Anubis' "How would you do it?" Thread.

I just think they've wasted enough time on the kid. Now that teen teams and s**t are back in style in comics, they should do something with him. But something awesome. Kid should be treated like a Teen Idol. Child of the worlds greatest Superheroes. But a more down to Earth sorta guy. A kid who is well aware of the fantasticness of his existence and loves every minute of it.

And Val, I just got this scene in my mind of Reed walking past her room and seeing paint on the floor and giving her a talking to about not being messy. Then he walks out and the scene pans up to reveal a huge sistine chapel like masterpiece of the FF on the ceiling.
 
I just think they've wasted enough time on the kid. Now that teen teams and s**t are back in style in comics, they should do something with him. But something awesome. Kid should be treated like a Teen Idol. Child of the worlds greatest Superheroes. But a more down to Earth sorta guy. A kid who is well aware of the fantasticness of his existence and loves every minute of it.

And Val, I just got this scene in my mind of Reed walking past her room and seeing paint on the floor and giving her a talking to about not being messy. Then he walks out and the scene pans up to reveal a huge sistine chapel like masterpiece of the FF on the ceiling.


Well they could start a new Power Pack.
 
I just think they've wasted enough time on the kid. Now that teen teams and s**t are back in style in comics, they should do something with him. But something awesome. Kid should be treated like a Teen Idol. Child of the worlds greatest Superheroes. But a more down to Earth sorta guy. A kid who is well aware of the fantasticness of his existence and loves every minute of it.

And Val, I just got this scene in my mind of Reed walking past her room and seeing paint on the floor and giving her a talking to about not being messy. Then he walks out and the scene pans up to reveal a huge sistine chapel like masterpiece of the FF on the ceiling.


Brilliant!

I'd like to see a female genuis character on the scene personally.
 
They should. I'd really like to see what all the fuss was about Jack Power being so awesome. And seeing him as a young adult running the group would be nice to see.
 
Brilliant!

I'd like to see a female genuis character on the scene personally.

I just think it would be a really awesome sub plot. Val is secretly this renaissance brat living under their roof, and they don't even realize it.
 
With Franklin my only issue is him being to powerful, ther need to be some rules or limits to his abilities.
 
I liked his power levels in the MC2 verse. He was a decent level telekinetic. That's all you need. No more powerful than what Justice started out with. Or, seeing as he burned out all his TK supposedly the last time somebody gave him back his powers, give him something else. Like, I don't know, Teleportation or super speed. I don't know. Haven't quite figured out what I wanna do.
 
I liked his power levels in the MC2 verse. He was a decent level telekinetic. That's all you need. No more powerful than what Justice started out with. Or, seeing as he burned out all his TK supposedly the last time somebody gave him back his powers, give him something else. Like, I don't know, Teleportation or super speed. I don't know. Haven't quite figured out what I wanna do.


I had an Idea of him being similiar to the new Mastermind Excello, but that's taken.
 
I also had an idea of actually tying in the whole Initiative thing by giving Reed Interns. Super powered Interns!

Simply put, Reed has set up the Imaginaut program. These are the best and the brightest the Initiative has to offer. And their job is simply to do that which the FF doesn't have time for. Exploring that society of sentient dust bunnies Reed found under Johnny's bed. Helping a race of alien refugees of the Annihilation war who seem to be flooding into the Sol System. Fighting a rouge group of deviants preying on archaeologists in South America. That sorta s**t. Some made up characters. Some established big brains who you don't see too much of. One of which will be a hot young super heroine who has a big fatal attraction crush on Reed.

I could totally see Reed doing his best House Impersonation with these kids.
 
I also had an idea of actually tying in the whole Initiative thing by giving Reed Interns. Super powered Interns!

Simply put, Reed has set up the Imaginaut program. These are the best and the brightest the Initiative has to offer. And their job is simply to do that which the FF doesn't have time for. Exploring that society of sentient dust bunnies Reed found under Johnny's bed. Helping a race of alien refugees of the Annihilation war who seem to be flooding into the Sol System. Fighting a rouge group of deviants preying on archaeologists in South America. That sorta s**t. Some made up characters. Some established big brains who you don't see too much of. One of which will be a hot young super heroine who has a big fatal attraction crush on Reed.

I could totally see Reed doing his best House Impersonation with these kids.


OK now that's hot!

That's the name for a teen superteam affiliated with the FF, that's hot.

A team of the smartest kids in the Marvel U under the tutelage of Mr. Fantastic!
 
Yup, I have my moments when I'm not drinking excessively or getting laid by unclean women.
deemar325 said:
Mind if I have a go at the concept?

Go for it.
 
Fantastic
Imaginauts!
World's Brightest Young Heroes

Synopsis:
Since the activation of the Superhuman registration Act, most young heroes are intered into the 'Initiative Program' a boot camp like training progam that's purpose is to turn young men and women into the Superhuman Army of Tomorrow, but what of those children of phenomenal intellect and skill? Some with god like powers and some only blessed with vast intellect and of most importance IMAGINATION!

