Imjenn, are you an Andalite spy perchance?![]()
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Imjenn, are you an Andalite spy perchance?![]()
I can't tell you enough how much I enjoy your writing.New little scene for my WF fan scriptt:
FADE FROM BLACK:
SUPERMANS POV: The camera blurs in and out of focus. Hes staring straight up at a CATHEDRAL of stalactites, hanging above him like a gaping maw of stone. We hear what Clark hears: the SCREECHING of hundreds, thousands of bats, their wings fluttering as they flit about the darkness. Then he hears the telltale TAPPING of fingers on a keyboard.
Superman groans as he rights himself, sitting up. As he realizes that he isnt restrained, mild surprise plays at his face.
Sitting at the foot of a MASSIVE, WIDE-SCREENED SUPERCOMPUTER at the far end of the cave is Batman: Back turned, cowl hanging about his shoulders, revealing close-cropped black hair.
BATMAN
Youre awake. Good.
SUPERMAN
(weary)
Where am I?
BATMAN
Gotham City. The Palisades.
SUPERMAN
Gotham--?
BATMAN
Relax. I took the liberty of informing your editor that Id invited you to take an exclusive tour of Wayne Enterprises Applied Sciences Division. Im sure thatll go a long way to getting you the journalistic credit youve been stringing for.
We pause on Supermans face as the realization comes to him. Batman swivels around in the chair, revealing himself as BRUCE WAYNE. But we already knew that.
WAYNE
I was planning on making this more of a dramatic occasion, but I guess this is as good a time as any.
SUPERMAN
So youre the psychotic vigilante?
WAYNE
(smirks)
We all have our own methods, Clark. In my case it helps to establish a persona that discourages people from making stupid decisions. Not that they always get the hint. Ive got this one clown whos crazy enough to actively push my buttons on a regular basis.
SUPERMAN
(stands)
Your cowl...lead-lined?
WAYNE
(nods)
Ive been operating in the shadows for well over a decade. And in that decade surveillance tech has jumped about twenty years. It gets harder to keep a low profile when theres a camera on every street corner with x-ray and thermal imaging. I guess your special sight has similar restrictions.
SUPERMAN
Alright, now get to the point. How do you know who I am? Why did you bring me here?
WAYNE
You really think a pair of glasses and ruffled hair is enough to fool a guy like me? C'mon, Clark, I make a living playing roles. I know every tell there is.
(pause)
Ive done my best to keep my efforts concentrated on Gotham. This is my home. I grew up here, and I intend to die here. One day. But recent events have brought to light certain realities. Paradigm shifts, if you will...
Wayne hits a key and a MAP flickers on screen. Several areas of the map are highlighted by red circles.
WAYNE (CONTD)
Youre not the only big story to make my own personal headlines, Clark. Here--
(points to a circle encompassing the general area of the Bermuda Triangle)
--theres been a dramatic increase in magnetic fluctuations over the past five years. And here--
(another circle, over Coast City, CA)
I managed to retrieve records of a similar crash landing to the one that brought you here.
(pause, the two stare at each other)
Clark, these are just two examples of metanormal activity. There are dozens of instances happening across the planet. And now Lex Luthor is collecting this.
Wayne swivels around and brings up a high-focus image. Clarks blood interspersed with microscopic green particles.
WAYNE (CONTD)
Your friend Zod left a lot more behind than just a bunch of tech for us to reverse-engineer. His ship carried radioactive fragments of your destroyed homeworld along with it. It reacts adversely to your physiology. Its why I brought you here. You need to know that there are people who can help you, but that there are also people who want to hurt you and control you. If for no other reason than their own personal gain. I cant afford to be naïve, Clark. Not in this line of work. And neither can you. So do yourself a favor, and keep one eye on your back. It doesnt matter if bullets bounce off your chest, everyone gets stabbed in the back at some point. And it always, always hurts.
WAYNE (CONT’D)
Your friend Zod left a lot more behind than just a bunch of tech for us to reverse-engineer. His ship carried radioactive fragments of your destroyed homeworld along with it. It reacts adversely to your physiology. It’s why I brought you here. You need to know that there are people who can help you, but that there are also people who want to hurt you and control you. If for no other reason than their own personal gain. I can’t afford to be naïve, Clark. Not in this line of work. And neither can you. So do yourself a favor, and keep one eye on your back. It doesn’t matter if bullets bounce off your chest, everyone gets stabbed in the back at some point. And it always, always hurts.
Thanks guys!! I actually have this idea of bringing them together and building that cautious trust first, then tearing them apart, so when the showdown goes down it's that much more climactic.
You did that!Superman is eating some donuts.
I come in with Wonder Woman...And talk to him about a group of superheroes; The Justice League.
He tells me some lame joke and credits roll....On second thought! That feels a bit cheesy.
OH WAIT!
Okay, after hearing about the fact we have a Batman now (Affleck), I've been inspired to write a possible teaser trailer, with heavy nods to Jeph Loeb (hey, he helped inspire the Dark Knight trilogy and some of the Kansas scenes of Man of Steel, so why not this film?) and a bit to Dini/Timm:
We begin with LIGHTNESS, BRILLIANT WHITE. But then we hear a voice, a voice of THE MAN OF STEEL, SUPERMAN. We hear strains of Zimmer's MOS score.
SUPERMAN (v.o.)
The dream always begins the same...
RAPID CUT of stock footage of Jor-El and Lara, Krypton, the launch of Kal-El's ship, it going by the moon, the destruction of Krypton etc. from MOS, as Superman continues to voice-over it
SUPERMAN (v.o)
...My parents, sending me into space as their world died around them. Hope surviving in me...
