’s lasers. Then Sinestro flies off, Abin Sur in tow. He sets him down behind a rock outcropping and kneels over his brother, who appears to be half-conscious.
SINESTRO (CONT’D)
Brother?
Abin Sur's eyes flicker open. He looks up at Sinestro.
ABIN SUR
I'm fine. You must...stop it.
SINESTRO
I will, Brother. I swear it.
Sinestro flies upward, where Kilowog is battling the construct. Kilowog gets smacked down. He retreats to an outcropping near
Sinestro.
KILOWOG
It's too powerful. Sheer force is not enough. We cannot defeat it.
SINESTRO
Then we'll have to outsmart it.
Sinestro looks around. Sees the bodies. The smoke. The flames. The utter, total chaos. He trembles with rage.
INT. CITADEL
The Ruling Council of The Guardians watches the destruction from a high balcony.
GUARDIAN
We should have wiped them out entirely when we had the chance.
GANTHET
Unacceptable. Our laws of order do not permit genocide. The Lanterns will stop this aggression.
GUARDIANS
And if they don't?
GANTHET
We will take action if neccessary.
EXT. CITADEL
Sinestro sees the smoke. Bodies. Fallen Lanterns. LEGION stalks around.
SINESTRO (CONT’D)
No more of this. I have had enough.
It’s path cleared, The Construct stalks toward the Fortress, incinerating four more Green Lanterns who attack in tandem.
Sinestro moves out from behind his cover. His protective aura beings to glow as his anger toward the intruder increases.
SINESTRO (CONT’D)
I will not allow this to continue. Order must be maintained!
KILOWOG
Sinestro!
ABIN SUR
Wait!
Sinestro fires a power beam at The Construct. It has little effect, but The Construct swivels on a hinged axis and begins to return in Sinestro's direction. It raises it's arm and fires lasers at Sinestro. Sinestro dodges the attack and flies off. The construct runs after
Sinestro, tracking him.
EXT. OA, CANYON BASE
Sinestro lands in front of a pool of tar between two nearby canyon walls. The construct follows him into the canyon. Sinestro stands his ground as The Construct advances.
SINESTRO
You are nothing to me, invader. Nothing but a bringer of chaos.
Sinestro raises his ring and fires a power beam at the construct. The beam strikes The Construct. Nothing happens. The construct fires it's own laser. Sinestro BLOCKS it with a chunk of boulder, then HURLS the chunk at construct. Sinestro stands on the other side of the tar pit. The construct moves toward him, its laser cannons leveled.
SINESTRO (CONT’D)
Come.
The Construct moves forward. Sinestro smiles as it begins to cross the tar pool. And then, The Construct starts to sink.
Sinestro flies up into the air and comes down on its “head” with force, driving The Construct down into the tar, where it disappears from view with a loud whirring of machine parts.
All is silent for a few seconds, and then the tar pit bubbles, and The Construct EXPLODES from it's surface, now covered in thick, black tar, and pissed, if a machine can be.
SINESTRO (CONT’D)
All right, then. Let’s finish this.
The Construct fires a laser, which Sinestro deflects with a green force shield. He flies forward, SLAMMING into the construct, driving it back into a canyon wall. The construct rises to its feet, but Sinestro is much faster. He grabs the construct's feet and swings it, THROWS it across the canyon, where it smashes into another rock wall.
Sinestro fires an intense power beam at it, and the construct smokes, damaged. It races toward him, and Sinestro PUNCHES it backward. The Construct rolls, gets to it's feet, and LEAPS into the air toward him. Sinestro reaches out with his ring, and traps The Construct inside a power bubble in mid-air.
SINESTRO (CONT’D)
Your advantage is gone.
Sinestro flies up into the air until he is level with it.
SINESTRO (CONT’D)
The advantage is now mine.
LEGION (V.O.)
Do you know what The Guardians have done? Do you even know the nature of the creatures you serve?
SINESTRO
I serve order.
Sinestro flies upward, the construct in tow, toward the blackness of space. He looks at the stars in front of him.
SINESTRO (CONT’D)
You’ve brought chaos here. That is unacceptable.