Reed Richards world famous scientist and leader of the Fantastic Four, has acquisitioned the right from S.H.I.E.L.D. and the US government to start his own program, one catered to teens with amazing potential for both science and superheroics! These chosen few will become 'students' under the tutelage of Mr. Fantastic.

They will become the next great minds, the next great explorers, the next great heroes, the next GREAT IMAGINAUTS!!!!!!!

Team Roster:
Mastermind Excello - Super genuis, with the ability to calculated equations and probabilities within a fraction of a second!

Franklin Richards - Son of Reed Richards, gifted with great telekinetic abilities and a ace pilot (Thanks to Uncle Ben!)

Valerie Richards - Daughter of Reed Richards, she is a creative genius like her father, yet at heart an artist of profound talent.


Black Goliath II - Nephew of scientist Bill Foster, the young Goliath is revolutionizing the field of quantum mechanics and stretching the limits of 'Size shifting' technologies.

Machine Teen - Artificial teen of tomorrow, this young hero is a living technological marvel.
 
Neon and Roses

Las Vegas, Nevada. A town where you can buy fantasies, and have your dreams killed. A town where the past was decadent, the present is hedonistic, and the future is someone else's problem. Las Vegas is one of the cities where you don't expect to find super heroes, or super villains... but they do happen from time to time.

Roses: Vickie Vallenti. Raised by her grandfather after her parents were murdered, she grew up with a chip on her shoulder. Her grandfather would tell her stories about how Vegas used to be. The glitz, the glamor... the gangsters. She went to private schools, but she lived for the days when mobs ruled Las Vegas and you could hear Sinatra and Martin crooning from every juke box. When she turned 23, she became a social worker. It was not long after, as he died of cancer, that her grandfather told her a dark secret. He was Billy "Roses" Vallenti, one of the most infamous hitmen in Mob history. in the "old Days" he primarily took jobs where his target was taking out those who "broke the Rules", or let their violence spill over onto innocents. He made no excuses, he admitted to being a stone cold murderer, but he conveyed why he did it: To protect his son.

The past had caught up with him shortly after Vicky was born, and his son and daughter in law were both murdered for a revenge killing. After "cleaning things up" he adopted his granddaughter and settled down into a private life style. Without realizing it, he'd taught his granddaughter everything he knew. She was an expert Marksman, a martial artist, and a fencer. She was also an expert on the criminal underworld. So, taking her Grandfather's moniker, and a pinstripe suit, she calls herself "Roses" eliminating those who threaten the lives on innocents.

Neon: His real name is N'n-N. He is from the planet Florin. "N'n-N isn't an actual name, but a title bestowed upon children like him. It means "Dark Child". He was born under weight, short, and under-luminecent. So, like all N'n-N's he was jettisoned from the homeworld, in order to kill him by way of light starvation. But thanks to a passing comet, his trajectory whiplashed sending him to Earth. He landed in the desert outside of Las Vegas. Through the combination of our sun and the ever shining lights of the Las Vegas strip, N'n-N survived. He glows in a cascade of different colors. he can fly, fire force beams of hard light, and manipulate light to cast visual illusions. When he flies he leaves behind a light-contrail which, given his erratic flight tendancies, often look like neon lights. This, and a mispronunciation of his name gave him the hero-name "Neon". It is his itention to grow strong enough to return to his world one day. To earn the love of the parents that exiled him.
Please review *puppy dog eyes*

The Answer

Quicknotes:
The Answer was an old Captain America/Spider-man villain.
Basically he could endow himself with any power to counter-act any superheroes power. Pretty much a superpowered Task Master.

My version:
My new take on the character, is sort of a corrupt version of DC's Mr. Terrific.

Bio:
Aaron Nestor was a child prodigy, he was a peer of Tony Stark and Reed Richards, but instead of science and engineering he excelled at the intellectual arts, athletics, and deduction/reasoning and logic theory.

After a nice long run as a renowned mentalist and avantegard artist in the New York art scene, Nestor was exposed as a fraud at one of his seance demstrations by Dr.Strange who has in attendance. Nestor was conning people with recently deceased loved ones ala John Edwards (TV psychic) soon after he lost everything his status and riches.

Down and out with little other options, Nestor decided to strike back at society for his troubles, his first attempt was to get revenge on Dr.Strange who quickly made short work of him and was sent to prison, while in jail he decided on being a costumed supervillain and that his motif would be the 'Answer' he'll use his intellect and conning to aid other criminals in their endeavors by providing intel and specific plans to take down superheroes.

Theme & Motif:
The Answer has no superhuman powers only his keen intellect, detective skills and meticulous planning.

My take on the Answer is based on the whole 'PREP TIME' phenomena which is attributed to many characters like Batman, Black Panther and Dr.Doom. Answer pre-plans his schemes and heist so well that he's taken consideration for every detail.

