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A Super Villain I Invented

donaldthe3rd

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Heres one of mine of created . So give me some feedback and I'd like to see some other peoples creations for super villians.


Super Hero Name--Nightmare
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Real Name--Damian Cortez
Aliases--None
Identity--Known to few
Occupation- Member of Operation 6
Citizenship--Unknown
Place of Birth--Unknown
Known Relatives--None
Group Affiliation--Operation 6, The Dark Angels
Education--Unknown

Powers--Nightmare has telepathic and telekinetic powers beyond any comprehension. One of the most powerful minds known to man, he is so powerful that he can even create life with his bare hands. Nearly immune to any means of injury. Can absorb the life out of any life form around him.

Abilities--Extremely high IQ. Fluent in almost any language on Earth. Highly skilled swordsman.

Weapons--Wields an extremely large sword.

The place of his birth is unknown, but it is believed that he has been alive for hundreds of years. But for the youth Damian Cortez he was even unsure about his past. He found out at a young age that he could speak fluent in almost any language that he met. Growing up he found him self in Berlin, Germany where he met and befriended Nikolai Vildelchi (who would later on become known as Genocide). (They worked together for many years stealing from the local stores and market places. As the years went by and the two continued their lives of thieving, Damian and Nikolai were walking back to their secret home in an abandoned building one nigh along the dark street with their day's stolen goods, when they were attacked by a leech mob who were enraged by having their goods stolen from them for so long. They chased the boys into an alleyway where there was no escape. The crazed mob stepped closer to the boys, readying their weapons of choice. One man leapt out and cut open Damian’s arm with a knife. The man and a few others suddenly were thrown almost by an invisible force into the wall then burst into pieces that almost resembled dust. This dust then flew over to Damian and healed him of his wounds. The rest of the mob then attacked unthinkingly at them again but from where Nikolai was standing a strange gas seemed to flow from his body. This gas found its way to their attackers and killed them instantly, but had almost no affect on Damian. The two boys sat their slightly frightened and dumb founded at what had happened. It soon came to their minds later on in their juvenile years that they had been given powers of a great meaning. Though now already on the path for danger, they continued their lives of crime but now with a new deadly power was wielded within themselves. Damian to learn more about his telekinetic and telepathic powers, and how he could heal himself from others life. Nikolai also studied how he could release a toxic gas from the pores in his skin and inject his victims with a poison. The two joined the German army when leaning on their early adulthood and were sent immediately to Alaska on a secret spy mission. On coming to Alaska their air plane was shot down and they were taken hostage. Their captors were not all American, as some spoke in languages of both German, Russian and Japanese. Their captors then introduced themselves to Damian and Nikolai as Operation 6. They were a biblical group who were almost satanic. They told Damian and Nikolai of an ancient prophecy that told of 3 beings with great power each having a number would conquer the world and bring peace. They later on for months kept them as their hostages and studied them like lab rats). As the months passed Damian and Nikolai witnessed hundreds of other mutants before him die in experimentation. One day they came for Damian, it was now his turn to be experimented on. They injected many needles of an antidote that put him to sleep for hours. They studied him and worked on his body in an extremely large tank filled with antibiotics and water. Hours passed after their sick and twisted experiments ended and then came a moment of silence as the tank that held Damian's sleeping body was emptied and laid out on a large metallic table where he was fitted in a metal armor suit. The table rose upwards for all to see. He was released of his bonds to the table ant stepped forward where his experimenters thought to themselves if he was sufficient. To prove himself he used his telekinetic powers to burst a nearby person into pieces of dust. They then found the first part to their goal. And from that day on he was dubbed Nightmare. Nightmare's number is 222.
 
Well as expected he looks really scary. The colors fit his theme. Is he human or is just another creature much like Blackheart. I came up with Cobra Queen's real name. It's Brandy Hunter. Cobra Queens powers and abilties are she can control cobras, deadly venom, superhuman strength, enhanced endurance, and she can choke her opponets and prey to death much like other snakes can. She knows a lot about snakes, is a skilled in gymnastics, and is experienced in kickboxing and two Martial Arts.
 
:woot: I have to say she sounds quite good, especially with that choking pwoer I love it. As for Nightmare he's mutant.
 
:woot: I have to say she sounds quite good, especially with that choking pwoer I love it. As for Nightmare he's mutant.

Thanks. She uses it on him in her first issue. I made her to be much like a thorn in his side that causes a lot of trouble much like Blackcat for Spiderman and Poison Ivy for Batman.
 
OH a Femme Fatale lol, I haven;t yet thought to put one in mine, i only have two super-females. But I would very much like to see where this goes between the two. Do they fall in love much later on or do they continue a bitter dispute?
 
OH a Femme Fatale lol, I haven;t yet thought to put one in mine, i only have two super-females. But I would very much like to see where this goes between the two. Do they fall in love much later on or do they continue a bitter dispute?