Abrupt cut to utter blackness, the music stops, and as Zimmer's (presumably) new theme for BATMAN begins (a bit more heroic sounding than the Dark Knight themes, but still noticably dark and gritty), we hear the voice of THE BATMAN.
BATMAN (v.o)
The nightmare always begins the same....
Abrupt cut to footage of Batman's origin- perhaps it's specifically shot for the teaser, perhaps it is from a brief one-or-two minute "if you are one of the four people who don't know Batman's origin, here's the deal" sequence from the film- either way, we see some of those images: of a family leaving a theater, of a mugger, of a gunshot and pearls falling to the ground and a child wailing and then a Bat screeching, and through it all, Batman continues his voiceover:
BATMAN (v.o)
...My parents, dead at the hands of a gunman from the shadows. My childhood dying, a WAR beginning...
Now we cut to the light and the dark next to each other, as images and footage of the two heroes- both from the film, MOS and some select comics, play briefly as now the music weaves together and the two heroes speak alongside each other
SUPERMAN (v.o.) / BATMAN (v.o)
I was born with powers beyond those of other men... / I have honed my mind and body to be better than other men...
Slowly, the LOGOs of the two heroes begin to emerge, as the dual speech continues...
SUPERMAN (v.o) / BATMAN (v.o)
I need to use them to be a champion, an inspiration to the people of Earth... / I have become a legend, a myth, a bogeyman to the criminals of Gotham...
The LOGOS are now fully on the screen, separated by the line between light and darkness.
SUPERMAN (v.o) / BATMAN (v.o)
I will stand for truth, justice.../I am vengeance, I am the night...
The LOGOS COLLIDE, light and darkness merge and fracture alongside each other, the logo of the film now stands there, as the two heroes finish their speeches and the music crescendos:
SUPERMAN (v.o) / BATMAN (v.o)
I'm Superman! / I am Batman!
CUT TO the release date of July 17, 2015, and then, before the standard showing of credits that they show at the end of trailers, we get a quick 2 second look at the two heroes looking at each other, meeting face to face for the first time.... and then credits... and then... BLACK.
New little scene for my WF fan scriptt:
FADE FROM BLACK:
SUPERMANS POV: The camera blurs in and out of focus. Hes staring straight up at a CATHEDRAL of stalactites, hanging above him like a gaping maw of stone. We hear what Clark hears: the SCREECHING of hundreds, thousands of bats, their wings fluttering as they flit about the darkness. Then he hears the telltale TAPPING of fingers on a keyboard.
Superman groans as he rights himself, sitting up. As he realizes that he isnt restrained, mild surprise plays at his face.
Sitting at the foot of a MASSIVE, WIDE-SCREENED SUPERCOMPUTER at the far end of the cave is Batman: Back turned, cowl hanging about his shoulders, revealing close-cropped black hair.
BATMAN
Youre awake. Good.
SUPERMAN
(weary)
Where am I?
BATMAN
Gotham City. The Palisades.
SUPERMAN
Gotham--?
BATMAN
Relax. I took the liberty of informing your editor that Id invited you to take an exclusive tour of Wayne Enterprises Applied Sciences Division. Im sure thatll go a long way to getting you the journalistic credit youve been stringing for.
We pause on Supermans face as the realization comes to him. Batman swivels around in the chair, revealing himself as BRUCE WAYNE. But we already knew that.
WAYNE
I was planning on making this more of a dramatic occasion, but I guess this is as good a time as any.
SUPERMAN
So youre the psychotic vigilante?
WAYNE
(smirks)
We all have our own methods, Clark. In my case it helps to establish a persona that discourages people from making stupid decisions. Not that they always get the hint. Ive got this one clown whos crazy enough to actively push my buttons on a regular basis.
SUPERMAN
(stands)
Your cowl...lead-lined?
WAYNE
(nods)
Ive been operating in the shadows for well over a decade. And in that decade surveillance tech has jumped about twenty years. It gets harder to keep a low profile when theres a camera on every street corner with x-ray and thermal imaging. I guess your special sight has similar restrictions.
SUPERMAN
Alright, now get to the point. How do you know who I am? Why did you bring me here?
WAYNE
You really think a pair of glasses and ruffled hair is enough to fool a guy like me? C'mon, Clark, I make a living playing roles. I know every tell there is.
(pause)
Ive done my best to keep my efforts concentrated on Gotham. This is my home. I grew up here, and I intend to die here. One day. But recent events have brought to light certain realities. Paradigm shifts, if you will...
Wayne hits a key and a MAP flickers on screen. Several areas of the map are highlighted by red circles.
WAYNE (CONTD)
Youre not the only big story to make my own personal headlines, Clark. Here--
(points to a circle encompassing the general area of the Bermuda Triangle)
--theres been a dramatic increase in magnetic fluctuations over the past five years. And here--
(another circle, over Coast City, CA)
I managed to retrieve records of a similar crash landing to the one that brought you here.
(pause, the two stare at each other)
Clark, these are just two examples of metanormal activity. There are dozens of instances happening across the planet. And now Lex Luthor is collecting this.
Wayne swivels around and brings up a high-focus image. Clarks blood interspersed with microscopic green particles.
WAYNE (CONTD)
Your friend Zod left a lot more behind than just a bunch of tech for us to reverse-engineer. His ship carried radioactive fragments of your destroyed homeworld along with it. It reacts adversely to your physiology. Its why I brought you here. You need to know that there are people who can help you, but that there are also people who want to hurt you and control you. If for no other reason than their own personal gain. I cant afford to be naïve, Clark. Not in this line of work. And neither can you. So do yourself a favor, and keep one eye on your back. It doesnt matter if bullets bounce off your chest, everyone gets stabbed in the back at some point. And it always, always hurts.
Watchtower should soooooo be Super Café..