Also The Answer lends his talents to other villains for the right price, he'll plan out your whole bank heist and provide resources for a percentage of the take.

Skills & Abilities:
The Answer is has master over 20 forms of martial arts, is a expert detective and intel researcher, knowledge of various trades from safe cracking to wire tapping to concert level piano playing.

Personality traits:
The Answer hates to be wrong, he has a almost obsessive need to be right and plans out everything in his life from when he brushes his teeth to using the restroom. Total control freak and neat freak.

He is a combination of DC's the Question/Mr.Terrific/Riddler with a Marvel sensibility.
That's a good villain.

That's cool, I'm feelin' it.
Thank you, I try.

Heh, like if the Great Gazoo was a superhero. Nice.
I hadn't thought of it like that, but no, not really. More like Captain Marvel (Marvel style) with the whole switching thing

Really nice idea, I like the setup its can go in a lot of directions.
Thanks.

I also had an idea of actually tying in the whole Initiative thing by giving Reed Interns. Super powered Interns!

Simply put, Reed has set up the Imaginaut program. These are the best and the brightest the Initiative has to offer. And their job is simply to do that which the FF doesn't have time for. Exploring that society of sentient dust bunnies Reed found under Johnny's bed. Helping a race of alien refugees of the Annihilation war who seem to be flooding into the Sol System. Fighting a rouge group of deviants preying on archaeologists in South America. That sorta s**t. Some made up characters. Some established big brains who you don't see too much of. One of which will be a hot young super heroine who has a big fatal attraction crush on Reed.

I could totally see Reed doing his best House Impersonation with these kids.
heheheh now THAT is some stuff I'd like to see. maybe put a sorcerer on the team, see what happens?

Fantastic
Imaginauts!
World's Brightest Young Heroes

Synopsis:
Since the activation of the Superhuman registration Act, most young heroes are intered into the 'Initiative Program' a boot camp like training progam that's purpose is to turn young men and women into the Superhuman Army of Tomorrow, but what of those children of phenomenal intellect and skill? Some with god like powers and some only blessed with vast intellect and of most importance IMAGINATION!

Reed Richards world famous scientist and leader of the Fantastic Four, has acquisitioned the right from S.H.I.E.L.D. and the US government to start his own program, one catered to teens with amazing potential for both science and superheroics! These chosen few will become 'students' under the tutelage of Mr. Fantastic.

They will become the next great minds, the next great explorers, the next great heroes, the next GREAT IMAGINAUTS!!!!!!!

Team Roster:
Mastermind Excello - Super genuis, with the ability to calculated equations and probabilities within a fraction of a second!

Franklin Richards - Son of Reed Richards, gifted with great telekinetic abilities and a ace pilot (Thanks to Uncle Ben!)

Valerie Richards - Daughter of Reed Richards, she is a creative genius like her father, yet at heart an artist of profound talent.


Black Goliath II - Nephew of scientist Bill Foster, the young Goliath is revolutionizing the field of quantum mechanics and stretching the limits of 'Size shifting' technologies.

Machine Teen - Artificial teen of tomorrow, this young hero is a living technological marvel.
Good lookin' team. Although, Franklin and Valeria have been established as pretty damn young to be on the team.

Need some help on the rest of the kids.
Hmmm... Well, I've always said the Runaways could do with a little more structure in their lives. Chase gets on the team strictly because of his parents (it's assumed he understands all their work). He's the "Winston Zedimore" of the group. The normal guy who has more common sense than the rest... and the one they explain things too (for our benifit). He also shows an affinity for piloting, even if he's never seen the controls for a craft before.

Perhaps the female genius that built Santa-Tron. She'd be a good candidate for the "Fatal Attraction" crush on Reed Richards.

you could really stick any member of the Runaways on there, but I'm going to leave it at just Chase.

Vision II could be a candidate.

heh... Flat-Man. the adult among kids thing fits with the humiliating nature of the GLA. just say that Flat-Man is an intuitive learner that grasps concepts quickly once introduced to them (He's always saying "I thought that..."). Have him attracted to Johnny Storm.
 
Hey guys, some stuff I had on my mind. Couple of months back, a friend lent me a copy of this Manga called "Vagabond" by Inoue Takehiko which recounts the romanticized exploits of Samurai Saint Miyamoto Musashi in awesome fashion. I read up to about volume 7 of the series but my bud took a break from the series. The story, the pace and the setting left quite a bit on my mind. I also read up the AWESOME story of "Romance of the Three Kingdoms" which is truly the GREATEST piece of military/political/social Asian literature ever written, also romanticizing some of the key figures of China's Three Kingdoms period.

