I really want the film to explore the Randor/Keldor relationship. The first 20 minutes can be about that, how Keldor was lured into sorcery by an unseen war lord (Hordak) and how young soldiers Duncan and yet-to-be-king Randor drove the traitors away.
Flackbacks with Greyskull would also be cool. But I doubt Hollywood would will do any of this. They are going straight for a popcorn-flic
Okay, I'll say it. I'm writing my own script. I know they'll never use it, but y'know, at least its practice.

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Anyway, I've found one of the trickiest things with a story like this is figuring out how precisely to dole out the important bits of backstory while getting to the main characters and the present day stuff as quickly as possible. You don't want too many beginnings like
John Carter.
I figured there are basically 2 prologues you can use to start the movie (unless you count Marlena crash-landing and meeting Randor, but who the hell wants to see that?). Anyway, the first is King Grayskull, the second is Randor vs. Keldor. Justin Marks' script started with the former and the new cartoon started with the latter.
Taking a page from "Game of Thrones" (it's weird how much watching that show has influenced my writing, even when its a completely different kind of story), I considered starting with no prologue at all. But I ended up going with Grayskull. However, instead of showing a big LOTR-style battle against the Horde narrated by the Sorceress where Dolph Lundgren gets to kick tons of ass (like Marks did), I just wrote King G a little St. Crispian's Day speech instead. Lightning, titles, cut to Prince Adam. Call me crazy.
After that, Keldor/Skeletor isn't really shown (outside of a couple fleeting flashbacks as a few characters recount the story) until he launches his attack on the capital (another page taken from Marks' script). With that in mind, there's not much Randor/Keldor stuff in my outline, since the focus is primarily on Adam, so I figure all that would make for some great sequel material.
Just wanted to share that.