Except the difference is they continue in a bitter dispute. In the last battle of her first appearnce she gave him a run for his money before he was able to knock her out. She is proving to be a tough adversary for him.
 
Are you going to eventually have her killed?


No I am going to keep her as one of his long running Super Villains that he has plenty of battles with. I have only wrote one story with her and already it has the feeling of being an intense rival much like Star Sapphire and Green Lantern (Hal Jordan) except in this case the Super Villain is not something he loves so she is easier to battle. It defenitly has the strong intense tention and heated rivalry.
 
Super-Villain Name:Gorgon
Real Name--Katarine Vildelchi
Alias--None
Identity--Known to Few
Occupation--Former Assassin
Citizenship--German
Place of Birth--Berlin, Germany
Group Affiliation--None
Education--Unknown

Height--5'3
Weight--120 lbs
Eyes--Green
Hair--Black

Powers--Katarine possesses the ability to extend and retract tentacles out all of her fingers. Her tentacles, when stretched out fully can reach up to 50 feet.

Abilities--Katarine is highly trained in hand-to-hand combat and in a large variety of weapons bladed weapons and guns. She also is a skilled assassin.

Arch Enemies--Renegade, Sin, Blacksting, Lynx.

 
Mr. Horrible This is what I have so far for his abilties. I still have to come up with his powers and how he got them.
Abilties A man that tries to make horrible things happen. He has the belief with the differences that seperate us then we should just plan and try to make horrible things happen to them. It makes him a opposer of diversity in the United States and other countries with diversity because of thinking it can only separate the people. He also does not mind commiting horrible acts and does not feel remorse.
 
He sounds pretty sweet, like to hear more bout him. My most recent villain and one of my favorites and if the name doesn't give it away, Gorella is a gorilla:

Super-Villain Name--Gorella.
Real Name--Gorella.
Aliases--None.
Identity--Known to certain government officials.
Occupation--Assasin, Terroroist.
Citizenship--African.
Place of Birth--Somewhere within the jungles of Africa.
Known Relatives--Unknown.
Group Affiliation--None.
Education--Unknown.

Height--8'0.
Weight--490 lbs.
Eyes--Brown.
Hair--Black.

Powers--Gorella has no mutant powers but has enhanced and heightened strength, speed, endurance, agility, reflexes and senses to a super-being level. Also has been biologically equipped with two large blades, one in either of his arms that he can release at will from the back of his hands and store within his forearms, when used in battle they rival that of Renegade. He also has been biologically equipped with two metal tentacles that when stretched at full length they reach to about 50 feet and are housed inside along with his blades in his forearms and rival that of Deathstrike. Minor healing factor.
 
I just came up with another two supervillains. The Taunter and Bloodstrike.
 
Thanks:woot:, so GhostRider87 what do you have so far on these two villains?


1. Bloodstrike A assisian for hire that is a experienced hunter. He is also so phycotic that he enjoys and is entertained by his victims and adversaries bleeding and suffering. He is also an experienced streetfighter. He mainly likes to kill with swords and knives.

2.The Taunter He uses methods similar of a conartist except mainly to decieve them by having them believe something that is not true. He will say anything and use any methods to try and get a rise out of the person or people. He is an expert boxer, and a first degree black belt in Karate.
 
Sounds pretty nice:woot: , don't take it the wrong way but Bloodstrike reminds me of Deadpool. I'm not saying he's to similar to him but thats just who he reminds me of.
 
Heres one of mine of created . So give me some feedback and I'd like to see some other peoples creations for super villians.


Super Hero Name--Nightmare

Real Name--Damian Cortez
Aliases--None
Identity--Known to few
Occupation- Member of Operation 6
Citizenship--Unknown
Place of Birth--Unknown
Known Relatives--None
Group Affiliation--Operation 6, The Dark Angels
Education--Unknown

Powers--Nightmare has telepathic and telekinetic powers beyond any comprehension. One of the most powerful minds known to man, he is so powerful that he can even create life with his bare hands. Nearly immune to any means of injury. Can absorb the life out of any life form around him.

Abilities--Extremely high IQ. Fluent in almost any language on Earth. Highly skilled swordsman.

Weapons--Wields an extremely large sword.