So after some time I decided to do some digging into my own culture. I'm half Malay by the by, from Southeast Asia. As far as wars and Empires go, ours weren't as epic and brutal as the Crusades or the Sengoku-Jidai period of Japan but the Malay kingdom which reached the height of its power was quite possibly the Malaccan Sultanate which often were at loggerheads with the true regional powerhouse which was Siam (modern Thailand). I'm not a deeply dedicated student of my region's history but I do know that Siam, Malacca and some of the Indonesian kingdoms were often at ends with each other over control of the Malay Archipelogo which would eventually fall under Dutch/Portuguse colonialism centuries later.

Anyway, I wanted to do a story about one the Malaccan Sultanate's supposed 5 Champions. The 5 Champions of Malacca were Hang Tuah, Hang Jebat, Hang Kasturi, Hang Lekiu and Hang Lekir. "Hang" (not pronounced as hang as in hanging but rather like "Han" Solo with a "g" at the end) was the title given to them by the Chancellor of the Sultanate.

By all accounts, Tuah is the most famous and apparently the most talented of the 5. He was the Sultan's right hand man and was the wielder of the mighty Keris (Malay Dagger) "Taming Sari" which is the Malay equivalent of Excalibur. In most stories, he is the most upright person of the group, and totally, utterly loyal to the Sultan. However, because of a falling out between the Sultan and Tuah (a woman), the Sultan ordered him killed which caused a rebellion by his best friend Jebat.

Kasturi is the soft-spoken one in the group. Smart and tactful by most accounts. Little is written about him as compared to Tuah and Jebat.

Lekiu and Lekir were twins. Like Kasturi, despite their fame in the olden days, more modern accounts places them sadly, as background characters.

Which leads me to the character of my interest: Jebat. In most stories, Jebat and Tuah were friends but with distinctively different attitudes. Tuah was stoic and serious while Jebat was wild and unruly. Tuah had the ability to command while Jebat preferred leading the charge without a plan. Jebat was a bit of a playboy till his wife tamed him but Tuah (according to some accounts) was a bit of the Philanderer. One thing which is consistant: Tuah was loyal to his Sultan but Jebat, for all his faults was utterly loyal to his friends.

Now, with the background info all done, here's my idea:

Anjing


Anjing (Malay for "Dog") is a ficticious story of the life of one of the Malay World's most well-known Anti-heroes: Hang Jebat, romanticizing his origins, his life from a child to a warrior fighting for his Kingdom against the ever present threat of the Siamese and the Khmer to a rebel fighting for his friend, till his ultimate demise at the hands of his best friend. Since his origins are ridiculously hazy, much creative liberties have been made.

Jebat was born to a poor widow in a desolate fishing village. His father, a unnamed small-time thief had left the boy with the unforgiving scorn of the local people whom had taken to calling him "Anjing" or "Dog" for stealing scraps of fish and chickens for his mother and himself which led to many beatings by the villagers. A tough upbringing also led to him growing up tough, with a great amount of disdain for what Jebat perceived as the "fortunate" ones who had the benefit of three meals a day and sandals on their feet. Growing up, Jebat only had one "friend" which was the bookish Kasturi who's gentle ways made him easy pickings for the local bullies. Despite his attempts to teach Jebat how to read, the other boy would grow up illiterate, seeing no merit in books. His mother would soon pass, leaving him with no connection to his birthplace save his friend Kasturi.

As time passed, Jebat had taught himself how to hunt and fight with a stolen "Parang" (Machete) while watching over his only companion Kasturi. Guru Adi Putra, a Silat Master would come by the village along with his entourage of 3 young students: the twins Lekir and Lekiu, and the strangely quiet yet intense young man called Tuah. Conversing with the Village Chief, Adi Putra agreed to the idea of adopting one of the village's boys to be one of his students. Despite the line-up of burly, tall prospects presented to Adi Putra by hopeful parents, the Master singled out the small, shy Kasturi to be his student after noticing the boy's ability to calculate and read. While happy for his friend, some resentment began to creep into Jebat's mind. On the day Adi Putra prepared to continue his journey with his students, he was rudely called out by Jebat who demanded that he received a chance to "prove himself worthy", much to the disgust of the other villagers who whispered his name scornfully. With his machete, Jebat demanded to face Adi Putra's best student in combat. If he were to win, Adi Putra would accept him as a student. If he were to lose, he would exile himself from the village forever.

Amused, Adi Putra sends out his finest student, Tuah, unarmed. The seemingly emotionless young boy, dressed in fine clothes, unscarred cheeks and a pair of sandals on his feet irks Jebat like nothing else, seeing the complete opposite of him with "everything" handed to him. When the villagers ask the boy if he needs a weapon, Tuah politely declines and states he needs no weapon sending Jebat into an uncontrollable furor. Moments later, Jebat's face is covered in dirt, his body wracked in pain but his mind aware of one crucial thing: he had completely utterly lost. Moved to tears by his failure, Jebat runs off into the Wilderness where he intends to live up to his end of the bargain. Days later, some distance away from home, Jebat encounters Adi Putra, sitting by himself under a tree simplys asks the boy: "What took you so long?"