Sinestro spins once, twice, three times, and with tremendous ring-aided strength, HURLS the construct into the far reaches of space, watching as it disappear into the stars. He descends back to the Citadel. Kilowog land beside Sinestro. The two of them look up at the stars, silent for a moment.
SINESTRO
I chose a trajectory that will avoid any inhabited systems.
KILOWOG
Then the threat is over...
SINESTRO
For now, Kilowog. But we must remain vigilant. Order must be maintained. Whatever the cost.
Abin Sur looks at his brother. The three lanterns look to the stars. Somber. We move up to the stars above, and begin moving through the endless void of the vast, limitless Universe...
GANTHET (V.O.)
Their deeds are legend. They have come to be known throughout the universe...as the Green Lanterns. For billions of years, the legend of the Green Lantern Corps. has grown, as its soldiers strive to bring light even to the darkest reaches of the universe.
Now we hear a familiar oath..recited in a thousand alien tongues. Rising in volume, it blends into the HUM of PURE POWER.
A sleek, futuristic, POWER BATTERY, composed of a strange, luminescent green metal emerges from the blackness of space, shining with a brilliant green light. The energies within it begin to GLOW so brilliantly that they wipe out the screen in a green FLASH as The Green Lantern March crescendoes.
SUPER TITLE: GREEN LANTERN
The green glow fades out on deep space. A field of stars. Past the Moon, and then...the Earth.
EXT. SOLAR SYSTEM
We descend toward the Earth, slowly, toward North America, and down, down, down through thick white clouds until...with a loud SONIC BOOM, a sleek, EXPERIMENTAL JET rockets past the screen, trailing smoke.
INT. EXPERIMENTAL JETPLANE -- DAY
Clouds sweep past the cockpit. The rush of pure speed. The loud ROAR of a powerful turbine engine. The flightsuit-clad man at the controls twists the yoke and the world outside SPINS around the cockpit.
In regard to the Golden Age Green Lantern, I've always thought that Ed Harris could play a pretty solid Alan Scott.
Here's an excerpt from a GREEN LANTERN script I toyed with a while back, featuring Hal.
Darkness. Silence.
As the orchestral strains of the Green Lantern March begin, a soft green glow fades into the screen. The universe appears. Planets and stars. The green glow fades, becoming the vast, star-dotted blackness of space. We sweep through the cosmos.
GANTHET (V.O.)
Since the creation of the universe, the forces of order have clashed with the forces of chaos. Eons ago, on the planet Oa, The Guardians of the Universe, beings of incredible power, sought to repel the forces of chaos through the establishment of an elite corps. of peacekeepers, comprised of beings from all sectors of the known universe. Through these beings would flow the incredible power of The Guardians.
Keep moving through the universe.
GANTHET (CONT’D)
These beings were brought together for a single purpose. To defeat the forces of chaos, and to create universal order.
We are in a strange system, moving toward a small planet.
SUPER TEXT: OA, THE CENTER OF THE KNOWN UNIVERSE
As we near the surface of Oa, we see a disturbing sight. The planet is a battlefield, lit up with green and red flashes.
As me move closer, we can make out dozens and dozen of beings of various races, all clad in identical black and green battlesuits with green insignias on their chests. These are THE GREEN LANTERN CORPS. And their homeworld is under attack.
EXT. OAN CITADEL
At the edge of the battlefield, a towering silver FORTRESS rises above the landscape, the home of The Guardians and the stronghold of the Green Lantern Corps. The battlefield is littered with dead and wounded. The Green Lanterns battle on.
One group of three Green Lanterns is flung from the source of the destruction, a massive golden armored CONSTRUCT. Whatever this thing is, it's all but unstoppable. A group of Lanterns attack in tandem, and the construct fires red LASERS from its arm-mounted pulse cannons, burning holes right through them.
The construct marches over a field of bodies, toward another group of Green Lanterns, who fire continuous streams of green lasers. This has no effect on the construct, which plows right through the soldiers, FRYING them with a strafing red laser blast. The construct charges on through the confusion.
EXT. OAN FORTRESS, WATCHTOWER
High above, on a parapet, four senior Green Lanterns watch as chaos ensues below. The Oan equivalent of commanders, these four beings watch in silence as their forces are decimated. The four beings are:
KILOWOG, a massive, eight hundred pound being resembling an alien hippopotamus, with brown skin and a massive jaw.
