My Superheroes

[Climperoonie]

I've made up quite a few heroes and villians, and I have a universe for them. All of them are Copyright though. These are a few of them:
Electron
Powers: Electricity generation and control, flight, super speed.
Real Name: Jake Coles
Starlighter
Powers: Super athletic, can send out beams of blinding light from his hands, flight.
Real Name: Micheal Gardener
Shadow master
Powers: Can become a shadow, can make shadow warriors, shadow generation.
Real name: Unknown

 

[Tracer Bullet]

..might wanna elaborate

 

[Kevin Roegele]

I've made up quite a few heroes and villians, and I have a universe for them. All of them are Copyright though. These are a few of them:
Electron
Powers: Electricity generation and control, flight, super speed.
Real Name: Jake Coles
Starlighter
Powers: Super athletic, can send out beams of blinding light from his hands, flight.
Real Name: Micheal Gardener
Shadow master
Powers: Can become a shadow, can make shadow warriors, shadow generation.
Real name: Unknown

No offense, but they sound generic and unoriginal. Shadowmaster - there are a million characters like that, obviously the Shaodw is the main one. Electron sounds like Electro. Starlighter sounds very much a typical superhero.

 

[Andy C.]

Okay...so you've got a few names and sets of powers to go with them. Any personalities there? Does one act in a certain way that off-sets the others? Are they connected with each other in some way? Is there an actual story in which these guys take part?

You've gotta give us some actual substance to your characters if you expect anyone to give this any more than a cursory glance.

 

[Prognosticator]

No offense, but they sound generic and unoriginal. Shadowmaster - there are a million characters like that, obviously the Shaodw is the main one. Electron sounds like Electro. Starlighter sounds very much a typical superhero.

**Climperoonie quietly slinks into the background and disappears from the Hype forever**

 

[Kevin Roegele]

**Climperoonie quietly slinks into the background and disappears from the Hype forever**

I hope not. I mean, Stan Lee was told Spider-Man was crap by Martin Goodman.

 

[Climperoonie]

Nah, I'm still here, whether you like it or not . Another hero:
Arachnid
Powers: Can become a spider, that can be any size.
Real name: Bethany Mite

 

[Prognosticator]

Easy Kevin, I was just playin' with this young inventor.

 

[spdrknight]

Nah, I'm still here, whether you like it or not . Another hero:
Arachnid
Powers: Can become a spider, that can be any size.
Real name: Bethany Mite

So why not give us some more information? If you want us to really comment on what you've created then we need a little more detail in your character descriptions, besides some names and powers.

 

[donaldthe3rd]

like their history for one

 

[donaldthe3rd]

just a suggestion