Main Characters:

Hang Jebat
Jebat is the best friend to Malacca's greatest warrior, Hang Tuah, whom he also shares a long-time rivalry. Unlike his best friend, Jebat is a crude and somewhat difficult person but his skills as a warrior are legendary and could only be rivalled by Hang Tuah himself. Despite his abilities as a warrior, Jebat's attitude makes him unpopular amongst the Sultanate whom the 5 Champions would later serve. He makes his feelings known about his dislike of royalty and never fears speaking his mind in their presence. In fact, the only "royal" Jebat respects and trust is the Chancellor, Tun Perak. In truth, the Sultanate feared Jebat, the Sultan in particular was never comfortable whenever Jebat was around and sought to be rid of him. Instead of simply dismissing him however, the Sultan would send Jebat to fight his most dangerous wars against the Siamese and the Majapahit in hopes that Jebat would die fighting. Instead, Jebat would return from his exploits, more able than ever. Despite his fiery personality, Jebat would be "tamed" by his wife who was the only person other than Tun Perak and Adi Putra who could talk sense to him. He indulges smoking a pipe bought from the numerous traders that would dock in Malacca's shipyards. Remembering his less than humble beginnings, Jebat would continue to wield a Machete (a commoner's tool) rather than a Keris or a sword.

Hang Kasturi
Jebat's oldest friend and quite possibly, his wisest. Kasturi was the most wll-read of the 5, indulging in books brought to Malacca from China, the Middle-East and as far as Europe. Soft-spoken and cautious, Kasturi followed Jebat on many of his missions against the Siamese and Malacca's other enemies, knowing full well that his friend's temper would be the death of him and that was essentially what his Sultan sought. Serving as Jebat's Strategist and Advisor, Kasturi helped Jebat in many difficult positions and eventually was recommended to the Chancellor as an apprentice by Jebat himself, whom Tun Perak had taken a liking to for his frankness and honesty. Their friendship would be tested however during Jebat's rebellion against the Sultan in which Kasturi chose to be no part of.

Hang Lekiu and Hang Lekir
Identical Twins, a rare sight in most lands, was equally rare in the lands of the Sultanate. As such, Lekiu and Lekir were seen as Omens of either good or bad, depending on who you asked. Growing up, the boys utterly detested each other, each striving to outdo the other in order to be different. When Adi Putra began his quest to find students, Lekiu and Lekir sought to gain his attention by showcasing their proficiencies, Lekiu showing much skill with a bow and Lekir with a spear. Adi Putra decided to teach the both of them, developing individual styles for the both of them. As they grew older, the twins' personalities were as contrasting as ever: Lekiu had grown up to be the talkative skirt chaser while Lekir had become the silent Journeyman Warrior, Lekiu being more partial to Tuah while Lekir firmly behind all-action Jebat. Lekiu, along with Tuah would form the core of the Sultan's Royal Guard whilst Lekir would accompany Jebat and Kasturi on their missions against Siam. This would eventually lead to their face off during Jebat's Rebellion.

Hang Tuah
By nearly all accounts, the romantic hero who could do no wrong, here, Tuah is the most loyal son of Malacca but his loyalty would cost him much. A handsome man, Tuah was admired by many women in the domain and beyond. Many Princesses had long dreamed of the handsome Hang Tuah coming to their courts to wed them. Their fantasies couldn't have been further from the truth. Behind his youthful, calm exterior, Tuah is a hardened warrior who lives for the service of his Sultan. Under his lord's command, Tuah has committed atrocities and spilled blood without hesitation all by his liege's command. And as the greatest warrior of his land, few, close to none could stand against him.With the legendary Keris, "Taming Sari" at his side, Hang Tuah was unbeatable. But his only weakness was one not unfamiliar to men: Women. His desires would eventually drive him to the side of one of the Sultan's favored concubines. Their secret discovered, the Sultan ordered his most loyal Warrior put to death but the men who had long fought under Tuah could not force it upon themselves to commit the deed, thus convincing their beloved commander to hide, imploring him to give up the "Taming Sari". THe men reported Tuah dead, presenting him with the legendary weapon. Jebat, fresh off a campaign against the Sultan's enemies would return to Malacca, ignorant of what had transpired. With the top position of his army now vacant, the Sultan hoped to tame Jebat by giving him Tuah former position, presenting the warrior with Tuah's "Taming Sari" after which Jebat would learn of his friend's supposed death and betrayal by the Sultan he served. This would serve as his rallying call in his Rebellion. Ironically enough, the Sultan, barely escaping the rebels' clutches would seek out the aid of Hang Tuah to stop his old friend. This would lead to their climatic battle. Loyalty to one's lord Vs. Loyalty to one's friends. Jebat would meet his end in Tuah's arms, leaving the Warrior to his shame.
 
What Would You Do With It?