SINESTRO, a tall, thin humanoid with blood-red skin, thin features, a shock of slicked black hair and black eyes.
ABIN SUR. The same race as Sinestro, although shorter and more muscular, he is in fact the other Lantern’s brother.
TOMAR-RE, a tall, thin beak-headed alien with dark orange scale-covered skin and a large dorsal fin on his head.
The sounds of combat can be heard below. Lasers and the screams of injured Green Lanterns. Abin Sur speaks.
SUBTITLES
ABIN SUR
Another squadron has fallen. We must sound the retreat, Kilowog.
KILOWOG
Not while The Corps still stands. The Guardians must be protected.
TOMAR-RE
Most of our forces have fallen. We cannot stop it. We must evacuate.
SINESTRO
No, Tomar-Re. We mustn’t waver. We must halt this intruder.
SINESTRO
The tchkk-tchkk. The Guardians imprisoned them on their homeworld...now they want revenge.
ABIN SUR
How, Brother?
KILOWOG
A frontal attack is no good. Its armor weakens our auras. Our rings are next to useless against it.
SINESTRO
So far.
KILOWOG
You have an idea, Sinestro?
SINESTRO
Perhaps. Regardless, we must all intervene now. The Lanterns’ wills are fading. If our foe gains the fortress, then...all is lost.
KILOWOG
For The Guardians, then. Attack!
The four Green Lanterns rise into the air, rings glowing, auras bright with the strength of their wills, and descend toward the battleground below. Their presence creates an element of hope, and some of the Green Lanterns cheer, rallying.
Kilowog and Sinestro land in front of the construct. The two of them attack in tandem, using well-oiled combat strategies.
The Construct, unaffected, raises its pulse cannons. Both Sinesatro and Kilowog throw up force fields as it fires, and are propelled backward across the battlefield.
Abin Sur flies forward, firing his own power beam into the ground beneath the construct, disrupting its balance. A red laser strikes Sur’s aura and sends him spinning. He crashes to the ground and rolls, injured and out of action. The construct approaches him, leveling it's laser cannon at him.
SINESTRO
Abin Sur!
Sinestro flies forward, creating a bubble to shield Abin Sur from the construct’s lasers. Then Sinestro flies off, Abin Sur in tow. He sets him down behind a rock outcropping and kneels over his brother, who appears to be half-conscious.
SINESTRO (CONT’D)
Brother?
Abin Sur's eyes flicker open. He looks up at Sinestro.
ABIN SUR
I'm fine. You must...stop it.
SINESTRO
I will, Brother. I swear it.
Sinestro flies upward, where Kilowog is battling the construct. Kilowog gets smacked down. He retreats to an outcropping near
Sinestro.
KILOWOG
It's too powerful. Sheer force is not enough. We cannot defeat it.
SINESTRO
Then we'll have to outsmart it.
Sinestro looks around. Sees the bodies. The smoke. The flames. The utter, total chaos. He trembles with rage.
INT. CITADEL
The Ruling Council of The Guardians watches the destruction from a high balcony.
GUARDIAN
We should have wiped them out entirely when we had the chance.
GANTHET
Unacceptable. Our laws of order do not permit genocide. The Lanterns will stop this aggression.
GUARDIANS
And if they don't?
GANTHET
We will take action if neccessary.
EXT. CITADEL
Sinestro sees the smoke. Bodies. Fallen Lanterns. LEGION stalks around.
SINESTRO (CONT’D)
No more of this. I have had enough.
It’s path cleared, The Construct stalks toward the Fortress, incinerating four more Green Lanterns who attack in tandem.
Sinestro moves out from behind his cover. His protective aura beings to glow as his anger toward the intruder increases.
SINESTRO (CONT’D)
I will not allow this to continue. Order must be maintained!
KILOWOG
Sinestro!
ABIN SUR
Wait!
Sinestro fires a power beam at The Construct. It has little effect, but The Construct swivels on a hinged axis and begins to return in Sinestro's direction. It raises it's arm and fires lasers at Sinestro. Sinestro dodges the attack and flies off. The construct runs after
Sinestro, tracking him.