The place of his birth is unknown, but it is believed that he has been alive for hundreds of years. But for the youth Damian Cortez he was even unsure about his past. He found out at a young age that he could speak fluent in almost any language that he met. Growing up he found him self in Berlin, Germany where he met and befriended Nikolai Vildelchi (who would later on become known as Genocide). (They worked together for many years stealing from the local stores and market places. As the years went by and the two continued their lives of thieving, Damian and Nikolai were walking back to their secret home in an abandoned building one nigh along the dark street with their day's stolen goods, when they were attacked by a leech mob who were enraged by having their goods stolen from them for so long. They chased the boys into an alleyway where there was no escape. The crazed mob stepped closer to the boys, readying their weapons of choice. One man leapt out and cut open Damian’s arm with a knife. The man and a few others suddenly were thrown almost by an invisible force into the wall then burst into pieces that almost resembled dust. This dust then flew over to Damian and healed him of his wounds. The rest of the mob then attacked unthinkingly at them again but from where Nikolai was standing a strange gas seemed to flow from his body. This gas found its way to their attackers and killed them instantly, but had almost no affect on Damian. The two boys sat their slightly frightened and dumb founded at what had happened. It soon came to their minds later on in their juvenile years that they had been given powers of a great meaning. Though now already on the path for danger, they continued their lives of crime but now with a new deadly power was wielded within themselves. Damian to learn more about his telekinetic and telepathic powers, and how he could heal himself from others life. Nikolai also studied how he could release a toxic gas from the pores in his skin and inject his victims with a poison. The two joined the German army when leaning on their early adulthood and were sent immediately to Alaska on a secret spy mission. On coming to Alaska their air plane was shot down and they were taken hostage. Their captors were not all American, as some spoke in languages of both German, Russian and Japanese. Their captors then introduced themselves to Damian and Nikolai as Operation 6. They were a biblical group who were almost satanic. They told Damian and Nikolai of an ancient prophecy that told of 3 beings with great power each having a number would conquer the world and bring peace. They later on for months kept them as their hostages and studied them like lab rats). As the months passed Damian and Nikolai witnessed hundreds of other mutants before him die in experimentation. One day they came for Damian, it was now his turn to be experimented on. They injected many needles of an antidote that put him to sleep for hours. They studied him and worked on his body in an extremely large tank filled with antibiotics and water. Hours passed after their sick and twisted experiments ended and then came a moment of silence as the tank that held Damian's sleeping body was emptied and laid out on a large metallic table where he was fitted in a metal armor suit. The table rose upwards for all to see. He was released of his bonds to the table ant stepped forward where his experimenters thought to themselves if he was sufficient. To prove himself he used his telekinetic powers to burst a nearby person into pieces of dust. They then found the first part to their goal. And from that day on he was dubbed Nightmare. Nightmare's number is 222.

Okay, a few problems with his backstory:

1) If he's hundreds of years old, he wouldn't have flown a spy plane to alaska as a young adult.

2) Your description of Operation Six tells me absolutely nothing. It's far too vague. By biblical group, do you mean that they've been active since biblical times, or are crazy christian extremists, or what? And what does "almost satanic" mean? Are they satanists? Demonic in nature? And if they are demonic, why do they want world peace? Demons generaly are living metaphores for humanity's baser qualities, and thus thrive in excess and/or chaos. And if they're stanists, well, why would they care at all? Satanism generaly focuses on self fulfilment and a certain level of hedonism.
 
Sounds pretty nice:woot: , don't take it the wrong way but Bloodstrike reminds me of Deadpol. I'm not saying he's to similar to him but thats just who he reminds me of.


None taken. I notice that Deadpool also uses guns, was once apart of the Weapon X program, and resembles a Ninja the costume , and underneath his costume he has a disfugered face so that is why you won't see him take off because he can't bare to look in the mirrior any more much like Doctor Doom. Those are the major ones that Bloodstrike won't have. He will have a normal body not being disfugered, not use guns, not be apart of a government weapon program or any government program, and not a costume design that would be similar or almost the same as his resembling a Ninja.
 
Mr. Horrible This is what I have so far for his abilties. I still have to come up with his powers and how he got them.
Abilties A man that tries to make horrible things happen. He has the belief with the differences that seperate us then we should just plan and try to make horrible things happen to them. It makes him a opposer of diversity in the United States and other countries with diversity because of thinking it can only separate the people. He also does not mind commiting horrible acts and does not feel remorse.
Is he like.. a joke character? Like.. Ketchup King or something..?
 
Well I'll just tell you everything so far about Operation 6. Operation 6 is a Satanic cult that was organized thousands of years ago by the 2 sons of the devil. Using both advanced technology and ancient rituals on both humans and mutants, Operation 6 tries to find the 3 angels of darkness and help Satan turn this plaine of existence into another Hell, by whatever means necessary.
If you have read my other villain posts, Nightmare is number 222,Genocide is number 444, and Renegade is number 666. If you know anything about the number 666, then you know that it symbolizes the devil. The reason why they each have a specific number, is because that is what experiment number they were when being tested, experimented and tortured. Renegade at this time is being brainwashed into using his god-like powers to help Satan take over this plaine of existence. But soon overcomes this brainwashing, and returns to being a hero and later fends the Earth from the forces of darkness.
 

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