I love you :heart:
In the immortal words of Bill & Ted, "Excellent."EB, if you want to add another post you can. That was a great team-up, really enjoyed working with you
Yeah, but the other 1/3 still can't wriggle free of MB.Can do. Now I can finally have 2/3 of my characters out of your iron grip.
. Application .
. THE NEW ULTIMATE DC RPG .
Character Application
.Screen name: Sabetoonth
.Character you wish to portray: VictorFries/Mr. Fries
.Hero, villain, or walking the line?: Hes get closer to walking the line before a spiral into madness/villainy as he takes out the ones he blames for Noras condition and his own, and then her ultimately untimely death.
.Powers and physical attributes: VictorFries is an average man, slight build, bald head by choice, a very slight face. He is also very intellegent being a genius in cryogenics and weapons manufacturing as he has made ice grenades/bombs and is wokring on an ice gun.
.Origin and backstory (as you see it):
Victor Fries is the son of a german immigrant, his early life was rather uneventful , he had hobbies, he went to a boarding school, then he met the love of his life. Nora, a beautiful woman. They met after college, just before he was hired at Gothtech.Victor has started devoloping weapons and other liquid mitrogen tools on the military contracts as Gothtech. He is working on a suit of armor for desert enviroments meant to keep the wearer cool and comfortable in the heat of the hottest deserts in the world. He has plans to ask Nora to marry him soon, and hes bought the ring, which has a huge rock on it, though he had to barrow a few hundred dollars from Gothtech without anyone knowing.
.The burning question - Why this character?:
honeslty I just got an idea for him, and I can kinda relate to the character, smart guy, beautiful girl, things go wrong, he needs to do somehting to save her or get her back. And Freeze actually is one of my top 5 bat villains.
I also already established Freis without getting into Mr Freeze and I want to make that move
.How will this version of your character differ from others? How will it be Ultimate?:
hes not goin to be a villain, hell start out as a good guy, hten hell descend into villainy as his luck gets worse and worse, turning to true supervillainy when he looses whats closest to his heart: Nora, and hell be a little less cold the he has been shown in some, hell be angry, but still sympathetic character.
Im gonn kinda change this a bit, when he totally looses it, he is going to become cold, but only on the outside, only to his enemies, and emotional to everyone else. And he will not be so sympathetic through his enemies eyes, cuz all they see if a former scientist(if they knew him then) in a suit of cooling armor coming at them and wanting their head on a stake. And im thinking about before he uses the freeze gun and suit, it will be a normal gun with Bullets he uses to kill a few people he thinks deserve it.
.What do you believe you can bring to the RPG?:
ive got ideas, I can write a good story, a can be orginal im still a rookie I think, but ive been playing Sabretooth and the Hulk in the Allstar Marvel RPG, so I can carry a character through paces, through story, and I can react to other events with reasonable reaction for the character. And I enjoy playing RPGs. And to add to this I also played the character before.
.Provide a sample post as the character you wish to portray, in three paragraphs or more:
The past few weeks hadnt been easy for Victor Freis, Nora had been in a coma the whole time. He hadnt though of anything else, even at work, he had to re start on individual parts to the freeze gun because he would loose focuz and weld the wrong things together, or incorrectly wire another piece. It was wreaking havoc, he could only hink of her, he had a few sick days saved up and he was going to use them so he could spend some time with her so he might be able to work, that why he would still have a way to support her when she ever came out of a coma.
As he left the Gothtech building he headed right for the Hospital.
The next morning he called into work and told Dave, a coworker in the lab, that he would be taking time off for Nora
Victor, I dont know what youre going through, but I wish you both the best. He said over the phone
Thank you Dave, Ill see you when I come back. Victor hung up the phone and walked back over to Noras bed side. Two months youve been like this. He thought to himself. He took her hand in his and said a prayer, funny he thought, for such an unreligous man to pray now that he needed God or Heaven the most. He spent the night there, ate dinner in the cafeteria. As time went on these last couple of months he had learned to have time without her, to leave her side as to function correctly, the wathcing her lie there was tortuoes, but he couldnt leave her side, what would happen if she woke up and he wasnt there? Wasnt in the hospital when he could be? She might think he abandoned her.
The calendar ticked by and soon a week was over, this would be the last night he could stay with her until he had to go back to work.
Nora, darling, I want you to know, no matter what happens, I love you. He looked up at her face as he held her hand firm in his grasp, the doors opened and Noras parents came in the room. they came over to their daughters bed side. Isa, her mother with short red hair and aged worried face on Noras right side, her father tall and blonde steady as a red wood,towering over all at the foot of the bed.
Funny,Victor thought to himself, Nora was a party girl, out going, willing to jump on the dance floor at any given moment, a loud person everyone in this room loved. And she was surrounded by silence.
.Do you know how to post pictures on the Hype?:
Other than that, I'd say try and improve on your spelling, and spacing out paragraphs. You're getting better at it than you were, but there's still some work to be done.
