Were there other He-Man scripts that had been considered before that? Maybe that was the first time in a long time that a major studio had begun considering this property again. Still couldn't tell you what it was in Marks' script that got the execs so excited.True, but they were still a crucial component to the story. All of the twins' scenes would've been hugely distracting if they didn't make you forget that you weren't watching actual twins.
I think at the time, a lot of geek culture was starting to become really more mainstream. Marks name was getting attached to some big projects, so he was writing these scripts, but none of them were getting produced except Chun-Li.
His He-Man script did leak, but I mean...it was a bad script.
There were other scripts before his. Adam Rifkin did a commissioned script beforehand. This is when it was still at Warner Bros., and Joel Silver was the producer.
Here are the main beats of Adam Rifkin's script:
- Adam is not a prince but a kitchen boy. He is actually the unknown half-brother of the current prince who gets killed like in the first act. I don't remember all the details, but I recall that his parentage was kept a secret to protect him.
- Adam gets possession of the Sword of Grayskull, and it gradually makes him bigger and muscular over the course of the script.
- Teela is like the young castle guard. She's attracted to the prince...who dies early. She bickers with Adam and doesn't like him at first.
- Skeletor is Adam's uncle here. Exiled from Eternia for his interest in the arcane arts. I recall he gets his powers after making contact with Hordak through his magical experiments. Makes a deal with Hordak and becomes Skeletor.
- Orko is in it, and really the best part of the script. Orko is pretty much Orko. So respect to Rifkin for actually attempting Orko at least and showing how it can work.
- Here's the basic narrative. Skeletor and the Evil Warriors attack Eternia. Prince is killed. Randor is kidnapped. Adam's adopted chef father is taken prisoner. Orko, Adam, Teela and Man-At-Arms run away to regroup. Man-At-Arms trains the reluctant Adam on how to become He-Man and to use the sword while they are being pursued by Skeletor's minions. Eventually, Adam fully becomes He-Man and defeats Skeletor at the end. He takes over as the real prince of Eternia.
What doesn't work for me is the weird quasi-love triangle for Teela, Adam and the prince. Also, Adam as peasant kitchen boy while a decoy prince is in power...who is related to Adam and dies. Like...no one cares about this prince and that he's dead! There's no sense of loss that the prince died.
Skeletor was OK, and Orko worked there's that. The narrative wasn't great, but it was at least slightly more refined than the Marks' script, which had a lot of random scenes, characters attempting at being really Lord of the Rings-esque epic but failing in doing so.