Taye Jordan is an orphan. He grew up in a Catholic group home. He's been poor all his life. he never had a shot at college on his budget. He has worked whatever jobs it took to survive. Recently, Taye Jordan has been accused of being the luckiest guy on earth. He went on the popular game show, Bargain or Bust, on their special night. Miraculously, he won their mega-jackpot: $100,000,000. After taxes it comes out to $90,000,000. Now, a guy who's never had much luck other than bad, is getting the biggest turn around in history. So the question is: What would you do with ninety million dollars?
 
The Few and Proud

(my Hero-verse). A massive alien invasion, only barely put down by super-heroes has started the united states government thinking on it's weaknesses toward super-human attacks. Refusing to be protected by well intentioned civilians any longer they are getting organized. A Company, 1st Brigade, 1st Super-Human Division, United States Marine Corps. Or simply "Ace Company". 250 marines were selected specifically on genetic and psychological backgrounds. They were given bio-chemical treatments to enhance their strength and healing capabilities, genetic treatments to enhance their senses, and high tech equipment to allow flight and superior firepower.

They aren't just super-heroes, they are U.S. Marine Corps. trained soldiers, with super-human abilities. They stand ready to fight their country's battles on a whole new frontier. OoRah!

GySgt. Daniel Tolwin: At age 50, he was planning on enjoying his retirment until he died, a fairly solid plan, and well deserved for one who survived several nightmarish tours of places he's no longer allowed to speak of. He is tapped to come out of retirement and help lead the Company. He has a wealth of experience, and is probably the most seasoned officer in the company, commisioned or non-commissioned.

Capt. Brian Collis: at age 18 he entered MCROTC at he went to college to attain his Juris Doctorate. His father had been an abusive Army Col. that was usually never punished due to his rank. most of his childhood he idealized super-heroes. When his father was finally made to answer for his crimes, it was not a super-hero who caused him to do so: It was the Provost Marshall's Office. He decided to join the Marines and become a lawyer, making sure that all were held accountable, even the high ranking. He was tapped for the assignment for his positive psychological profile.

Cpl. Anita Juarez: She has had to fight for every ounce of respect she has earned. She came from a poor neighborhood where women were either eye candy or breeding stock basically. Determined never to let anyone treat her the way her mother was treated (her mother was a prostitute) she vowed to become stronger than anyone. She has a long criminal record, mostly for assault. No one touches without her permission.
 
Somehow, I read Anita's profile, and guessed she was Mexican without looking at her name. =/
 
For your information her family's from Belize... well, her mother. Her father's Honduran.
 
Hey guys, some stuff I had on my mind. Couple of months back, a friend lent me a copy of this Manga called "Vagabond" by Inoue Takehiko which recounts the romanticized exploits of Samurai Saint Miyamoto Musashi in awesome fashion. I read up to about volume 7 of the series but my bud took a break from the series. The story, the pace and the setting left quite a bit on my mind. I also read up the AWESOME story of "Romance of the Three Kingdoms" which is truly the GREATEST piece of military/political/social Asian literature ever written, also romanticizing some of the key figures of China's Three Kingdoms period.

So after some time I decided to do some digging into my own culture. I'm half Malay by the by, from Southeast Asia. As far as wars and Empires go, ours weren't as epic and brutal as the Crusades or the Sengoku-Jidai period of Japan but the Malay kingdom which reached the height of its power was quite possibly the Malaccan Sultanate which often were at loggerheads with the true regional powerhouse which was Siam (modern Thailand). I'm not a deeply dedicated student of my region's history but I do know that Siam, Malacca and some of the Indonesian kingdoms were often at ends with each other over control of the Malay Archipelogo which would eventually fall under Dutch/Portuguse colonialism centuries later.

Anyway, I wanted to do a story about one the Malaccan Sultanate's supposed 5 Champions. The 5 Champions of Malacca were Hang Tuah, Hang Jebat, Hang Kasturi, Hang Lekiu and Hang Lekir. "Hang" (not pronounced as hang as in hanging but rather like "Han" Solo with a "g" at the end) was the title given to them by the Chancellor of the Sultanate.

By all accounts, Tuah is the most famous and apparently the most talented of the 5. He was the Sultan's right hand man and was the wielder of the mighty Keris (Malay Dagger) "Taming Sari" which is the Malay equivalent of Excalibur. In most stories, he is the most upright person of the group, and totally, utterly loyal to the Sultan. However, because of a falling out between the Sultan and Tuah (a woman), the Sultan ordered him killed which caused a rebellion by his best friend Jebat.

Kasturi is the soft-spoken one in the group. Smart and tactful by most accounts. Little is written about him as compared to Tuah and Jebat.

Lekiu and Lekir were twins. Like Kasturi, despite their fame in the olden days, more modern accounts places them sadly, as background characters.