EXT. OA, CANYON BASE
Sinestro lands in front of a pool of tar between two nearby canyon walls. The construct follows him into the canyon. Sinestro stands his ground as The Construct advances.
SINESTRO
You are nothing to me, invader. Nothing but a bringer of chaos.
Sinestro raises his ring and fires a power beam at the construct. The beam strikes The Construct. Nothing happens. The construct fires it's own laser. Sinestro BLOCKS it with a chunk of boulder, then HURLS the chunk at construct. Sinestro stands on the other side of the tar pit. The construct moves toward him, its laser cannons leveled.
SINESTRO (CONT’D)
Come.
The Construct moves forward. Sinestro smiles as it begins to cross the tar pool. And then, The Construct starts to sink.
Sinestro flies up into the air and comes down on its “head” with force, driving The Construct down into the tar, where it disappears from view with a loud whirring of machine parts.
All is silent for a few seconds, and then the tar pit bubbles, and The Construct EXPLODES from it's surface, now covered in thick, black tar, and pissed, if a machine can be.
SINESTRO (CONT’D)
All right, then. Let’s finish this.
The Construct fires a laser, which Sinestro deflects with a green force shield. He flies forward, SLAMMING into the construct, driving it back into a canyon wall. The construct rises to its feet, but Sinestro is much faster. He grabs the construct's feet and swings it, THROWS it across the canyon, where it smashes into another rock wall.
Sinestro fires an intense power beam at it, and the construct smokes, damaged. It races toward him, and Sinestro PUNCHES it backward. The Construct rolls, gets to it's feet, and LEAPS into the air toward him. Sinestro reaches out with his ring, and traps The Construct inside a power bubble in mid-air.
SINESTRO (CONT’D)
Your advantage is gone.
Sinestro flies up into the air until he is level with it.
SINESTRO (CONT’D)
The advantage is now mine.
LEGION (V.O.)
Do you know what The Guardians have done? Do you even know the nature of the creatures you serve?
SINESTRO
I serve order.
Sinestro flies upward, the construct in tow, toward the blackness of space. He looks at the stars in front of him.
SINESTRO (CONT’D)
You’ve brought chaos here. That is unacceptable.
Sinestro spins once, twice, three times, and with tremendous ring-aided strength, HURLS the construct into the far reaches of space, watching as it disappear into the stars. He descends back to the Citadel. Kilowog land beside Sinestro. The two of them look up at the stars, silent for a moment.
SINESTRO
I chose a trajectory that will avoid any inhabited systems.
KILOWOG
Then the threat is over...
SINESTRO
For now, Kilowog. But we must remain vigilant. Order must be maintained. Whatever the cost.
Abin Sur looks at his brother. The three lanterns look to the stars. Somber. We move up to the stars above, and begin moving through the endless void of the vast, limitless Universe...
GANTHET (V.O.)
Their deeds are legend. They have come to be known throughout the universe...as the Green Lanterns. For billions of years, the legend of the Green Lantern Corps. has grown, as its soldiers strive to bring light even to the darkest reaches of the universe.
Now we hear a familiar oath..recited in a thousand alien tongues. Rising in volume, it blends into the HUM of PURE POWER.
A sleek, futuristic, POWER BATTERY, composed of a strange, luminescent green metal emerges from the blackness of space, shining with a brilliant green light. The energies within it begin to GLOW so brilliantly that they wipe out the screen in a green FLASH as The Green Lantern March crescendoes.
SUPER TITLE: GREEN LANTERN
The green glow fades out on deep space. A field of stars. Past the Moon, and then...the Earth.
EXT. SOLAR SYSTEM
We descend toward the Earth, slowly, toward North America, and down, down, down through thick white clouds until...with a loud SONIC BOOM, a sleek, EXPERIMENTAL JET rockets past the screen, trailing smoke.
INT. EXPERIMENTAL JETPLANE -- DAY
Clouds sweep past the cockpit. The rush of pure speed. The loud ROAR of a powerful turbine engine. The flightsuit-clad man at the controls twists the yoke and the world outside SPINS around the cockpit.