SenseiofCheese
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6 months ago..
"Would ya look at that Carter...Ain't she a beaut?"
I didn't hear what Carl had said. It was as if the tomb had enchanted me. I walked across the dirty floors of the ancient Egyptian resting place of some king and his queen. I can't believe I never asked Carl more about the place, but the moment he called me and told me about it, I knew I had to go.
I could hear the soft crunching of age-old rocks beneath my feet, the only source of light my and Carl's torches. The light filled the chamber we were in, making everything look even more beautiful than I had imagined.
"Carter? You with me, buddy?"
I snapped out of my trance, and my head snapped back.
"Oh, yeah. It's just...It's strange actually being here, you know? Talking about it is one thing...but.."
"Yeah, I know...It's amazing isn't it?"
It was. I stood still and tried to truly take in the beauty of it all, even though I felt it would take years to do. Carl walked past me, dragging his palm along the walls, searching for markings.
Back then, I could never have explained it, and I brushed it off as an insignificant feeling at the time, but I felt like I belonged there.
Like after a long time, I was finally back home.
I took a deep breath, and turned my head towards where Carl was looking intently at a rather small hole in the wall, and suddenly a feeling of woe engulfed me. I don't know why I did it, but my body was racing much faster than my mind.
"CARL, LOOK OUT! GET DOW--"
I reached him just in time. I threw my full weight on him, tackling him the ground. I had heard the sound of the wind, as the arrow shot out of the hole in the wall, smashing into the wall across from it.
When Carl came to his senses he stared at the arrow, broken in piece on the floor. His stunned gaze fixed on me, he asked
"C..Carter, not for nothing but...How the hell did you know that was gonna happen?"
I was as confused as he was. I had felt...No. I had known that that arrow was going to shoot out of the wall. I beat my palm against my shirt and sent the dust flying off.
"I..I saw the thing move. Something moved and I thought that couldn't be good."
Carl raised and eyebrow and skeptically accepted my claim.
"Right, well, when we get out of here I'm buying you a beer."
We continued our trek deeper into the tomb. Each chamber we entered, each hallway we passed through, I felt as if I had been there before.
I was slowly making my way through a cramped hall when Carl's voice reached my, excitement coursing through it.
"Hey Carter...I think you're gonna wanna see this, buddy!"
I made my way towards his voice, slowly stepping over or around steps that I had a bad feeling about. I finally came upon Carl. He had shoved open an incredibly large door, covered in signs and words too ancient for me to understand. Yet somehow, I had seen them before.
I entered the chamber and a surge of warmth rushed through my body. The room was larger than any cathedral I had been in before. It was a perfect circle, it's walls adorned with gold and treasures beyond your wildest imagination. In the center of the room lay a casket, a large gold hawk emblazoned on it. Beside the casket were mounds of weaponry, obviously belonging to whoever rested inside.
Axes, spears, maces and shields, my eyes swooped carefully over each artifact. And then I saw it. The magnificent helmet sat on a small step, imposing in it's majesty. It was styled after a hawk, the wings and eyes suggesting aggression.
"I told you this place would make us rich. Woah, these guys really took the hawk-motif seriously didn't they"
It was too late. The words Carl had spoken as he looked down to the floor and saw the massive icon of a hawk spreading it's wings, covering the whole chamber, never reached me.
The helmet had spoken to me. I heard it's voice in my head, and I couldn't control my body. I stepped forward, each step giving me more excitement.
When I was upon it, I didn't hesitate for a second. My gloved hands reached down and grabbed it, lifting the heavy artifact onto my head.
"CARTER WHAT ARE YOU DOI - - "
But Carter Hall was dead. The moment my helmet had been returned to me, I finally awoke from my long slumber.
Katar Hol, was free again.
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The moment the helmet was set upon my head, I saw everything. It was as if a veil was lifted from my eyes. I lived through entire lives in the span of mere seconds. I was surrounded by pyramids and castles, all at the same time. I killed men with spears, swords and guns, all at the same time.
I was reunited with my one true love, and had her ripped from my arms. She was returned to me, only to be taken away yet again.
All. At the same time.
2000 B.C
A pharaoh and his queen, rest in each other's arms. Their bodies entwined, their faces relaxed; the very image of serenity. They have been poisoned.
They have been betrayed. By their most loyal servant. Their supposed friend.
His form towers over their bodies, a devious smile upon his face.
They have been betrayed. By their most loyal servant. Their supposed friend.
His form towers over their bodies, a devious smile upon his face.
516 A.C
A valiant king fearlessly rides his steed to the battlefield, his face the very meaning of courage. He will not let his kingdom fall into the hands of barbarians. He will defend the lives of his subjects with every fiber in his being, until the very last breath he draws.
He will be betrayed by his most trusted knight. As his friend's blade pierces his hawk-adorned armor, his queen sits alone in her chambers, sobbing, as she feels her love's life leave this world.
His kingdom would fall.
He will be betrayed by his most trusted knight. As his friend's blade pierces his hawk-adorned armor, his queen sits alone in her chambers, sobbing, as she feels her love's life leave this world.
His kingdom would fall.
1883
Three riders and their horses race away from a small town, where they had left with the contents of that town's bank vault. They scream and holler with joy. They are free.
They will live their lives free of the hardships they have had to endure. When they have reached safety, they share hugs and laughs. Two of them share more.
The third, however, shares with them his bullets. The man who has so often betrayed his friends before does so once again. And again, he smiles as he forces the life from their eyes.
He alone rides into the sunset, silently pondering whether or not she had been lying with her last words.
"Carl, I'm pregna--"
He would never find out if she had been lying, but with an evil grin he thought to himself, "I hope she was."
They will live their lives free of the hardships they have had to endure. When they have reached safety, they share hugs and laughs. Two of them share more.
The third, however, shares with them his bullets. The man who has so often betrayed his friends before does so once again. And again, he smiles as he forces the life from their eyes.
He alone rides into the sunset, silently pondering whether or not she had been lying with her last words.
"Carl, I'm pregna--"
He would never find out if she had been lying, but with an evil grin he thought to himself, "I hope she was."