Which leads me to the character of my interest: Jebat. In most stories, Jebat and Tuah were friends but with distinctively different attitudes. Tuah was stoic and serious while Jebat was wild and unruly. Tuah had the ability to command while Jebat preferred leading the charge without a plan. Jebat was a bit of a playboy till his wife tamed him but Tuah (according to some accounts) was a bit of the Philanderer. One thing which is consistant: Tuah was loyal to his Sultan but Jebat, for all his faults was utterly loyal to his friends.

Now, with the background info all done, here's my idea:

Anjing


Anjing (Malay for "Dog") is a ficticious story of the life of one of the Malay World's most well-known Anti-heroes: Hang Jebat, romanticizing his origins, his life from a child to a warrior fighting for his Kingdom against the ever present threat of the Siamese and the Khmer to a rebel fighting for his friend, till his ultimate demise at the hands of his best friend. Since his origins are ridiculously hazy, much creative liberties have been made.

Jebat was born to a poor widow in a desolate fishing village. His father, a unnamed small-time thief had left the boy with the unforgiving scorn of the local people whom had taken to calling him "Anjing" or "Dog" for stealing scraps of fish and chickens for his mother and himself which led to many beatings by the villagers. A tough upbringing also led to him growing up tough, with a great amount of disdain for what Jebat perceived as the "fortunate" ones who had the benefit of three meals a day and sandals on their feet. Growing up, Jebat only had one "friend" which was the bookish Kasturi who's gentle ways made him easy pickings for the local bullies. Despite his attempts to teach Jebat how to read, the other boy would grow up illiterate, seeing no merit in books. His mother would soon pass, leaving him with no connection to his birthplace save his friend Kasturi.

As time passed, Jebat had taught himself how to hunt and fight with a stolen "Parang" (Machete) while watching over his only companion Kasturi. Guru Adi Putra, a Silat Master would come by the village along with his entourage of 3 young students: the twins Lekir and Lekiu, and the strangely quiet yet intense young man called Tuah. Conversing with the Village Chief, Adi Putra agreed to the idea of adopting one of the village's boys to be one of his students. Despite the line-up of burly, tall prospects presented to Adi Putra by hopeful parents, the Master singled out the small, shy Kasturi to be his student after noticing the boy's ability to calculate and read. While happy for his friend, some resentment began to creep into Jebat's mind. On the day Adi Putra prepared to continue his journey with his students, he was rudely called out by Jebat who demanded that he received a chance to "prove himself worthy", much to the disgust of the other villagers who whispered his name scornfully. With his machete, Jebat demanded to face Adi Putra's best student in combat. If he were to win, Adi Putra would accept him as a student. If he were to lose, he would exile himself from the village forever.

Amused, Adi Putra sends out his finest student, Tuah, unarmed. The seemingly emotionless young boy, dressed in fine clothes, unscarred cheeks and a pair of sandals on his feet irks Jebat like nothing else, seeing the complete opposite of him with "everything" handed to him. When the villagers ask the boy if he needs a weapon, Tuah politely declines and states he needs no weapon sending Jebat into an uncontrollable furor. Moments later, Jebat's face is covered in dirt, his body wracked in pain but his mind aware of one crucial thing: he had completely utterly lost. Moved to tears by his failure, Jebat runs off into the Wilderness where he intends to live up to his end of the bargain. Days later, some distance away from home, Jebat encounters Adi Putra, sitting by himself under a tree simplys asks the boy: "What took you so long?"

I really like the setup here, your imagery is flawless, very nice indeed!

Main Characters:

Hang Jebat
Jebat is the best friend to Malacca's greatest warrior, Hang Tuah, whom he also shares a long-time rivalry. Unlike his best friend, Jebat is a crude and somewhat difficult person but his skills as a warrior are legendary and could only be rivalled by Hang Tuah himself. Despite his abilities as a warrior, Jebat's attitude makes him unpopular amongst the Sultanate whom the 5 Champions would later serve. He makes his feelings known about his dislike of royalty and never fears speaking his mind in their presence. In fact, the only "royal" Jebat respects and trust is the Chancellor, Tun Perak. In truth, the Sultanate feared Jebat, the Sultan in particular was never comfortable whenever Jebat was around and sought to be rid of him. Instead of simply dismissing him however, the Sultan would send Jebat to fight his most dangerous wars against the Siamese and the Majapahit in hopes that Jebat would die fighting. Instead, Jebat would return from his exploits, more able than ever. Despite his fiery personality, Jebat would be "tamed" by his wife who was the only person other than Tun Perak and Adi Putra who could talk sense to him. He indulges smoking a pipe bought from the numerous traders that would dock in Malacca's shipyards. Remembering his less than humble beginnings, Jebat would continue to wield a Machete (a commoner's tool) rather than a Keris or a sword.

Very awesome, I can see this as a movie so far. Tony JA!

