Johnny Blaze
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Yeah, HeroMachine is imperfect at best. This is the best I could do for Ultimate Cap:![]()
Yeah, I got really bored and discovered Hero Machine still existed. This is about as close as I could get to what Danny'll look like once he's finally the Iron Fist. Which won't be for a while.
Trying to make a mask on that thing is a pain.![]()
Why couldn't you still do the "Superman was first" angle? Wouldn't it be as simple as just having the origin set in the game's recent past, or am I missing something completely?God, not being able to post is driving me nuts. Thanks to my training schedule, I have about two hours between the time I get back from class and the time I have to go to bed to make sure I'm awake in time for tomorrow's training, and in that time I have tons of homework to do. So I basically have enough time to look at the boards and realize I don't have enough time to write a decent post (and I will not throw up some slapped-together crap just for the sake of having a post up).
I know the game's brand new and everyone's still getting their stuff started, but I already feel like I'm missing the boat. Like, by the time I get Superman off the ground, everyone else will be up and running and Supes will just be some johnny-come-lately.
That, and the fact that the Superman knock-off has already shown up before Superman himself means that I have already failed as a player, and thus will have to throw myself off the nearest cliff (not a knock on Bk by any stretch--your stuff is awesome. But I was rather hoping on being able to do the whole "Superman was first" thing and now that's out the window, so I've gotta start from scratch)
That, and the fact that the Superman knock-off has already shown up before Superman himself means that I have already failed as a player, and thus will have to throw myself off the nearest cliff (not a knock on Bk by any stretch--your stuff is awesome. But I was rather hoping on being able to do the whole "Superman was first" thing and now that's out the window, so I've gotta start from scratch)
Why couldn't you still do the "Superman was first" angle? Wouldn't it be as simple as just having the origin set in the game's recent past, or am I missing something completely?![]()
I can change my plans a bit if you want Andy. I mean, admittedly the Sentry is a total Superman knock off but with this being a brand new reality I was hoping to make him more of his own man and build off the original Jenkins' conception of his place in the superhero community, but its not necessary to my plans so I'd be willing to concede that role to your Supes.
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Ultimate One Universe Characters Application
Character Name: Richard "Dick" Grayson
Alignment (Hero, Villain, Walking the Line): Hero
Character Speech Color and Font (actually say what it is, like Blue Comic Sans): Bold, trebuchet MS, and navy for Dick/Dark Red for when he's in costume.
Powers and Abilities: No powers, but Dick is an expert acrobat and trained hand to hand combat fighter. In addition to that, Dick is also a trained police officer.
Character Origin/Backstory: Dick Grayson was born to Mary and Richard Grayson, star acrobats at Haley's Circus. Dick was trained how to become an acrobat before he could even walk. By the time he was seven, he was part of the family act, The Flying Graysons.
One night, fifteen years ago, disaster struck when an "accident" lead to Dick's parents and brother plummeting to their death. Lost and alone in the world, Dick's life was saved by a kind stranger.
That man was Matt Murdock.
A blind man, Murdock was also a prominent lawyer and was able to convince the court system that Dick would be safe in his care. The state of New York granted Murdock sole custody over the sole surviving Grayson. Matt revealed to Dick that his family's death hadn't been an accident. It was sabotage from a low-rent thug named Tony Zucco. Zucco was scaring the circus into paying protection money. Angry and wanting justice for his family, Murdock sat Dick down and told him a story.
In the early 60's, Matt's own father, a boxer named Jack Murdock who had refused to take a fall, had been killed by a mobster. The court system wouldn't convict the man, nicknamed the Fixer. Matt bided his time and waited. That was when Matt revealed to Dick that he was much more than blind. An accident as a child had granted him hype-sense and a radar sense that practically gave him sight. Matt focused on becoming a lawyer while he planned on how to seek justice. Soon after graduating Columbia University, he had his plan. Using his father's own boxing robes, Matt fashioned a costume to hide his identity. He sought out the man who killed his father not as Matthew Murdock, but as Daredevil: The Man Without Fear. His work led to the Fixer confessing to Jack Murdock's murder.
For nearly ten years, he operated in and around New York's Hell's Kitchen. He retired in 1982 and hung up his horns for good. Although he wouldn't explain to Dick why, Dick had noticed his guardian walked with a noticeable limp. Matt's offer was simple. Over the years since his retirement, he had noticed the work he had done was being erased. New criminals were rising, people in the Kitchen were running scared again. They needed new hope. They needed a man without fear once more. Dick agreed to be taken under Matt's wing and be trained as the new generation's Daredevil.
Now, Dick works with the NYPD as a beat cop. At night, he takes to the rooftops of Hell's Kitchen. With Matt Murdock as his mentor, he takes on the criminals and those that prey on the fearful as Daredevil: The Man Without Fear!
What Makes This Version "Ultimate": Well, Dick Grayson is Daredevil for starters. That, and there will be some changes to his rogue's gallery. Oh, and Daredevil can see.
What can you bring to the RPG: Yo momma. Oh, and another character.
Provide a short sample post as your desired character, in three paragraphs or more:
Hell's Kitchen
"You're late," Matt Murdock said as soon as the door to his loft opened.
"How long have you been waiting to say that?" Dick asked as he shut the door. He was still dressed in his police uniform.
"Since I heard your heartbeat halfway down the block."
Dick walked through the hallway to the living room. Matt was in his recliner, his cane by his side. At the window beside him, the sun could be seen ducking down behind Manhattan's skyscrapers.
"Sorry, but my shift ran late. Garcia and I had to respond to a 12-10 down in Alphabet City."
"Any good intel from the NYPD?"
"There's been some robberies going down on the docks. Detectives figure it's the stevedores boosting stuff off the boats, but they told any and all uniforms to look out for any stolen merchandise that looks too new. Figured I'd head down there and keep a look out tonight."
"Good. Very good."
Matt stood up from his chair and grabbed his stick. Instead of using the cane to tap and feel his way forward, he put his weight on it and walked with a limp towards the far wall. The wall was a shrine of sorts to Jack Murdock. There was a fight poster of one his fights, photos of the old heavyweight in action, and a pair of his boxing gloves. Matt yanked on the boxing gloves and stepped back as a section of the wall opened up and swung outwards.
"C'mon, Dick, you're wasting darkness."
Dick nodded and caught himself from doing the gesture. Instead, he followed Murdock through the hidden passage and into the wall.