Hang Kasturi
Jebat's oldest friend and quite possibly, his wisest. Kasturi was the most wll-read of the 5, indulging in books brought to Malacca from China, the Middle-East and as far as Europe. Soft-spoken and cautious, Kasturi followed Jebat on many of his missions against the Siamese and Malacca's other enemies, knowing full well that his friend's temper would be the death of him and that was essentially what his Sultan sought. Serving as Jebat's Strategist and Advisor, Kasturi helped Jebat in many difficult positions and eventually was recommended to the Chancellor as an apprentice by Jebat himself, whom Tun Perak had taken a liking to for his frankness and honesty. Their friendship would be tested however during Jebat's rebellion against the Sultan in which Kasturi chose to be no part of.

Hang Lekiu and Hang Lekir
Identical Twins, a rare sight in most lands, was equally rare in the lands of the Sultanate. As such, Lekiu and Lekir were seen as Omens of either good or bad, depending on who you asked. Growing up, the boys utterly detested each other, each striving to outdo the other in order to be different. When Adi Putra began his quest to find students, Lekiu and Lekir sought to gain his attention by showcasing their proficiencies, Lekiu showing much skill with a bow and Lekir with a spear. Adi Putra decided to teach the both of them, developing individual styles for the both of them. As they grew older, the twins' personalities were as contrasting as ever: Lekiu had grown up to be the talkative skirt chaser while Lekir had become the silent Journeyman Warrior, Lekiu being more partial to Tuah while Lekir firmly behind all-action Jebat. Lekiu, along with Tuah would form the core of the Sultan's Royal Guard whilst Lekir would accompany Jebat and Kasturi on their missions against Siam. This would eventually lead to their face off during Jebat's Rebellion.

Hang Tuah
By nearly all accounts, the romantic hero who could do no wrong, here, Tuah is the most loyal son of Malacca but his loyalty would cost him much. A handsome man, Tuah was admired by many women in the domain and beyond. Many Princesses had long dreamed of the handsome Hang Tuah coming to their courts to wed them. Their fantasies couldn't have been further from the truth. Behind his youthful, calm exterior, Tuah is a hardened warrior who lives for the service of his Sultan. Under his lord's command, Tuah has committed atrocities and spilled blood without hesitation all by his liege's command. And as the greatest warrior of his land, few, close to none could stand against him.With the legendary Keris, "Taming Sari" at his side, Hang Tuah was unbeatable. But his only weakness was one not unfamiliar to men: Women. His desires would eventually drive him to the side of one of the Sultan's favored concubines. Their secret discovered, the Sultan ordered his most loyal Warrior put to death but the men who had long fought under Tuah could not force it upon themselves to commit the deed, thus convincing their beloved commander to hide, imploring him to give up the "Taming Sari". THe men reported Tuah dead, presenting him with the legendary weapon. Jebat, fresh off a campaign against the Sultan's enemies would return to Malacca, ignorant of what had transpired. With the top position of his army now vacant, the Sultan hoped to tame Jebat by giving him Tuah former position, presenting the warrior with Tuah's "Taming Sari" after which Jebat would learn of his friend's supposed death and betrayal by the Sultan he served. This would serve as his rallying call in his Rebellion. Ironically enough, the Sultan, barely escaping the rebels' clutches would seek out the aid of Hang Tuah to stop his old friend. This would lead to their climatic battle. Loyalty to one's lord Vs. Loyalty to one's friends. Jebat would meet his end in Tuah's arms, leaving the Warrior to his shame.

Pretty damn cool all round, Jebat is the character I like most. You said this is based on real history?
 
With some romanticism. Most of the characters don't have backgrounds one thier childhood and stuff. Hang Tuah in particular has like several origins (Pre or Post-Crisis I'm not sure). One thing is certain is that Tuah and Jebat would come to blows with one another because of the Sultan.
 
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The truth is he gave up his other life. He was born Gregory Irvine. And graduating high school was perhaps the most impressive achievement that will ever be writ to that name. He fell into alcohol and began to mooch heavily off of his well-to-do parents. When he was 21, he got so drunk he stole a car and crashed it into a minivan. The driver of the minivan and his wife were fine. the three kids in the back were not. Gregory was arrested and sent to prison. a year later, a year sober, he was being transfered to another unit. An object came crashing out of the sky as a super-villain did battle in orbit above the city with an alien vessel. a pair of manacles fell in front of him. He heard them calling "Let him who woud fight for justice, step forward. Let him who would stand for right, step forward. Let he who will not rest until evil is destroyed, step forward." drawn by the telepathic message of the manacles he moved forward to touch them. The clamped upon his wrists and he was transformed. Now he uses his powers to try and attone for the evil he can now see he did.

I'm not sure if the reformation of the character is a product of his own guilt, or if it comes from the manacles. I know they are a prototype weapon for an interplanetary military force (GLC-knock off).
 
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She has a rather geeky sense of humor and would be much happier if she could be just like all the other IRS agents in her building. Has a hard time talking to men, not just because of the fact that a few are intimidated by her accomplishments, but also because she's never been on a date that ended well. She's extremely intelligent and technically a genius.
 

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